the main kiais in general go pretty long with uninterrupted 1/2s, making it a bit too close to inner oni at times, since it's only a 2 diff set i think you could trim some notes to separate the progression a little more
i.e 00:58:495 or 00:58:844 / 01:04:076 or 01:04:425 + everywhere else that it'd apply after
(you should probably add some 3plets to compensate anything that just plays as a long chain of 1/2s with nothing else though)