htweiouherv;iherg YOU KNOW IM INSECURE ABOUT THATKaito-kun wrote:
(this arrows look like the acne in ur face :^) I'm definitely getting shot for this comment)
tfw still wont mod my maps tho
[jbd]
00:09:618 (9618|0,9768|0,9918|1,10068|1) - tfw uneven stack. I'd move the second one to the right hand like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8652862
00:45:243 (45243|2,45318|3,45393|2) - I'd invert the minitrill here to avoid the three note stack at 00:45:093 (45093|2,45243|2,45393|2) - , so the minitrill goes 4-3-4 instead of 3-4-3
00:45:543 (45543|3) - If above is accepted, move this to col 3 and then all the single note stacks should be 2 notes maxinb4 created 10 note stack
01:37:368 (97368|1,97518|1,97668|1) - tfw brogamer stack
01:54:318 (114318|1,114468|1,114618|1,114618|2,114768|2,114918|2) - delet this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8652885 . Keeps the stacks down to two notes max
02:12:843 (132843|1,132918|0,132993|1) - i cri because i cant play it but it looks nice
02:20:568 (140568|3,140643|2,140718|3) - Might wanna throw this minitrill onto the other hand cause 02:20:118 (140118|3,140193|2,140268|3) - was literally half a second ago.
03:14:418 (194418|2,194418|1) - Make this [12] so that I dont feel inclined to release 03:14:118 (194118|3) - a beat early aaaa *rage*
03:34:518 (214518|2,214818|2,215118|2,215418|2,215718|2,216018|2,216318|2,216618|2,216918|2) - Not sure if I should be nitpicking this stack since I know it'd be a pain in the ass to rearrange and avoid other stacks as long as this. Tbh, you could just use stacked notes but that's asking too much. It plays fine so you dont need to worry too much about it.
04:08:343 (248343|2) - Should make this a jump /s
[Extra]
http://puu.sh/wPYyU.jpg Im starting to learn to check aimod
00:13:893 (13893|1,13968|2,14118|2,14193|1,14343|1,14418|2,14568|2,14643|1,14793|1,14868|2) - Oh, that's cool. I never noticed this lol.
00:38:568 (38568|0,38643|1,38718|2,38793|0,38868|2,38943|1,39018|0) - that's some nice symmetry and I'd be fine with it if it weren't for the OH minitrill at 00:38:943 (38943|1,39018|0,39093|1) - making me want to kms :c Might control H 00:39:093 (39093|1,39168|2) - instead to create a mirrored pattern of the one I highlighted.
01:40:818 (100818|1,100968|1,101118|1) - :enjry: You can easily just reduce this stack to two notes instead D:<
01:58:593 (118593|3,118668|2,118743|1,118818|0,118818|3,118893|1,118968|2,119043|3) - stuff like this makes me want to kmsinb4 turns the entire jumpstream into this
03:39:318 (219318|2) - Dunno why you'd stack this with the jump at 03:39:618 (219618|0,219618|2) - :veryhardthenk:
04:08:418 - tfw no triple at the end like jbd diff :c
[Antalf's Insane]
00:37:218 - make this a double pls cause it's a kick here along with 00:37:518 (37518|1,37518|2) -
00:52:743 (52743|2,52818|3,52893|2) - I missed because of this OH minitrill so I hope it dies.
01:01:818 (61818|3,61818|2,61968|2,61968|3) - I'd make these jumps different so then your pattern would follow two beats - stacked, two beats - different, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8653058
01:23:118 (83118|1,83118|0,83268|3,83268|2) - tfw stacked the majority of the snares but this one :thinking:
01:24:768 (84768|1,84768|3,84918|2,84918|3) - 01:27:168 (87168|2,87168|1,87318|3,87318|2) - 01:30:768 (90768|0,90768|1,90918|1,90918|3) - make these chords complementary pls like you did in the rest of the section. I think it provides a cleaner visual cue for the 1/2 pause in the short 1/4 rolls. Stacking them with only one note makes it seem as if there's still 1/4 present, because you wouldn't be able to make complementary chords without using a jack in that case.
