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Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Lazy to reply about what I changed orz

Only changed a small portion from mliens mod, since most of the patterns there are there for a reason and won't be changed easily
wasonz
From my queue

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[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Mware.jpg",0, 10 ~ 60 Look better imo

00:22:778 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) -

00:43:054 (53) - k
01:15:847 (63) - k
01:17:503 (68) - d
01:19:158 (73) - k
01:20:813 (78) - d

01:26:296 (108) - OPPA GANGNAM STYLE

01:43:882 (206,207,208) - kkd
01:49:882 (247) - k
01:51:434 (256) - k
01:59:296 (304) - k
02:03:744 (335) - k
02:15:537 (34) - k
02:23:503 (90) - k
02:40:778 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - d d d d d d k
02:47:399 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - ^
02:48:640 (134) - add k
03:02:606 (63) - k
03:12:847 (109) - add k
03:37:882 (237) - k

04:10:158 (159) - OPPAAAAAAAAAAA........... GANGNAM STYLE

04:25:882 (1) - delete spinner and add
:D

04:50:192 (144) - k

05:01:054 (1) - #ok end of song ~

05:03:123 (1) - #hey wait wtf !? not the end !????

05:09:951 (44,45,46) - kkd
05:16:778 (82) - D

:D :D :D :D :D Good Luck ~

My Hentai Suggestion
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0,0,"Mware.jpg",0,-100
Why ? Cause we can able to see yaya body ~
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Thanks for mod! I will fix stuff on Monday because no computer access and yay
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

From my queue

[Heading of my Mod]


[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Mware.jpg",0, 10 ~ 60 Look better imo Um this contradicts with your last mod?

00:22:778 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) -

00:43:054 (53) - k It sounds more like a d to me huh
01:15:847 (63) - k daadaad d d kaakaak k k daadaad d d kaakaak k k ftw
01:17:503 (68) - d ^
01:19:158 (73) - k ^
01:20:813 (78) - d ^

01:26:296 (108) - OPPA GANGNAM STYLE OPPAI GANGNAM STYLE

01:43:882 (206,207,208) - kkd
01:49:882 (247) - k simply no because the vocal pitch at 01:50:089 is much higher than here so I mapped both 01:49:675 (246,247) - to be a don
01:51:434 (256) - k changed!
01:59:296 (304) - k
02:03:744 (335) - k why was even d
02:15:537 (34) - k hm d is better gameplay wise while k is better music wise ;w; will consider about this
02:23:503 (90) - k but the music is 02:23:399 (89,90,91,92) - is completely identical owo
02:40:778 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - d d d d d d k
02:47:399 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - ^
02:48:640 (134) - add k imo dd kk doesn't flow better than dd dk so not changing this ;w;
03:02:606 (63) - k changed
03:12:847 (109) - add k um im following the kinda 8bit sound in the music with a d so no change
03:37:882 (237) - k tbh a kdddk flows MUCH better in a 1/3 rhythm

04:10:158 (159) - OPPAAAAAAAAAAA........... GANGNAM STYLE OPPAIIIIIIIIIIIIII

04:25:882 (1) - delete spinner and add
:D no reason to make the map harder than it should be XD

04:50:192 (144) - k changed

05:01:054 (1) - #ok end of song ~ #lol

05:03:123 (1) - #hey wait wtf !? not the end !???? #LOL

05:09:951 (44,45,46) - kkd nope ;w; I wanted the "maware maware maware" to be mapped with a d d k feeling in 1/2 >_>
05:16:778 (82) - D will consider about this, both D and K sound fine ;w;

:D :D :D :D :D Good Luck ~

My Hentai Suggestion
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Mware.jpg",0,-100
Why ? Cause we can able to see yaya body ~ But I want to show the head ;w;
Thanks for your mod!!! It was pretty useful ><
Nwolf
Luv me ;w;

[MawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawareDiff]

00:22:882 (91,92,93,94,95) - Maybe change to dkkdk (consistency with previous pattern)
00:49:882 (11,12,13,14) - I so wish that this wasn't reasonable : D
02:39:330 (70,71,72,73,74,75) - Change to triplets to it's not so unexpected
02:46:227 (115,117,119) - Delete for maximum fun *hides*
03:12:227 (107,108,109,110) - Change to kats and add a note 03:12:847 - here for <reasons>
03:30:227 (195,196,197,198) - pls
03:41:951 (1) - pls

ok and now the fun part

01:27:330 - Maybe instead of having 1.0 have 1.4 or something, if you want to keep either this or the kiai as "ninja" notes. Think it would be better this way. (or just get rid of this green section)
02:39:123 - how2screw HD players. And NM players. 3:
03:32:089 - Too sudden sv change
03:58:985 - Maybe 1.25 here and 1.0 on the next one?


lol the end

gj with this and gl with rank : D
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

Nwolf wrote:

Luv me ;w; k ;w; (me luv bakawolf <3)

[MawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawareDiff]

00:22:882 (91,92,93,94,95) - Maybe change to dkkdk (consistency with previous pattern) well not exactly, but still changed stuff here :D
00:49:882 (11,12,13,14) - I so wish that this wasn't reasonable : D *pattern becomes 1/12 endless stream* k
02:39:330 (70,71,72,73,74,75) - Change to triplets to it's not so unexpected as in 1/4 triplets ? starting a 1/3 part with a 1/4 pattern is just being baka ;w;
02:46:227 (115,117,119) - Delete for maximum fun *hides*
03:12:227 (107,108,109,110) - Change to kats and add a note 03:12:847 - here for <reasons> kats ahoy
03:30:227 (195,196,197,198) - pls c-c-c-combo breaker k lets try to be serious here um i can pass this every time so your argument is invalid >:D
03:41:951 (1) - pls lets just say this is on purpose >:D (not to troll people though ;w;)

ok and now the fun part

01:27:330 - Maybe instead of having 1.0 have 1.4 or something, if you want to keep either this or the kiai as "ninja" notes. Think it would be better this way. (or just get rid of this green section) Will consider about this, I wanna give this part an anti-climatic feel, so 1.0 it shall be, but hey anything is subjective to change if its sucks
02:39:123 - how2screw HD players. And NM players. 3: people should learn how2read in the first place D:
03:32:089 - Too sudden sv change moar baka sv change it is
03:58:985 - Maybe 1.25 here and 1.0 on the next one? HOLY CRAP it actually becomes much better bakawolf 4 bat pls


lol the end lol ikr

gj with this and gl with rank : D gl with getting everything you have ranked you slowpoke D:
Thanks for modding my crappy stuff ;w;
Senritsu
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[Mawaremoeoverload]
SPOILER
Not changing it to 'Utagumi Setsugetsuka - Maware! Setsugetsuka (chiptune Remix)'? according to lfj's set.
Idk about the artist, since there are 2 different types of them. (Utagumi Setsugetsuka and Harada Hitomi etc.), both are same imo, but to save the space.. lols
And about the title, yes change it. Source : http://vgmdb.net/album/41281

ok now jump to real mod~

00:22:571 (89) - change to d? the vocal ends 00:22:468 (88) - , while 00:22:571 (89) - consists of drum.
00:59:399 add d here, hear the drum and vocal sounds there ovo
01:25:468 (100,101,102,103,104,106) - change t kat? lols if you hear it closely tho, there's like.. another type of drum (idk what's that called orz). try to make it differ lols
02:07:365 (362) - change to don, the drum changes from the lighter one to a heavier one. ><
02:18:847 (57) - change to kat? instrument changes almost drastically there
tho why getting slower with the very last kiai part ovo it seems fun to make an SV change there /runs/

gl for rank i support you <3

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Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

Senritsu wrote:

まわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれ

[Mawaremoeoverload]
SPOILER
Not changing it to 'Utagumi Setsugetsuka - Maware! Setsugetsuka (chiptune Remix)'? according to lfj's set.
Idk about the artist, since there are 2 different types of them. (Utagumi Setsugetsuka and Harada Hitomi etc.), both are same imo, but to save the space.. lols
And about the title, yes change it. Source : http://vgmdb.net/album/41281
changed the title :3

ok now jump to real mod~ poofed lines are changed

00:59:399 add d here, hear the drum and vocal sounds there ovo meh i want to use my own pattern that doesn't follow the music but still sounds good guehuehuehuehuhue
01:25:468 (100,101,102,103,104,106) - change t kat? lols if you hear it closely tho, there's like.. another type of drum (idk what's that called orz). try to make it differ lols i dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddon't want to change it D: *slapped*
02:07:365 (362) - change to don, the drum changes from the lighter one to a heavier one. >< need to consider about this though. well kkkkd alone plays better than kkkdd, and i wanna give 02:07:468 a more heavy feel :3

tho why getting slower with the very last kiai part ovo it seems fun to make an SV change there /runs/ owo? i don't really get what you mean...

gl for rank i support you <3 thanks for star and support <3

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Arigato for your mod <3333333
Akiyama Mizuki
lol hi there I don't really like this remix but let's get it started

MawaRemix
SPOILER
00:23:503 (97) - k
00:23:813 (100) - ^
00:24:847 (108) - ^
00:41:813 (43) - ^
00:59:296 (80) - d
02:15:537 (34) - k
02:53:192 (4) - ^
05:16:778 (82) - ^ (This part is silent)
ew 1.5x
but yeah this is great
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

bbj0920 wrote:

lol hi there I don't really like this remix but let's get it started

MawaRemix
SPOILER
00:23:503 (97) - k k
00:23:813 (100) - ^ meh the pitch is still kinda low compared with 00:23:709 so keeping the don here
00:24:847 (108) - ^ it just doesn't play that well D:
00:41:813 (43) - ^ both d and k sound fine so um gonna keep d for now, might change it later though~
00:59:296 (80) - d this is for contrast with 00:58:365 (74,75) (aka mirror pattern)
02:15:537 (34) - k d is for da bass
02:53:192 (4) - ^ B...but it sounds nice! >w<
05:16:778 (82) - ^ (This part is silent) It signifies the end of the song nicely though :>
ew 1.5xew 1.0x
but yeah this is great
Thanks for the mod!
PatZar
mawaaareeemawaaaareeeee:C

