1. MawareMiX (4.29 stars, 1696 notes)

Standard diff by jonathanlfj

9★ MawareMiX (aka Oni) by me

Rank log owo

qoot8123 #1
mintong89 #2
DakeDekaane #3 (#1)
Stefan #4 (#2)
kanpakyin Approved!
Onosakihito Disqualified ;w;
Nwolf #5 (#1)
mingmichael owo...?
Loctav Disqualified again because baka ;w;
mingmichael #6 (#1)
Nwolf #7 (#2)
qoot8123 Approved again!

Special thanks to the bats/qats above who helped to push this map into rankage :3

Mintong wrote:

2nd, pro map app plz

Stefan wrote:

MawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMaware------------------------ well, let's mod this!

00:20:503 (74,75,76,77,78) - this actually should be kdkdk, similar example: 00:18:847 (62,63,64,65,66) hm i'm following the whirling sounds that goes up here. I didn't follow it at 00:18:847 because it wasn't significant enuf ;w;
00:28:468 - d here? to follow the bleep here nope i don't intend to follow the bleep here. its nonstop 1/4 all the way so mapping it here but not other places sounds strange D:
00:31:675 (157) - k here to emphasize the vocals better. i don't want to emphasize the vocals though D: its all d here to follow the strong bass
01:00:020 (84) - That circle doesn't really fit here imo see 00:56:709, i changed the note to a d but hey, i might still delete the note in the future if following the vocals seem to be better
02:39:123 - 02:52:778 - YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THAT SV pls normal sv is too mainstream. we need more freaking dense 0.75
02:39:606 (74,75) - I'd find the 1/6 effect better if you let these two out. really want to keep the combo-breaking troll 1/6 tho :v
02:46:227 (119,120) - same here ^
04:13:468 - I personally think this part has until 04:20:089 has way more potential to be mapped with Doubles. it currently feels boring to play, and it's like the only part of the whole map which feels like that. screw this i really it when people say that my maps are boring, but at least i'll know i need to improve in these places so meh well you're right i kinda simply stuffed this part with random patterns, will think another way to map it tho, doubles all the way sounds pretty boring too to me :p

MawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMaware------------------------ well, good luck here! MawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMaware------------------------ to you too!

cdhsausageboy wrote:

EDIT: being less rude

Stefan wrote:

cdhsausageboy wrote:

EDIT: being less rude

lol wwwwwwww

lZenxl wrote:

wow such remix amaze

[Too lazy to write difficulty name]

00:26:089 - You sure you want to have these on blue lines? They can be barely heard in the music following vocals closely here. the people who listened to the original maware will probably get used to it immediately
00:42:227 (47) - The kats on 00:42:020 (45,46) - are replacing note 47, which sounds.... a bit weird for me, I suggest 00:41:813 (43,44,45,46,47) - to change to kkddk hm...used ddkkd instead
00:55:778 (59) - Move right by 1/2 | There's a bass in the music that you missed and that current timing point doesn't have a significant instrument bu...but it feels better with the vocals now ;w;
01:11:089 (48,49) - Swap | Ending the kat rhythm here with the kat on the blue line is pretty awkward not soothing to the ears i don't get your reasoning D: now thats awkward
01:14:709 (60) - d > D | Due to the sound effect in the music that drags on for a bit sorry i want to keep all the notes here small ><
01:59:606 - This part feels undermapped for me owo i wanted to 01:59:813 more hence the lack to notes
02:17:296 (47,48,49) - Remove | This stream here is linking 2 rhythms together, I suggest to remove these notes to break the link owo ok
02:31:985 - This pattern fits the music more - http://puu.sh/8Pv7O.png changed!
02:37:468 (67) - Extend to 02:38:089 - hm...im following the "su" in the vocals here which is only until 02:37:985 , but i might change it if moar people mention it
02:55:985 (20) - This kat rhythm here ends on a blue line, I suggest to end it on 02:56:295 (22) - by changing the don to a kat there i hate dkk D:
03:02:709 (64) - d > k | The kat density here is pretty low, I suggest to add a kat here to balance and keep the kat rhythm going hm the vocals here is pretty low in pitch here so i thought putting ddd d here feels good
03:13:365 (110) - Move the note to 03:12:847 - added a d there instead
03:32:089 - dem 1/3s
03:33:606 (214,215) - Swap | This sounds nicer for 3/4 signature since you might not want to have a base 1/1 kat as the rhythm "swings" k
03:39:123 (244) - d > k | Consistency with 03:40:778 (251) - mfw inconsistenty
03:47:261 (29,30) - Swap | Having the kat on 29 is breaks the kat rhythm for 3/4 imo meh tested and kd still feels better
03:52:365 (65) - d > k | This is to fill in the lack of kats here I HATE Ksssssss KILL THEM ALL KATSU jk changed
04:10:158 (159) - Remove | This kat here feels too outstanding as there is no significant instrument directly on this note there's still the weak cymbal though
04:13:468 - Oh god my ears, the vocals - You don't know how much times I've heard this freaking vocal after modding 5 same maps lol
Ears start to bleed mid kiai time rip lzenxl's ears
ded hue

[Heading of my Mod]

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

From my queue

[Heading of my Mod]

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Mware.jpg",0, 10 ~ 60 Look better imo Um this contradicts with your last mod?