01:56:718 (116718|1,116793|3,116868|1,116943|3,117018|1) - Why a random trill in the middle of the index stream? Sure, you've used a couple minitrills but not any 5 note long ones, or 4 note long ones for that matter. A side note too, why is this stream so much more chaotic and disconnected than the one at 00:38:418 - ?
02:17:718 - Could easily get away with adding a jump here for the snare too. something like this would make it linear and the hand movement different almost unnoticeable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8653076
03:15:618 - Feel like in the beginning of the stream, you rarely use col 4, feels like I've played a 3k + 1 map and col 4 is a poorly used scratch. Also, there are quite a few 4 note trills present in the stream, so there's that to think about too and whether or not it fits :thenkspace:
[Hard]
00:08:268 (8268|2) - might stack this with 00:08:418 (8418|3) - if you dont wanna make it a jump to represent the kick.
01:27:918 (87918|0,88218|0,88518|0,88818|0,89118|0) - 01:30:018 (90018|1,90318|1,90618|1,90918|1,91218|1,91518|1) - 01:32:418 (92418|1,92718|1,93018|1,93318|1,93618|1,93918|1) - 01:49:068 (109068|0,109218|1,109218|3,109368|2,109518|1,109518|3,109668|0) - 01:36:018 (96018|1,96318|1,96618|1,96918|1,97218|1) - fam pls
01:49:068 (109068|0,109218|1,109218|3,109368|2,109518|1,109518|3,109668|0) - You always find a new pattern to use in your map that I never thought about but hate immediately after seeing it for the first time.
02:08:118 - I do think it'd be good to make this a jump just so the 2/1 snares in this measure are consistently mapped as jumps. The way it is now, you give a bit more emphasis to the first snare by making it a jump, but little emphasis to the second as it just blends in with the other notes around it :c
02:12:918 - Similar thing here too maybe, but with kicks in the measure!
02:42:318 (162318|0) - Make this a 1/1 LN for the 1/4 snare roll? Then you can just remove 02:42:468 (162468|3) - and the flow would still be good as the unusual 1/1 gap in the 1/2 stream is bridged with an LN
03:30:768 (210768|2,210918|1,210918|3,211068|0,211218|3,211218|1,211368|2) - 03:31:668 (211668|3,211818|2,211818|0,211968|1,212118|0,212118|2,212268|3) - You did this to spite me didnt you
[Normal]
00:38:118 - Could technically do an overlap with the LN at 00:37:818 (37818|3) - for that gun cock sound. Would be something similar to this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8653138 Ignore that accidental jump in [23], I didnt check my layering lol
00:55:518 (55518|3,55818|2,56718|0,57018|1) - I think it'd be nice to overlap these LNs cause they're the type of sound, and it'd differentiate it from the sound at 00:55:218 (55218|0,56118|1,56418|3) -
02:08:118 (128118|1) - I would move this to col 3 so that it's stacked with 02:07:518 (127518|2) - for the snare
03:06:018 - So apparently when I told you to add those 1/1 LNs in the esay diff, I forgot that they aren't even present in the normal diff :^D So uh, I'd move those LNs into the normal diff and keep the easy as 2/1
03:10:218 (190218|3,190218|2) - tfw this is a random double just existing
03:22:968 (202968|1,203118|2,203268|1,203418|0,203568|3,203718|1,203868|2,204018|1,204168|0,204318|3) - stop copy pasta-ing your patterns one after the other :<
[Easy]
00:38:118 (38118|1,38418|3) - I'd flip columns here so that there's one LN on each hand.
01:14:418 - tfw said add a note on the upbeat after this, not add a note on the upbeat after this and remove the note here. That's just putting the problem in a different place cause my original deal was with the 3/2 lmao
01:18:018 - Here, I'd try using a bit more 1/2 to properly map the drum line cause it's kind of confusing now since you sometimes map the kick, and sometimes map the snare. I'd just take the rhythm used in the normal here but make it with singles only instead or smth.
01:39:618 (99618|0) - Instead of one long LN, I think it might be better to just take some 1/1 and stack them with each other in pairs.
03:06:018 - see my fuck up in normal
03:20:418 - I dunno if I mentioned this for any other diff, but there's a crash here so a jump would be nice =w=)b
03:25:668 - Might add a note in col 4 here for the kick
03:39:318 (219318|2) - I would remove this note as it blends in with the rest of the chart and removes the sense of emptiness that the music gives in these two beats of near silence.
