1. Crystal's Overdose (4,42 stars, 776 notes)
2. Cup (3,96 stars, 195 notes)
3. Platter (5 stars, 407 notes)
4. Rain (4,99 stars, 584 notes)
5. Salad (4,76 stars, 291 notes)

Updates

09/03 - Upload
09/08 - Moved to pending
09/15 - rezoons's Mod
09/17 - Kurokami's Mod
09/20 - Minor changes in timeline, hitsound rework and changes of combo colour
09/27 - Bg resize
10/04 - Jinyan's Mod
10/16 - ZHSteven's Mod
10/17 - Shiro's Mod
10/20 - SUBSTAC9's Mod
11/05 - Rorona's Mod
11/13 - Seph's Mod
12/01 - Combo Coulour fix by Priti suggestion
12/25 - Deif's Mod
12/29 - Add of an Overdose Guest Diff by CLSW
12/30 - Updated with Deif's Mod for Crystal's Overdose
12/31 - eldnl's Mod
01/03 - ursa's Mod
01/03 - Fort's Mod
01/22 - Drafura's Mod
02/02 - Deif's 2nd Mod
02/02 - Deif's
02/03 - Drafura's

Nazalion wrote:

GO GO GO GO ranked it

1. Pourquoi ton OD il fait 0/0/8/9?.......
2. Essaye de prendre des combos colours plus adapté au bg.

1. 00:08:490 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Alors tous ce passage là j'ai rien pigé au rythme que tu as utlisé! On dirait que c'est pris au pif ou alors c'est moi qui comprend pas. J'aurais plus vu un truc comme ça:
   
2. 00:21:690 (1,1) - J'aurais plus vu le premier finir à 00:23:790 et le 2eme commencé à 00:24:090. Ca m'a l'air de mieux suivre la musique.
3. 00:35:490 (1) - La encore le rythme utilisé a l'air de ne pas trop collé a la musique. Essaye ca plutot:
   
4. 00:39:390 - Pourquoi pas de note ici?
5. 00:41:490 (1,2,3) - Euh, si ces notes suivent bien ce que je pense il te manque deux notes. Une a 00:41:940 et une à 00:42:090.
6. 00:41:490 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - La encore rythme chelou. Essaye plutôt ça:
   
7. 00:51:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Euh ici, les notes sont pas bien placées au bon endroit. Ralenti la musique pour mieux les entendre.
   
8. 00:54:990 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Encore un rythme chelou. essaye plutôt ça:
   
9. 00:57:690 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - La aussi le rythme que t'as utilisé j'y comprend que dalle. Mais j'ai pas vraiment d'alternative a proposé car la musique est vraiment chelou ici.
10. 01:15:390 (1,2) - Ces notes devraient être 1/2 beat plus tard. Et un slider irais bine juste après. Comme ça:
    
11. 01:18:990 - Cette note n'est pas assez mise en valeur. Fais plutôt:
    
12. 01:32:490 - Rajoute une note ici.
13. 01:33:390 - Alors a des moments comme 00:04:590 (2) ou 01:18:990 (1) tu la joues cette note mais pas là? C'est pas logique. Ta diff doit être plus consistante.
14. 01:39:090 (4,1,2,3) - A vrai dire je verrais plutôt un rythme comme ça ici:
    
15. 01:41:190 - Rajoutes une note ici et a 01:41:490 juste après. Ca suit mieux les sons deja suivit pas les sliders précédants.
16. 02:00:840 - Il devrait y avoir une note ici et juste après à 02:00:990 considérant ce que tu suis à 02:00:090 (1,2,3,4,5).
17. 02:10:290 (1) - Bouge-le 1 beat plus tard et met des notes dans les 1/2. Ou alors rajoute juste une note a 02:10:590 mais il y a un son là-bas!

1. 00:04:590 (2) - C'est un son très spécifique. Alors, pourquoi ne pas le centré.
2. 00:27:690 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Ici c'est ton kiai. Le kiai est censé être le moment le plus intense mais la densité de tes notes est bien plus faible. C'est pas très logique et ça va donner un flow bizarre a ta map. Essaye de mettre plus de note ici ou moins dans les endroits "non-kiai" plutôt.
3. 00:31:890 (3,4,1) - Regarde l'écart 3-4 et l'écart 4-1. Il devrait être identique, non?
4. 00:52:440 (4) - Un cran sur la gauche pour que 00:52:140 (2) soit bien centré par rapport a 00:52:290 (3) et 00:52:440 (4).
5. 00:53:640 (4) - Un cran sur la droite pour la même raison.
6. 01:54:390 (2) - Euh.... T'as le droit de faire ça?
7. 01:55:890 (2,1,2) - Le premier slider et la note centrale font aller le joueur de droite a gauche alors ca ne ferais pas un meilleur flow si tu mettais le slider suivant a droite pour continuer le mouvement au lieu de faire un demi-tour brusque juste après le jump.

1. 00:21:090 (4) - NC? Ce sont est radicalement different.
2. 00:54:090 (5) - Suivant la logique 00:51:690 (1,2,3,4,1) le NC devrait être ici.
3. 01:30:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ce combo est trop long.

1. 00:13:290 (2,3) - Enleve les finish sur leur tête. Celui de 00:12:090 (1) est legit car la note est bien plus forte et il y a le bruit de cymbale mais pas sur ceux-là.
2. 00:28:890 (2) - ^
3. 00:36:390 (3) - Finish a la fin.
4. 00:52:890 (1,5,1,5) - Ces notes ne sont pas assez "forte" pour mériter un finish. Un whistle suffit. Alors que 00:51:690 (1) oui! Il y a même une sorte de son de cymbale!
5. 00:57:690 (1) - Finish au début.
6. 01:07:290 - Finish ici! Mais ca devrait être le début d'un slider.
7. 01:12:090 (2) - Finish sur la tête? La note est pas très puissante mais on entend un son de finish dans la song.
8. 01:45:690 (1,2,1,1,1) - C.F. 00:13:290 en plus tu l'as fait correctement pour 01:43:290 (1,1).
9. 01:52:890 (1) - etc.... Bon peut-être que toi tu vois plus ces notes comme ça et je me gourre mais au moins rajoute un truc sur les notes comme 01:51:690 (1) en début de kiai! Elles sont censé être plus puissante que les autes donc soit Finish sur elle clap sur les autres soit Finish+clap sur elles et tu peux garder tes claps sur les autres.
10. Pour les claps écoute la musique au ralenti et tu les entendra bien en arrière-plan. Ils sont à 00:02:790 puis 00:03:390 puis 00:05:190 puis 00:05:790 etc.... Concentre-toi bien et tu pourras pas les louper. Mais la je peux pas modder ça car tes claps actuels sont un peu n'importe ou XD
11. Pour les whistle j'y connais rien.