00:22:778 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) -

00:43:054 (53) - k It sounds more like a d to me huh
01:15:847 (63) - k daadaad d d kaakaak k k daadaad d d kaakaak k k ftw
01:17:503 (68) - d ^
01:19:158 (73) - k ^
01:20:813 (78) - d ^

01:26:296 (108) - OPPA GANGNAM STYLE OPPAI GANGNAM STYLE

01:43:882 (206,207,208) - kkd
01:49:882 (247) - k simply no because the vocal pitch at 01:50:089 is much higher than here so I mapped both 01:49:675 (246,247) - to be a don
01:51:434 (256) - k changed!
01:59:296 (304) - k
02:03:744 (335) - k why was even d
02:15:537 (34) - k hm d is better gameplay wise while k is better music wise ;w; will consider about this
02:23:503 (90) - k but the music is 02:23:399 (89,90,91,92) - is completely identical owo
02:40:778 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - d d d d d d k
02:47:399 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - ^
02:48:640 (134) - add k imo dd kk doesn't flow better than dd dk so not changing this ;w;
03:02:606 (63) - k changed
03:12:847 (109) - add k um im following the kinda 8bit sound in the music with a d so no change
03:37:882 (237) - k tbh a kdddk flows MUCH better in a 1/3 rhythm

04:10:158 (159) - OPPAAAAAAAAAAA........... GANGNAM STYLE OPPAIIIIIIIIIIIIII

04:25:882 (1) - delete spinner and add
no reason to make the map harder than it should be XD

04:50:192 (144) - k changed

05:01:054 (1) - #ok end of song ~ #lol

05:03:123 (1) - #hey wait wtf !? not the end !???? #LOL

05:09:951 (44,45,46) - kkd nope ;w; I wanted the "maware maware maware" to be mapped with a d d k feeling in 1/2 >_>
05:16:778 (82) - D will consider about this, both D and K sound fine ;w;

Good Luck ~

My Hentai Suggestion
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Mware.jpg",0,-100
Why ? Cause we can able to see yaya body ~ But I want to show the head ;w;

Nwolf wrote:

Luv me ;w; k ;w; (me luv bakawolf <3)

[MawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawareDiff]

00:22:882 (91,92,93,94,95) - Maybe change to dkkdk (consistency with previous pattern) well not exactly, but still changed stuff here
00:49:882 (11,12,13,14) - I so wish that this wasn't reasonable : D *pattern becomes 1/12 endless stream* k
02:39:330 (70,71,72,73,74,75) - Change to triplets to it's not so unexpected as in 1/4 triplets ? starting a 1/3 part with a 1/4 pattern is just being baka ;w;
02:46:227 (115,117,119) - Delete for maximum fun *hides*
03:12:227 (107,108,109,110) - Change to kats and add a note 03:12:847 - here for <reasons> kats ahoy
03:30:227 (195,196,197,198) - pls c-c-c-combo breaker k lets try to be serious here um i can pass this every time so your argument is invalid >:D
03:41:951 (1) - pls lets just say this is on purpose >:D (not to troll people though ;w;)

ok and now the fun part

01:27:330 - Maybe instead of having 1.0 have 1.4 or something, if you want to keep either this or the kiai as "ninja" notes. Think it would be better this way. (or just get rid of this green section) Will consider about this, I wanna give this part an anti-climatic feel, so 1.0 it shall be, but hey anything is subjective to change if its sucks
02:39:123 - how2screw HD players. And NM players. 3: people should learn how2read in the first place D:
03:32:089 - Too sudden sv change moar baka sv change it is
03:58:985 - Maybe 1.25 here and 1.0 on the next one? HOLY CRAP it actually becomes much better bakawolf 4 bat pls


lol the end lol ikr

gj with this and gl with rank : D gl with getting everything you have ranked you slowpoke D:

Senritsu wrote:

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[Mawaremoeoverload]

