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Asagi Mutsuki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, January 04, 2015 at 2:16:00 PM

Artist: Utagumi Setsugetsuka
Title: Maware! Setsugetsuka chiptune Remix
Source: 機巧少女は傷つかない
Tags: Kikou Shoujo wa Kizutsukanai Unbreakable Kikou Shoujo Machine Doll Hige Driver 夜々 Yaya 原田ひとみ Harada Hitomi いろり Irori 茅野愛衣 Kayano Ai 小紫 Komurasaki 小倉唯 Ogura Yui Setsugekka
BPM: 145
Filesize: 7996kb
Play Time: 05:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. MawareMiX (4.29 stars, 1696 notes)
Download: Utagumi Setsugetsuka - Maware! Setsugetsuka chiptune Remix
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Standard diff by jonathanlfj

9★ MawareMiX (aka Oni) by me


Fun fact : This map got its first bubble before lfj's standard diff got its first mod!

Testplayers (luv u all <3)
NewibornClivee
mintong89
TKS
JCMq
S a n d
yaoyujie0332
toara_fict
Sayaka-
Tasha
Lost The Lights
Jerry
Onosakihito
Kagami Yuki
qoot8123
aabc271
-S o r a-
Shiki_nyan

Modders (moar <3) (15)
Stefan (such recheck much thanks)
lZenxl
mliencheng
[I]MMoRTal[S]
BAKA#1 Nwolf (baka recheckz)
Senritsu
bbj0920
Genocide
BAKA#2 Dainesl (thanks for help with almost every aspect of the map orz)
qoot8123
mintong89 (strong support <3)
KSHR (metadata)
DakeDekaane
Onosakihito
mingmichael

Rank log owo
qoot8123 #1
mintong89 #2
DakeDekaane #3 (#1)
Stefan #4 (#2)
kanpakyin Approved!
Onosakihito Disqualified ;w;
Nwolf #5 (#1)
mingmichael owo...?
Loctav Disqualified again because baka ;w;
mingmichael #6 (#1)
Nwolf #7 (#2)
qoot8123 Approved again!

Special thanks to the bats/qats above who helped to push this map into rankage :3
Bara-
HAHAHAHA
Awesome
1st :D
Sure about diff name, it seems little boring >.<
Good Luck
mintong89
2nd, pro map app plz
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

Mintong wrote:

2nd, pro map app plz
ahahaha thanks!
Stefan
MawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMaware------------------------ well, let's mod this!

00:20:503 (74,75,76,77,78) - this actually should be kdkdk, similar example: 00:18:847 (62,63,64,65,66)
00:22:571 (89) - because of the vocal on 00:22:468 (88) this d sounds quite weird. I hear you've mapped the hard beat here but that doesn't really fits here at all because of the previous note.
00:23:916 (101) - k here? the voice goes up here
00:26:089 (118) - Same issue as 00:22:571 (89), there is nothing really which would be worth to keep this circle, I recommend to remove to make a better flow here.
00:28:468 - d here? to follow the bleep here
00:31:675 (157) - k here to emphasize the vocals better.
00:42:020 (45) - k here
01:00:020 (84) - That circle doesn't really fit here imo
01:47:399 (228,229,230) - Mirror it to 01:46:985 (225,226,227) (means: change it to kkd), that gives a good effect imo and sounds nice as well
02:39:123 - 02:52:778 - YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THAT SV
02:39:606 (74,75) - I'd find the 1/6 effect better if you let these two out.
02:46:227 (119,120) - same here
04:13:468 - I personally think this part has until 04:20:089 has way more potential to be mapped with Doubles. it currently feels boring to play, and it's like the only part of the whole map which feels like that. :|
03:31:467 (202,203,204) - Actually this part would fit for 1/6 stream, unlike 03:30:227 (192,193,194,195).
04:45:743 (113,114,115,116,117,118) - I would keep this similar with 01:46:985 (225,226,227,228,229,230).
05:01:054 (15) - You could remove this and put a spinner here until 05:01:856, would fit pretty funny with the holding sound. :D

MawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMaware------------------------ well, good luck here!
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Deleted lines are changed uguu

Stefan wrote:

MawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMaware------------------------ well, let's mod this!

00:20:503 (74,75,76,77,78) - this actually should be kdkdk, similar example: 00:18:847 (62,63,64,65,66) hm i'm following the whirling sounds that goes up here. I didn't follow it at 00:18:847 because it wasn't significant enuf ;w;
00:28:468 - d here? to follow the bleep here nope i don't intend to follow the bleep here. its nonstop 1/4 all the way so mapping it here but not other places sounds strange D:
00:31:675 (157) - k here to emphasize the vocals better. i don't want to emphasize the vocals though D: its all d here to follow the strong bass
01:00:020 (84) - That circle doesn't really fit here imo see 00:56:709, i changed the note to a d but hey, i might still delete the note in the future if following the vocals seem to be better
02:39:123 - 02:52:778 - YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THAT SV pls normal sv is too mainstream. we need more freaking dense 0.75 :D
02:39:606 (74,75) - I'd find the 1/6 effect better if you let these two out. really want to keep the combo-breaking troll 1/6 tho :v
02:46:227 (119,120) - same here ^
04:13:468 - I personally think this part has until 04:20:089 has way more potential to be mapped with Doubles. it currently feels boring to play, and it's like the only part of the whole map which feels like that. :| screw this i really it when people say that my maps are boring, but at least i'll know i need to improve in these places so meh :? well you're right i kinda simply stuffed this part with random patterns, will think another way to map it tho, doubles all the way sounds pretty boring too to me :p

MawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMaware------------------------ well, good luck here! MawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMawareMaware------------------------ to you too!
Thanks! Your mod is really useful ww it helped me solved some patterns that I didn't like myself lol

EDIT: being less rude
Stefan

cdhsausageboy wrote:

EDIT: being less rude
lol wwwwwwww
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

Stefan wrote:

cdhsausageboy wrote:

EDIT: being less rude
lol wwwwwwww
sorry bb come to mah room 10pm k
Evening
wow such remix

[Too lazy to write difficulty name]

00:26:089 - You sure you want to have these on blue lines? They can be barely heard in the music
00:42:227 (47) - The kats on 00:42:020 (45,46) - are replacing note 47, which sounds.... a bit weird for me, I suggest 00:41:813 (43,44,45,46,47) - to change to kkddk
00:55:778 (59) - Move right by 1/2 | There's a bass in the music that you missed and that current timing point doesn't have a significant instrument
01:11:089 (48,49) - Swap | Ending the kat rhythm here with the kat on the blue line is pretty awkward not soothing to the ears
01:14:709 (60) - d > D | Due to the sound effect in the music that drags on for a bit
01:59:606 - This part feels undermapped for me owo
02:17:296 (47,48,49) - Remove | This stream here is linking 2 rhythms together, I suggest to remove these notes to break the link
02:31:985 - This pattern fits the music more - http://puu.sh/8Pv7O.png
02:37:468 (67) - Extend to 02:38:089 -
02:55:985 (20) - This kat rhythm here ends on a blue line, I suggest to end it on 02:56:295 (22) - by changing the don to a kat there
03:02:709 (64) - d > k | The kat density here is pretty low, I suggest to add a kat here to balance and keep the kat rhythm going
03:13:365 (110) - Move the note to 03:12:847 -
03:32:089 - dem 1/3s
03:33:606 (214,215) - Swap | This sounds nicer for 3/4 signature since you might not want to have a base 1/1 kat as the rhythm "swings"
03:39:123 (244) - d > k | Consistency with 03:40:778 (251) -
03:47:261 (29,30) - Swap | Having the kat on 29 is breaks the kat rhythm for 3/4 imo
03:52:365 (65) - d > k | This is to fill in the lack of kats here
04:10:158 (159) - Remove | This kat here feels too outstanding as there is no significant instrument directly on this note
04:13:468 - Oh god my ears, the vocals - You don't know how much times I've heard this freaking vocal after modding 5 same maps
Ears start to bleed mid kiai time
ded
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

lZenxl wrote:

wow such remix amaze

[Too lazy to write difficulty name]