1. 00:04:290 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Encore un rythme étrange. Essaye:
   
2. 00:09:090 - Rajoute un slider de longueur 1/1 ici. Ce vide est vraiment bizarre. Et c'est la même musique que ce que tu suivais juste avant.
3. 00:10:590 - Rajoute une note pour la même raison.
4. 00:21:090 (8) - remplace la note par un slider de longueur 1/2.
5. 00:21:690 (1,1) - Même suggestion que pour la cup.
6. 00:30:690 - Euh... Si on suit ton rythme précédant il devrait ya voir une note ici et 1/2 beat plus tard aussi.
7. 00:35:040 - Rajoutes une note.
8. 00:34:890 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - Encore un rythme chelou essaye:
   
9. 00:38:190 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - C'est vraiment bizarre. Tu décales TOUTES ces notes/sliders 1 beat plus tard et ca colle parfaitement a la musique. (Et pense a rajouter une note a 00:36:990 ensuite)
10. 00:44:190 (1) - Commence le un beat plus tard et met une note là ou il commencait.
11. 00:51:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Même erreur qu'à la cup.
12. 00:54:090 (5) - Vu qu'ici la difficulté est un peu plus élevé qu'en cup je te propose de rempacer cette note par
13. 00:55:290 (2,3,4,5) - Perdu! Le bon rythme c'est:
    
14. 00:56:190 (1) - C.f. 00:44:190 (1).
15. 00:57:690 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Encore une fois je pige rien au rythme que t'ulises mais j'ai pas d'alternative.
16. 01:16:440 - T'as oublié une note ici.
17. 01:19:140 - Virer cette note-là! Elle n'a rien a faire ici!
18. 01:27:690 (1,1) - Fais plutot ça:
    
19. 01:32:190 (1) - Ce spinner serta rien et le rythme utilisé après est chelou. Essaye plutôt ça:
    
20. 01:39:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bouge les tous 1 beat plus tard ensuite rajoute 2 fleche a 01:38:490 (1) et enleves-en une à 01:40:590 (5).
21. 01:43:440 (2) - Vire cette note et met là plutot à 01:43:740. La musique c'est la même chose que 01:42:090 (1,2,3,4,5).
22. 01:44:940 (4) - Pour la même raison vire-là et met-là à 01:44:940.

1. 00:11:490 (7,1) - C'est un moment fort de la musique ici! T'aurais pu mettre un jump!
2. 01:21:240 (4,5) - ces notes sont très puissantes! Donc jump?
3. 01:46:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Rien a redire sur le rythme mais quand tu joues ca détruit le flow. On est à l'un des moments les plus intense de la chanson et ce passage fait très vide comparé au reste. Rajoutes plus de notes ici.
4. 01:52:590 - Pour la même raison rajoute une note ici. Comme 01:53:790 (5) et toutes les autres dans le mêm genre de pattern avant.
5. 01:59:490 (1,2,3,4) - J'aurais plutot vu le rythme ici comme ça:
   

1. 00:36:540 (1) - Pourquoi ce NC tout seul ici? Tu ne le met même pas dans les autres diff.
2. 02:06:090 (4) - NC?

1. Basiquement, la même chose que pour la cup.

1. 00:01:290 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Rythme bizarre. En plus, tu devrais peut-être commencé à utiliser des 1/4.
   
2. 00:04:740 (2) - Il n'y a rien ici. Retire la note.
3. 00:04:890 (3,4) - Comme avant transforme ça en deux slider de longueur 1/2.
4. 00:05:790 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Ce rythme-là?:
   
5. 00:13:290 (4,5,6) - Mes des 1/4 entre les notes.
6. 00:14:340 (3) - Vire-là met le à 00:14:640 puis met les 1/4 qui vont bien a coté.
7. 00:15:240 (7) - Pareil qu'à la diff précédante met-là à 00:15:840.
8. 00:16:590 (3,4,5) - Rajoutes des 1/4.
9. 00:17:790 (2,3,4) - ^
10. 00:18:990 (6,7,8) - ^
11. 00:17:190 (1) - Rajoutes une fleche
12. 00:18:390 (5) - ^
13. 00:19:590 (9,1,1,1) - Euh... non. Un slider avec autant de répétition c'est quand il y a un truc qui se répete dans la diff. Pas quand on veut mettre des 1/2 partout mais qu'on est a court d'idée de pattern. Fais plutot ça:
    
14. 00:21:690 (1,1) - Comme pour les autres diffs.
15. 00:26:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rajoutes les 1/4.
16. 00:27:540 - Rajoute une note pour finir le son suivuis par les précédantes (et avec les 1/4)
17. 00:27:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Faut vraiment que tu augmentes la densité de note dans le kiai. Parce que ça fait pas kiai du tout. Voila par exemple ce que j'aurais fait pour le premier combo:
    
18. 00:29:490 (1) - Cette note ne suit rien du tout.
19. 00:30:240 - Rajoute une note ici et 1/4 après.
20. 00:30:390 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - La encore utilise plutot ça:
    
    Je sais que ca fait bourrer mais c'est le kiai! La chanson est vraiment intense ici!
21. 00:33:840 (2,3) - Rajoute un 1/4 entre les deux ainsi qu'une note 1/4 après 00:33:990 (3) puis une autre encore 1/4 après.
22. 00:34:440 - Rajoutes une note.
23. 00:38:490 (3,4,5) - Rajoutes des 1/4.
24. 00:38:940 - rajoutes une note.
25. 00:39:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - La encore un rythme pas bon. Tu devrais vraiment mappé avec la map ralentie à 50~75% tu verrais a quel point c'est plus simple! Surtout pour du 200 BPM!
    
26. 00:51:690 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Tout ce rythme là est faux. Tu as encore confondu les 1/2 et les 3/4. Voila le bon rythme:
    
27. 00:57:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Encore une fois, le rythme de la chanson est chelou. Le tien encore plus. J'y touche pas!
28. 01:12:690 (4) - Remplace ce slider par deux slider de longueurs 1/2. Ou un slider de longueur 1/2 avec 2 fleches. Ca comblera aussi le vide inutile qu'il y a après.
29. 01:15:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mais..... Il y a plein de rythme qui saute ici. Fait plutôt ça:
    
    Avec des bons jumps entre ces notes puissnates!
30. 01:19:365 - Rajoutes le 1/4!
31. 01:20:340 - Il y a une note ici!
32. 01:27:540 - ^
33. 01:28:890 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - La encore le rythme est incomprehensible et des 3/4 deviennent 1/2 dans ta map!
34. 01:33:390 (1,2) - Si ces sliders suivent ce que je pense qu'ils suivent alors tu dois les faire commencer 1 beat plus tard.
35. 01:35:790 (1,2) - Eux aussi doivent commencer 1 beat plus tard. Du coup modifie 01:36:990 (3).
36. 01:38:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Le pattern est censé commencé à 01:38:790 si tu écoutes bien. Donc tu dois le modifié ici. Enleve 1 du pattern (mais garde la note) et retire 01:38:640 (2) définitivement.
37. 01:39:540 (1,2,3,1) - Ici ils devraient tous commencé 1/2 beat plus tard!
38. 01:42:240 - Rajoute une note ici ainsi qu'une autre 1/4 ce beat après. Et fai pareil pour les deux patterns identiques suivant.
39. 01:45:540 - Rajoutes une note. Et puis vire 01:45:840 (2).
40. 01:46:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Même remarque que pour 01:42:240.
41. 01:51:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Même remarue qu'avant.
42. 02:02:790 - Pas de note ici? C'est carrement obvious!
43. 02:10:590 - Normalement c'est ici que devrait ce finir ton bordel de note!