SPOILER

Not changing it to 'Utagumi Setsugetsuka - Maware! Setsugetsuka (chiptune Remix)'? according to lfj's set.
Idk about the artist, since there are 2 different types of them. (Utagumi Setsugetsuka and Harada Hitomi etc.), both are same imo, but to save the space.. lols
And about the title, yes change it. Source : http://vgmdb.net/album/41281
changed the title :3

ok now jump to real mod~ poofed lines are changed

00:59:399 add d here, hear the drum and vocal sounds there ovo meh i want to use my own pattern that doesn't follow the music but still sounds good guehuehuehuehuhue
01:25:468 (100,101,102,103,104,106) - change t kat? lols if you hear it closely tho, there's like.. another type of drum (idk what's that called orz). try to make it differ lols i dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddon't want to change it D: *slapped*
02:07:365 (362) - change to don, the drum changes from the lighter one to a heavier one. >< need to consider about this though. well kkkkd alone plays better than kkkdd, and i wanna give 02:07:468 a more heavy feel :3

tho why getting slower with the very last kiai part ovo it seems fun to make an SV change there /runs/ owo? i don't really get what you mean...

gl for rank i support you <3 thanks for star and support <3

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bbj0920 wrote:

lol hi there I don't really like this remix but let's get it started

MawaRemix

SPOILER

00:23:503 (97) - k k
00:23:813 (100) - ^ meh the pitch is still kinda low compared with 00:23:709 so keeping the don here
00:24:847 (108) - ^ it just doesn't play that well D:
00:41:813 (43) - ^ both d and k sound fine so um gonna keep d for now, might change it later though~
00:59:296 (80) - d this is for contrast with 00:58:365 (74,75) (aka mirror pattern)
02:15:537 (34) - k d is for da bass
02:53:192 (4) - ^ B...but it sounds nice! >w<
05:16:778 (82) - ^ (This part is silent) It signifies the end of the song nicely though :>
ew 1.5xew 1.0x
but yeah this is great

Genocide wrote:

mawaaareeemawaaaareeeee:C

Noob mod here

00:19:468 (67,68) - ctrl + g pitch relevance
00:19:778 (69,70,71,72) - dddk b...but dkdk flows better with the previous kd ;w; its like a mini "play this single handed!" challenge lol
00:57:951 (72) - kat wasn't this k before D:
01:02:503 (96,97,98) - ddd i wanted to use k to emphasize the strong beats at (96,98) though
01:50:606 (251,252) - ctrl + g i copied 1811's pattern fite me
02:07:675 (1) - delete this please no
03:35:330 (227) - delete | only 3 kats stream are enough i really wanted to keep the 5 note 1/6 pattern consistency here so nope ;w;
03:38:640 (244) - delete | 03:38:709 (244) - big kat ^

mintong89 wrote:

Hi.

[General]
Hitsound Volume -30%? It's quite loud imo. Reduced the volume in the calm parts by 20% and the rest by 10%, made some adjustments in volumes at some other parts too
Disable Combo Colour. These aren't used at Taiko. lol disabled
OD & HP +1? Since this is for approved so I think it's fine with this. But I use OD5HP5 for everything I map ;w; k decided to put OD6 HP6.5 for the lols

[MawaReMix]

01:09:537 (37,38,39,40) - kkd k to fit better with vocal? used kkk k ;w;

The map generally is fine. =w=

call me back then.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Shouldn't artist be "Utagumi Setsugetsuka"?

lol barely passed

Senritsu wrote:

DakeDekaane wrote:

Shouldn't artist be "Utagumi Setsugetsuka"?

Both are fine.
Proof -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/131882, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122674
Oficial -> http://vgmdb.net/album/41281
Look at the Notes, it says 'Utagumi Setsugetsuka is Yaya (CV: Hitomi Harada), Irori (CV: Ai Kayano), Komurasaki (CV: Yui Ogura)'
I think both are fine, as long as cdh add the performers name's (which is not yet to be done)
But it's up to you BAT guys, you guys know it better.

Edit

lol barely passed

KSHR wrote:

About metadata stuff.

Web sites such as download services, wikipedia CAN'T be a source because they are NOT official. If you are unsure if a web site you found is official, ask native Japanese people first before mentioning in your mod post.

MMzz wrote:

02:39:348 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - These doesn't fit the music at all. The wubs are going 1/3 not 1/6.
02:42:658 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - 1/6 swing rhythm doesn't even match the music and is almost impossible to read at the slow SV. There should be another 1/3 stream here similar to 02:40:796 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - .
02:44:245 (99,100) - ^ seriously.
02:45:969 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - Need to be removed again.
02:50:728 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147) - This can be 1/4 instead of 1/6 since 1/6 doesn't work at all still.

If he forms this section more like he did with this pattern: 02:47:417 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - It would be better and more fun to play.