Noob mod here
00:19:468 (67,68) - ctrl + g
00:19:778 (69,70,71,72) - dddk
00:57:951 (72) - kat
01:02:503 (96,97,98) - ddd
01:50:606 (251,252) - ctrl + g
02:07:675 (1) - delete this please
03:35:330 (227) - delete | only 3 kats stream are enough
03:38:640 (244) - delete | 03:38:709 (244) - big kat
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

Genocide wrote:

mawaaareeemawaaaareeeee:C

Noob mod here
00:19:468 (67,68) - ctrl + g pitch relevance
00:19:778 (69,70,71,72) - dddk b...but dkdk flows better with the previous kd ;w; its like a mini "play this single handed!" challenge lol
00:57:951 (72) - kat wasn't this k before D:
01:02:503 (96,97,98) - ddd i wanted to use k to emphasize the strong beats at (96,98) though
01:50:606 (251,252) - ctrl + g i copied 1811's pattern fite me
02:07:675 (1) - delete this please no
03:35:330 (227) - delete | only 3 kats stream are enough i really wanted to keep the 5 note 1/6 pattern consistency here so nope ;w;
03:38:640 (244) - delete | 03:38:709 (244) - big kat ^
Thanks for the mod!

8/28: Added some tags for the source of the song (the anime) and the artist, thanks baka Dain!
Dainesl
IRC Mod because I just wanted to :3