1. 00:10:890 (3,4) - Jump ici! Please! Le musique crie JUMP!
2. 00:36:090 (5,6) - ^
3. 01:21:240 (4,5) - Jump! Ces notes sont puissantes!

1. Basiquement, la même chose que pour la cup.

-Serah- wrote:

Pas mal ce mod de rezoons pour une map en CtB. :p
Bon courage Krah.

Kurokami wrote:

Hi. Mod request in my queue. o/ Hi o/

[Cup]

OD should be the same as AR acording to the guidelines. So please use OD6. It will affect the amount of score you will got at the end of the map so needs to set correctly. I need a confirmation of a bat for this. Originally the od of cup and salad = 0 for the star rating. Drafura already says me it's ok but I prefer to ask an other time.

Seems fine to me but at some place the rhythm is kinda empty.
00:03:690 (1,2) - Between these 1circle add at 00:03:990 (2) -
00:08:790 (4,1) - ^ This rythm have changed with the previous mod
00:35:490 (1) - Move at the end of the kiai and repeat 2 times. Of course if you apply this you need to move 00:34:590 (3) - a bit closer. Yep better rythm =)
00:38:790 - 00:39:090 - Triplet and a single note at 00:39:390. Ok
00:41:190 - A triplet should start here and at 00:41:790, not between them. Ok
00:42:390 - Add circle. No, this note don't deserves to be mapped in a cup. I prefer to keep the 2/1 between 00:42:090 (6,1,2) -
00:54:390 - 00:54:990 - Repeat slider here? I think it will fit more. There is already a repeat slider :s
01:16:140 - 01:16:440 - Triplet. Omg why there is no note here
01:33:390 - Here is a clear sound in the music. Please add a circle here. There is already a note at 01:33:240 (3) - for the "ding". I have probably misunderstood the suggestion or this note is 1/2 later
01:41:490 - Same as before but here is need for the bass. Yep one note add

[Salad]

Same OD problem as on Cup. Use 7 here. Same as cup

00:15:390 (4) - I think and 1/1 slider with 2 repeat will be better here. Yep
00:21:690 (1,1) - One or two spinner in CtB it doesn't really matter. Just use one. There is still some sound between the sliders anyways. And please end at 00:26:190. No changes.
00:27:390 (1) - I don't think if this is really needs here. Just remove it. I need to consider that
00:34:890 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The rhythm is awfull here. First, please remove that sudden new combo. Then move (4,5,1) 1/2 later. And instead of (1,2), delete (1) and move (2) at the end of the kiai and add 2 repeat. I have already change this one in the previous mod :s
00:42:390 (1) - Move 1/1 earlier and add a repeat.Not exactly this but I have modify this rythm
00:44:190 (1,1) - Same with these as before. Wut ? There is no slider here
00:52:140 (2,3,4) - 1/2 later. Already moves
00:53:340 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:47:490 - 01:47:790 - Add a triplet? No there is no use for a triplet in salad here :s
01:52:590 - Circle? There is already a note

Just a sidenote
02:08:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - This is kinda borring since all you need to do while playing is to stand in a place. Please add more distance to both sides. Yep, more distance add

Some note comes too early after spinners. Well, its not a big problem since bananas but sometimes they are hidden even to me not speaking about newbies.
01:51:690 (1) - Especially this one. And also I don't think the previous spinner is really needs there. A simple repear slider sounds good there too. If someone make the same comment I'm gonna change this. For me it's not a problem because there is a 1/1 break after the spinner.

[Platter]

I think this diff is good, but some things are just bugs me.
00:46:515 (12,1) - This jump is I don't think its fit on Platter, not even on Rain. This is a sudden stream HDash which is the most extreme jump from all. It requires big amount of luck or good rhythm sense. And at the top of all, this jump isn't really fit there. There is no trigger in the song for it. I suggest you to remove it. Omg this jump is still here U_u Thx for comment this one
01:17:790 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is also too hard for platter especially when the rhythm is not even trigger it. In this case you only need to move 1/1 later to fit in the rhythm. But... Partially modify, the movement of the sliders is more easy but I keep the hdash
01:19:290 (1,2,3,4) - Here it isn't fit. I suggest you to make it the same as the next combo, just in reverse position. Not a simple ctrl+c/ctrl+v but pattern change.
01:38:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And this is also not the best choice for the same reason as above. Only the notes have been modify. The sliders don't need change because you don't need to move for catch all the tick.
02:00:690 (3,4) - This jump is also really hard just as I mentioned above with the same stream HDash. Maybe if you use ctrl+r on (3) and move (4) a bit closer will looks (and plays better). (3) rotate by 180° and jump reduce (probably too much reduce :s)

Thats all here. They aren't big problems but I think they are not fit on Platter for several reason.

[Rain]

00:04:590 - Why is this empty, there is a clear and loud sound which needs a circle. The ding is normally mapped 1/2 beat before ... I need to recheck this timing.
00:21:690 (1,1) - If you really want to use 2 spinner (on the other diffs too), then at least end the first one at 00:23:790 and start the second one at 00:24:090. Yep
00:43:590 (1,1,1) - This jump is hard, I mean the third (1) is almost impossible. Please use one combo here and move the second or third (1) a bit closer to the previous note. This triplet is now 1combo, 00:44:190 (1) - is move to the center of the grid.
01:15:540 (7,1,2) - This one is also hard. I tried many times but only able to catch (2) once. Its luck based which is not fit on Rains. Move (1) a bit to the left. The jump between (1,2) is now more easy.
01:18:840 (2) - Why you placed a circle where is nothing? There is a nice sound 1/2 earlier and later but between them there is nothing. I suggest you to remove this and place circle at both place (01:18:690, 01:18:990). Yep
01:21:090 (3,4,5) - If you really want here a triplet then at least add a circle between (4,5). Yep
01:21:690 - Add a circle with finish. I think it will start the break smoothly. No I want to be consistent in breaks
01:27:090 - 01:27:240 - Triplet. yep
01:28:740 (9,1) - Hard to jump suddenly into the other side of the screen. Try to do something with (9) to make this jump a bit easier, if possible place in a way to show a player where will be the destination after the jump. Ok, the jump is now more easy and there is a change in the end of the previous pattern for suggest the jump
01:46:290 (3) - End 1/2 earlier and add a circle? Nice idea
01:55:890 (3) - ^ ^
01:59:790 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This stream with those jumps are patterns for Overdose/Deluge. I suggest you to try out other pattern. Seriously I love this stream :'( I keep your suggestion in mind but I want to have an other opinion before to change this.

This is everything here. Well, maybe there is some more, but they are not as big as these. I like this except your sliders, droplets are really hard to catch. It's do on purpose. There isn't hard tick to catch but only droplet.
[]

Okay, in overall I think this mapset is good. The spread is okay and except those things on Platter they are acceptables. Good luck. o/ Star for the sake of community. :3
Thanks for your mod, your star and your opinion =)
I hope this mapset will be ranked one day because Osu! needs more ctb mapset.

ZHSteven wrote:

Marked in case I forget it.
Sorry I am not a fan of this song, only can give general suggestion than a full mod...

Krah wrote:

ZHSteven wrote:

Marked in case I forget it.
Sorry I am not a fan of this song, only can give general suggestion than a full mod...

