Yes, perhaps this time I am not fun as this map, but maybe your next map I like it very much, who knows
As kurokami says, you dont need to map something "I like", but something "you like, and hope everyone like".
Back to the map.
Apart from the music, I think this map is well designed.
just to say something needs to improve imo, your too much XX X XX pattern makes the rhythm of the map sporadic. I mean, sometimes it breaks your flow in rhythm. maybe it is because the music shows like this, i guess. But if I were you I will not place so many patterns like this, even the music shows it.
And it gives me a feeling that you are leak of good jump patterns. most of the jump seems a bit stiff. plus your other patterns flows good enough, it is much more clearer than it should be.
e.g 00:10:590 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - in rain.
I know you want to use increase jump, but here firstly your previous slider 1 end, slider 2 3 and 4 shows a stand, so probably this jump gives me a feeling that you just place jump only for jump.
for me I will make 2 and 3 a small movement, and makes 3 a slider(delete original 4), then closer a bit 5 and 3 end(but still leaves a jump), then next 1,2,3 just jump whatever needs, like increase jump, stand jump, moving jump, everything is ok i guess. this will make jump looks not that much weird.
Also you can try to refer to more CTB map, to gain more knowledge about jump.
flow and movement I think I dont need to talk much because you do it well in this map. Great job.
hope I can give a full mod in your next set XD l
PM if you need stars
Edit: I like your OP. maybe next time I will do something similar like this
As kurokami says, you dont need to map something "I like", but something "you like, and hope everyone like".
Back to the map.
Apart from the music, I think this map is well designed.
just to say something needs to improve imo, your too much XX X XX pattern makes the rhythm of the map sporadic. I mean, sometimes it breaks your flow in rhythm. maybe it is because the music shows like this, i guess. But if I were you I will not place so many patterns like this, even the music shows it.
And it gives me a feeling that you are leak of good jump patterns. most of the jump seems a bit stiff. plus your other patterns flows good enough, it is much more clearer than it should be.
e.g 00:10:590 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - in rain.
I know you want to use increase jump, but here firstly your previous slider 1 end, slider 2 3 and 4 shows a stand, so probably this jump gives me a feeling that you just place jump only for jump.
for me I will make 2 and 3 a small movement, and makes 3 a slider(delete original 4), then closer a bit 5 and 3 end(but still leaves a jump), then next 1,2,3 just jump whatever needs, like increase jump, stand jump, moving jump, everything is ok i guess. this will make jump looks not that much weird.
Also you can try to refer to more CTB map, to gain more knowledge about jump.
flow and movement I think I dont need to talk much because you do it well in this map. Great job.
hope I can give a full mod in your next set XD l
PM if you need stars
Edit: I like your OP. maybe next time I will do something similar like this