00:26:089 - You sure you want to have these on blue lines? They can be barely heard in the music following vocals closely here. the people who listened to the original maware will probably get used to it immediately
00:42:227 (47) - The kats on 00:42:020 (45,46) - are replacing note 47, which sounds.... a bit weird for me, I suggest 00:41:813 (43,44,45,46,47) - to change to kkddk hm...used ddkkd instead
00:55:778 (59) - Move right by 1/2 | There's a bass in the music that you missed and that current timing point doesn't have a significant instrument bu...but it feels better with the vocals now ;w;
01:11:089 (48,49) - Swap | Ending the kat rhythm here with the kat on the blue line is pretty awkward not soothing to the ears i don't get your reasoning D: now thats awkward
01:14:709 (60) - d > D | Due to the sound effect in the music that drags on for a bit sorry i want to keep all the notes here small ><
01:59:606 - This part feels undermapped for me owo i wanted to 01:59:813 more hence the lack to notes :P
02:17:296 (47,48,49) - Remove | This stream here is linking 2 rhythms together, I suggest to remove these notes to break the link owo ok
02:31:985 - This pattern fits the music more - http://puu.sh/8Pv7O.png changed!
02:37:468 (67) - Extend to 02:38:089 - hm...im following the "su" in the vocals here which is only until 02:37:985 , but i might change it if moar people mention it
02:55:985 (20) - This kat rhythm here ends on a blue line, I suggest to end it on 02:56:295 (22) - by changing the don to a kat there i hate dkk D:
03:02:709 (64) - d > k | The kat density here is pretty low, I suggest to add a kat here to balance and keep the kat rhythm going hm the vocals here is pretty low in pitch here so i thought putting ddd d here feels good
03:13:365 (110) - Move the note to 03:12:847 - added a d there instead
03:32:089 - dem 1/3s
03:33:606 (214,215) - Swap | This sounds nicer for 3/4 signature since you might not want to have a base 1/1 kat as the rhythm "swings" k
03:39:123 (244) - d > k | Consistency with 03:40:778 (251) - mfw inconsistenty
03:47:261 (29,30) - Swap | Having the kat on 29 is breaks the kat rhythm for 3/4 imo meh tested and kd still feels better
03:52:365 (65) - d > k | This is to fill in the lack of kats here I HATE Ksssssss KILL THEM ALL KATSU jk changed
04:10:158 (159) - Remove | This kat here feels too outstanding as there is no significant instrument directly on this note there's still the weak cymbal though
04:13:468 - Oh god my ears, the vocals - You don't know how much times I've heard this freaking vocal after modding 5 same maps lol
Ears start to bleed mid kiai time rip lzenxl's ears
ded hue
Thanks for your mod!
And I still don't know how to fix that part @stefan orz
mliencheng
Mod


00:21:123 k
00:21:330 k
00:21:537 k
00:24:020 k
00:24:227 d
00:24:330 k
00:30:847 k
00:36:123 d
00:41:813 k
00:41:916 k
00:42:020 d
00:42:123 d
00:42:227 k
00:42:640 k
00:43:054 k
00:50:192 k
00:51:951 k
00:55:778 k
00:58:571 add k
01:09:434 k
01:11:192 k
01:48:847 k
01:54:434 k
02:32:916 k

02:42:709 add d? if you want to keep 1/6
02:43:123 add d ^
02:44:158 add d

02:44:847 k
03:00:847 k
03:03:468 k
03:05:606 k
03:05:916 k
03:06:227 k
04:47:606 k
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Lazy to reply about what I changed orz

Only changed a small portion from mliens mod, since most of the patterns there are there for a reason and won't be changed easily
wasonz
From my queue

[Heading of my Mod]


[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Mware.jpg",0, 10 ~ 60 Look better imo

00:22:778 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) -

00:43:054 (53) - k
01:15:847 (63) - k
01:17:503 (68) - d
01:19:158 (73) - k
01:20:813 (78) - d

01:26:296 (108) - OPPA GANGNAM STYLE

01:43:882 (206,207,208) - kkd
01:49:882 (247) - k
01:51:434 (256) - k
01:59:296 (304) - k
02:03:744 (335) - k
02:15:537 (34) - k
02:23:503 (90) - k
02:40:778 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - d d d d d d k
02:47:399 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - ^
02:48:640 (134) - add k
03:02:606 (63) - k
03:12:847 (109) - add k
03:37:882 (237) - k

04:10:158 (159) - OPPAAAAAAAAAAA........... GANGNAM STYLE

04:25:882 (1) - delete spinner and add
:D

04:50:192 (144) - k

05:01:054 (1) - #ok end of song ~

05:03:123 (1) - #hey wait wtf !? not the end !????

05:09:951 (44,45,46) - kkd
05:16:778 (82) - D

:D :D :D :D :D Good Luck ~

My Hentai Suggestion
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Mware.jpg",0,-100
Why ? Cause we can able to see yaya body ~
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Thanks for mod! I will fix stuff on Monday because no computer access and yay
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

From my queue

[Heading of my Mod]


[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Mware.jpg",0, 10 ~ 60 Look better imo Um this contradicts with your last mod?

00:22:778 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) -

00:43:054 (53) - k It sounds more like a d to me huh
01:15:847 (63) - k daadaad d d kaakaak k k daadaad d d kaakaak k k ftw
01:17:503 (68) - d ^
01:19:158 (73) - k ^
01:20:813 (78) - d ^

01:26:296 (108) - OPPA GANGNAM STYLE OPPAI GANGNAM STYLE

01:43:882 (206,207,208) - kkd
01:49:882 (247) - k simply no because the vocal pitch at 01:50:089 is much higher than here so I mapped both 01:49:675 (246,247) - to be a don
01:51:434 (256) - k changed!
01:59:296 (304) - k
02:03:744 (335) - k why was even d
02:15:537 (34) - k hm d is better gameplay wise while k is better music wise ;w; will consider about this
02:23:503 (90) - k but the music is 02:23:399 (89,90,91,92) - is completely identical owo
02:40:778 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - d d d d d d k
02:47:399 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - ^
02:48:640 (134) - add k imo dd kk doesn't flow better than dd dk so not changing this ;w;
03:02:606 (63) - k changed
03:12:847 (109) - add k um im following the kinda 8bit sound in the music with a d so no change
03:37:882 (237) - k tbh a kdddk flows MUCH better in a 1/3 rhythm

04:10:158 (159) - OPPAAAAAAAAAAA........... GANGNAM STYLE OPPAIIIIIIIIIIIIII

04:25:882 (1) - delete spinner and add
:D no reason to make the map harder than it should be XD

04:50:192 (144) - k changed

05:01:054 (1) - #ok end of song ~ #lol

05:03:123 (1) - #hey wait wtf !? not the end !???? #LOL

05:09:951 (44,45,46) - kkd nope ;w; I wanted the "maware maware maware" to be mapped with a d d k feeling in 1/2 >_>
05:16:778 (82) - D will consider about this, both D and K sound fine ;w;

:D :D :D :D :D Good Luck ~

My Hentai Suggestion
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Mware.jpg",0,-100
Why ? Cause we can able to see yaya body ~ But I want to show the head ;w;
Thanks for your mod!!! It was pretty useful ><
Nwolf
Luv me ;w;

[MawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawareDiff]