Sorry to ask you to mod it then

In this case, the next time I'll try to do something you like

Kurokami wrote:

I lol'd. You should always map something YOU like and not the modder. If they not like it then just ignore the request. This is what is the mapping. You should map for yourself first.

ZHSteven wrote:

Yes, perhaps this time I am not fun as this map, but maybe your next map I like it very much, who knows

As kurokami says, you dont need to map something "I like", but something "you like, and hope everyone like".
Yep, I'm totally okay with that =) As I already said I misspoke what I thought.

Back to the map.
Apart from the music, I think this map is well designed.
Thanks '-'

just to say something needs to improve imo, your too much XX X XX pattern makes the rhythm of the map sporadic. I mean, sometimes it breaks your flow in rhythm. maybe it is because the music shows like this, i guess. But if I were you I will not place so many patterns like this, even the music shows it.
Hum, you probably talk about the 1st half of the platter ? Seriously I hadn't noticed it before. I'm gonna try to change some parts with others rythms.

And it gives me a feeling that you are leak of good jump patterns. most of the jump seems a bit stiff. plus your other patterns flows good enough, it is much more clearer than it should be. As you probably know (or not ?) it's my first ctb map. I seriously know that I need to work on more of good jump and/or pattern. I hope this will be something I will acquire with time and experience. For example I currently considering to do a stream map in ctb (not for ranking but just for trying to map something interesting with streams) => https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122127 (serioulsy don't play this even the timeline isn't finished xD)

e.g 00:10:590 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - in rain.
I know you want to use increase jump, but here firstly your previous slider 1 end, slider 2 3 and 4 shows a stand, so probably this jump gives me a feeling that you just place jump only for jump.
for me I will make 2 and 3 a small movement, and makes 3 a slider(delete original 4), then closer a bit 5 and 3 end(but still leaves a jump), then next 1,2,3 just jump whatever needs, like increase jump, stand jump, moving jump, everything is ok i guess. this will make jump looks not that much weird.Seriously I didn't understand your suggestion here :s (/me sent a pm)

Also you can try to refer to more CTB map, to gain more knowledge about jump. I have already do this but make a good jump movement is something I need to work more.

flow and movement I think I dont need to talk much because you do it well in this map. Great job. HueHueHue, this compliment coming from you is something I really apreciate. =)



hope I can give a full mod in your next set XD l I hope this also :p


PM if you need stars Hum shoot a kd if you like the map :s I can't forced you to shoot one '-' KD PLZ

Edit: I like your OP. maybe next time I will do something similar like this Ahah without drafura for the meaning of OP I probably would have thought you enjoyed the OPening of the map xD (even though you don't like the music). So now I have understood the real meaning of this. It's not a problem if you re-use this. At the begining, I thought it would be cool if people could understand how each diff is made. Moreover, it's the duty of each player to explicate at least briefly how the spread is done.

1. offset -5, remember to resnap everything etc
2. Hitsounds are really low I could hardly hear them D:

1. 00:57:690 (1) - This starts a bit too soon after the spinner, imo, even despite the bananas and all, it might be a bit hard for newer players to catch it after dashing around the bananas trying to catch them all
2. 01:26:490 (1,2,3,4) - I found this to be really hard because the pattern goes against the dash direction, I'm not sure new players could catch these. If anything you could try to reverse (2,4).

1. That was... so hard. It required so many dashes and some of them were really tight. I'd just suggest to lower the spacing on this, it could work well otherwise.

1. Difficulty gap is huge the hyperdashes and patterns are really too hard in this. D:
2. 00:01:290 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe don't start with the dashes, do something simpler or more straightforward for a beginning D:
3. 00:35:790 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:44:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I found this to be really difficult because of the back-and-forth, although it fits the song, I feel like it's too hard for the difficulty

• Fine by me

Shiro wrote:

As per your (longlasting) request lol Bah c'était pas si long non plus comme attente '-' Et puis il est tellement compliqué de trouver des moddeur ctb que je suis pas pressé non plus '-'

General

1. offset -5, remember to resnap everything etc Comme déjà dit par pm c'est basé sur la version ranké, si je choppe une autre personne pour confirmer je modifierais. Même si 5ms c'est négligeable à la limite ...
2. Hitsounds are really low I could hardly hear them D: Volume recheck sur toutes les diffs +/- 5-10% / ajout de green lines pour avoir un truc plus clean.

Cup

1. 00:57:690 (1) - This starts a bit too soon after the spinner, imo, even despite the bananas and all, it might be a bit hard for newer players to catch it after dashing around the bananas trying to catch them all Raccourcit d'un beat. Un peu moins clean mais j'ai pas vraiment mieux :s
2. 01:26:490 (1,2,3,4) - I found this to be really hard because the pattern goes against the dash direction, I'm not sure new players could catch these. If anything you could try to reverse (2,4).Au début j'allais dire qu'y a meme pas besoin de dash et puis j'ai senti que le mouvent de (2,3,4) était pas superbe pour un débutant ...Ce que tu proposes est pas beaucoup mieux j'ai changé du coup en un simple aller-retour avec un léger décalge entre (2,4).

Salad

1. That was... so hard. It required so many dashes and some of them were really tight. I'd just suggest to lower the spacing on this, it could work well otherwise. Effectivement certains jumps sont p-e un peu méchants pour une salad, j'en ai réduit un petit nombre.
   
   Platter
   
   1. Difficulty gap is huge the hyperdashes and patterns are really too hard in this. D: Encore je comprend que la salad puisse sembler compliquer mais la platter je pige pas >_< Quand je compare aux autres platters des mapsets ctb ranked j'ai plus l'impression d'être dans la moyenne basse (ok ya que 4mapsets c'est pas grand chose).
   2. 00:01:290 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe don't start with the dashes, do something simpler or more straightforward for a beginning D:Changé en partie, on garde un pseudo-jump mais c'est plus léger. Placement du genre (4 2 3 1)
   3. 00:35:790 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:44:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I found this to be really difficult because of the back-and-forth, although it fits the song, I feel like it's too hard for the difficulty Mouvement pour l'aller-retour est réduit mais je garde le hdash.
   Rain
   
   • Fine by me

Welp there isn't much to say... The gap between Salad and Platter is huge though you should try to reduce it Franchement je m'attendais pas à ce que ce gap pose problème. Pour tout dire je m'attendais plus à un problème entre platter et rain. Etant donné que j'ai pas eu d'autres avis dans ce sens je garde ça en mémoire mais je vais pas vraiment le changer pour le moment Si d'autres personnes vont dans ton sens je verrais ce que je peux faire.

1. what the Background image which you choose for this game? I found two pics in your folder. If only one is current submitted (bg.jpg) then just delete this file (bg1.jpg)

1. Reduce HP Drain to 3 and I'm not sure about reduce AR and OD to 5 which will be change your game style wird and hard.
2. 00:45:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this too long from previous note I think should make them close. just Ctrl+G that will be fine.
3. 00:46:890 (1) - ok need them close previous note if you change form my suggestion
4. 01:05:790 (2) - that so far?
5. 01:33:240 (3) - doesn't fitted with music maybe should be in 01:33:390 ?
6. 01:55:290 (1,2) - recommend same this style
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:00:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - huh? make them to easily? It's very hard

1. 00:11:190 (7,8) - Don't use Hyperdash in this difficult, just move 00:11:490 (8) in center that's ok for me
2. 00:36:390 (3,4) - ^
3. 00:43:290 (3,4) - I like this pattern but make these note to closer like this
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:55:890 (5,6) - and again to don't use hyperdah

1. 00:36:090 (5,6) - spacing too far ?
2. 00:39:090 (6,7) - I think not HDash for these note it's ok than super jump? move (6) to X:416 Y:192 and (7) X:188 Y:192
3. 01:21:090 (3) - move to center?