Unrelated to the slow section: 03:35:348 (227) - Remove this because it isn't in the music. Unnecessary difficulty.
03:38:658 (245) - ^
03:41:969 (1) - ^
03:48:589 (38) - ^
03:51:555 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - Bad overmap. Make it more appropriate to the song -> http://puu.sh/bCBAL/2c81b7bc27.png
03:55:210 (82) - Remove again.
03:58:521 (106) - ^

DakeDekaane wrote:

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Bubble must be popped because offset is too early, use 8521. done

Discussed a bit with other people and this is what they said.

MMzz wrote:

02:39:348 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - These doesn't fit the music at all. The wubs are going 1/3 not 1/6. I was trying to follow the rapid "wubb" sound from the beginning of the kiai, but yeah the 1/3 ones feel more noticeable to be mapped. Changed!
02:42:658 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - 1/6 swing rhythm doesn't even match the music and is almost impossible to read at the slow SV. There should be another 1/3 stream here similar to 02:40:796 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - .yep done
02:44:245 (99,100) - ^ seriously. Can't agree with this ;w; With the slowdown this looks like a little 1/8 inside of a normal 1/4 pattern, I don't see how it's exceptionally hard to read (especially with all the omfgmuchcombobreaking 1/6+1/4 maps ranked lately)
02:45:969 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - Need to be removed again.
02:50:728 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147) - This can be 1/4 instead of 1/6 since 1/6 doesn't work at all still.

If he forms this section more like he did with this pattern: 02:47:417 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - It would be better and more fun to play. .-.

Unrelated to the slow section: 03:35:348 (227) - Remove this because it isn't in the music. Unnecessary difficulty. changed this and the three ^s below
03:38:658 (245) - ^
03:41:969 (1) - ^
03:48:589 (38) - ^
03:51:555 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - Bad overmap. Make it more appropriate to the song -> http://puu.sh/bCBAL/2c81b7bc27.png eh used 5plet kats instead to emphasize the "meow" hope you don't hate on it :<
03:55:210 (82) - Remove again. done this and below
03:58:521 (106) - ^

Also some suggestions from myself:

00:13:054 (27) - Shouldn't this be a kat? meh i following the floating-like sound that goes up
00:29:709 (132,134) - Remove these ones so you both reduce the stream a bit and follow vocals better. why the hell did i map these ;w; Thanks for spotting this orz Changed!
00:41:813 (43,44,45,46,47) - I think this should be kkddk to keep your kat structure here. but the current pattern (ddkkd) emphasizes the high pitched 8bit sound better >_> who cares about structure ahahaha
00:48:330 - 00:48:537 - I think dons would fit nicely with the stream in the music. added one
00:55:675 - I found this a bit weird as you ignore this strong beat, how about change 00:55:675 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - from dd dk k d to d dd kk d
did your rhythm but changed to dk kd since dd kk plays really, really weird to me orz
01:06:847 (16) - I think a kat would complement the previous kkd better
01:10:571 (43) - Considering you're following the high pitched instrument it'd be better to move this 1/4 beat back to keep following it. it plays kinda bad since it will be a "2plet-6plet" which isn't that feasible orz
01:30:330 (129,130) - This is really awkward as vocals are the same and you made this pattern different, make dk pls. peaches...i mean pitches though
01:36:950 (167,168) - ^ ^
02:44:089 (98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - This would fit better as a 1/3 stream, it won't be that unreadable and still fitting the song. zz see my reply at mitten's point, providing a little reading challenge wouldn't hurt @@
02:48:434 (128,129,130,131) - A ddd k would fit better both vocals and the instrumental than a dd dk. yep this part feels strange to me before as well. Changed!
03:00:123 - I think you should add a note here to make it consistent with previous ddddk pattern, obviously, remove the finisher if you do. I want to keep the finisher for the "ding" sound though ;w;
03:01:468 (56,57,58,59) - Kinda the same here, a dk dk pattern would be better here for vocals. ^
03:12:847 - Missing note? i'm a baka
03:13:365 (110) - Remove? There that noise though ;w;
03:15:020 (116) - ^While the music does have nothing to support a note here, not mapping it simply feels too empty since I've been keeping the 3/4 rhythm from 03:12:245
03:16:365 (121) - A don would fit better here and also would make more sense with the "extra" sound in the music. but the kats here are already used to emphasize the higher sound ;w;
03:16:985 (124) - A don would be better to separate both sections in the music better. done!
04:29:088 (16,17) - Change to dk as I explained before But I didn't change it lol
04:35:708 (55,56) - ^ ^

uguu dake chan moeness too kawaii uguu

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Well had access to my father's lappy for a day...UPDATED.

Got rid of all of the "hard to read" 1/6s, hope no one is sad about it ;w;

Come at me bats

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Come at me bats

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Come at me bats