00:22:882 (91,92,93,94,95) - Maybe change to dkkdk (consistency with previous pattern)
00:49:882 (11,12,13,14) - I so wish that this wasn't reasonable : D
02:39:330 (70,71,72,73,74,75) - Change to triplets to it's not so unexpected
02:46:227 (115,117,119) - Delete for maximum fun *hides*
03:12:227 (107,108,109,110) - Change to kats and add a note 03:12:847 - here for <reasons>
03:30:227 (195,196,197,198) - pls
03:41:951 (1) - pls

ok and now the fun part

01:27:330 - Maybe instead of having 1.0 have 1.4 or something, if you want to keep either this or the kiai as "ninja" notes. Think it would be better this way. (or just get rid of this green section)
02:39:123 - how2screw HD players. And NM players. 3:
03:32:089 - Too sudden sv change
03:58:985 - Maybe 1.25 here and 1.0 on the next one?


lol the end

gj with this and gl with rank : D
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

Nwolf wrote:

Luv me ;w; k ;w; (me luv bakawolf <3)

[MawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawamawareDiff]

00:22:882 (91,92,93,94,95) - Maybe change to dkkdk (consistency with previous pattern) well not exactly, but still changed stuff here :D
00:49:882 (11,12,13,14) - I so wish that this wasn't reasonable : D *pattern becomes 1/12 endless stream* k
02:39:330 (70,71,72,73,74,75) - Change to triplets to it's not so unexpected as in 1/4 triplets ? starting a 1/3 part with a 1/4 pattern is just being baka ;w;
02:46:227 (115,117,119) - Delete for maximum fun *hides*
03:12:227 (107,108,109,110) - Change to kats and add a note 03:12:847 - here for <reasons> kats ahoy
03:30:227 (195,196,197,198) - pls c-c-c-combo breaker k lets try to be serious here um i can pass this every time so your argument is invalid >:D
03:41:951 (1) - pls lets just say this is on purpose >:D (not to troll people though ;w;)

ok and now the fun part

01:27:330 - Maybe instead of having 1.0 have 1.4 or something, if you want to keep either this or the kiai as "ninja" notes. Think it would be better this way. (or just get rid of this green section) Will consider about this, I wanna give this part an anti-climatic feel, so 1.0 it shall be, but hey anything is subjective to change if its sucks
02:39:123 - how2screw HD players. And NM players. 3: people should learn how2read in the first place D:
03:32:089 - Too sudden sv change moar baka sv change it is
03:58:985 - Maybe 1.25 here and 1.0 on the next one? HOLY CRAP it actually becomes much better bakawolf 4 bat pls


lol the end lol ikr

gj with this and gl with rank : D gl with getting everything you have ranked you slowpoke D:
Thanks for modding my crappy stuff ;w;
Senritsu
まわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれまわれ

[Mawaremoeoverload]
SPOILER
Not changing it to 'Utagumi Setsugetsuka - Maware! Setsugetsuka (chiptune Remix)'? according to lfj's set.
Idk about the artist, since there are 2 different types of them. (Utagumi Setsugetsuka and Harada Hitomi etc.), both are same imo, but to save the space.. lols
And about the title, yes change it. Source : http://vgmdb.net/album/41281

ok now jump to real mod~

00:22:571 (89) - change to d? the vocal ends 00:22:468 (88) - , while 00:22:571 (89) - consists of drum.
00:59:399 add d here, hear the drum and vocal sounds there ovo
01:25:468 (100,101,102,103,104,106) - change t kat? lols if you hear it closely tho, there's like.. another type of drum (idk what's that called orz). try to make it differ lols
02:07:365 (362) - change to don, the drum changes from the lighter one to a heavier one. ><
02:18:847 (57) - change to kat? instrument changes almost drastically there
tho why getting slower with the very last kiai part ovo it seems fun to make an SV change there /runs/

gl for rank i support you <3

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Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

Senritsu wrote:

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[Mawaremoeoverload]
SPOILER
Not changing it to 'Utagumi Setsugetsuka - Maware! Setsugetsuka (chiptune Remix)'? according to lfj's set.
Idk about the artist, since there are 2 different types of them. (Utagumi Setsugetsuka and Harada Hitomi etc.), both are same imo, but to save the space.. lols
And about the title, yes change it. Source : http://vgmdb.net/album/41281
changed the title :3

ok now jump to real mod~ poofed lines are changed

00:59:399 add d here, hear the drum and vocal sounds there ovo meh i want to use my own pattern that doesn't follow the music but still sounds good guehuehuehuehuhue
01:25:468 (100,101,102,103,104,106) - change t kat? lols if you hear it closely tho, there's like.. another type of drum (idk what's that called orz). try to make it differ lols i dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddon't want to change it D: *slapped*
02:07:365 (362) - change to don, the drum changes from the lighter one to a heavier one. >< need to consider about this though. well kkkkd alone plays better than kkkdd, and i wanna give 02:07:468 a more heavy feel :3

tho why getting slower with the very last kiai part ovo it seems fun to make an SV change there /runs/ owo? i don't really get what you mean...

gl for rank i support you <3 thanks for star and support <3

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Arigato for your mod <3333333
Akiyama Mizuki
lol hi there I don't really like this remix but let's get it started

MawaRemix
SPOILER
00:23:503 (97) - k
00:23:813 (100) - ^
00:24:847 (108) - ^
00:41:813 (43) - ^
00:59:296 (80) - d
02:15:537 (34) - k
02:53:192 (4) - ^
05:16:778 (82) - ^ (This part is silent)
ew 1.5x
but yeah this is great
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

bbj0920 wrote:

lol hi there I don't really like this remix but let's get it started

MawaRemix
SPOILER
00:23:503 (97) - k k
00:23:813 (100) - ^ meh the pitch is still kinda low compared with 00:23:709 so keeping the don here
00:24:847 (108) - ^ it just doesn't play that well D:
00:41:813 (43) - ^ both d and k sound fine so um gonna keep d for now, might change it later though~
00:59:296 (80) - d this is for contrast with 00:58:365 (74,75) (aka mirror pattern)
02:15:537 (34) - k d is for da bass
02:53:192 (4) - ^ B...but it sounds nice! >w<
05:16:778 (82) - ^ (This part is silent) It signifies the end of the song nicely though :>
ew 1.5xew 1.0x
but yeah this is great
Thanks for the mod!
PatZar
mawaaareeemawaaaareeeee:C

Noob mod here
00:19:468 (67,68) - ctrl + g
00:19:778 (69,70,71,72) - dddk
00:57:951 (72) - kat
01:02:503 (96,97,98) - ddd
01:50:606 (251,252) - ctrl + g
02:07:675 (1) - delete this please
03:35:330 (227) - delete | only 3 kats stream are enough
03:38:640 (244) - delete | 03:38:709 (244) - big kat
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

Genocide wrote:

mawaaareeemawaaaareeeee:C

Noob mod here
00:19:468 (67,68) - ctrl + g pitch relevance
00:19:778 (69,70,71,72) - dddk b...but dkdk flows better with the previous kd ;w; its like a mini "play this single handed!" challenge lol
00:57:951 (72) - kat wasn't this k before D:
01:02:503 (96,97,98) - ddd i wanted to use k to emphasize the strong beats at (96,98) though
01:50:606 (251,252) - ctrl + g i copied 1811's pattern fite me
02:07:675 (1) - delete this please no
03:35:330 (227) - delete | only 3 kats stream are enough i really wanted to keep the 5 note 1/6 pattern consistency here so nope ;w;
03:38:640 (244) - delete | 03:38:709 (244) - big kat ^
Thanks for the mod!