SUBSTAC9 wrote:

Hello Krah sorry for my lately time to mod your request Hi '-'
Ok this is my turn to mod PM Request

I play 2-3 turn and I have some issue I think you should to fix and improve it.


General
Seem fine but..

1. what the Background image which you choose for this game? I found two pics in your folder. If only one is current submitted (bg.jpg) then just delete this file (bg1.jpg) I have only one bg in my folder http://puu.sh/4UYah.png

Cup
Ok seem fine and nice, but some point which you just redesign to very easy for newest player to play this mode.
I suggest some issue to you for fix or improve some pattern in this difficult.

1. Reduce HP Drain to 3 and I'm not sure about reduce AR and OD to 5 which will be change your game style wird and hard. No change for ar/od No sure if reduce the hp, changes really something :s
2. 00:45:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this too long from previous note I think should make them close. just Ctrl+G that will be fine.Ok
3. 00:46:890 (1) - ok need them close previous note if you change form my suggestion Yep
4. 01:05:790 (2) - that so far?Effectively
5. 01:33:240 (3) - doesn't fitted with music maybe should be in 01:33:390 ? Correct
6. 01:55:290 (1,2) - recommend same this style Why not =)
7. 02:00:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - huh? make them to easily? It's very hard Not this pattern but I have reduce the distance between 02:00:990 (7,1) -

Salad
Look over all that have a lot of hard jump in this diff you should fix them to much closer and I have some my suggestion to improve it.
note :: I have seen your author about Difficultly dash and hdash. maybe that's true about jumping criteria but I'm not accepting all about that.I worry to new player can't catch them all without mod or someone mod in this Difficult.There isn't enough mapsets for really talk about "jumping criteria". Put hdashs in a cup is only for the purpose of adapting players to something they encounter very often in others harders diffs.

1. 00:11:190 (7,8) - Don't use Hyperdash in this difficult, just move 00:11:490 (8) in center that's ok for me No. I explained why
2. 00:36:390 (3,4) - ^ ^
3. 00:43:290 (3,4) - I like this pattern but make these note to closer like this Changed
4. 00:55:890 (5,6) - and again to don't use hyperdah And again no :s

Platter
really super Platter? I play it that's I can't catch them all In some pattern. Perhaps you should reconsider about spacing between note in some pattern.

1. 00:36:090 (5,6) - spacing too far ? Ok =)
2. 00:39:090 (6,7) - I think not HDash for these note it's ok than super jump? move (6) to X:416 Y:192 and (7) X:188 Y:192 Really a good alternative to a hyperdash '-'
3. 01:21:090 (3) - move to center? No :s I prefer to keep the double hdash.

Rain
OMG, It's very nice for me
I think you should to change this difficult name from "rain" to "overdose" It's mean this diff will be hard player to challenge. There is no reason for rename this diff. It's not really an overdose
nothing else to mod this diff It seem fine to me Huehuehue '-'


mostly look ok and some mods are bad to you I sorry about that Don't worry it's really a nice mod =) Thank you

good luck to be ranked I hope this will be shortly

1. Much, much too hard on the last three difficulties for what they're called. I'd move them all up one, and just make a new Salad
2. The offset seems slightly off, by 5-10ms. I know you said that it makes almost no difference, and that someone else found the offset, but it makes quite a difference when listening with the effects turned up, it just feels off.
3. You don't use quite enough hitsounds during non-kiai times.

1. 00:06:090 (1,2) - Slightly too far apart, maybe just a tick or two closer?
2. 00:19:290 (1,3) - Again, slightly too far apart.
3. 01:20:790 (3) - Should be a beat here, it feels empty.
4. 01:32:490 (1) - Maybe a beat here? It kind of works right now, the way it is.
5. 02:00:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The pattern here is too difficult

1. 00:27:540 (7,8) - Slightly too far, because the player is coming out of moving back and forth, and then they have to transition into a hdash immediately.

Rorona wrote:

Uhm...this is my first time modding anything, so take my opinions with a grain of salt.All modders need to start with a map '-'
Mon français n'est pas très bon, donc je n'ai pas lu tout du fil. Is that even the right word to use? Not really, I understand what you mean but the last part is quite confusing "pas lu tout du fil" you don't really need to translate thread in "fil".


General
I really like your mapping, I had a ton of fun test playing the difficulties I could, but..

1. Much, much too hard on the last three difficulties for what they're called. I'd move them all up one, and just make a new Salad I'm not totally ok with the definition of each difficulties by Deif. I'll try to explain it just after your quote.
2. The offset seems slightly off, by 5-10ms. I know you said that it makes almost no difference, and that someone else found the offset, but it makes quite a difference when listening with the effects turned up, it just feels off. Since you are to day this let's go '-' Offset -5
3. You don't use quite enough hitsounds during non-kiai times.Seriously I'm not a huge fan of hitsounds's spamming but if someone suggest me palces where they would be ok there isn't any problem.

I'd refer to this

Deif wrote:

1. Cup: The easiest level of the mapset. It should be cleared without pressing the dash button, and use a quite simple rhythm.
2. Salad: Dashes can be used in them, and the note density increases a bit.
3. Platter: The perfect level for the average player. Easy HDashes and the introduction of 1/4 patterns shall fit here.
4. Rain: HDashes and Dashes start to be challenging and the rhythm is already complex.
5. Overdose: FCable for the top players. A challenge for the rest!

First of all I have suggest an others definition of each diff in the first post.

"Blabla"

Krah wrote:

Just an explanation of how each diff is made.
Cup : No hdash, easy pattern, few number of easy dash
Salad : More dash, intermediate patten, few number of hdash
Platter : More hdash, difficult pattern without hdash
Rain : Difficult pattern with hdash, jump closer to hdash

The basis when you try to adapt peoples to something is to begin with an easy version of this thing.
If there isn't any dash in the cup people can easily be confused when they play a salad.
And it's the same thing for the hdash in the salad.

Now I'm ok the cup is probably a little harder than other cup and the same for the salad (don't forget that the bpm is 200).
But for the platter I'm not really ok :s (probably because of this one http://osu.ppy.sh/s/118690)
And the rain is quite hard I know but it's not an overdose. There isn't a huge number of hdash or many series of big jump. It's rather a map with a lot of "movements".


Cup
This seems slightly too difficult for new players, as many things look like they must be dashed. "look" you totally understand the idea here. There isn't really any need for a dash somewhere (probably just for two notes). For a beginner it's simple, "you can use the dash for your comfort but you don't really need to use it to fc".

