Welp, managed to somewhat survive the 5th week of my college's trimester, so I finally have some free time to apply these:
As always, Green means applied, Red means rejected (I always try to be as reasonable as possible when rejecting), and bold letters means my point of view. It may go from either not applying a suggestion until someone else points it out, or a suggestion partially applied
and looked unintended in more than one way
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As always, Green means applied, Red means rejected (I always try to be as reasonable as possible when rejecting), and bold letters means my point of view. It may go from either not applying a suggestion until someone else points it out, or a suggestion partially applied
Hydria wrote:
work server is down so I guess I have some free time
1/2/3/4Justice Be Done00:00:468 (468|2,543|3,693|2,918|3,993|2,1068|3,1143|2) - very right hand biased straight off the bat Did some moving on on the notes before the first trill, should make it less punishing on the right hand
00:03:318 (3318|0,3393|1,3468|0,3543|1,3618|2) - why not 1|3 instead of 1|2? Because it would amount to something like THIS and I would prefer avoiding such things unless someone convices me otherwise
00:04:818 (4818|0,4968|0,5118|1,5268|0,5343|1,5418|0) - really weird hand bias switching throughout this intro Did some fixing to that part to make it a little bit less biased, so it should play better now
00:06:918 (6918|1) - move to 3 | 00:07:143 (7143|2) - move to 2 Oh, I see what you are trying to do with this, applied
00:07:818 (7818|2,7968|2,8118|2) - nice mini-anchor I honestly don't find any problem with this small anchor, but I changed the pattern to something else to remove the anchor anyways (Doesn't really hurt doing so)
00:09:618 (9618|0,9768|0,9918|1,10068|0,10143|1,10293|0,10293|1,10518|1,10593|0,10668|1,10743|0) - see this is what I mean Well, I guess I just discovered what I need to improve on :^). Changed to a less biased pattern
00:18:318 (18318|1,18318|0,18468|1,18618|0,18693|1,18768|0,18918|1,18993|0,19068|1,19143|0,19293|1,19443|1,19518|0) - Fixed
00:20:718 (20718|3,20718|0,21018|0,21018|3) - what are these doubles for They were to represent the piano sound at the background, and the strong static sound at some points, but I decided to delete them after thinking a bit about them
00:38:493 (38493|1,38568|0,38718|1,38718|0,38868|1,38943|0,39018|1,39168|0,39243|1,39318|0,39393|1) - muh left hand Fixed (I never noticed the map to be this imbalanced hand-wise XD)
00:40:218 (40218|0,40368|0,40443|1,40518|0,40593|1) - not a big fan of this tbh Don't find a problem with this one, but I still changed it to something more comfortable to play (or at least that's the idea lol)
and osu just crashed Why do your osu client always crash when you are checking one of my maps? :^) (Having some Destruction flashbacks)
00:43:818 (43818|1,43968|1,44118|1,44268|1) - more anchors [Sorta fixed/b]
00:45:768 (45768|3,45918|3,46068|3,46218|3,46218|2,46368|2,46518|2) - okay then [b]I should seriously look for a song that yells "Anchors are valid here", I would stop looking like a blind person and modders take less time (and willpower to avoid shooting me and/or themselves) to mod my shitmaps
00:46:818 (46818|1,46968|1,47118|1,47193|0,47268|1,47343|0,47493|0,47643|0) - not a fan of this either Moved 00:46:968 (46968|1) - to the 1st column, and that's the most I can think of to fix that without breaking the whole pattern (if you do have an idea, you can always help me with it)
move 00:51:018 (51018|0) - to stop 00:51:018 (51018|0,51168|0,51243|1,51318|0,51393|1,51543|1) - Did some repatterning