回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!
2014-09-02 15:44 Dainesl: I can't tell what flows better and fits to the music
2014-09-02 15:44 Dainesl: Actually
2014-09-02 15:44 Dainesl: 00:36:020 (7) - make this a don
2014-09-02 15:44 Dainesl: this flows MUCH better as a don
2014-09-02 15:45 cdhsausageboy: snare issues D:
2014-09-02 15:45 Dainesl: hm
2014-09-02 15:45 Dainesl: make 6 a don as well then?
2014-09-02 15:45 Dainesl: that also flows nicely and is a bit more consistent i think?
2014-09-02 15:45 cdhsausageboy: Tbh in this map I focus more towards the song itself rather than flow and playbility stuff ;w;
2014-09-02 15:46 Dainesl: But flow is reaaaaaaaaaally important with maps that focus heavily on compound patterns
2014-09-02 15:46 Dainesl: That is pretty much a direct tie-in to playability
2014-09-02 15:46 Dainesl: no flow = really awkward = unplayable
2014-09-02 15:46 Dainesl: take some liberties with the song ;_;
2014-09-02 15:46 Dainesl: especially if you're gonna have this many compound patterns
2014-09-02 15:47 Dainesl: anyways yeah 6 and 7 I suggest to be dons, and you do w/e with that I gues
2014-09-02 15:47 Dainesl: *guess
2014-09-02 15:48 cdhsausageboy: can i change only 7 since i personally hate 1/6 kkdd patterns D:
2014-09-02 15:48 Dainesl: alright
2014-09-02 15:48 Dainesl: that flows well
2014-09-02 15:48 cdhsausageboy: also the patterns was supposed to be like this since 00:36:227 (9,10) has the static sound D:
2014-09-02 15:48 cdhsausageboy: but anyway changed 7!
2014-09-02 15:49 Dainesl: you've had a lot of pitch-based mods I'm assuming
2014-09-02 15:50 cdhsausageboy: wait what do you mean by that
2014-09-02 15:50 Dainesl: mods that focus on pitch more than anything
2014-09-02 15:50 cdhsausageboy: LIke people suggested a lot of pitch-issues while modding my maps or the opposite
2014-09-02 15:50 Dainesl: yeah, pitch relevancy issues
2014-09-02 15:51 Dainesl: I'm assuming you've had some mods based on those
2014-09-02 15:51 cdhsausageboy: >some
2014-09-02 15:51 cdhsausageboy: yeah
2014-09-02 15:51 cdhsausageboy: but not a lot D:
2014-09-02 15:51 Dainesl: but here's another quick pitch-based thing 01:14:709 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - but to be honest it's more to do with the section being kinda...not bland but repetitive
2014-09-02 15:51 Dainesl: due to it being all dons, all kats then all dons for buildup
2014-09-02 15:52 cdhsausageboy: ITS ON PURPOSE DWEUIGFUIWEGFIUWBEFIOWNDIOQDHIOQGDUOQGDUQGDUIBDUIBDIUQ
2014-09-02 15:52 Dainesl: ;_;
2014-09-02 15:52 cdhsausageboy: also it plays really cool :3
2014-09-02 15:52 Dainesl: you couldn't have done something like make the snares the opposite colour of the majority?
2014-09-02 15:53 Dainesl: that would've been a nice touch I think
2014-09-02 15:53 Dainesl: since it makes them stand out a bit
2014-09-02 15:53 cdhsausageboy: Nope :P
2014-09-02 15:53 Dainesl: mkay then
2014-09-02 15:54 cdhsausageboy: sorry if im being stupid ;w;
2014-09-02 15:54 Dainesl: nah it's fine
2014-09-02 15:54 Dainesl: i just want to bring up things I thought were weird.
2014-09-02 15:54 Dainesl: 01:41:192 (197) - egh having this as a finisher doesn't really play well
2014-09-02 15:54 Dainesl: 01:42:020 (200) - why not make this a finisher instead since cymbal?
2014-09-02 15:55 Dainesl: oh no wait
2014-09-02 15:55 cdhsausageboy: 01:41:089 - does deleting this note make the finisher more justified orz
2014-09-02 15:55 Dainesl: 201 was a finisher gdi
2014-09-02 15:55 cdhsausageboy: since 01:42:434 (201,202) has the idk what sound it is
2014-09-02 15:55 Dainesl: it sounds like a snare ._.
2014-09-02 15:56 Dainesl: snare cymbal?
2014-09-02 15:56 Dainesl: is that a thing? idk
2014-09-02 15:56 Dainesl: anyways yeah delete that one note
2014-09-02 15:56 cdhsausageboy: deleted
2014-09-02 15:56 cdhsausageboy: also i need to get rid of those in the other kiais as well ;w;
2014-09-02 15:56 Dainesl: [http://puu.sh/binXZ/fb1c0a3ede.png FREAKING]
2014-09-02 15:56 cdhsausageboy: k done
2014-09-02 15:57 Dainesl: please fix this please fix this please fix this x10000
2014-09-02 15:57 cdhsausageboy: i have no idea how to fix that :3
2014-09-02 15:57 Dainesl: Get Audacity and also download the LAME extension that allows you to work with mp3s
2014-09-02 15:57 Dainesl: Then go to export, it should export as 128kbps
2014-09-02 15:57 cdhsausageboy: then?
2014-09-02 15:58 Dainesl: Then you just replace the mp3 with the new one
2014-09-02 15:58 cdhsausageboy: will do that later D:
2014-09-02 15:58 Dainesl: I RECOMMEND COPYING THE .OSU BEFOREHAND
2014-09-02 15:59 Dainesl: and if the timing is somehow different, make sure to resnap all notes (use 1/12 snap, press k and then press j)
2014-09-02 15:59 Dainesl: (that should get all the notes rightly snapped, but make sure to check before resubmitting!!!)
2014-09-02 16:00 Dainesl: 01:54:123 (270) - again please make this a don
2014-09-02 16:00 cdhsausageboy: thanks for the info :3
2014-09-02 16:00 Dainesl: flows way better
2014-09-02 16:00 Dainesl: like before.
2014-09-02 16:00 cdhsausageboy: but it plays better as a k lol
2014-09-02 16:01 Dainesl: with the song, yes
2014-09-02 16:01 Dainesl: with the map, ohhhh no
2014-09-02 16:01 Dainesl: Like I said before, some liberties will have to be taken
2014-09-02 16:01 cdhsausageboy: wait no that's not what i meant
2014-09-02 16:01 Dainesl: like EVERYBODY has to do with finishers at the end of streams
2014-09-02 16:01 Dainesl: so yeah taking liberties is normal.
2014-09-02 16:01 cdhsausageboy: dddk k d d d plays much better dddk d d d d no matter how i try it D:
2014-09-02 16:01 cdhsausageboy: *better than
2014-09-02 16:02 Dainesl: what playstyle do you use?
2014-09-02 16:02 cdhsausageboy: kddk
2014-09-02 16:02 Dainesl: that's odd
2014-09-02 16:02 Dainesl: what's your key setup?
2014-09-02 16:02 cdhsausageboy: dfjk but that doesn't matter
2014-09-02 16:02 Dainesl: THAT'S THE SAME AS ME
2014-09-02 16:02 Dainesl: how does it play better as dddk k d d d?
2014-09-02 16:02 cdhsausageboy: but eh for some reference
2014-09-02 16:03 cdhsausageboy: i play it as rlrr l r l r (r as in right hand and vice versa)
2014-09-02 16:03 cdhsausageboy: which is kinda different D:
2014-09-02 16:04 Dainesl: when it's dddk k d d d?
2014-09-02 16:04 cdhsausageboy: yes
2014-09-02 16:05 cdhsausageboy: and so the k k d d is generally much easier to play than k d d d for me
2014-09-02 16:05 Dainesl: My hand naturally has to doubletap the k
2014-09-02 16:05 cdhsausageboy: since i could alternate more rather than relying on my right hand lol
2014-09-02 16:05 Dainesl: otherwise I end up missing D:
2014-09-02 16:05 cdhsausageboy: wait what
2014-09-02 16:05 cdhsausageboy: lol
2014-09-02 16:05 Dainesl: idk
2014-09-02 16:05 Dainesl: blame me not being able to alt.
2014-09-02 16:06 cdhsausageboy: k
2014-09-02 16:06 cdhsausageboy: ACTION blames dain for not being able to alt
2014-09-02 16:06 Dainesl: 02:00:778 (312) - NITPICK but maybe make this a don too?
2014-09-02 16:06 Dainesl: the flow is really nice here since it's like kkkkkkddd except without one of the dons and 1/2 of the pattern is on 1/6
2014-09-02 16:07 cdhsausageboy: 01:41:089 -
2014-09-02 16:07 cdhsausageboy: wait wrong link
2014-09-02 16:07 cdhsausageboy: i meant http://puu.sh/bioAa/2ff576736d.jpg
2014-09-02 16:07 Dainesl: lel
2014-09-02 16:07 Dainesl: but it plays really well D:
2014-09-02 16:08 cdhsausageboy: also since when is kkkkkkddd nice lol
2014-09-02 16:08 Dainesl: compared to most patterns you could have done
2014-09-02 16:08 Dainesl: it's nice ok
2014-09-02 16:08 cdhsausageboy: :<
2014-09-02 16:09 Dainesl: 02:09:227 (4) - sliders bug out if there's a note 1/4 before them
2014-09-02 16:09 Dainesl: you can't really continue streaming consistently else you miss all the ticks
2014-09-02 16:09 cdhsausageboy: just don't hit the first tick dheiwufgiuwegfiwe
2014-09-02 16:09 Dainesl: so you have to intentionally mis-time your hits which is bad
2014-09-02 16:09 Dainesl: YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO GET MAX SCORE WITHOUT MIS-TIMING ANY OF YOUR HITS
2014-09-02 16:10 Dainesl: THEORETICALLY
2014-09-02 16:10 cdhsausageboy: so i guess i have to change it to a spinner even though a slider sounds much cooler? ;w;
2014-09-02 16:11 Dainesl: well it wouldn't be as much of a ninja spinner as the one just before it
2014-09-02 16:11 Dainesl: lol
2014-09-02 16:11 Dainesl: swap the slider and spinner
2014-09-02 16:11 cdhsausageboy: b...but they sound differently ;w;
2014-09-02 16:11 Dainesl: that helps I guess, plus the spinner is mapping one extended note anyways
2014-09-02 16:11 Dainesl: sliders substitute that one note for many notes
2014-09-02 16:12 Dainesl: it'd be like mapping don 8 times there
2014-09-02 16:12 cdhsausageboy: for me sliders -> hold notes D:
2014-09-02 16:12 Dainesl: ;_;
2014-09-02 16:12 Dainesl: still gotta change the slider though
2014-09-02 16:13 Dainesl: because it still bugs out
2014-09-02 16:13 cdhsausageboy: idk it just looks like one
2014-09-02 16:13 cdhsausageboy: yes i will
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: wow a spinner sounds really bad
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: like
2014-09-02 16:14 Dainesl: 02:22:571 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - this actually flows decently, could be better but I have no idea how
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: really
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: bad
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: really
2014-09-02 16:14 Dainesl: ...substitute with a don then? D:
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: i still think a slider fits much^100 better D:
2014-09-02 16:15 cdhsausageboy: screw bugs
2014-09-02 16:15 Dainesl: damn you :<
2014-09-02 16:17 Dainesl: 02:25:262 (7) - same deal as the first time
2014-09-02 16:17 Dainesl: make this a don
2014-09-02 16:17 cdhsausageboy: d-d-done
2014-09-02 16:17 Dainesl: 02:42:434 (89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97) - aaaaaa
2014-09-02 16:18 cdhsausageboy: aha
2014-09-02 16:18 Dainesl: why didn't you make this a fully 1/4 pattern
2014-09-02 16:18 Dainesl: or a 1/3 pattern
2014-09-02 16:18 cdhsausageboy: go get a new headphone ;w;
2014-09-02 16:19 Dainesl: PLAYABILITY
2014-09-02 16:19 Dainesl: WHAT IS PLAYABLE ABOUT THIS LOL
2014-09-02 16:19 cdhsausageboy: and listen to it in 25% k
2014-09-02 16:19 cdhsausageboy: I DON'T CARE ABOUT PLAYABILITY I JUST WANT TO TROLL PEOPLE :,
2014-09-02 16:19 cdhsausageboy: *:<
2014-09-02 16:19 Dainesl: ;_;
2014-09-02 16:20 Dainesl: it's awkward as hell
2014-09-02 16:20 Dainesl: I say this EVEN THOUGH I CAN DO THIS PATTERN
2014-09-02 16:20 cdhsausageboy: the song is awkward as hell
2014-09-02 16:21 Dainesl: but...
2014-09-02 16:21 cdhsausageboy: hm?
2014-09-02 16:22 Dainesl: it's hard to play
2014-09-02 16:22 cdhsausageboy: >implying i made this map so that it's easy to play
2014-09-02 16:22 cdhsausageboy: *in a way that it's
2014-09-02 16:22 Dainesl: 02:44:296 (100,101,102,103,104) - also please snap these to the 1/3 ;_; there's a clear sound that happens at 02:44:916 -
2014-09-02 16:22 Dainesl: so why are you snapping to the 1/6 when it shouldn't be
2014-09-02 16:23 cdhsausageboy: because the wobwob are on the 1/6 ticks?
2014-09-02 16:23 Dainesl: done it 02:49:192 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - so why not here
2014-09-02 16:24 Dainesl: inb4 you add a note on the beat
2014-09-02 16:25 Dainesl: making the map MORE awkward
2014-09-02 16:25 cdhsausageboy: NO I DIDN'T :<
2014-09-02 16:25 Dainesl: lol
2014-09-02 16:26 Dainesl: 03:05:295 (78) - DOOOOOOOON
2014-09-02 16:26 cdhsausageboy: k now i don't know what im mapping to at 02:49:054 -
2014-09-02 16:26 Dainesl: bird tweet? samples
2014-09-02 16:27 cdhsausageboy: ah k it makes sense
2014-09-02 16:27 cdhsausageboy: b...but we had a discussion about it already D:
2014-09-02 16:27 cdhsausageboy: about 03:05:295 (78) -
2014-09-02 16:27 Dainesl: STILL. PLAYS. BETTER.
2014-09-02 16:27 Dainesl: ;-;
2014-09-02 16:28 cdhsausageboy: go away you're the only one who plays both kats with the same finger D:
2014-09-02 16:28 cdhsausageboy: actually no don't go away D:
2014-09-02 16:28 Dainesl: ;p
2014-09-02 16:29 cdhsausageboy: also i need to get to bed in half an hour D:
2014-09-02 16:29 Dainesl: brb
2014-09-02 16:30 cdhsausageboy: ....k
2014-09-02 16:30 Dainesl: okay back
2014-09-02 16:30 cdhsausageboy: lolwhat
2014-09-02 16:30 cdhsausageboy: like a ninja
2014-09-02 16:30 Dainesl: 03:31:468 (205,206,207,208,209,210) - see you did kkkd d d here
2014-09-02 16:30 Dainesl: WHY NOT AT THE OTHER TIMES
2014-09-02 16:30 cdhsausageboy: I'm starting to think that this map will receive Heavenly Moon level hate
2014-09-02 16:30 Dainesl: lol
2014-09-02 16:31 Dainesl: no it's not that bad.
2014-09-02 16:31 cdhsausageboy: it was only kkkd d d because stefan forced me to :<
2014-09-02 16:31 cdhsausageboy: >not that bad
2014-09-02 16:31 cdhsausageboy: :"3
2014-09-02 16:31 cdhsausageboy: i cri
2014-09-02 16:31 Dainesl: 03:41:743 (259,260,261,1,1) - consider having this as maybe kkdkk?
2014-09-02 16:32 Dainesl: less awkward
2014-09-02 16:32 Dainesl: still kinda fits the music
2014-09-02 16:32 Dainesl: but idk if it doesn't work for you then we can carry on
2014-09-02 16:33 cdhsausageboy: it actually sounds more awkward but wait checking if there are any other solutions
2014-09-02 16:33 cdhsausageboy: nope
2014-09-02 16:33 cdhsausageboy: k lets carry on
2014-09-02 16:34 Dainesl: 04:52:571 (155,156,157,158,159,160) - why this again
2014-09-02 16:34 Dainesl: :<
2014-09-02 16:34 cdhsausageboy: ahahahahahahahaha
2014-09-02 16:34 cdhsausageboy: because it was simply a shorter version of the dddk k d d d ...?
2014-09-02 16:34 cdhsausageboy: *it is
2014-09-02 16:34 Dainesl: still doesn't play that welllllll
2014-09-02 16:34 Dainesl: but you know about this sooo
2014-09-02 16:34 Dainesl: I'll STOP COMPLAINING OK
2014-09-02 16:35 cdhsausageboy: learn2alternate D:
2014-09-02 16:35 Dainesl: ;_;
2014-09-02 16:35 Dainesl: 04:54:227 (165,166,167,168,169,170) - glance over this
2014-09-02 16:35 Dainesl: ACTION runs
2014-09-02 16:35 cdhsausageboy: many maps use dddk k pattern in it k
2014-09-02 16:36 cdhsausageboy: what happened to stop complaining :<
2014-09-02 16:36 cdhsausageboy: ACTION runs too
2014-09-02 16:36 Dainesl: 04:56:709 (2) - consider shortening this slider significantly
2014-09-02 16:36 Dainesl: sounds kinda overmapped to me
2014-09-02 16:36 cdhsausageboy: well i thought about this before
2014-09-02 16:36 cdhsausageboy: but idk where it should end D:
2014-09-02 16:37 Dainesl: about 04:57:951 - ?
2014-09-02 16:37 Dainesl: maybe one or two ticks earlier or later
2014-09-02 16:38 Dainesl: depends
2014-09-02 16:38 cdhsausageboy: meh it sounds fine
2014-09-02 16:38 cdhsausageboy: and it ends on a red tick so yeah moved the slidertail to 04:57:951 -
2014-09-02 16:39 Dainesl: okay that's it
2014-09-02 16:39 Dainesl: i'll post this I guess :
2014-09-02 16:39 Dainesl: *:3
2014-09-02 16:39 cdhsausageboy: :333
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Thanks baka ;w;
qoot8123
Talked with mapper and this map is very good so i think i can let it go :)

bubbled!



