00:00:399 this redline is not necessary because there is no green line on it, and notes can be placed before the first red line
00:09:866 (49) - i think removing this to give more emphasis to the 1/4 that isn't improvised (like 00:10:436 ~ 00:11:577) would make more sense
00:01:311 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think swapping this to be kkk d k to follow the main melody would be more intuitive for players. likewise goes for variations such as 00:04:961 (3,4,5,6,7) -
all notes like 00:11:805 (2) / 00:15:455 (2) / 00:22:756 (2) / etc should be removed since it's a little odd having both 1/2 after a finisher as well as improvising to the melody here but it's actually 1/4 off. ykwim?
if you feel like it's not dense enough after this then mapping 00:10:208 and the like for filler rhythm could work
00:09:866 (49) - i think removing this to give more emphasis to the 1/4 that isn't improvised (like 00:10:436 ~ 00:11:577) would make more sense
00:01:311 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think swapping this to be kkk d k to follow the main melody would be more intuitive for players. likewise goes for variations such as 00:04:961 (3,4,5,6,7) -
all notes like 00:11:805 (2) / 00:15:455 (2) / 00:22:756 (2) / etc should be removed since it's a little odd having both 1/2 after a finisher as well as improvising to the melody here but it's actually 1/4 off. ykwim?
if you feel like it's not dense enough after this then mapping 00:10:208 and the like for filler rhythm could work