00:51:693 (51693|0,51843|1,51993|1) - don't hear sounds for these There is indeed sound, it's the same sound that I use for the 1/4 stream right after this. But there it's a bit unnoticeable, so I decided to remove the first 2 notes you pointed out, and left out only the 3rd one, because that one sounds strong enough to be easily noticeable while playing
00:55:218 (55218|3,55218|1,55293|2,55293|0,55368|3,55368|1,55443|2,55443|0) - [23][14] patterns exist you know you might wanna use them at some point I personally don't like those type of trills, since they feel weird to play (I admit it may be me), so I always avoid using them. And I prefer using [13][24] and viceversa, more in this case because it somewhat represents static better
in this section alone just be careful of doing stuff like 00:59:418 (59418|2,59568|2,59868|2) - and make sure each one is intentional
01:00:768 (60768|1,61068|1,61218|1,61368|1,61518|1) - wew
01:02:118 (62118|3,62118|0,62193|2,62268|3,62268|0,62343|1,62418|3,62418|0) - could be a better transition
I rearranged the whole section taking in mind what you said, so it should be fine now
01:20:568 (80568|2,80718|3,80868|2,80943|3,81093|2,81168|3,81318|3,81318|2) - :^D
01:40:818 (100818|2,100818|0,100818|3,100893|1,100968|2,100968|0,101043|3,101118|1,101118|2,101193|0,101268|3,101268|2,101343|1) - oh god this couldn't be a worse transition O you haven't seen the first transition pattern :^). Had more triangles than a Monstrata map :^).
(Removed the singles to emphasize beat, had it on my mind for a while, but I guess it's the best choice here)
01:41:830 (101830|0,101980|0,102168|0,102318|0,102468|0) - ew Only avoided the last anchor, because it's either this pattern, or a biased right-handed pattern (and we both know how many of those I have here :^) )
01:45:768 (105768|3,105843|2,105918|1,105918|0,105918|3,105993|2,106068|1,106143|0,106218|3,106218|1,106293|2,106368|3) - not a fan of this at all ugh Did a little repatterning there
01:50:118 (110118|2,110268|2,110418|2,110568|2,110718|2) - more anchors I'm seriously gonna map Get On by USAO, it fits my anchor fetish smh
01:55:368 (115368|3,115518|3,115668|3,115818|3) - tbf I'm not a fan of most of these patterns as is but it's best to avoid as many anchors as you can really unless necessary And I agree, but I'm just a shitty mapper trying to rank a shitmap :^)
01:58:818 (118818|3,118893|2,119043|3,119118|2,119193|3,119268|2,119418|3,119493|2,119568|3,119718|2,119718|3,119868|3,119943|2) - rh bias And here we go again! (made it less biased.........hopefully)
02:00:018 (120018|1,120168|1,120318|1,120468|1) - anchor Bay
02:19:968 (139968|2,140118|2,140268|2,140418|2) - ^ ^Repetition of bad joke
02:42:918 (162918|1,162993|0) - why, with 02:42:318 (162318|0,162393|1,162468|0,162543|1,162618|0,162768|0,162768|1) - happening would you put that on the left hand Because I'm retarded (Mirrored it)
02:43:968 (163968|3,163968|2,163968|0) - why is this a hand My mistake
02:51:618 (171618|2,171768|2,171918|2,172068|2) - more anchors More fixing
02:52:218 (172218|1,172368|1,172518|1,172668|1,172818|1) - man this ship ain't going anywhereYes it is, just gotta make sure I have enough tape to fix this shit :^)
02:54:018 (174018|0,174168|0,174318|0,174468|0) - I don't want to have to keep pointing these out so I'm not going to anymore Does that mean I have to actually........"Pay attention" D:
03:03:018 (183018|1,183168|1,183318|1,183468|1,183618|1) - apart from that one I'm pretty sure you are questioning my intelectual level right now, and I don't blame you :^D
03:16:968 (196968|2,197043|3,197118|2,197193|3,197268|2,197418|3,197493|2,197643|2,197718|3,197793|2) - x2 x2 :^D
ok we're done here Does that mean I can insta-rank the map now? :^)
Fixed it for him since he said it was unintendedMentholzzz wrote:
Antalf's Insane
??:D?? :^)
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