IRC
23:46 *cdhsausageboy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/415154 Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui - Maware! Setsugetsuka (chiptune Remix) [MawaReMix]]
23:46 cdhsausageboy: 是想说等了一星期 脖子都长了 D:
23:47 qoot8123: 我不確定BAT現在能不能APP圖,因為有一些程序BAT好像沒有權限D:
23:47 cdhsausageboy: 卧槽
23:47 cdhsausageboy: app跟rank在程序上有差么
23:48 qoot8123: 要移到pending得權限目前好像只有qat有
23:49 cdhsausageboy: 其实随便找个qat应该就行了吧。。。
23:50 cdhsausageboy: 所以得先移到骗顶才能泡?orz
23:51 qoot8123: 應該是www
23:52 cdhsausageboy: ;w; 找着
23:53 qoot8123: 我確認了一下,要先讓qat移到騙頂才能泡
23:53 qoot8123: 應該是沒錯;w;
23:53 cdhsausageboy: 嗯
23:53 cdhsausageboy: 现在找到了qat 协商中 =w=
23:54 cdhsausageboy: 卧槽qat说wip也能泡阿
23:54 cdhsausageboy: 呵
23:54 cdhsausageboy: 呵呵
23:54 cdhsausageboy: 呵呵呵
23:54 qoot8123: 那我搞錯了lol
23:55 qoot8123: 我會盡快幫你看圖lol
23:55 cdhsausageboy: 求尽快;w;
23:55 cdhsausageboy: 根本找不到mod5分钟图的bat啊啊啊啊啊
23:55 cdhsausageboy: *的modder
23:56 cdhsausageboy: 但还是勉为其难凑到了9个应该够看了吧;w;
00:00 qoot8123: mp3檔我記得要在192kbps以下
00:00 cdhsausageboy: 好的现在处理中
00:09 qoot8123: 還有我覺得不太需要再另外加一個無變速版的
00:09 cdhsausageboy: 我知道阿
00:09 cdhsausageboy: 到时候会删
00:09 qoot8123: 恩
00:09 cdhsausageboy: 只是太多新手投诉完全无理 才先摆着
00:16 cdhsausageboy: mp3换了厄
00:17 qoot8123: 恩
00:17 cdhsausageboy: 恩?
00:18 qoot8123: 我看一下
00:21 cdhsausageboy: 好的 :3
00:23 qoot8123: 01:07:054 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - 這個建議斷在01:07:778 - 而不是01:07:158 -
00:24 qoot8123: 感覺跟01:06:330 - 這裡差不多
00:25 cdhsausageboy: 了解 已改
00:26 qoot8123: 01:09:330 (35,36,37,38,39,40) - 這裡也是可以做點調整
00:28 cdhsausageboy: 反正就是把01:09:434 - 移到了01:08:813 -
00:28 cdhsausageboy: 颜色方面有问题么?
00:28 qoot8123: 沒有問題
00:28 cdhsausageboy: 噢噢噢
00:37 qoot8123: 02:42:778 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - 這裡的節奏是否改成更清楚的節奏?
00:38 cdhsausageboy: 说实话之前就有人提过了
00:38 cdhsausageboy: 但厄
00:38 cdhsausageboy: 音乐dubstep的节奏就是这样
00:38 cdhsausageboy: 我看看能不能在跟着音乐的前提下把他弄得简单明了些。。。
00:39 qoot8123: 這個改完就沒問題了
00:40 cdhsausageboy: http://puu.sh/biuyZ/dd378d6ec3.jpg 改成这样如何
00:41 cdhsausageboy: 容易看多了
00:41 cdhsausageboy: 就是把02:42:537 - 02:42:951 - 这两个删了
00:42 qoot8123: 好多了
00:42 cdhsausageboy: :3
00:43 cdhsausageboy: 话说还有什么要改的吗,没的话就更新啦orz
00:43 qoot8123: 好
00:43 qoot8123: 記得把nsc刪掉喔
00:43 cdhsausageboy: lol我刚删你就说了
00:44 qoot8123: lol
00:45 cdhsausageboy: 好了:3
00:47 cdhsausageboy: 心里有点小激动 *误*
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Thanks for the mod and of course the bubble!
Let's get hype!
Krah
Moved in pending and changed the genre.
Dainesl
#thankdain2014 -runs far away-

the hype is real now okay I was the last mod before the bubble
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
#tankdain2014
mintong89
Hi.

[General]
Hitsound Volume -30%? It's quite loud imo.
Disable Combo Colour. These aren't used at Taiko.
OD & HP +1? Since this is for approved so I think it's fine with this.

[MawaReMix]

01:09:537 (37,38,39,40) - kkd k to fit better with vocal?

The map generally is fine.

call me back then.
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

mintong89 wrote:

Hi.

[General]
Hitsound Volume -30%? It's quite loud imo. Reduced the volume in the calm parts by 20% and the rest by 10%, made some adjustments in volumes at some other parts too
Disable Combo Colour. These aren't used at Taiko. lol disabled
OD & HP +1? Since this is for approved so I think it's fine with this. But I use OD5HP5 for everything I map ;w; k decided to put OD6 HP6.5 for the lols

[MawaReMix]

01:09:537 (37,38,39,40) - kkd k to fit better with vocal? used kkk k ;w;

The map generally is fine. =w=

call me back then.
Thanks!
mintong89
Rechecked and it's ready now.

Bubbled #2~
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
wasonz
... ha ha ha ha ha ha hai ya ~

Ranked
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Fixed something really, really minor in the title and added some tags, thanks to Dain (again) :3
Will update the change when the next BAT comes lol
DakeDekaane
Shouldn't artist be "Utagumi Setsugetsuka"?
Senritsu

DakeDekaane wrote:

Shouldn't artist be "Utagumi Setsugetsuka"?
Both are fine.
Proof -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/131882, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122674
Oficial -> http://vgmdb.net/album/41281
Look at the Notes, it says 'Utagumi Setsugetsuka is Yaya (CV: Hitomi Harada), Irori (CV: Ai Kayano), Komurasaki (CV: Yui Ogura)'
I think both are fine, as long as cdh add the performers name's (which is not yet to be done)
But it's up to you BAT guys, you guys know it better. ;)

Edit
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
lol senritsu, gg =w=

self popped to fix some tags and to prepare for some future changes that dake suggested (who will hopefully mod the map later ;w;)
KSHR

Senritsu wrote:

DakeDekaane wrote:

Shouldn't artist be "Utagumi Setsugetsuka"?
Both are fine.
Proof -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/131882, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122674
Oficial -> http://vgmdb.net/album/41281
Look at the Notes, it says 'Utagumi Setsugetsuka is Yaya (CV: Hitomi Harada), Irori (CV: Ai Kayano), Komurasaki (CV: Yui Ogura)'
I think both are fine, as long as cdh add the performers name's (which is not yet to be done)
But it's up to you BAT guys, you guys know it better. ;)

Edit
We've said this, but VGMdb is NOT official. In short, links Senritsu posted can't be an official source.

KSHR wrote:

About metadata stuff.

Web sites such as download services, wikipedia CAN'T be a source because they are NOT official. If you are unsure if a web site you found is official, ask native Japanese people first before mentioning in your mod post.
p/3341484
KSHR
Sorry for double-posting.

  1. Artist: 歌組雪月花
  2. Romanized^: Utagumi Setsugetsuka
  3. Title: 回レ!雪月花 chiptune Remix
  4. Romanized^: Maware! Setsugetsuka chiptune Remix
  5. Source: Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai / 機巧少女は傷つかない (Pick one and add another to Tags.)
  6. Tags: 夜々 Yaya 原田ひとみ Harada Hitomi いろり Irori 茅野愛衣 Kayano Ai 小紫 Komurasaki 小倉唯 Ogura Yui Unbreakable Kikou Shoujo Setsugekka



EDIT: MawaRemix please!
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
k literally everything in metadata is changed
except the difficulty name
its looks cooler now
im a poet
k