1. 00:06:090 (1,2) - Slightly too far apart, maybe just a tick or two closer? Ok here, reduce by two ticks.
2. 00:19:290 (1,3) - Again, slightly too far apart. ^ (3) is now more "vertical".
3. 01:20:790 (3) - Should be a beat here, it feels empty.THis note don't really deserve to be mapped with the actual rythm.
4. 01:32:490 (1) - Maybe a beat here? It kind of works right now, the way it is.Why not.
5. 02:00:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The pattern here is too difficult Space with (5) reduced

Salad
This was much too hard for a Salad, so I had a lot of fun playing it , but therein lies your problem. Not much for me to say, but I'd rather call this a Platter than a Salad.

really really fun though.

Platter
Too hard again, I'd call this a Rain instead of a Platter

1. 00:27:540 (7,8) - Slightly too far, because the player is coming out of moving back and forth, and then they have to transition into a hdash immediately.No, you can catch all the stream without any movement.

Also really fun

Rain
Too difficult for me to test play . I'd call it Overdose. Otherwise, it seems fine.

1. 00:04:285 put a note here, seems kinda off without one, at least for me
2. 01:33:685 (1,2) - better to add one repetition on these sliders
3. 02:10:285 (1) - just make it a slider, maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1099120

1. 00:15:385 (4) - remove 1 repetition and add a note on the white tick
2. 00:38:185 add a note
3. 01:00:985 (2) - this sounds really off
4. 01:28:885 (1) - move forward by 1 tick, and add 1 repetition in 01:27:685 (1) - cause it sounds better that way, just figure out a way to not get it a bit jumpy
5. 01:32:185 add a note

• 
  Are you sure this is a Rain? Looks more of an Overdose to me
  
  I will give you a list of parts you need to remap, as they are considered to be very hard for a Rain diff

1. 00:12:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2. 00:26:485 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
3. 00:28:285 (3,4,5,6) - duplets like this can be very hard to catch if not well placed, and you put them on some jumpy parts making them harder to catch
4. 00:36:385 (5,6) - pretty harsh jump
5. 00:40:885 (1,2,3,4) - again with the duplets
6. 00:46:510 (8,9) - ^
7. 01:27:910 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - badly placed notes, fix these
8. 01:42:235 (2,3,4,5) - yeah duplets again
9. 01:51:835 (2,3,4,5) - ^
10. 01:54:235 (2,3,4,5) - ^
11. 02:00:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this part is pretty much eggpain for a Rain (ha it rhymed)

Seph wrote:

[Cup]

1. 00:04:285 put a note here, seems kinda off without one, at least for me Nop there is a "break" in the song. This note don't deserve to be mapped if I don't add some 1/2.
2. 01:33:685 (1,2) - better to add one repetition on these sliders Yep
3. 02:10:285 (1) - just make it a slider, maybe something like this Why not and also fix for the salad (dat screen resolution )

[Salad]

1. 00:15:385 (4) - remove 1 repetition and add a note on the white tick Ok
2. 00:38:185 add a note I prefer to keep this "mini-break"
3. 01:00:985 (2) - this sounds really off Changed to something who seems to me better :s
4. 01:28:885 (1) - move forward by 1 tick, and add 1 repetition in 01:27:685 (1) - cause it sounds better that way, just figure out a way to not get it a bit jumpy I prefer to keep the begining of 01:27:885 - at this white tick so no change :s
5. 01:32:185 add a note ok

[Rain]

• 
  Are you sure this is a Rain? Looks more of an Overdose to me ikr xD It's a hard rain '-'
  
  I will give you a list of parts you need to remap, as they are considered to be very hard for a Rain diff

1. 00:12:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - reduce the jump between (5,6) and (7,8)
2. 00:26:485 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not sure if this part is really a problem, this isn't the hardest and the movement is kinda obvious :s
3. 00:28:285 (3,4,5,6) - duplets like this can be very hard to catch if not well placed, and you put them on some jumpy parts making them harder to catch Not sure if the duplet here are really the problem but probably more 00:28:885 (1,2) - so i have simplify the movement here.
4. 00:36:385 (5,6) - pretty harsh jump ikr but the pattern is like this so no changes here
5. 00:40:885 (1,2,3,4) - again with the duplets Jump reduced, 1,5* => 1,3*
6. 00:46:510 (8,9) - ^ little fix
7. 01:27:910 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - badly placed notes, fix these Explain your mind, I don't see any problem here, it's hard but not "badly placed"
8. 01:42:235 (2,3,4,5) - yeah duplets again reduced a bit
9. 01:51:835 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
10. 01:54:235 (2,3,4,5) - ^ No needs here, I don't want to stack this ...
11. 02:00:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this part is pretty much eggpain for a Rain (ha it rhymed) Damn this pattern is sexy :'( Reworked a bit

I guess thats it, I'll mod the platter tomorrow im so sleepy lol Don't worry as you know the ctb ranking process is really slow ...

1. 00:36:535 (6) - better to remove this note as it doesn't have anything in significance (doesn't follow anything at all and sounds bad) just put the new (6) on where (7) where or its your choice

Seph wrote:

[Rain]

1. 00:36:535 (6) - better to remove this note as it doesn't have anything in significance (doesn't follow anything at all and sounds bad) just put the new (6) on where (7) where or its your choice Fixed, (6) deleted but not exactlyyour suggested pattern

[Colours]
Combo1 : 90,190,228
Combo2 : 252,95,213
Combo3 : 192,198,233
Combo4 : 218,71,137

Priti wrote:

New Combo Colors as promised~

[Colours]
Combo1 : 90,190,228
Combo2 : 252,95,213
Combo3 : 192,198,233
Combo4 : 218,71,137

1. 00:24:085 (1) - In all the diffs, extend that spinner to the bell?

1. 00:21:685 (1) - This spinner has to end a bit later, at 00:23:785.
2. 00:41:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - For those notes I'd rather remark the last ones, which seem to be more relevant. You have the more simple possibility "o o ooo", but also "o ooooo" or "ooo ooo".
3. 00:45:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - That can be simplified as well, instead of using a 1/2 spam. This sound more plausible: http://puu.sh/5LpAJ.jpg, though due to the rather complicated rhythm a spinner could work as well.
4. 00:51:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why do you use 1/4 stuff for the easiest diff? Not mentioning that that timeline is utterly similar to the rest of your diffs... Honestly, all that section can be much more Easy-like if you change THIS into THIS
5. 00:56:185 (1) - For this spinner... ugh. The correct position for it would be theoretically 1/1 later, and adding a note where the spinner used to start (00:56:185) to cover the beat. Though with that strategy, the ending of the spinner would be too close to the next note... It should be substituted by a slider, or just delete it.
6. 01:10:885 (1) - Why don't you extend it till 01:11:785? That's also a important beat to cover.
7. 01:15:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - Think of something better to map here. 01:16:435 (5) - Can be deleted, since it's not that important and it doesn't even appear in Salad.
8. 01:18:985 (4) - Having the bell sound here, you could stack this note under the previous one, to add a very little dash with the next one. You'd maybe need to move the slider (1) a bit to make the jump not so harsh.
9. 01:20:785 - And there? What about adding a note? With the current density you have, that space looks quite empty.
10. 01:26:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - In order to map the most important beats, try to organize those notes like "o o ooo" instead of the current "o ooo o".
11. 01:30:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Comparing to Salad, you covered much more beats there.
12. 02:00:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Those 1/2s need a relatively high precision to catch them. The notes could be a bit more close to each other in order to make it a bit easier.

