09:02:997 - to 09:15:612 - this whole sections feels weird having it only in 1/2 while its a solo the drums are still blasting. if you want to keep it as a lower density section i recommend still adding some bursts in there on the guitar
here is an exemple:
09:02:997 -kkkkd
09:04:074 - kdkkddk
09:04:843 - ddkdk
09:05:458 - kkddk
09:06:074 - kkd
09:06:535 - kkk
09:07:151 - ddk
09:07:920 - kdddkkd
09:08:535 - kkddk
09:09:151 - ddkdkkd
09:10:074 - kkd
09:10:689 - ddd
09:11:305 - kkkkd
09:11:920 - kkd
09:12:535 - ddddk
09:13:151 - kkk
09:13:766 - kkd
09:14:381 - ddd
09:14:997 kkddk
07:59:920 (3069,3070,3071,3072,3073,3074,3075,3076) - recommend changing to kkkkkkkk, you used kats as your vocal emphasis color throughout basically the whole kiai so it feels a bit off having it swapped to dons this late in
if you do apply this, you should change 07:59:612 (3065,3066,3067,3068) - to kkdd