This following mod will be addressing every diffs except inner.
00:23:019 - 00:33:991 why is this part mapped but not 01:28:848 - 01:39:819 or 03:29:534 - 03:39:134? I could see why you didn't map 01:28:848 - 01:39:819 since only the arp is playing there but 03:29:534 - 03:39:134 has the same amount of musical layers than 00:23:019 - 00:33:991 yet that part is mapped.
I'd suggest you leave those parts empty, but you could always try and map them all accordingly.
Maybe 00:22:677 - k here since 00:21:648 (36,37,38) is more important than 00:20:276 (33,34,35) yet they have the same rythm?
00:01:077 - 00:12:048 seems to be mapped the same way 00:12:048 - 00:23:019 is even though the 1st part is noticeably much less intense, therefore I think you should nerf 1st part a bit.
I'd suggest you get rid of every objects that are in the middle of each bars (00:01:420 (2,3), 00:02:791 (5,6), 00:04:162 (8,9) etc...) and maybe snap the objects to the synth sound (so first object at 00:01:077, second one at 00:02:277, third one at 00:03:819... etc). I'd also advise you delete 00:05:191 (10,11,12) altogether since there are no synth sounds in this bar.
I think following the synth here would be a better thing since the synth's calm rythm matches the part's intensity better than the vocals' rythm does imo
Rest moment stuff:
00:08:448 - 00:23:020: no 2/1 rest moments for 42/1
Try deleting 00:18:562 (68), which would also give the vocals more emphasis
00:39:477 - 00:54:391: no 2/1 rest moments for 43/1
Try deleting 00:43:934 (40,41) as I think they are not very important
00:55:248 - 01:16:677: no 2/1 rest moments for 62/1
Try deleting 01:04:505 (117), which would also give more emphasis to the chord stabs
02:56:620 - 03:13:077: no 2/1 rest moments for 48/1
Try deleting 03:04:162 (67,68) which are the only objects I could find that would not make "ugly breaks" when omitted
Also try deleting 03:07:077 (78) and moving 03:06:905 (77) to 03:06:734. Would give the player a nice little break before digging in the kiai
04:03:648 - 04:18:905: no 2/1 rest moments for 44/1 & 04:22:334 - 04:35:362: no 2/1 rest moments for 38/1
I think you can keep those section as they are since this is the very last kiai, therefore the song is at its climax
same thing for 03:45:991 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31), maybe try doing something a little bit more fun like kdd kkd kkk ddk?