Thanks based KSHR san for all the metadata help and telling me how not to break the whole uploading system \:D/

also some little pattern changes after this little chat with dake here
2014-09-13 15:44 cdhsausageboy: even though i can't find almost enything thats overmapped in a bad way D:
2014-09-13 15:45 DakeDekaane: maybe because the vocal mapping
2014-09-13 15:46 cdhsausageboy: yep
2014-09-13 15:47 DakeDekaane: which I find weird too as it's mostly only in the beginning lol
2014-09-13 15:47 cdhsausageboy: idk
2014-09-13 15:47 cdhsausageboy: i was like "i should map this part to the vocals!" when i was..um..mapping this part
2014-09-13 15:49 DakeDekaane: maybe cutting somewhere the patterns would work
2014-09-13 15:49 cdhsausageboy: idk somehow it feels prefectly fine to me with all the rapping (?)
2014-09-13 15:51 DakeDekaane: I mean, it's a somehow calm part :(
2014-09-13 15:51 cdhsausageboy: I know, b...but
2014-09-13 15:51 cdhsausageboy: the vocals are pretty dense
2014-09-13 15:51 cdhsausageboy: ;w;
2014-09-13 15:52 DakeDekaane: :(
2014-09-13 15:53 cdhsausageboy: well
2014-09-13 15:53 cdhsausageboy: i COULD map this in a easier way
2014-09-13 15:53 cdhsausageboy: but idk how
2014-09-13 15:53 cdhsausageboy: lololol
2014-09-13 15:53 DakeDekaane: just my opinion
2014-09-13 15:54 DakeDekaane: 00:56:503 - 00:59:813 - you know how
2014-09-13 15:55 cdhsausageboy: but there the background music and stuff becomes more noticeable and i was mapping to it D:
2014-09-13 15:55 cdhsausageboy: if i used those patterns there
2014-09-13 15:55 cdhsausageboy: it just kinda doesn't make sense ;w;
2014-09-13 15:56 cdhsausageboy: i tend to follow the song HEAVILY while mapping
2014-09-13 15:56 cdhsausageboy: which idk if its a good thing or not
2014-09-13 15:57 DakeDekaane: it's not bad, but it somehow feels weird if there's things that don't match, like crazy mapping in calm parts, but going easier on intense ones
2014-09-13 15:58 DakeDekaane: I think you would use a similar pattern there but using more dons than you do in the part I pointed
2014-09-13 16:01 DakeDekaane: http://puu.sh/bwZq4.png | http://puu.sh/bwZqG.png could look similar, but as one part has more kats, it'd be good to emphasize :p
2014-09-13 16:01 cdhsausageboy: wow don oriented pattern is don oriented
2014-09-13 16:01 DakeDekaane: don patterns can do magic
2014-09-13 16:02 DakeDekaane: even if people say it's borin
2014-09-13 16:02 DakeDekaane: g
2014-09-13 16:02 cdhsausageboy: for some reason
2014-09-13 16:02 cdhsausageboy: i do kat oriented in almost every map
2014-09-13 16:02 cdhsausageboy: but i seldom put don oriented patterns D:
2014-09-13 16:02 cdhsausageboy: katsus ftw
2014-09-13 16:03 DakeDekaane: you can use a lot of "heavy" don patterns and it'd help to emphasize later parts with the kats
2014-09-13 16:03 DakeDekaane: even if the patterns are the same in note number
2014-09-13 16:04 cdhsausageboy: let me have a try with the patterns you suggested =w=
2014-09-13 16:05 DakeDekaane: remember to have a back up =w=
2014-09-13 16:06 DakeDekaane: I'm going to sleep, do whatever you should do to fix that part and I guess there should be only that snapping, some SVs and metadata to discuss =w=b
2014-09-13 16:06 DakeDekaane: we don't want that to be unqualified
2014-09-13 16:06 cdhsausageboy: =w=
2014-09-13 16:07 DakeDekaane: by overlord Ono
2014-09-13 16:07 cdhsausageboy: thanks for your help here, i really appreciate it ><
DakeDekaane
ヽ(´□`。)ノ

Bubble must be popped because offset is too early, use 8521.

Discussed a bit with other people and this is what they said.

MMzz wrote:

02:39:348 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - These doesn't fit the music at all. The wubs are going 1/3 not 1/6.
02:42:658 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - 1/6 swing rhythm doesn't even match the music and is almost impossible to read at the slow SV. There should be another 1/3 stream here similar to 02:40:796 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - .
02:44:245 (99,100) - ^ seriously.
02:45:969 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - Need to be removed again.
02:50:728 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147) - This can be 1/4 instead of 1/6 since 1/6 doesn't work at all still.

If he forms this section more like he did with this pattern: 02:47:417 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - It would be better and more fun to play.

Unrelated to the slow section: 03:35:348 (227) - Remove this because it isn't in the music. Unnecessary difficulty.
03:38:658 (245) - ^
03:41:969 (1) - ^
03:48:589 (38) - ^
03:51:555 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - Bad overmap. Make it more appropriate to the song -> http://puu.sh/bCBAL/2c81b7bc27.png
03:55:210 (82) - Remove again.
03:58:521 (106) - ^
Also some suggestions from myself:

00:13:054 (27) - Shouldn't this be a kat?
00:29:709 (132,134) - Remove these ones so you both reduce the stream a bit and follow vocals better.
00:41:813 (43,44,45,46,47) - I think this should be kkddk to keep your kat structure here.
00:48:330 - 00:48:537 - I think dons would fit nicely with the stream in the music.
00:55:675 - I found this a bit weird as you ignore this strong beat, how about change 00:55:675 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - from dd dk k d to d dd kk d

01:06:847 (16) - I think a kat would complement the previous kkd better
01:10:571 (43) - Considering you're following the high pitched instrument it'd be better to move this 1/4 beat back to keep following it.
01:30:330 (129,130) - This is really awkward as vocals are the same and you made this pattern different, make dk pls.
01:36:950 (167,168) - ^
02:44:089 (98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - This would fit better as a 1/3 stream, it won't be that unreadable and still fitting the song.
02:48:434 (128,129,130,131) - A ddd k would fit better both vocals and the instrumental than a dd dk.
03:00:123 - I think you should add a note here to make it consistent with previous ddddk pattern, obviously, remove the finisher if you do.
03:01:468 (56,57,58,59) - Kinda the same here, a dk dk pattern would be better here for vocals.
03:12:847 - Missing note?
03:13:365 (110) - Remove?
03:15:020 (116) - ^
03:16:365 (121) - A don would fit better here and also would make more sense with the "extra" sound in the music.
03:16:985 (124) - A don would be better to separate both sections in the music better.
04:29:088 (16,17) - Change to dk as I explained before
04:35:708 (55,56) - ^

uguu
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

DakeDekaane wrote:

ヽ(´□`。)ノ

Bubble must be popped because offset is too early, use 8521. done

Discussed a bit with other people and this is what they said.

MMzz wrote:

02:39:348 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - These doesn't fit the music at all. The wubs are going 1/3 not 1/6. I was trying to follow the rapid "wubb" sound from the beginning of the kiai, but yeah the 1/3 ones feel more noticeable to be mapped. Changed!
02:42:658 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - 1/6 swing rhythm doesn't even match the music and is almost impossible to read at the slow SV. There should be another 1/3 stream here similar to 02:40:796 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - .yep done
02:44:245 (99,100) - ^ seriously. Can't agree with this ;w; With the slowdown this looks like a little 1/8 inside of a normal 1/4 pattern, I don't see how it's exceptionally hard to read (especially with all the omfgmuchcombobreaking 1/6+1/4 maps ranked lately)
02:45:969 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - Need to be removed again.
02:50:728 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147) - This can be 1/4 instead of 1/6 since 1/6 doesn't work at all still.

If he forms this section more like he did with this pattern: 02:47:417 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - It would be better and more fun to play. .-.

Unrelated to the slow section: 03:35:348 (227) - Remove this because it isn't in the music. Unnecessary difficulty. changed this and the three ^s below
03:38:658 (245) - ^
03:41:969 (1) - ^
03:48:589 (38) - ^
03:51:555 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - Bad overmap. Make it more appropriate to the song -> http://puu.sh/bCBAL/2c81b7bc27.png eh used 5plet kats instead to emphasize the "meow" hope you don't hate on it :<
03:55:210 (82) - Remove again. done this and below
03:58:521 (106) - ^
Also some suggestions from myself:

00:13:054 (27) - Shouldn't this be a kat? meh i following the floating-like sound that goes up
00:29:709 (132,134) - Remove these ones so you both reduce the stream a bit and follow vocals better. why the hell did i map these ;w; Thanks for spotting this orz Changed!
00:41:813 (43,44,45,46,47) - I think this should be kkddk to keep your kat structure here. but the current pattern (ddkkd) emphasizes the high pitched 8bit sound better >_> who cares about structure ahahaha
00:48:330 - 00:48:537 - I think dons would fit nicely with the stream in the music. added one
00:55:675 - I found this a bit weird as you ignore this strong beat, how about change 00:55:675 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - from dd dk k d to d dd kk d
did your rhythm but changed to dk kd since dd kk plays really, really weird to me orz
01:06:847 (16) - I think a kat would complement the previous kkd better
01:10:571 (43) - Considering you're following the high pitched instrument it'd be better to move this 1/4 beat back to keep following it. it plays kinda bad since it will be a "2plet-6plet" which isn't that feasible orz
01:30:330 (129,130) - This is really awkward as vocals are the same and you made this pattern different, make dk pls. peaches...i mean pitches though
01:36:950 (167,168) - ^ ^
02:44:089 (98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - This would fit better as a 1/3 stream, it won't be that unreadable and still fitting the song. zz see my reply at mitten's point, providing a little reading challenge wouldn't hurt @@
02:48:434 (128,129,130,131) - A ddd k would fit better both vocals and the instrumental than a dd dk. yep this part feels strange to me before as well. Changed!
03:00:123 - I think you should add a note here to make it consistent with previous ddddk pattern, obviously, remove the finisher if you do. I want to keep the finisher for the "ding" sound though ;w;
03:01:468 (56,57,58,59) - Kinda the same here, a dk dk pattern would be better here for vocals. ^
03:12:847 - Missing note? i'm a baka
03:13:365 (110) - Remove? There that noise though ;w;
03:15:020 (116) - ^While the music does have nothing to support a note here, not mapping it simply feels too empty since I've been keeping the 3/4 rhythm from 03:12:245
03:16:365 (121) - A don would fit better here and also would make more sense with the "extra" sound in the music. but the kats here are already used to emphasize the higher sound ;w;
03:16:985 (124) - A don would be better to separate both sections in the music better. done!
04:29:088 (16,17) - Change to dk as I explained before But I didn't change it lol
04:35:708 (55,56) - ^ ^

uguu dake chan moeness too kawaii uguu
Wow...when I take a look at it quite a lot of stuff was rejected, sorry ;w; I hope you'd agree with my explanations :3
Thanks so much for the mod(s)! Both of you helped a lot with the whole map in general (especially the slowdown parts)!
DakeDekaane
I really suggest you to change stuff like 02:39:141 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75) to full 1/3, this is actually annoying to read imo, or at least go back to your 1/6.

pls ;w;
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
i decided to change them when im back k
(which is probably a month later ;w;)
wait for me dake chan
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Well had access to my father's lappy for a day...UPDATED.

