My review:
A_childIGuess
I think the map type you are going with is "techy". Though the CS and AR is not good for the star rating of this map
Patterns don't represent the beat
No pattern recognition (patterns are completely different even if the beat is repeating)
bad timing
No rhythm
super Low bpm. Not possible for even alt players because the rhythm is not consistent
The AR is too high for the map
CS is preference but with such a high AR and low bpm patterns, it become very annoying to play.
2/10Lean Laugh Love:
Solid map, everything is good, easy to understand rhythm, good timing. There is no way you made it in such a short period of time.
8/10Zoz
The map is solid. Though I think AR8 will be best since using AR9 will make the map fast and the patterns you used are much more enjoyable with low AR.
Some patterns are really-really hard to read for ex- 00:05:742 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
02:06:154 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The difficulty spike is too insane for the level of difficulty which the map maintain.
Other than that the map is damn solid. Not for ranking of course thought when It comes to enjoyment its very good, Love it
6.5/1001:49:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
This is such a gold man, for that I will give you 1 more point