Here's my mod
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Normal]
00:05:518 (3) - You can round out the curve in this slider by moving the 2nd that 4th Slider points outwards by one grid http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135577
00:14:022 (5) - Again, you can reduce jagged edges by moving the second slider point to the left two grids
00:20:636 (4) - Maybe follow this slider point layout to reduce the jaggedness? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135579
00:35:281 (2) - Maybe follow this slider point layout to reduce the jaggedness? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135581
01:03:628 (3) - Maybe follow this slider point layout to reduce the jaggedness? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135585
01:46:384 (2,3,4) - Move (2) Left one grid, (3) Down one grid, and (4) Left one grid
01:52:998 (4) - The break here feels a little weird. I would suggest removing this note, as ending the break at (3) sounds little better for me.
02:09:533 (2) - Shift-Align this with the end of the Slider, so that it's Level with the Slider please. Alternatively, try positioning (2), (3) and (1) Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135591
02:20:399 (1) - I suggest moving the middle sliderpoint out like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135592
02:32:210 (2,4) - Move both of these circles Right one grid level; it makes the combo symmetrical
Other than these suggestions, nothing wrong here.
[LoliFlan's Hard]
00:17:329 (1) - I don't recommend placing a Spinner 1/4 after a spinner or other note. Please move this forward to the next red tick, and Shorten to realign it with the correct time to end.
01:00:557 (4) - This totally calls for a finish hitsound
02:31:739 (2) - I don't recommend placing notes under sliders, as there are much more interesting places they could go to. Why not continue the flow of the slider by placing the note in it's general direction? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135602
02:33:628 (2) - Same here. And if you don't agree, at least snap the note under the slider end correctly.
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[Insane]
00:31:502 (4) - Please move the first Red Sliderpoint down one grid please, so it's level with the rest. It looks strange like this ;^^
00:47:092 (5) - These whistles sound bad, no offense. Please change them to the soft whistles. The same applies to the other whistles in this section of the song =3
01:21:699 (6,7) - Maybe position (6) like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135605
02:06:227 (6) - This volume increase here is quite noticeable and distracting. It would have a better effect if you gradually increased the volume (say, 3-5% every quarter/half-beat)
02:22:762 (1) - Why a new combo here and not for the other 2 or so repeats of the same melody before hand? Either take new combo off here, or apply a new combo to the other sections before, at 02:07:172 (7) and 02:14:731 (7). I'd also recommend starting the new combo here at the note before, which is currently (9).
02:24:416 (5) - This looks a bit cleaner to me http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135607
Love the song; there are a few things that can be cleaned up, but it's definitely looking good!
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Normal]
00:05:518 (3) - You can round out the curve in this slider by moving the 2nd that 4th Slider points outwards by one grid http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135577
00:14:022 (5) - Again, you can reduce jagged edges by moving the second slider point to the left two grids
00:20:636 (4) - Maybe follow this slider point layout to reduce the jaggedness? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135579
00:35:281 (2) - Maybe follow this slider point layout to reduce the jaggedness? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135581
01:03:628 (3) - Maybe follow this slider point layout to reduce the jaggedness? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135585
01:46:384 (2,3,4) - Move (2) Left one grid, (3) Down one grid, and (4) Left one grid
01:52:998 (4) - The break here feels a little weird. I would suggest removing this note, as ending the break at (3) sounds little better for me.
02:09:533 (2) - Shift-Align this with the end of the Slider, so that it's Level with the Slider please. Alternatively, try positioning (2), (3) and (1) Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135591
02:20:399 (1) - I suggest moving the middle sliderpoint out like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135592
02:32:210 (2,4) - Move both of these circles Right one grid level; it makes the combo symmetrical
Other than these suggestions, nothing wrong here.
[LoliFlan's Hard]
00:17:329 (1) - I don't recommend placing a Spinner 1/4 after a spinner or other note. Please move this forward to the next red tick, and Shorten to realign it with the correct time to end.
01:00:557 (4) - This totally calls for a finish hitsound
02:31:739 (2) - I don't recommend placing notes under sliders, as there are much more interesting places they could go to. Why not continue the flow of the slider by placing the note in it's general direction? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135602
02:33:628 (2) - Same here. And if you don't agree, at least snap the note under the slider end correctly.
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[Insane]
00:31:502 (4) - Please move the first Red Sliderpoint down one grid please, so it's level with the rest. It looks strange like this ;^^
00:47:092 (5) - These whistles sound bad, no offense. Please change them to the soft whistles. The same applies to the other whistles in this section of the song =3
01:21:699 (6,7) - Maybe position (6) like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135605
02:06:227 (6) - This volume increase here is quite noticeable and distracting. It would have a better effect if you gradually increased the volume (say, 3-5% every quarter/half-beat)
02:22:762 (1) - Why a new combo here and not for the other 2 or so repeats of the same melody before hand? Either take new combo off here, or apply a new combo to the other sections before, at 02:07:172 (7) and 02:14:731 (7). I'd also recommend starting the new combo here at the note before, which is currently (9).
02:24:416 (5) - This looks a bit cleaner to me http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135607
Love the song; there are a few things that can be cleaned up, but it's definitely looking good!