Got rid of all of the "hard to read" 1/6s, hope no one is sad about it ;w;

Come at me bats
Evening

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Well had access to my father's lappy for a day...UPDATED.

Got rid of all of the "hard to read" 1/6s, hope no one is sad about it ;w;

Come at me bats
dayum son where'd you find dose bubbles bat
Stefan

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Come at me bats
DakeDekaane

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Come at me bats


#1

@Next BATs:
Check this section: 02:39:141 - 02:52:383 and feel free to suggest more alternatives if you find some better to play here, as the song is really weird to map there.
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki


Thanks for the bubble!

now let's harass other people k
Stefan
00:26:210 (110,111) - Personally that sounds and plays unconfortable, change it into http://puu.sh/c5BvW/981481732a.jpg
00:36:658 - Personally I find the SV a bit too high at being natural, I suggest decreasing 1.10x, the more intensive part where you can use 1.20x would be the other Kiai parts.
01:05:727 (7,8,9,10) - Ctrl+G; the lighter sounds better at (8,10).
01:07:176 (18) - Remove? 01:07:072 (17) should stay alone to have more impact with 01:07:279 (19,20,21,22,23) then.
01:08:831 (31) - same reason as above.
01:27:348 (109,110,111,112,113) - Change this to dkdkk, listen carefully to the music and which beats are lighter and darker.#
02:39:141 - 02:52:383 - *sigh* they are clearer to read at 0.95x SV on 02:39:141.
02:39:279 - That break feels so weird and unfitting, I automatically tap to this time when I play lol
02:40:245 (75,76) - (75) should be moved at the following white tick while (76) should be mapped at 1/2 on the following red tick (02:40:589). I can't hear anything out here what fills 1/3 here.
02:46:866 (113,114) - ^
03:05:624 - imo I am not sure if this should stay here since 03:05:624 (81) is slowed and part of this stream pattern. would make it better if you put the 1.00x SV at 03:05:934 (82).
03:45:348 - ;____; what is this.. as much I dislike this I won't complain much about this section. but I find 1.50x too fast, use 1.40x instead. That looks clearer.


Well, that's it. Mostly the SV issues should be fixed since they fix some issues and/or cause better gameplay. Poke me after you've fixed your map.
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Deleted lines are changed uguu

Stefan wrote:

00:36:658 - Personally I find the SV a bit too high at being natural, I suggest decreasing 1.10x, the more intensive part where you can use 1.20x would be the other Kiai parts. eh x1.1 looks too slow compared to the hype so um compromised with x1.15 instead
01:07:176 (18) - Remove? 01:07:072 (17) should stay alone to have more impact with 01:07:279 (19,20,21,22,23) then. I want to keep the 7-note patterns here because cool ;w;
01:08:831 (31) - same reason as above. ^
02:39:141 - 02:52:383 - *sigh* they are clearer to read at 0.95x SV on 02:39:141. trolling on purpose, sry :/
02:40:245 (75,76) - (75) should be moved at the following white tick while (76) should be mapped at 1/2 on the following red tick (02:40:589). I can't hear anything out here what fills 1/3 here. adjusted stuff a bit so they play the same like the "ma-wa-re" ddk later
02:46:866 (113,114) - ^ ^
03:05:624 - imo I am not sure if this should stay here since 03:05:624 (81) is slowed and part of this stream pattern. would make it better if you put the 1.00x SV at 03:05:934 (82). moved the green line to 03:05:934 while leaving the notes unchanged cos snare ;w;
03:45:348 - ;____; what is this.. as much I dislike this I won't complain much about this section. but I find 1.50x too fast, use 1.40x instead. That looks clearer. This SV is on purpose to make the 1/6s look like 1/4 which um looks really cool ;w;


Well, that's it. Mostly the SV issues should be fixed since they fix some issues and/or cause better gameplay. Poke me after you've fixed your map.
Done! Thanks for the mod kawaii uguu
*me pokes stefan*
Dainesl
Regarding 02:39:141 - and onwards in addition to 03:44:934 - these SV changes are a bit radical imo and could be kind of unreadable for some people (not to me but just giving you a heads-up)

I got an idea regarding both of them too

For Point 1
  1. 02:35:831 - Remove this inherited point and replace with the 0.9x inherited point from 1 measure before
  2. 02:38:314 - and 02:39:141 - +0.05x
Two ideas for Point 2

Idea 1
  1. 03:32:521 - and 03:32:796 - remove the 0.75x and optionally the 0.8x.
  2. Assuming you deleted only 0.75x, go from 0.84x on 03:44:934 - and increase by 0.04x per point
  3. Assuming you deleted both, go from 0.92x on 03:44:934 - and increase by 0.02x per point
Idea 2
  1. Keep current inherited points but add one of 0.8x at 03:38:727 - and one of 0.9x at 03:43:693 - (or on the note before this whatever)
  2. Then you can make the next inherited point 0.92x and go from there to 1x as second point of idea 1 is described.
just to give it some readability :oops:
Stefan
I have asked #taiko out about their opinion about 02:39:141 and also 01:10:589 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) since the overlap between (49,50) needs to be fixed as well.

SPOILER
11:31 Nwolf: 01:11:417 - very critical here imo
11:34 Nwolf: 03:44:934 - and then here again
11:34 Ekoro: that 1/3 part is weird
11:35 Ekoro: with the SV it can be mistaken for 1/4
11:40 Stefan: 01:11:417 - is okay, 03:44:93 - could really cause trouble
11:41 Nwolf: I think the first overlaps too much
11:41 Stefan: I don't know... I love when people use SV changes to do cool stuff
11:41 Stefan: But they should be natural
11:41 Nwolf: yeah it is cool stuff there
11:41 Nwolf: if it didn't overlap so much :<
11:42 Dainesl: wait wat
11:42 Nwolf: cdh's map Dain
11:42 Dainesl: ah
11:42 Dainesl: I can chip in if you want
11:42 Stefan: Would be great
11:43 Stefan: because I have doubts in giving the second bubble.
11:43 LunaticP: HI #taiko
11:43 Dainesl: I'll have a little testplay of it just to see what's up now
11:45 Nwolf: 01:10:176 - From here I would reduce the SV a little bit with each note
11:46 Dainesl: wait
11:47 Dainesl: 01:13:072 - what about 0.8x here
11:47 Dainesl: 01:11:417 - change to 0.9x
11:48 Dainesl: i dunno, just another way of dealing with overlap while giving the notes at the timestamp Nwolf mentioned equal emphasis
11:49 Nwolf: or that
11:49 Dainesl: well there is still SLIGHT overlap
11:50 Dainesl: but the note becomes clear in time I feel
11:51 Dainesl: what do you think stops it from the 2nd bubble @ Stefan
11:51 Stefan: 02:39:141 - & 03:45:348 -
11:51 Stefan: It personally reads badly, not hard
11:52 Stefan: hard would be someone subjective which shouldn't prevent being bubbled
11:53 Dainesl: personally I wasn't really confused by this reading
11:53 Dainesl: but I can see the potential issues
11:53 Dainesl: maybe it's that the SV is too low or something so it looks like 1/4

Let's slay it out more:
01:10:589 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - like said this should/needs to be fixed to prevent overlapping on (49,50). A line on 01:10:589 - with 0.9x SV should solve this issue and looks natural enough.
01:40:693 (192,193) - Switch them? I think I can hear out what's your intention in this stream but these two should be swapped then.
03:30:245 (196,197,198,199) - this isn't anyhow related to the song putting 1/6 here. change this to 1/4.

We've got to do something about the SV issues here, seriously. That isn't anymore about trolling with the SV or to call this has hard to read. The main issue is it looks not good and misplaced. Please excuse me when it sounds harsh but I want to clear out why I am worried about this and don't bubbled yet. I hope you can understand my sight about this case. Dainesl posted suggestions about some parts which are pretty good and STILL keep your intention to "troll" with SV. no kd
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
IM NOT GONNA GIVE YOU GUYS KUDOSU MUAHAHA IM SO EVIL

PS before anything I'm gonna clarify that the wubwub part has x0.75 SO it the 1/3 looks like 1/4 ON PURPOSE :/ (1/3 notes with x0.75 looks EXACTLY like 1/4)

@dain well basically didn't touch anything in point 1 since basically everything there is mapped to the vocals and um imo the wubwub spacing like 1/4 is much, much easier to read than "a-little-wider-than-1/4-but-idk-how-much" spacing

Applied Idea 2 for Point 2 completely, thanks for the huge help which really eases the currently too rushed sv change >< Thanks!

Stefan wrote:

I have asked #taiko out about their opinion about 02:39:141 and also 01:10:589 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) since the overlap between (49,50) needs to be fixed as well.