8/28: Added some tags for the source of the song (the anime) and the artist, thanks baka Dain!
Dainesl
IRC Mod because I just wanted to :3

回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!回レ!
2014-09-02 15:44 Dainesl: I can't tell what flows better and fits to the music
2014-09-02 15:44 Dainesl: Actually
2014-09-02 15:44 Dainesl: 00:36:020 (7) - make this a don
2014-09-02 15:44 Dainesl: this flows MUCH better as a don
2014-09-02 15:45 cdhsausageboy: snare issues D:
2014-09-02 15:45 Dainesl: hm
2014-09-02 15:45 Dainesl: make 6 a don as well then?
2014-09-02 15:45 Dainesl: that also flows nicely and is a bit more consistent i think?
2014-09-02 15:45 cdhsausageboy: Tbh in this map I focus more towards the song itself rather than flow and playbility stuff ;w;
2014-09-02 15:46 Dainesl: But flow is reaaaaaaaaaally important with maps that focus heavily on compound patterns
2014-09-02 15:46 Dainesl: That is pretty much a direct tie-in to playability
2014-09-02 15:46 Dainesl: no flow = really awkward = unplayable
2014-09-02 15:46 Dainesl: take some liberties with the song ;_;
2014-09-02 15:46 Dainesl: especially if you're gonna have this many compound patterns
2014-09-02 15:47 Dainesl: anyways yeah 6 and 7 I suggest to be dons, and you do w/e with that I gues
2014-09-02 15:47 Dainesl: *guess
2014-09-02 15:48 cdhsausageboy: can i change only 7 since i personally hate 1/6 kkdd patterns D:
2014-09-02 15:48 Dainesl: alright
2014-09-02 15:48 Dainesl: that flows well
2014-09-02 15:48 cdhsausageboy: also the patterns was supposed to be like this since 00:36:227 (9,10) has the static sound D:
2014-09-02 15:48 cdhsausageboy: but anyway changed 7!
2014-09-02 15:49 Dainesl: you've had a lot of pitch-based mods I'm assuming
2014-09-02 15:50 cdhsausageboy: wait what do you mean by that
2014-09-02 15:50 Dainesl: mods that focus on pitch more than anything
2014-09-02 15:50 cdhsausageboy: LIke people suggested a lot of pitch-issues while modding my maps or the opposite
2014-09-02 15:50 Dainesl: yeah, pitch relevancy issues
2014-09-02 15:51 Dainesl: I'm assuming you've had some mods based on those
2014-09-02 15:51 cdhsausageboy: >some
2014-09-02 15:51 cdhsausageboy: yeah
2014-09-02 15:51 cdhsausageboy: but not a lot D:
2014-09-02 15:51 Dainesl: but here's another quick pitch-based thing 01:14:709 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - but to be honest it's more to do with the section being kinda...not bland but repetitive
2014-09-02 15:51 Dainesl: due to it being all dons, all kats then all dons for buildup
2014-09-02 15:52 cdhsausageboy: ITS ON PURPOSE DWEUIGFUIWEGFIUWBEFIOWNDIOQDHIOQGDUOQGDUQGDUIBDUIBDIUQ
2014-09-02 15:52 Dainesl: ;_;
2014-09-02 15:52 cdhsausageboy: also it plays really cool :3
2014-09-02 15:52 Dainesl: you couldn't have done something like make the snares the opposite colour of the majority?
2014-09-02 15:53 Dainesl: that would've been a nice touch I think
2014-09-02 15:53 Dainesl: since it makes them stand out a bit
2014-09-02 15:53 cdhsausageboy: Nope :P
2014-09-02 15:53 Dainesl: mkay then
2014-09-02 15:54 cdhsausageboy: sorry if im being stupid ;w;
2014-09-02 15:54 Dainesl: nah it's fine
2014-09-02 15:54 Dainesl: i just want to bring up things I thought were weird.
2014-09-02 15:54 Dainesl: 01:41:192 (197) - egh having this as a finisher doesn't really play well
2014-09-02 15:54 Dainesl: 01:42:020 (200) - why not make this a finisher instead since cymbal?
2014-09-02 15:55 Dainesl: oh no wait
2014-09-02 15:55 cdhsausageboy: 01:41:089 - does deleting this note make the finisher more justified orz
2014-09-02 15:55 Dainesl: 201 was a finisher gdi
2014-09-02 15:55 cdhsausageboy: since 01:42:434 (201,202) has the idk what sound it is
2014-09-02 15:55 Dainesl: it sounds like a snare ._.
2014-09-02 15:56 Dainesl: snare cymbal?
2014-09-02 15:56 Dainesl: is that a thing? idk
2014-09-02 15:56 Dainesl: anyways yeah delete that one note
2014-09-02 15:56 cdhsausageboy: deleted
2014-09-02 15:56 cdhsausageboy: also i need to get rid of those in the other kiais as well ;w;
2014-09-02 15:56 Dainesl: [http://puu.sh/binXZ/fb1c0a3ede.png FREAKING]
2014-09-02 15:56 cdhsausageboy: k done
2014-09-02 15:57 Dainesl: please fix this please fix this please fix this x10000
2014-09-02 15:57 cdhsausageboy: i have no idea how to fix that :3
2014-09-02 15:57 Dainesl: Get Audacity and also download the LAME extension that allows you to work with mp3s
2014-09-02 15:57 Dainesl: Then go to export, it should export as 128kbps
2014-09-02 15:57 cdhsausageboy: then?
2014-09-02 15:58 Dainesl: Then you just replace the mp3 with the new one
2014-09-02 15:58 cdhsausageboy: will do that later D:
2014-09-02 15:58 Dainesl: I RECOMMEND COPYING THE .OSU BEFOREHAND
2014-09-02 15:59 Dainesl: and if the timing is somehow different, make sure to resnap all notes (use 1/12 snap, press k and then press j)
2014-09-02 15:59 Dainesl: (that should get all the notes rightly snapped, but make sure to check before resubmitting!!!)
2014-09-02 16:00 Dainesl: 01:54:123 (270) - again please make this a don
2014-09-02 16:00 cdhsausageboy: thanks for the info :3
2014-09-02 16:00 Dainesl: flows way better
2014-09-02 16:00 Dainesl: like before.
2014-09-02 16:00 cdhsausageboy: but it plays better as a k lol
2014-09-02 16:01 Dainesl: with the song, yes
2014-09-02 16:01 Dainesl: with the map, ohhhh no
2014-09-02 16:01 Dainesl: Like I said before, some liberties will have to be taken
2014-09-02 16:01 cdhsausageboy: wait no that's not what i meant
2014-09-02 16:01 Dainesl: like EVERYBODY has to do with finishers at the end of streams
2014-09-02 16:01 Dainesl: so yeah taking liberties is normal.
2014-09-02 16:01 cdhsausageboy: dddk k d d d plays much better dddk d d d d no matter how i try it D:
2014-09-02 16:01 cdhsausageboy: *better than
2014-09-02 16:02 Dainesl: what playstyle do you use?
2014-09-02 16:02 cdhsausageboy: kddk
2014-09-02 16:02 Dainesl: that's odd
2014-09-02 16:02 Dainesl: what's your key setup?
2014-09-02 16:02 cdhsausageboy: dfjk but that doesn't matter
2014-09-02 16:02 Dainesl: THAT'S THE SAME AS ME
2014-09-02 16:02 Dainesl: how does it play better as dddk k d d d?
2014-09-02 16:02 cdhsausageboy: but eh for some reference
2014-09-02 16:03 cdhsausageboy: i play it as rlrr l r l r (r as in right hand and vice versa)
2014-09-02 16:03 cdhsausageboy: which is kinda different D:
2014-09-02 16:04 Dainesl: when it's dddk k d d d?
2014-09-02 16:04 cdhsausageboy: yes
2014-09-02 16:05 cdhsausageboy: and so the k k d d is generally much easier to play than k d d d for me
2014-09-02 16:05 Dainesl: My hand naturally has to doubletap the k
2014-09-02 16:05 cdhsausageboy: since i could alternate more rather than relying on my right hand lol
2014-09-02 16:05 Dainesl: otherwise I end up missing D:
2014-09-02 16:05 cdhsausageboy: wait what
2014-09-02 16:05 cdhsausageboy: lol
2014-09-02 16:05 Dainesl: idk
2014-09-02 16:05 Dainesl: blame me not being able to alt.
2014-09-02 16:06 cdhsausageboy: k
2014-09-02 16:06 cdhsausageboy: ACTION blames dain for not being able to alt
2014-09-02 16:06 Dainesl: 02:00:778 (312) - NITPICK but maybe make this a don too?
2014-09-02 16:06 Dainesl: the flow is really nice here since it's like kkkkkkddd except without one of the dons and 1/2 of the pattern is on 1/6
2014-09-02 16:07 cdhsausageboy: 01:41:089 -
2014-09-02 16:07 cdhsausageboy: wait wrong link
2014-09-02 16:07 cdhsausageboy: i meant http://puu.sh/bioAa/2ff576736d.jpg
2014-09-02 16:07 Dainesl: lel
2014-09-02 16:07 Dainesl: but it plays really well D:
2014-09-02 16:08 cdhsausageboy: also since when is kkkkkkddd nice lol
2014-09-02 16:08 Dainesl: compared to most patterns you could have done