00:09:618 (9618|0,9768|0,9918|1,10068|1) - tfw uneven stack. I'd move the second one to the right hand like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8652862
00:45:243 (45243|2,45318|3,45393|2) - I'd invert the minitrill here to avoid the three note stack at 00:45:093 (45093|2,45243|2,45393|2) - , so the minitrill goes 4-3-4 instead of 3-4-3
00:45:543 (45543|3) - If above is accepted, move this to col 3 and then all the single note stacks should be 2 notes max
01:37:368 (97368|1,97518|1,97668|1) - tfw brogamer stack
01:54:318 (114318|1,114468|1,114618|1,114618|2,114768|2,114918|2) - delet this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8652885 . Keeps the stacks down to two notes max
02:12:843 (132843|1,132918|0,132993|1) - i cri because i cant play it but it looks nice
02:20:568 (140568|3,140643|2,140718|3) - Might wanna throw this minitrill onto the other hand cause 02:20:118 (140118|3,140193|2,140268|3) - was literally half a second ago.
03:14:418 (194418|2,194418|1) - Make this [12] so that I dont feel inclined to release 03:14:118 (194118|3) - a beat early aaaa *rage*
03:34:518 (214518|2,214818|2,215118|2,215418|2,215718|2,216018|2,216318|2,216618|2,216918|2) - Not sure if I should be nitpicking this stack since I know it'd be a pain in the ass to rearrange and avoid other stacks as long as this. Tbh, you could just use stacked notes but that's asking too much. It plays fine so you dont need to worry too much about it.
04:08:343 (248343|2) - Should make this a jump /s
[Extra]
http://puu.sh/wPYyU.jpg Im starting to learn to check aimod
00:13:893 (13893|1,13968|2,14118|2,14193|1,14343|1,14418|2,14568|2,14643|1,14793|1,14868|2) - Oh, that's cool. I never noticed this lol.
00:38:568 (38568|0,38643|1,38718|2,38793|0,38868|2,38943|1,39018|0) - that's some nice symmetry and I'd be fine with it if it weren't for the OH minitrill at 00:38:943 (38943|1,39018|0,39093|1) - making me want to kms :c Might control H 00:39:093 (39093|1,39168|2) - instead to create a mirrored pattern of the one I highlighted.
01:40:818 (100818|1,100968|1,101118|1) - :enjry: You can easily just reduce this stack to two notes instead D:<
01:58:593 (118593|3,118668|2,118743|1,118818|0,118818|3,118893|1,118968|2,119043|3) - stuff like this makes me want to kms
03:39:318 (219318|2) - Dunno why you'd stack this with the jump at 03:39:618 (219618|0,219618|2) - :veryhardthenk:
04:08:418 - tfw no triple at the end like jbd diff :c
[Antalf's Insane]
00:37:218 - make this a double pls cause it's a kick here along with 00:37:518 (37518|1,37518|2) -
00:52:743 (52743|2,52818|3,52893|2) - I missed because of this OH minitrill so I hope it dies.
01:01:818 (61818|3,61818|2,61968|2,61968|3) - I'd make these jumps different so then your pattern would follow two beats - stacked, two beats - different, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8653058
01:23:118 (83118|1,83118|0,83268|3,83268|2) - tfw stacked the majority of the snares but this one :thinking:
01:24:768 (84768|1,84768|3,84918|2,84918|3) - 01:27:168 (87168|2,87168|1,87318|3,87318|2) - 01:30:768 (90768|0,90768|1,90918|1,90918|3) - make these chords complementary pls like you did in the rest of the section. I think it provides a cleaner visual cue for the 1/2 pause in the short 1/4 rolls. Stacking them with only one note makes it seem as if there's still 1/4 present, because you wouldn't be able to make complementary chords without using a jack in that case.
01:56:718 (116718|1,116793|3,116868|1,116943|3,117018|1) - Why a random trill in the middle of the index stream? Sure, you've used a couple minitrills but not any 5 note long ones, or 4 note long ones for that matter. A side note too, why is this stream so much more chaotic and disconnected than the one at 00:38:418 - ?