SPOILER
11:31 Nwolf: 01:11:417 - very critical here imo
11:34 Nwolf: 03:44:934 - and then here again
11:34 Ekoro: that 1/3 part is weird
11:35 Ekoro: with the SV it can be mistaken for 1/4
11:40 Stefan: 01:11:417 - is okay, 03:44:93 - could really cause trouble
11:41 Nwolf: I think the first overlaps too much
11:41 Stefan: I don't know... I love when people use SV changes to do cool stuff
11:41 Stefan: But they should be natural
11:41 Nwolf: yeah it is cool stuff there
11:41 Nwolf: if it didn't overlap so much :<
11:42 Dainesl: wait wat
11:42 Nwolf: cdh's map Dain
11:42 Dainesl: ah
11:42 Dainesl: I can chip in if you want
11:42 Stefan: Would be great
11:43 Stefan: because I have doubts in giving the second bubble.
11:43 LunaticP: HI #taiko
11:43 Dainesl: I'll have a little testplay of it just to see what's up now
11:45 Nwolf: 01:10:176 - From here I would reduce the SV a little bit with each note
11:46 Dainesl: wait
11:47 Dainesl: 01:13:072 - what about 0.8x here
11:47 Dainesl: 01:11:417 - change to 0.9x
11:48 Dainesl: i dunno, just another way of dealing with overlap while giving the notes at the timestamp Nwolf mentioned equal emphasis
11:49 Nwolf: or that
11:49 Dainesl: well there is still SLIGHT overlap
11:50 Dainesl: but the note becomes clear in time I feel
11:51 Dainesl: what do you think stops it from the 2nd bubble @ Stefan
11:51 Stefan: 02:39:141 - & 03:45:348 -
11:51 Stefan: It personally reads badly, not hard
11:52 Stefan: hard would be someone subjective which shouldn't prevent being bubbled
11:53 Dainesl: personally I wasn't really confused by this reading
11:53 Dainesl: but I can see the potential issues
11:53 Dainesl: maybe it's that the SV is too low or something so it looks like 1/4

Let's slay it out more:
01:10:589 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - like said this should/needs to be fixed to prevent overlapping on (49,50). A line on 01:10:589 - with 0.9x SV should solve this issue and looks natural enough. made 01:11:417 - x0.9 and 01:11:831 - x0.8 instead, this should be perfectly fine since your suggestion and my solution are both "change the note after 1/2 to x0.9" (k idk how to express stuff)
01:40:693 (192,193) - Switch them? I think I can hear out what's your intention in this stream but these two should be swapped then. b....but this plays extremely well >_> i mostly get rekt by the map with dt but i can fc this part literally every time and changing it really breaks my flow ;w;
03:30:245 (196,197,198,199) - this isn't anyhow related to the song putting 1/6 here. change this to 1/4. k

We've got to do something about the SV issues here, seriously. That isn't anymore about trolling with the SV or to call this has hard to read. The main issue is it looks not good and misplaced. Please excuse me when it sounds harsh but I want to clear out why I am worried about this and don't bubbled yet. I hope you can understand my sight about this case. Dainesl posted suggestions about some parts which are pretty good and STILL keep your intention to "troll" with SV. no kd hmmmmmmmmmmm probably going to discuss further for the wubwub part, not really going to touch anything now, sorry ;w;
Stefan
We've fixed 02:50:727 - 02:52:383 to be more readable and to differ 1/4 from 1/3. At all, good improving, especially in the SV usage.

There we go with the second bubble.

Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
THANKSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
bSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

the hype is almost real jiehdhewiufhewiufhiuwh
Frostmourne
moved to pending
PatZar
cancer dance \w\ hypehype
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Thanks Frostmourne ><

@Genocide lets cancer dance \o\

ALSO I JUST NEED ANOTHER BAT WHY IS THIS SO HARD ;w;
kanpakyin
Approved.

(ノ・ω・)ノ
Dainesl
Congratulations baka cdh ! ;w;
Myxo
Congratz :3
TicClick
mare×17 + maware, maware
Scorpiour
mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare mare
Mao
Gratz \o/
Nwolf
omg cdh you are so baka

SO

BAKA

GZ
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
WHAT

HAPPENED

WHEN

I

WAS

ASLEEP

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MAREMAREMAREMAREMAREMAREMAWARE

Thanks kanpakyin :3
TKS
grats.
this is just a small thing, but not issue.


04:08:521 (139) - barline doesnt fit the note due to bug(?). in that case, you should set(or move) the barline to 04:08:417 - or so.
04:56:521 (1) - the same. you should set a new barline(x1.00sv + KIAI) to 04:56:417 -

i hope that your next map will get better :3c
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
;w;
Senritsu
bakacdh gz <3
OnosakiHito

Reason for Disqualification


  1. Disqualified for several SV issues and more:
  2. 02:32:521 - Bugged barline which can be fixed by moving the inherited timeline forward.
  3. 02:51:348 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,1,1) - This might be an subjecitce view but patterns with 1/3+1/4+SV changes+spinner are more than questionable. Everything is on a small spot which makes it really confusing. Short spinners are normaly something we should prevent. We also have it written down in the guidelines:

    Taiko Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Shakers (Spinners)
    Try to leave at least a 1/2 beat between a note and a spinner. Using them on streams may be okay. Short spinners are highly not recommended, since they cover the notes and can cause players to miss due to pressing too much.
  4. 03:31:899 (210,211) - This should be made smoother. In the additional modding I have some examples.
  5. 03:38:314 (240,241,242,243,244) - Transition isn't here smooth either.
  6. 03:43:278 (5,6) - What happened here? Transition is really bad. Timeline is probably -1ms too late.
  7. 04:08:521 - Bugged barline which can be fixed by moving the inherited timeline forward.
  8. 04:56:521 - ^
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Additional Modding



Small modding. Didn't mentioned everything since I don't have much time.

  1. 00:48:658 (1,2,3,4) - No 1/6, but should be fine I guess. Just wanted to mention it.
  2. 00:49:693 (10) - Can be deleted. The transition doesn't look that nice from one to the other stanza because of the SV change. In case you are thinking about adding another SV change here for compensaiting this, I say, I wouldn't suggest you to do that. There is no real sound for this note anyway, and in this way both parts are seperated to each other in a better way (people can prepare for the 1/6 in a better way).
  3. 00:49:900 - These kind of patterns are something I wouldn't support that much. But well, since it is monotonically it might be fine. You can reconsider it once again.
  4. 01:11:417 - Transition here isn't that nice either. Little overlapping. Can be kept as x1.00 and at 01:11:831 have x0.90(while
  5. 01:12:245 is x0.80). Would fit to the stanza as well.
  6. 01:27:348 - Just keep it x1.20 if you ask me. Having such short SV changes with patterns is rather questionable to me.
  7. 04:01:486 - Similar to previous mentioned case. Having now a deceleration doesn't seem to fit here. Even though I might understand the intention behind it, due to deeper voice. But better keep the SV the same or something like that.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

5 BATs didn't saw these issues even though they are real design and gameplay issues. Won't comment anything here anymore.
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
did not see that coming

also lol insta grave
Shohei Ohtani
ono right now

Dainesl
on cutting edge there's a ton of unsnaps being reported for some reason
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

Dainesl wrote:

on cutting edge there's a ton of unsnaps being reported for some reason
t/259091

its because now 1ms timing errors can be checked in cutting edge

will fix later along with ono's mod
Pelaaja_X
What happened to the ranked status? ._.
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
The map got disqualified
lol
PatZar
rip best maware
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
green is fixed
blue is fixed with a little twist
purple is nu

OnosakiHito wrote:

Reason for Disqualification


  1. Disqualified for several SV issues and more:
  2. 02:32:521 - Bugged barline which can be fixed by moving the inherited timeline forward. don
  3. 02:51:348 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,1,1) - This might be an subjecitce view but patterns with 1/3+1/4+SV changes+spinner are more than questionable. Everything is on a small spot which makes it really confusing. Short spinners are normaly something we should prevent. We also have it written down in the guidelines: Deleted the note after the spinner to give players ample space to read the next notes
  4. 03:31:899 (210,211) - This should be made smoother. In the additional modding I have some examples.
  5. 03:38:314 (240,241,242,243,244) - Transition isn't here smooth either.
  6. 03:43:278 (5,6) - What happened here? Transition is really bad. Timeline is probably -1ms too late. Regarding the mods for this part: made the sv changes smoother for this part in general (i think) while still having the same idea
  7. 04:08:521 - Bugged barline which can be fixed by moving the inherited timeline forward. don
  8. 04:56:521 - ^ did what tks suggested instead
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Additional Modding



Small modding. Didn't mentioned everything since I don't have much time.

  1. 00:48:658 (1,2,3,4) - No 1/6, but should be fine I guess. Just wanted to mention it. yup its fine and cool
  2. 00:49:693 (10) - Can be deleted. The transition doesn't look that nice from one to the other stanza because of the SV change. In case you are thinking about adding another SV change here for compensaiting this, I say, I wouldn't suggest you to do that. There is no real sound for this note anyway, and in this way both parts are seperated to each other in a better way (people can prepare for the 1/6 in a better way). eh but ;w; The pace in this kiai is pretty fast compared to the intro and the part after it so having a break won't fit really well >_> Not changing this for now since its not really game-breaking, but eh I might still change my mind later :P
  3. 00:49:900 - These kind of patterns are something I wouldn't support that much. But well, since it is monotonically it might be fine. You can reconsider it once again. um no
  4. 01:11:417 - Transition here isn't that nice either. Little overlapping. Can be kept as x1.00 and at 01:11:831 have x0.90(while
  5. 01:12:245 is x0.80). Would fit to the stanza as well. Made 01:11:417 x0.95 to give players a hint to the slowdown part better, fixed everything else accordingly!
  6. 01:27:348 - Just keep it x1.20 if you ask me. Having such short SV changes with patterns is rather questionable to me. a few people mentioned it already so yeah, changed
  7. 04:01:486 - Similar to previous mentioned case. Having now a deceleration doesn't seem to fit here. Even though I might understand the intention behind it, due to deeper voice. But better keep the SV the same or something like that. but it looks really cool D:
Also resnapped all notes, hopefully they're fixed now! @dain