2014-09-02 16:08 Dainesl: it's nice ok
2014-09-02 16:08 cdhsausageboy: :<
2014-09-02 16:09 Dainesl: 02:09:227 (4) - sliders bug out if there's a note 1/4 before them
2014-09-02 16:09 Dainesl: you can't really continue streaming consistently else you miss all the ticks
2014-09-02 16:09 cdhsausageboy: just don't hit the first tick dheiwufgiuwegfiwe
2014-09-02 16:09 Dainesl: so you have to intentionally mis-time your hits which is bad
2014-09-02 16:09 Dainesl: YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO GET MAX SCORE WITHOUT MIS-TIMING ANY OF YOUR HITS
2014-09-02 16:10 Dainesl: THEORETICALLY
2014-09-02 16:10 cdhsausageboy: so i guess i have to change it to a spinner even though a slider sounds much cooler? ;w;
2014-09-02 16:11 Dainesl: well it wouldn't be as much of a ninja spinner as the one just before it
2014-09-02 16:11 Dainesl: lol
2014-09-02 16:11 Dainesl: swap the slider and spinner
2014-09-02 16:11 cdhsausageboy: b...but they sound differently ;w;
2014-09-02 16:11 Dainesl: that helps I guess, plus the spinner is mapping one extended note anyways
2014-09-02 16:11 Dainesl: sliders substitute that one note for many notes
2014-09-02 16:12 Dainesl: it'd be like mapping don 8 times there
2014-09-02 16:12 cdhsausageboy: for me sliders -> hold notes D:
2014-09-02 16:12 Dainesl: ;_;
2014-09-02 16:12 Dainesl: still gotta change the slider though
2014-09-02 16:13 Dainesl: because it still bugs out
2014-09-02 16:13 cdhsausageboy: idk it just looks like one
2014-09-02 16:13 cdhsausageboy: yes i will
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: wow a spinner sounds really bad
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: like
2014-09-02 16:14 Dainesl: 02:22:571 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - this actually flows decently, could be better but I have no idea how
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: really
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: bad
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: really
2014-09-02 16:14 Dainesl: ...substitute with a don then? D:
2014-09-02 16:14 cdhsausageboy: i still think a slider fits much^100 better D:
2014-09-02 16:15 cdhsausageboy: screw bugs
2014-09-02 16:15 Dainesl: damn you :<
2014-09-02 16:17 Dainesl: 02:25:262 (7) - same deal as the first time
2014-09-02 16:17 Dainesl: make this a don
2014-09-02 16:17 cdhsausageboy: d-d-done
2014-09-02 16:17 Dainesl: 02:42:434 (89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97) - aaaaaa
2014-09-02 16:18 cdhsausageboy: aha
2014-09-02 16:18 Dainesl: why didn't you make this a fully 1/4 pattern
2014-09-02 16:18 Dainesl: or a 1/3 pattern
2014-09-02 16:18 cdhsausageboy: go get a new headphone ;w;
2014-09-02 16:19 Dainesl: PLAYABILITY
2014-09-02 16:19 Dainesl: WHAT IS PLAYABLE ABOUT THIS LOL
2014-09-02 16:19 cdhsausageboy: and listen to it in 25% k
2014-09-02 16:19 cdhsausageboy: I DON'T CARE ABOUT PLAYABILITY I JUST WANT TO TROLL PEOPLE :,
2014-09-02 16:19 cdhsausageboy: *:<
2014-09-02 16:19 Dainesl: ;_;
2014-09-02 16:20 Dainesl: it's awkward as hell
2014-09-02 16:20 Dainesl: I say this EVEN THOUGH I CAN DO THIS PATTERN
2014-09-02 16:20 cdhsausageboy: the song is awkward as hell
2014-09-02 16:21 Dainesl: but...
2014-09-02 16:21 cdhsausageboy: hm?
2014-09-02 16:22 Dainesl: it's hard to play
2014-09-02 16:22 cdhsausageboy: >implying i made this map so that it's easy to play
2014-09-02 16:22 cdhsausageboy: *in a way that it's
2014-09-02 16:22 Dainesl: 02:44:296 (100,101,102,103,104) - also please snap these to the 1/3 ;_; there's a clear sound that happens at 02:44:916 -
2014-09-02 16:22 Dainesl: so why are you snapping to the 1/6 when it shouldn't be
2014-09-02 16:23 cdhsausageboy: because the wobwob are on the 1/6 ticks?
2014-09-02 16:23 Dainesl: done it 02:49:192 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - so why not here
2014-09-02 16:24 Dainesl: inb4 you add a note on the beat
2014-09-02 16:25 Dainesl: making the map MORE awkward
2014-09-02 16:25 cdhsausageboy: NO I DIDN'T :<
2014-09-02 16:25 Dainesl: lol
2014-09-02 16:26 Dainesl: 03:05:295 (78) - DOOOOOOOON
2014-09-02 16:26 cdhsausageboy: k now i don't know what im mapping to at 02:49:054 -
2014-09-02 16:26 Dainesl: bird tweet? samples
2014-09-02 16:27 cdhsausageboy: ah k it makes sense
2014-09-02 16:27 cdhsausageboy: b...but we had a discussion about it already D:
2014-09-02 16:27 cdhsausageboy: about 03:05:295 (78) -
2014-09-02 16:27 Dainesl: STILL. PLAYS. BETTER.
2014-09-02 16:27 Dainesl: ;-;
2014-09-02 16:28 cdhsausageboy: go away you're the only one who plays both kats with the same finger D:
2014-09-02 16:28 cdhsausageboy: actually no don't go away D:
2014-09-02 16:28 Dainesl: ;p
2014-09-02 16:29 cdhsausageboy: also i need to get to bed in half an hour D:
2014-09-02 16:29 Dainesl: brb
2014-09-02 16:30 cdhsausageboy: ....k
2014-09-02 16:30 Dainesl: okay back
2014-09-02 16:30 cdhsausageboy: lolwhat
2014-09-02 16:30 cdhsausageboy: like a ninja
2014-09-02 16:30 Dainesl: 03:31:468 (205,206,207,208,209,210) - see you did kkkd d d here
2014-09-02 16:30 Dainesl: WHY NOT AT THE OTHER TIMES
2014-09-02 16:30 cdhsausageboy: I'm starting to think that this map will receive Heavenly Moon level hate
2014-09-02 16:30 Dainesl: lol
2014-09-02 16:31 Dainesl: no it's not that bad.
2014-09-02 16:31 cdhsausageboy: it was only kkkd d d because stefan forced me to :<
2014-09-02 16:31 cdhsausageboy: >not that bad
2014-09-02 16:31 cdhsausageboy: :"3
2014-09-02 16:31 cdhsausageboy: i cri
2014-09-02 16:31 Dainesl: 03:41:743 (259,260,261,1,1) - consider having this as maybe kkdkk?
2014-09-02 16:32 Dainesl: less awkward
2014-09-02 16:32 Dainesl: still kinda fits the music
2014-09-02 16:32 Dainesl: but idk if it doesn't work for you then we can carry on
2014-09-02 16:33 cdhsausageboy: it actually sounds more awkward but wait checking if there are any other solutions
2014-09-02 16:33 cdhsausageboy: nope
2014-09-02 16:33 cdhsausageboy: k lets carry on
2014-09-02 16:34 Dainesl: 04:52:571 (155,156,157,158,159,160) - why this again
2014-09-02 16:34 Dainesl: :<
2014-09-02 16:34 cdhsausageboy: ahahahahahahahaha
2014-09-02 16:34 cdhsausageboy: because it was simply a shorter version of the dddk k d d d ...?
2014-09-02 16:34 cdhsausageboy: *it is
2014-09-02 16:34 Dainesl: still doesn't play that welllllll
2014-09-02 16:34 Dainesl: but you know about this sooo
2014-09-02 16:34 Dainesl: I'll STOP COMPLAINING OK
2014-09-02 16:35 cdhsausageboy: learn2alternate D:
2014-09-02 16:35 Dainesl: ;_;
2014-09-02 16:35 Dainesl: 04:54:227 (165,166,167,168,169,170) - glance over this
2014-09-02 16:35 Dainesl: ACTION runs
2014-09-02 16:35 cdhsausageboy: many maps use dddk k pattern in it k
2014-09-02 16:36 cdhsausageboy: what happened to stop complaining :<
2014-09-02 16:36 cdhsausageboy: ACTION runs too
2014-09-02 16:36 Dainesl: 04:56:709 (2) - consider shortening this slider significantly
2014-09-02 16:36 Dainesl: sounds kinda overmapped to me
2014-09-02 16:36 cdhsausageboy: well i thought about this before
2014-09-02 16:36 cdhsausageboy: but idk where it should end D:
2014-09-02 16:37 Dainesl: about 04:57:951 - ?
2014-09-02 16:37 Dainesl: maybe one or two ticks earlier or later
2014-09-02 16:38 Dainesl: depends
2014-09-02 16:38 cdhsausageboy: meh it sounds fine
2014-09-02 16:38 cdhsausageboy: and it ends on a red tick so yeah moved the slidertail to 04:57:951 -
2014-09-02 16:39 Dainesl: okay that's it
2014-09-02 16:39 Dainesl: i'll post this I guess :
2014-09-02 16:39 Dainesl: *:3
2014-09-02 16:39 cdhsausageboy: :333
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Thanks baka ;w;
qoot8123
Talked with mapper and this map is very good so i think i can let it go :)