1. 00:03:685 - Why this blanket here? You didn't have it in Cup :s
2. 00:07:285 (1,2) - Check this out. You used here 2/1 sliders and then a blanket, while in Cup you just have 1/1 sliders with repetitions...
3. 00:10:885 (5,6,7,8) - Fittable in a Platter, isn't it?
4. 00:15:385 (4,5) - That wiggle makes the slider quite challenging :p Also, the next note shall be placed at the left side of the slider to improve the flow of that part.
5. 00:27:385 (1) - You already have the blanket after the spinner. Keep it empty till 00:27:685 removing that mentioned note?
6. 00:40:885 (1,2,3) - For those notes, the background suggest to add 2 groups of 2 1/4s, and then 1/2s. What I suggest for this level is deleting (2), and splitting (3) into 3 1/2 notes.
7. 00:44:485 (1,1) - 2 sliders? C'mon... what's this... a Cup? ^^"
8. 00:54:685 - At least a note could be added here. Otherwise, that looks quite empty.
9. 01:27:685 (1) - A simple 1/2 slider with reps? I bet you can do sth more interesting to cover that part.
10. 01:33:685 (1,2) - Here as well you cover less beats that in Cup. Imho, these sliders here are nice as they are.
11. 01:38:485 (1) - The repetitions should start at 01:38:785, and this beat should need just a note.
12. 01:54:685 (2) - Shouldn't the 1/2 note be placed at 01:54:535, instead of having it in that slider?

1. 00:11:035 (4,5,6) - I'd say it's a no-go to have 2 different consecutive HDashes, 1/2 and then 1/1 in a Platter. Is there a possibility to remove at least the 1/4 one?
2. 00:21:685 (1) - Extend this spinner, as it was suggested for Cup.
3. 00:45:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Huh? Why do you have such a stream here?
4. 00:45:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Completely 1/4 stream? orz
5. 00:53:935 (4,5) - What the? Those sliders don't sound well in that position...
6. 00:58:585 (4) - Hearing the background sounds (not the 1/4 spam), you can try placing that slider a bit earlier (00:58:435) and adding a note in the resultant blanket (00:58:885). That kind of organization could be applied to the rest of that section, I mean, till 01:15:085.
7. 01:16:885 (8) - Shouldn't this slider carry the NC? It's a section change anyway.
8. 01:18:985 - Bells are cool to map =(
9. 01:20:785 (2,3,4,5) - That double HDash could fit better if you use it with the last 3 notes.
10. 01:30:385 (1,2,3,4) - Huh? Where do you hear the 1/4 note there? It'd fit if you move all those notes 1/1 later!
11. 01:33:685 (1,2) - It's the only diff you used such long sliders there...
12. 01:39:535 - If you're not gonna use 1/4 beats for that part, add at least a circle here.
13. 02:00:085 (1,2,3,4) - I don't see the point in doing it a continuous 1/4 stream, but at least de-stack (3) of (2).

1. 00:04:585 - Beats added to the bell sounds are cool. Though you could move the hitsound you used in 00:04:435 (6) to this note, where it'd make more sense.
2. 00:12:085 (5,6,7) - Careful with using those kind of 1/4 HDashes. The flow here is completely broken...
3. 00:13:285 (5,6,7) - Same here. The fact that you have a 1/4 HDash and then a static set of notes is not comfortable to play.
4. 00:14:710 - You're in the most difficult level of the mapset, and you're still avoiding mappable points as this one ;___;
5. 00:15:610 - You can add a note also here.
6. 00:16:285 (5,1,2) - Between the ending of (5) and the beginning of (2), a 5plet could be added.
7. 00:36:535 - Gimme an extra note here *__*
8. 01:27:310 - You had one in Platter there :p
9. 01:38:485 (1) - Instead of a wigging slider, more notes could've been used.

CLSW wrote:

If I wasn't late, I want guest diff permission :/


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CLSW wrote:

http://puu.sh/624TF.osu

Take this, now CtB era needs more Deluge diffs.

1. 00:09:685 (1,2,3) - They need a really quick back-and-forth movement of the player, which is pretty uncomfortable in general. Try to reduce those jumps.
2. 00:10:285 (4) - The repetition is close to the HDash. If you fix the previous sliders, this one shouldn't be that harsh.
3. 00:21:010 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Careful with those HDashes. At least keep the stream form with a slight curve (to the right) to make the jumps more intuitive.
4. 00:27:535 (8,1) - I expected to have here another HDash, and not a stack ^^"
5. 00:37:060 (6,7,8) - Pretty static stream. I'd rather de-stack those notes, and put them closer to the ending of (5).
6. 00:44:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - The strenght of the HDash is not proportional to the movement you need to catch every group of 4 notes. You could change the shape of them to improve the flow there. Also 00:44:185 (6) could have the same lenght as the previous slider, so you can add a simple note at 00:44:485 -, but that's just a minor fix.
7. 00:45:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overmapped. I'd rather see interesting jumps there than a simple 1/4 stream that doesn't fit to the melody.
8. 00:50:185 (2,3) - Sounds more intuitive if you Ctrl-H those 2 elements.
9. 00:52:285 (3,4) - Just to perfectionate, you could cut those sliders whenever the main beats happen. Than means, 1/4-repetition sliders at 00:52:285 - 00:52:510 - 00:52:735 - 00:52:885 - .
10. 00:53:485 (3,4) - You could apply the previous suggestion here.
11. 00:57:685 - until 01:15:685 - (aka deathsteam): It's WAY too much conditioned with HDashes. Anyway, here are some critical points that you'd better change:
    
    1. 00:58:285 (9,10,11,12) - The movement is kinda tricky, since you have a hard jump after the HDash (8,9), and then a serie of HDashes. For this part I suggest you to reduce the distance of those sliders in general. The following patterns are the twins of this one, so you can change them the same way as here.
    2. 01:02:035 (10,11,12,1) - The fact that you have 2 1/4 sliders HDashed in the same direction is a true kick on the nuts, cos it breaks the flow completely. Think of another position for those notes, please.
    3. 01:07:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wtf those random HDashes... Make jumps in streams as long as they fit with the melody, pelase.
    4. 01:15:610 (16) - Delete this note (It's not audible), and try to make a proper jump (15,1).
12. 01:26:935 (3,4,5,6) - Ugh? Sounds more logical like this: http://puu.sh/62rQa.jpg
13. 01:37:285 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - Just for the sake of playing more comfortably, make a normal stream instead of kick sliders (making a cool slider and transform it into a stream should be fast enough).
14. 01:50:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Another part where you could've sacrificed the stream to introduce cool jumps.
15. 01:59:635 (4,5,6,1) - Perfect example of catch-or-die pattern. Only jumps should be necessary between (5,6) and (6,1). Other than that, those HDashes in those slider on the same direction are a no-go...
16. 02:08:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - There's a point where the jumps are in the limit of being HDashed, which makes this pattern extremely difficult to manage. Any solution for it?
17. 02:10:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - Another 1/8 stream you could change to make it more aesthetical!

eldnl wrote:

Good map, there are some minor things that you can change before the rank~

Cup

00:36:085 (1) - This slider is too close to the previous one, strongly suggest to increase the distance, it would fit with this part of the song (also take care of the next note)Fixed,also moved (2) to keep a decent spacing. 00:36:685 (2,1) - This one is reduced but not a huge problem cause of the blank
00:44:485 (4) - I don't think this is the best way to a curve slider, please do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1214552, so the curve will become smoother.Fixed, a smoother curve is a good thing for a cup =)
01:19:285 (4,1) - Probably you could decrease the distance a bit, it's quite unexpected.Changed a bit

Salad

Seems fine, a little too hard if you ask me, but it's okay.