02:17:718 - Could easily get away with adding a jump here for the snare too. something like this would make it linear and the hand movement different almost unnoticeable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8653076
02:39:768 (159768|2,159918|2) - and now presenting to you: but why [2] - Electric BoogalooProtastic101 wrote:
02:33:168 (153168|3,153318|3) - but why
03:15:618 - Feel like in the beginning of the stream, you rarely use col 4, feels like I've played a 3k + 1 map and col 4 is a poorly used scratch. Also, there are quite a few 4 note trills present in the stream, so there's that to think about too and whether or not it fits :thenkspace:
[Hard]
00:08:268 (8268|2) - might stack this with 00:08:418 (8418|3) - if you dont wanna make it a jump to represent the kick.
01:27:918 (87918|0,88218|0,88518|0,88818|0,89118|0) - 01:30:018 (90018|1,90318|1,90618|1,90918|1,91218|1,91518|1) - 01:32:418 (92418|1,92718|1,93018|1,93318|1,93618|1,93918|1) - 01:49:068 (109068|0,109218|1,109218|3,109368|2,109518|1,109518|3,109668|0) - 01:36:018 (96018|1,96318|1,96618|1,96918|1,97218|1) - fam pls
01:49:068 (109068|0,109218|1,109218|3,109368|2,109518|1,109518|3,109668|0) - You always find a new pattern to use in your map that I never thought about but hate immediately after seeing it for the first time.
02:08:118 - I do think it'd be good to make this a jump just so the 2/1 snares in this measure are consistently mapped as jumps. The way it is now, you give a bit more emphasis to the first snare by making it a jump, but little emphasis to the second as it just blends in with the other notes around it :c
02:12:918 - Similar thing here too maybe, but with kicks in the measure!
02:42:318 (162318|0) - Make this a 1/1 LN for the 1/4 snare roll? Then you can just remove 02:42:468 (162468|3) - and the flow would still be good as the unusual 1/1 gap in the 1/2 stream is bridged with an LN
03:30:768 (210768|2,210918|1,210918|3,211068|0,211218|3,211218|1,211368|2) - 03:31:668 (211668|3,211818|2,211818|0,211968|1,212118|0,212118|2,212268|3) - You did this to spite me didnt you
[Normal]
00:38:118 - Could technically do an overlap with the LN at 00:37:818 (37818|3) - for that gun cock sound. Would be something similar to this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8653138 Ignore that accidental jump in [23], I didnt check my layering lol
00:55:518 (55518|3,55818|2,56718|0,57018|1) - I think it'd be nice to overlap these LNs cause they're the type of sound, and it'd differentiate it from the sound at 00:55:218 (55218|0,56118|1,56418|3) -
02:08:118 (128118|1) - I would move this to col 3 so that it's stacked with 02:07:518 (127518|2) - for the snare
03:06:018 - So apparently when I told you to add those 1/1 LNs in the esay diff, I forgot that they aren't even present in the normal diff :^D So uh, I'd move those LNs into the normal diff and keep the easy as 2/1
03:10:218 (190218|3,190218|2) - tfw this is a random double just existing
03:22:968 (202968|1,203118|2,203268|1,203418|0,203568|3,203718|1,203868|2,204018|1,204168|0,204318|3) - stop copy pasta-ing your patterns one after the other :<
[Easy]
00:38:118 (38118|1,38418|3) - I'd flip columns here so that there's one LN on each hand.
01:14:418 - tfw said add a note on the upbeat after this, not add a note on the upbeat after this and remove the note here. That's just putting the problem in a different place cause my original deal was with the 3/2 lmao
01:18:018 - Here, I'd try using a bit more 1/2 to properly map the drum line cause it's kind of confusing now since you sometimes map the kick, and sometimes map the snare. I'd just take the rhythm used in the normal here but make it with singles only instead or smth.
01:39:618 (99618|0) - Instead of one long LN, I think it might be better to just take some 1/1 and stack them with each other in pairs.
03:06:018 - see my fuck up in normal
03:20:418 - I dunno if I mentioned this for any other diff, but there's a crash here so a jump would be nice =w=)b
03:25:668 - Might add a note in col 4 here for the kick
03:39:318 (219318|2) - I would remove this note as it blends in with the rest of the chart and removes the sense of emptiness that the music gives in these two beats of near silence.