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IRC
23:46 *cdhsausageboy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/415154 Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui - Maware! Setsugetsuka (chiptune Remix) [MawaReMix]]
23:46 cdhsausageboy: 是想说等了一星期 脖子都长了 D:
23:47 qoot8123: 我不確定BAT現在能不能APP圖,因為有一些程序BAT好像沒有權限D:
23:47 cdhsausageboy: 卧槽
23:47 cdhsausageboy: app跟rank在程序上有差么
23:48 qoot8123: 要移到pending得權限目前好像只有qat有
23:49 cdhsausageboy: 其实随便找个qat应该就行了吧。。。
23:50 cdhsausageboy: 所以得先移到骗顶才能泡?orz
23:51 qoot8123: 應該是www
23:52 cdhsausageboy: ;w; 找着
23:53 qoot8123: 我確認了一下,要先讓qat移到騙頂才能泡
23:53 qoot8123: 應該是沒錯;w;
23:53 cdhsausageboy: 嗯
23:53 cdhsausageboy: 现在找到了qat 协商中 =w=
23:54 cdhsausageboy: 卧槽qat说wip也能泡阿
23:54 cdhsausageboy: 呵
23:54 cdhsausageboy: 呵呵
23:54 cdhsausageboy: 呵呵呵
23:54 qoot8123: 那我搞錯了lol
23:55 qoot8123: 我會盡快幫你看圖lol
23:55 cdhsausageboy: 求尽快;w;
23:55 cdhsausageboy: 根本找不到mod5分钟图的bat啊啊啊啊啊
23:55 cdhsausageboy: *的modder
23:56 cdhsausageboy: 但还是勉为其难凑到了9个应该够看了吧;w;
00:00 qoot8123: mp3檔我記得要在192kbps以下
00:00 cdhsausageboy: 好的现在处理中
00:09 qoot8123: 還有我覺得不太需要再另外加一個無變速版的
00:09 cdhsausageboy: 我知道阿
00:09 cdhsausageboy: 到时候会删
00:09 qoot8123: 恩
00:09 cdhsausageboy: 只是太多新手投诉完全无理 才先摆着
00:16 cdhsausageboy: mp3换了厄
00:17 qoot8123: 恩
00:17 cdhsausageboy: 恩?
00:18 qoot8123: 我看一下
00:21 cdhsausageboy: 好的 :3
00:23 qoot8123: 01:07:054 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - 這個建議斷在01:07:778 - 而不是01:07:158 -
00:24 qoot8123: 感覺跟01:06:330 - 這裡差不多
00:25 cdhsausageboy: 了解 已改
00:26 qoot8123: 01:09:330 (35,36,37,38,39,40) - 這裡也是可以做點調整
00:28 cdhsausageboy: 反正就是把01:09:434 - 移到了01:08:813 -
00:28 cdhsausageboy: 颜色方面有问题么?
00:28 qoot8123: 沒有問題
00:28 cdhsausageboy: 噢噢噢
00:37 qoot8123: 02:42:778 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - 這裡的節奏是否改成更清楚的節奏?
00:38 cdhsausageboy: 说实话之前就有人提过了
00:38 cdhsausageboy: 但厄
00:38 cdhsausageboy: 音乐dubstep的节奏就是这样
00:38 cdhsausageboy: 我看看能不能在跟着音乐的前提下把他弄得简单明了些。。。
00:39 qoot8123: 這個改完就沒問題了
00:40 cdhsausageboy: http://puu.sh/biuyZ/dd378d6ec3.jpg 改成这样如何
00:41 cdhsausageboy: 容易看多了
00:41 cdhsausageboy: 就是把02:42:537 - 02:42:951 - 这两个删了
00:42 qoot8123: 好多了
00:42 cdhsausageboy: :3
00:43 cdhsausageboy: 话说还有什么要改的吗,没的话就更新啦orz
00:43 qoot8123: 好
00:43 qoot8123: 記得把nsc刪掉喔
00:43 cdhsausageboy: lol我刚删你就说了
00:44 qoot8123: lol
00:45 cdhsausageboy: 好了:3
00:47 cdhsausageboy: 心里有点小激动 *误*
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Thanks for the mod and of course the bubble!
Let's get hype!
Krah
Moved in pending and changed the genre.
Dainesl
#thankdain2014 -runs far away-

the hype is real now okay I was the last mod before the bubble
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
#tankdain2014
mintong89
Hi.

[General]
Hitsound Volume -30%? It's quite loud imo.
Disable Combo Colour. These aren't used at Taiko.
OD & HP +1? Since this is for approved so I think it's fine with this.