Thanks a bunch Ono!

now i have to look for bats all over again ;w;
Nwolf
woof woof BAKA woof

[Bakadiff]

00:49:693 - Add another green bar with SV 1.07 for ~da smooth transition~
05:03:555 - Add red timing section since the first beat shifted

00:31:486 (146) - Change to kat to give ~~da bass dons~~ more emphasis
01:49:900 (246) - 03:01:072 (53) - 04:48:658 (134) - idk I would've preferred kats on all these notes since you kinda have ~~~da snare rhythm~~~ here
02:52:383 - Replace with another note and add 02:52:796 - something big here (preferably a big kat)
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

Nwolf wrote:

woof woof BAKA woof baka indeed

[Bakadiff]

00:49:693 - Add another green bar with SV 1.07 for ~da smooth transition~ did x1.075 magic here k
05:03:555 - Add red timing section since the first beat shifted don

00:31:486 (146) - Change to kat to give ~~da bass dons~~ more emphasis k
01:49:900 (246) - 03:01:072 (53) - 04:48:658 (134) - idk I would've preferred kats on all these notes since you kinda have ~~~da snare rhythm~~~ here this is following ~~~da vocal pitches~~~ though
02:52:383 - Replace with another note and add 02:52:796 - something big here (preferably a big kat) i wanted to but a note there just doesn't feel as good somehow ;w;
Thanks for the mod baka ;w;
Nwolf
a bit more stuff

02:52:383 (1) - srsly tho it kinda was a reason for disqualify, I don't get what's so cool about it D: If you don't like a note here, leave it unmapped and add a note 02:52:796 - here or sth but I really want to be on the safe side here
03:37:762 - to 03:38:727 - make more smooth, would prefer to have SV increase on more notes than just the 1/6 triplet. Try doing that on the 1/3 notes too
03:44:658 (14,15) - Maybe also delete these so the SV stuff is clearer
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Fixed everything
Nwolf
All DQ issues have been fixed, with a few more SV smoothness suggestions and a fixed barline at the end of the song

This has to and it will end well

Bubble #1 !

if the next BAT could approve the metadata, would be great ty
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THANKSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
mingmichael
finally ming comes =w=


Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Maware??]

General
☞ okay

Notes Structure
☞ will mention many some suggestions for the SVs on the Notes box

Notes
• i agree with Ono for deleting 00:49:693 - . yeah i know that you wanna to follow the drum there or maybe you wanna fill with a note than break. yupp it's nice and i agree for adding it but i deleted this one to make the players prepare for the next patterns which start with 1/6 notes on 00:49:900 - and also it has decreasing SV there. deleting this note will help all the players especially for having a preparation to face the next patterns. anyway deleting this note doesn't hurt your patterns too

• a kat on 01:49:900 - please. the vocal has increased here even it's lower than 01:50:107 -

• reverse these notes 01:58:072 (294,295) - . no idea for using oo since the snare comes out on 01:58:176 - and it would be better with a kat like 01:56:521 -

• a kat 02:44:934 - . first to avoid that dondon everywhere =w= and second it could follow like a snare sound (?) which comes out there. same like 02:43:279 - which you used kat on

• add 0.80x on 02:50:365 - and change 02:50:727 - to be 0.85x. the function is to make the SV changes softer, especially from 02:50:727 - to 02:51:348 - when the notes are already dense with 1/4. so i increased the speed on 02:50:727 - and it would have a small increasing SV to 02:51:348 - (from 0.85x to 0.90x, just 0.05 changes)

• here, a kat on 03:01:072 - . the vocal has increased a bit here. it can follow the snare sound too, but it's not really important since you don't really focus on it

• this SV changes are too sudden on 03:43:555 - . actually it's no problem, but it would be better to make it a bittttt softer. it's easy, just add 1.10x on 03:43:072 - . the previous one is 1.00x ~> 1.15x , and now it will be 1.00x ~> 1.10x ~> 1.15x

no for these SV changes 04:01:486 - ; 04:01:693 - ; 04:01:900 - . the notes are almost overlapped there. okay, it's not problem to keep that decreasing SV there, but you must do this. add 1.15x on 04:00:245 - which is fit with the stanza and change those three SV changes 04:01:486 - ; 04:01:693 - ; 04:01:900 - to be 1.10x ; 1.05x and 1.00x. you can see the result later and try to compare with yours

• aha a kat on 04:48:658 - . same reason like the previous points


====================


let me decide this after you take a look my mods
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

mingmichael wrote:

finally ming comes =w= kenapa lewat =w= *me slaps*


Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


====================


[ Maware??]

General
☞ okay

Notes Structure
☞ will mention many some suggestions for the SVs on the Notes box

Notes
• i agree with Ono for deleting 00:49:693 - . yeah i know that you wanna to follow the drum there or maybe you wanna fill with a note than break. yupp it's nice and i agree for adding it but i deleted this one to make the players prepare for the next patterns which start with 1/6 notes on 00:49:900 - and also it has decreasing SV there. deleting this note will help all the players especially for having a preparation to face the next patterns. anyway deleting this note doesn't hurt your patterns too *sighs* fixed

• a kat on 01:49:900 - please. the vocal has increased here even it's lower than 01:50:107 - though 01:50:107 's pitch is really much higher and i simply need to take that into account so having only that as a kat will describe the overall flow better (dddk-> gradually low to high but ddkk-> half low half high )

• reverse these notes 01:58:072 (294,295) - . no idea for using oo since the snare comes out on 01:58:176 - and it would be better with a kat like 01:56:521 - pretty sure it was dk before lol. fixed!

• a kat 02:44:934 - . first to avoid that dondon everywhere =w= and second it could follow like a snare sound (?) which comes out there. same like 02:43:279 - which you used kat on katsus are cool

• add 0.80x on 02:50:365 - and change 02:50:727 - to be 0.85x. the function is to make the SV changes softer, especially from 02:50:727 - to 02:51:348 - when the notes are already dense with 1/4. so i increased the speed on 02:50:727 - and it would have a small increasing SV to 02:51:348 - (from 0.85x to 0.90x, just 0.05 changes) the timestamp you suggested isn't snapped lol did everything but had the 0.8 at 02:50:107 instead, hope it works too!

• here, a kat on 03:01:072 - . the vocal has increased a bit here. it can follow the snare sound too, but it's not really important since you don't really focus on it basically denied with the same reasoning as before

• this SV changes are too sudden on 03:43:555 - . actually it's no problem, but it would be better to make it a bittttt softer. it's easy, just add 1.10x on 03:43:072 - . the previous one is 1.00x ~> 1.15x , and now it will be 1.00x ~> 1.10x ~> 1.15x did something really similar

no for these SV changes 04:01:486 - ; 04:01:693 - ; 04:01:900 - . the notes are almost overlapped there. okay, it's not problem to keep that decreasing SV there, but you must do this. add 1.15x on 04:00:245 - which is fit with the stanza and change those three SV changes 04:01:486 - ; 04:01:693 - ; 04:01:900 - to be 1.10x ; 1.05x and 1.00x. you can see the result later and try to compare with yours looks cool i guess

• aha a kat on 04:48:658 - . same reason like the previous points aha


====================


let me decide this after you take a look my mods
Terima kasih ming!
mingmichael
okay then, just did a small IRC mod with cdh. we did some SV changes to make the speed changes smoother like 01:11:831 - and 02:50:314 - . the notes and patterns are also nice, nothing problem from them for me. so then, enjoy~




my first approval aaaaaaaaaaaa
Yumeno Himiko
gratz~~
Loctav
This lacks a bubble. Sorry.
OnosakiHito
This time it wasn't me. weeee
Yuzeyun
onopls
mingmichael
aahhh sorry i forgot that it needs 2 bubbles for an approval :cry: i thought i could approve it if i didn't bubble-pop it, like a normal mapset. i swear i never do this stupid thing again :|
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
BAKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

*me slaps ming*

Also, can't this be reverted to bubble #2 since it wasn't an error on the map's part orz
Yuzeyun
a dq is a dq
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
um kden

gezo mod pls >w< *runs*
DakeDekaane
rip maware
mingmichael
cdh told me that i could do a rebubble again for this map o.o



okay then, after did a short conversation and also we put a kiai stop on 03:05:624 - , i'm going to do the first bubble again. i believe that nothing wrong would happen again and i'll take the risk for this ><

#1 ~
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
thanks again~
let's hope this time round nothing happens finally orz
Nwolf
hmmm

03:45:348 - I kinda have doubts about 1.5 here. 1.25/1.3 already seems to be enough imo, consider changing this and adjust previous SV to this
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
nah

denied since x1.5 looks like normal 1/4 on 1.4 sv which is the scrolling speed that players are most comfortable with (also told nwolf in pm)

;w;
Nwolf
Smoothened the SV transition from 03:43:555 - to the kiai a bit

bubble #2!
Fullerene-
might want to move it to pending
Stefan
god bless this doesn't become smacked again, moved to Pending.
PatZar

Stefan wrote:

god bless this doesn't become smacked again, moved to Pending.
hype
qoot8123
[General]
  1. 純粹建議,我覺得HP 6就夠了,6.5感絕對高於5分鐘的歌有點太高了
  2. 05:03:141 - 這裡要加一條有設置omit first bar line 的紅線
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

qoot8123 wrote:

[General]
  1. 純粹建議,我覺得HP 6就夠了,6.5感絕對高於5分鐘的歌有點太高了 好吧
  2. 05:03:141 - 這裡要加一條有設置omit first bar line 的紅線 改了
Thanks!
qoot8123
Approved!
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
HDUOQEDNIOWQDIUQWDUITQUIDGQWDBQWOINQWOIDJIWQODYUIQWTYUGQWDIUGQWUIDHOIWHDQWDYQ

THANKS!
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