Platter

00:01:735 (4) - This slider isn't following any rhythm, feels weird, I suggest to change it for 3 notes.The intro has been reworked to be more consistant with the rain
00:45:685 - I think is better if you follow the rhythm of the song, the stream doesn't feel very well.Reworked
00:53:485 - Please follow the same rhythm as before, to be more consistent.Fixed

Rain

00:16:885 - This jump doesn't fit imo, I suggest to reduce the distance a bit!Reduced to a 1,5* jump
00:39:685 - Not sure of why you want to make the droplets that hard on this part, I suggest to change it.I don't want to see people easily SS a ctb map so no changes here
01:28:510 (6,7) - They are too close, I suggest to use the same distance as (5,6).Fixed to a 1* spacing before and after (6)


Good luck! Thanks

ursa wrote:

Sorry for the late No problem =)

Here's my mod

Note:
Your Code Reminder is = Cute '-'
(also sorry my mod Diff is not on order ;w;)

Rain
00:03:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nice pattern ,but it would awesome if you let the 00:04:585 (7) - being alone(or make it a little far from 00:04:435 (6), because it's http://puu.sh/66NUc.jpg I know but I can't increase the anti-jump after the hdash this will be too hard for a rain
also 00:04:285 (5) - as Hyperdash trigger feels strange, because it think it would fit the beat if 00:04:135 (4) - become a hyperdash trigger Maybe for you but not for me >_<
00:10:735 (5,1,2,3,4) - the effect after this 00:10:885 (1,2) hyperdash makes the 00:11:185 (3,4) - jump is hard & annoying to catch ;w;
so my suggestion is http://puu.sh/66P81.jpg Fixed with 1st version
00:24:085 (1) - where's the http://puu.sh/66NUc.jpg ;w; , for my suggestion is http://puu.sh/66Prp.jpg I don't want to silence a spinner and the bell is already marked with the spinner hitsound
00:35:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - removing, the (6),(7) & make the (5) is good for this beat's flow song & pattern, but if you follow the
electric piano beat, ignore this Nope :s
00:38:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's same like the previous mod , make the 00:39:385 (8) , but make it a little far from 00:39:235 (7) Fixed ... I think ? Maybe... Now really I can't understand what you said here xD
00:39:385 (8,1) - ^ watch out for this chain reaction , i think a little far movement for 00:39:385 (8) can trigger the hyperdash. No need for a hdash here
but my opinion i think it's good to make this part as hyperdash jump , because it's quite hard to catch this jump after catching the previous pattern Fixed in another way with a little anti-jump between (7,8)
01:19:135 (1) - remove this NC ;w; , it makes the http://puu.sh/66NUc.jpg beat strange Nc reworked here to be more logic with the song
01:18:985 (4) - ^ for chain reaction on this , make this a little far from 01:19:285 (5) -ok
01:36:685 (1,2,3) - this http://puu.sh/66QNL.jpg will make the flow pattern better No changes here, this flow is like this on purpose


Salad
00:24:085 (1) - (/ 0 w 0)/http://puu.sh/66NUc.jpg & http://puu.sh/66Prp.jpg \( 0 w 0\)Same as rain
01:11:485 (2) - make it like this ;w; http://puu.sh/66QX8.jpg Fixed
01:19:285 (1,2,3) - make it like this (~ 0 w 0)~ http://puu.sh/66R2e.jpg fixed
01:42:385 (2,3,4) - make it same like above ^ Changed but not as you suggested '-'
02:08:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - http://i.imgur.com/hn47NWT.jpg I don't want to use a stream more difficult here. It's a salad :s


Platter
00:24:085 (1) - (/ 0 w 0)/http://puu.sh/66NUc.jpg & http://puu.sh/66Prp.jpg \( 0 w 0\) Same as rain
01:18:385 (4,5,6) - , 01:18:985 (6) = http://puu.sh/66NUc.jpg ,so my suggestion http://puu.sh/66UEJ.jpg ( 0 w 0)b That puush couldn't be found
01:33:385 (8) - 01:33:385 (8) = http://puu.sh/66NUc.jpg ,so just move it to the center /o/ Ok
01:55:885 (3) - make it more curved Fixed and also fixed the one in the previous kiai
02:08:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - the concept for is same like http://i.imgur.com/hn47NWT.jpg ,but make it quite wider I will try to fix this I need more time to think about a good idea :s

Cup
00:24:085 (1) - (/ 0 w 0)/http://puu.sh/66NUc.jpg & http://puu.sh/66Prp.jpg \( 0 w 0\) same as rain
00:04:285 (3) - add NC The bell sound is here 00:04:585 (1) - so there is no reason to add a nc
01:15:235 (5) - ^ There is no notes here xD Fixed but the one at 01:13:285 -
01:32:785 (4) - ^ No nc for the bell '-' I prefer to
01:33:085 (5) - ^There is no notes here ...

Crystal's Overdose

*Under mod Progress , I will finish this ASAP

Fort wrote:

my mod
Stalking mode
[Cup]
00:01:585 - add circle here and in 00:02:185 here, then new combo in 00:02:485 (3) No need for a note here in a cup
00:02:485 (3) - delete one arrow then add circle Not logic with my mapping, you can also check the salad it's +/- the same idea for this slider
00:03:985 (3) - NC it Already said in ursa's mod that I don't want to nc the bell sound. For me it's the end of the pattern and not a begining so there is no need for a nc
00:41:635 - add notes in here yep
00:41:935- delete notes nope
00:42:085 (5,1) - NC notes 5 release NC circle 1 Yep seems more correct with the song
01:04:885 (1,2) - i think its like jump on cup diff There is no need for a jump here so it's ok, also it's done on purpose if this one is more easy when you dash
02:08:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i think this 4 combo zigzag pattern will confusing player, how about use 8 combo zig zag pattern? or 6 combo There is no need to move here and I don't want to force the players to move here in the cup. If I use a 6combo zigzag (more logic with the number of fruits) I can't really do something where you don't need to move

[Salad]
01:16:735 - add notes here, this is nice sound I prefer to keep my blank here

[Rain]
01:07:285 to 01:15:385 - think some Streams (not jumpstreams), and some 1/4 circles pattern can be fit in that time I don't want to map the stream here :s

i think this map is beetwen Overdose and Rain, so Rain+ will be fit in this diff This kind of name isn't currently allowed but yep this rain is a hard rain

[Crystal Overdose]
madafaka this diff is Overkill, with AR and OD 9 makes this Diff is Hard to FCed Od change nothing in ctb an with ar8 this will be impossible to read also this diff isn't done to be easily fcable.

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ok im surender

Hope this map ranked. I hope also :p

i think my mod is like useless, but i try it, cause its my first time. so be gentle There is no useless mod =)

ZHSteven wrote:

For CLSW diff, OA3 to make the star rating 5.0.

try to look at it tomorrow...