[MawaReMix]

01:09:537 (37,38,39,40) - kkd k to fit better with vocal?

The map generally is fine.

call me back then.
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

mintong89 wrote:

Hi.

[General]
Hitsound Volume -30%? It's quite loud imo. Reduced the volume in the calm parts by 20% and the rest by 10%, made some adjustments in volumes at some other parts too
Disable Combo Colour. These aren't used at Taiko. lol disabled
OD & HP +1? Since this is for approved so I think it's fine with this. But I use OD5HP5 for everything I map ;w; k decided to put OD6 HP6.5 for the lols

[MawaReMix]

01:09:537 (37,38,39,40) - kkd k to fit better with vocal? used kkk k ;w;

The map generally is fine. =w=

call me back then.
Thanks!
mintong89
Rechecked and it's ready now.

Bubbled #2~
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
wasonz
... ha ha ha ha ha ha hai ya ~

Ranked
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Fixed something really, really minor in the title and added some tags, thanks to Dain (again) :3
Will update the change when the next BAT comes lol
DakeDekaane
Shouldn't artist be "Utagumi Setsugetsuka"?
Senritsu

DakeDekaane wrote:

Shouldn't artist be "Utagumi Setsugetsuka"?
Both are fine.
Proof -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/131882, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122674
Oficial -> http://vgmdb.net/album/41281
Look at the Notes, it says 'Utagumi Setsugetsuka is Yaya (CV: Hitomi Harada), Irori (CV: Ai Kayano), Komurasaki (CV: Yui Ogura)'
I think both are fine, as long as cdh add the performers name's (which is not yet to be done)
But it's up to you BAT guys, you guys know it better. ;)

Edit
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
lol senritsu, gg =w=

self popped to fix some tags and to prepare for some future changes that dake suggested (who will hopefully mod the map later ;w;)
KSHR

Senritsu wrote:

DakeDekaane wrote:

Shouldn't artist be "Utagumi Setsugetsuka"?
Both are fine.
Proof -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/131882, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122674
Oficial -> http://vgmdb.net/album/41281
Look at the Notes, it says 'Utagumi Setsugetsuka is Yaya (CV: Hitomi Harada), Irori (CV: Ai Kayano), Komurasaki (CV: Yui Ogura)'
I think both are fine, as long as cdh add the performers name's (which is not yet to be done)
But it's up to you BAT guys, you guys know it better. ;)

Edit
We've said this, but VGMdb is NOT official. In short, links Senritsu posted can't be an official source.

KSHR wrote:

About metadata stuff.

Web sites such as download services, wikipedia CAN'T be a source because they are NOT official. If you are unsure if a web site you found is official, ask native Japanese people first before mentioning in your mod post.
p/3341484
KSHR
Sorry for double-posting.

  1. Artist: 歌組雪月花
  2. Romanized^: Utagumi Setsugetsuka
  3. Title: 回レ!雪月花 chiptune Remix
  4. Romanized^: Maware! Setsugetsuka chiptune Remix
  5. Source: Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai / 機巧少女は傷つかない (Pick one and add another to Tags.)
  6. Tags: 夜々 Yaya 原田ひとみ Harada Hitomi いろり Irori 茅野愛衣 Kayano Ai 小紫 Komurasaki 小倉唯 Ogura Yui Unbreakable Kikou Shoujo Setsugekka



EDIT: MawaRemix please!
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
k literally everything in metadata is changed
except the difficulty name
its looks cooler now
im a poet
k

Thanks based KSHR san for all the metadata help and telling me how not to break the whole uploading system \:D/

also some little pattern changes after this little chat with dake here
2014-09-13 15:44 cdhsausageboy: even though i can't find almost enything thats overmapped in a bad way D:
2014-09-13 15:45 DakeDekaane: maybe because the vocal mapping
2014-09-13 15:46 cdhsausageboy: yep
2014-09-13 15:47 DakeDekaane: which I find weird too as it's mostly only in the beginning lol
2014-09-13 15:47 cdhsausageboy: idk
2014-09-13 15:47 cdhsausageboy: i was like "i should map this part to the vocals!" when i was..um..mapping this part
2014-09-13 15:49 DakeDekaane: maybe cutting somewhere the patterns would work
2014-09-13 15:49 cdhsausageboy: idk somehow it feels prefectly fine to me with all the rapping (?)
2014-09-13 15:51 DakeDekaane: I mean, it's a somehow calm part :(
2014-09-13 15:51 cdhsausageboy: I know, b...but
2014-09-13 15:51 cdhsausageboy: the vocals are pretty dense
2014-09-13 15:51 cdhsausageboy: ;w;
2014-09-13 15:52 DakeDekaane: :(
2014-09-13 15:53 cdhsausageboy: well
2014-09-13 15:53 cdhsausageboy: i COULD map this in a easier way
2014-09-13 15:53 cdhsausageboy: but idk how
2014-09-13 15:53 cdhsausageboy: lololol
2014-09-13 15:53 DakeDekaane: just my opinion
2014-09-13 15:54 DakeDekaane: 00:56:503 - 00:59:813 - you know how
2014-09-13 15:55 cdhsausageboy: but there the background music and stuff becomes more noticeable and i was mapping to it D:
2014-09-13 15:55 cdhsausageboy: if i used those patterns there
2014-09-13 15:55 cdhsausageboy: it just kinda doesn't make sense ;w;
2014-09-13 15:56 cdhsausageboy: i tend to follow the song HEAVILY while mapping
2014-09-13 15:56 cdhsausageboy: which idk if its a good thing or not
2014-09-13 15:57 DakeDekaane: it's not bad, but it somehow feels weird if there's things that don't match, like crazy mapping in calm parts, but going easier on intense ones
2014-09-13 15:58 DakeDekaane: I think you would use a similar pattern there but using more dons than you do in the part I pointed
2014-09-13 16:01 DakeDekaane: http://puu.sh/bwZq4.png | http://puu.sh/bwZqG.png could look similar, but as one part has more kats, it'd be good to emphasize :p
2014-09-13 16:01 cdhsausageboy: wow don oriented pattern is don oriented
2014-09-13 16:01 DakeDekaane: don patterns can do magic
2014-09-13 16:02 DakeDekaane: even if people say it's borin
2014-09-13 16:02 DakeDekaane: g
2014-09-13 16:02 cdhsausageboy: for some reason
2014-09-13 16:02 cdhsausageboy: i do kat oriented in almost every map
2014-09-13 16:02 cdhsausageboy: but i seldom put don oriented patterns D:
2014-09-13 16:02 cdhsausageboy: katsus ftw
2014-09-13 16:03 DakeDekaane: you can use a lot of "heavy" don patterns and it'd help to emphasize later parts with the kats
2014-09-13 16:03 DakeDekaane: even if the patterns are the same in note number
2014-09-13 16:04 cdhsausageboy: let me have a try with the patterns you suggested =w=
2014-09-13 16:05 DakeDekaane: remember to have a back up =w=
2014-09-13 16:06 DakeDekaane: I'm going to sleep, do whatever you should do to fix that part and I guess there should be only that snapping, some SVs and metadata to discuss =w=b
2014-09-13 16:06 DakeDekaane: we don't want that to be unqualified
2014-09-13 16:06 cdhsausageboy: =w=
2014-09-13 16:07 DakeDekaane: by overlord Ono
2014-09-13 16:07 cdhsausageboy: thanks for your help here, i really appreciate it ><
DakeDekaane
ヽ(´□`。)ノ

Bubble must be popped because offset is too early, use 8521.

Discussed a bit with other people and this is what they said.

