05:26:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - unironically could space this part out more if you wanted to i.e. 1.0x -> 1.2x DS, fits as the climax imo
05:08:366 (1,2) - isn't this spaced a bit much for a 1/4 jump, feel like this can be toned down a bit
04:30:416 (2) - 04:31:616 (2) - 04:32:816 (2) - 04:33:416 (6) - 04:34:016 (2) - 04:35:216 (2) - 04:36:416 (2) - 04:37:616 (2) - 04:38:816 (2) - 04:40:016 (2) - 04:40:616 (6) - etc. more personal opinion than anything but i feel like 1/4 kicksliders would work a bit better here, there's constant 1/4 rhythm which you're following otherwise -- skipping it seems kinda weird to do
04:15:266 (1,2,3,4,1) - feel like this would make more sense if you kept it at the same spacing instead of changing it midway through and at the end, smth like 1.1x DS could work well here
01:55:916 (8) - wouldn't a rhythm like this make more sense for what you're trying to follow though, the 1/8 buzz doesn't extend as far as you have it right now
01:30:866 (7,1) - meant to be stacked on the sliderend here? seems kinda weird to not give this any spacing :s
01:22:616 (5) - 01:27:116 (3) - 01:51:416 (5) - 03:21:416 (10) - 03:46:616 (9) - while i'm not gonna act like these don't work, a lot of these don't play the greatest and require a lot of finger control to hit properly, especially in cases like 03:21:416 (10,1) - this where the note afterwards isn't somewhat stacked on top of the 1/8 repeat
i think in all of these cases it's best to just simplify and remove a 1/8 repeat to buffer these so this plays a bit nicer
00:41:281 (1,1) - NCs don't really seem that necessary to put here tbh unless you strictly wanna keep these patterns separated, think this works well under a single combo chain though
01:02:381 (5) - mfw i'm gonna be saying basically the opposite of what this guy said but i feel like 1/8 might actually fit this a bit nicer? it's a rougher sound than 01:00:681 (2) - 00:41:581 (1) - prior 1/8s, sure, but this still honestly sounds like 4 drum hits to me :s
if you wanna keep it as 1/16 to follow the rougher sound i'd highly recommend at least buffering this by a 1/16 tick though because this is kinda dumb to hit otherwise
goes for the entire section outside until 04:44:366 here where you shift emphasis to the other main drum that kicks in for this part
you don't really need to change this, i'm not gonna force it or anything, just personally thought the examples i gave above would be a bit nicer with kicksliders instead
think it might also help to make 01:31:166 (1) - this active as well so that the sudden rhythm stop 01:31:466 (4) - here is more pronounced
you also don't do a similar comboing structure for 01:01:781 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern afterwards so like
i do actually kinda agree with this ngl, mostly for the fact that you do 01:23:640 (1,2,3,4,1) - somewhat shift emphasis to the drums starting here and they're the most prominent instrumental during this section
kinda feels awkward to follow along to the vocals especially when 01:24:988 you aren't making this clickable