MMzz wrote:

02:39:348 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - These doesn't fit the music at all. The wubs are going 1/3 not 1/6.
02:42:658 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - 1/6 swing rhythm doesn't even match the music and is almost impossible to read at the slow SV. There should be another 1/3 stream here similar to 02:40:796 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - .
02:44:245 (99,100) - ^ seriously.
02:45:969 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - Need to be removed again.
02:50:728 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147) - This can be 1/4 instead of 1/6 since 1/6 doesn't work at all still.

If he forms this section more like he did with this pattern: 02:47:417 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - It would be better and more fun to play.

Unrelated to the slow section: 03:35:348 (227) - Remove this because it isn't in the music. Unnecessary difficulty.
03:38:658 (245) - ^
03:41:969 (1) - ^
03:48:589 (38) - ^
03:51:555 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - Bad overmap. Make it more appropriate to the song -> http://puu.sh/bCBAL/2c81b7bc27.png
03:55:210 (82) - Remove again.
03:58:521 (106) - ^
Also some suggestions from myself:

00:13:054 (27) - Shouldn't this be a kat?
00:29:709 (132,134) - Remove these ones so you both reduce the stream a bit and follow vocals better.
00:41:813 (43,44,45,46,47) - I think this should be kkddk to keep your kat structure here.
00:48:330 - 00:48:537 - I think dons would fit nicely with the stream in the music.
00:55:675 - I found this a bit weird as you ignore this strong beat, how about change 00:55:675 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - from dd dk k d to d dd kk d

01:06:847 (16) - I think a kat would complement the previous kkd better
01:10:571 (43) - Considering you're following the high pitched instrument it'd be better to move this 1/4 beat back to keep following it.
01:30:330 (129,130) - This is really awkward as vocals are the same and you made this pattern different, make dk pls.
01:36:950 (167,168) - ^
02:44:089 (98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - This would fit better as a 1/3 stream, it won't be that unreadable and still fitting the song.
02:48:434 (128,129,130,131) - A ddd k would fit better both vocals and the instrumental than a dd dk.
03:00:123 - I think you should add a note here to make it consistent with previous ddddk pattern, obviously, remove the finisher if you do.
03:01:468 (56,57,58,59) - Kinda the same here, a dk dk pattern would be better here for vocals.
03:12:847 - Missing note?
03:13:365 (110) - Remove?
03:15:020 (116) - ^
03:16:365 (121) - A don would fit better here and also would make more sense with the "extra" sound in the music.
03:16:985 (124) - A don would be better to separate both sections in the music better.
04:29:088 (16,17) - Change to dk as I explained before
04:35:708 (55,56) - ^

uguu
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki

DakeDekaane wrote:

ヽ(´□`。)ノ

Bubble must be popped because offset is too early, use 8521. done

Discussed a bit with other people and this is what they said.

MMzz wrote:

02:39:348 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - These doesn't fit the music at all. The wubs are going 1/3 not 1/6. I was trying to follow the rapid "wubb" sound from the beginning of the kiai, but yeah the 1/3 ones feel more noticeable to be mapped. Changed!
02:42:658 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - 1/6 swing rhythm doesn't even match the music and is almost impossible to read at the slow SV. There should be another 1/3 stream here similar to 02:40:796 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - .yep done
02:44:245 (99,100) - ^ seriously. Can't agree with this ;w; With the slowdown this looks like a little 1/8 inside of a normal 1/4 pattern, I don't see how it's exceptionally hard to read (especially with all the omfgmuchcombobreaking 1/6+1/4 maps ranked lately)
02:45:969 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - Need to be removed again.
02:50:728 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147) - This can be 1/4 instead of 1/6 since 1/6 doesn't work at all still.

If he forms this section more like he did with this pattern: 02:47:417 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - It would be better and more fun to play. .-.

Unrelated to the slow section: 03:35:348 (227) - Remove this because it isn't in the music. Unnecessary difficulty. changed this and the three ^s below
03:38:658 (245) - ^
03:41:969 (1) - ^
03:48:589 (38) - ^
03:51:555 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - Bad overmap. Make it more appropriate to the song -> http://puu.sh/bCBAL/2c81b7bc27.png eh used 5plet kats instead to emphasize the "meow" hope you don't hate on it :<
03:55:210 (82) - Remove again. done this and below
03:58:521 (106) - ^
Also some suggestions from myself:

00:13:054 (27) - Shouldn't this be a kat? meh i following the floating-like sound that goes up
00:29:709 (132,134) - Remove these ones so you both reduce the stream a bit and follow vocals better. why the hell did i map these ;w; Thanks for spotting this orz Changed!
00:41:813 (43,44,45,46,47) - I think this should be kkddk to keep your kat structure here. but the current pattern (ddkkd) emphasizes the high pitched 8bit sound better >_> who cares about structure ahahaha
00:48:330 - 00:48:537 - I think dons would fit nicely with the stream in the music. added one
00:55:675 - I found this a bit weird as you ignore this strong beat, how about change 00:55:675 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - from dd dk k d to d dd kk d
did your rhythm but changed to dk kd since dd kk plays really, really weird to me orz
01:06:847 (16) - I think a kat would complement the previous kkd better
01:10:571 (43) - Considering you're following the high pitched instrument it'd be better to move this 1/4 beat back to keep following it. it plays kinda bad since it will be a "2plet-6plet" which isn't that feasible orz
01:30:330 (129,130) - This is really awkward as vocals are the same and you made this pattern different, make dk pls. peaches...i mean pitches though
01:36:950 (167,168) - ^ ^
02:44:089 (98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - This would fit better as a 1/3 stream, it won't be that unreadable and still fitting the song. zz see my reply at mitten's point, providing a little reading challenge wouldn't hurt @@
02:48:434 (128,129,130,131) - A ddd k would fit better both vocals and the instrumental than a dd dk. yep this part feels strange to me before as well. Changed!
03:00:123 - I think you should add a note here to make it consistent with previous ddddk pattern, obviously, remove the finisher if you do. I want to keep the finisher for the "ding" sound though ;w;
03:01:468 (56,57,58,59) - Kinda the same here, a dk dk pattern would be better here for vocals. ^
03:12:847 - Missing note? i'm a baka
03:13:365 (110) - Remove? There that noise though ;w;
03:15:020 (116) - ^While the music does have nothing to support a note here, not mapping it simply feels too empty since I've been keeping the 3/4 rhythm from 03:12:245
03:16:365 (121) - A don would fit better here and also would make more sense with the "extra" sound in the music. but the kats here are already used to emphasize the higher sound ;w;
03:16:985 (124) - A don would be better to separate both sections in the music better. done!
04:29:088 (16,17) - Change to dk as I explained before But I didn't change it lol
04:35:708 (55,56) - ^ ^

uguu dake chan moeness too kawaii uguu
Wow...when I take a look at it quite a lot of stuff was rejected, sorry ;w; I hope you'd agree with my explanations :3
Thanks so much for the mod(s)! Both of you helped a lot with the whole map in general (especially the slowdown parts)!
DakeDekaane
I really suggest you to change stuff like 02:39:141 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75) to full 1/3, this is actually annoying to read imo, or at least go back to your 1/6.

pls ;w;
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
i decided to change them when im back k
(which is probably a month later ;w;)
wait for me dake chan
Topic Starter
Asagi Mutsuki
Well had access to my father's lappy for a day...UPDATED.

Got rid of all of the "hard to read" 1/6s, hope no one is sad about it ;w;

Come at me bats
Evening

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Well had access to my father's lappy for a day...UPDATED.

Got rid of all of the "hard to read" 1/6s, hope no one is sad about it ;w;

Come at me bats
dayum son where'd you find dose bubbles bat
Stefan

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Come at me bats
DakeDekaane

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Come at me bats


#1

@Next BATs:
Check this section: 02:39:141 - 02:52:383 and feel free to suggest more alternatives if you find some better to play here, as the song is really weird to map there.
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