rerecheck
sorry, i cant do this, i need a break
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[General]
00:26:418 (26418|1) - Move to 1. I notice that you never include the jump as part of your trill as evidenced by 00:01:218 (1218|1,1218|0) - 00:02:418 (2418|3,2418|0) - 00:03:618 (3618|3,3618|2) - 00:04:818 (4818|2,4818|0) - 00:06:018 (6018|0,6018|1) - and so on.
01:03:018 (63018|2,63018|1,63318|1,63318|2,63618|1,63618|2) - repetitive [14][23]
01:11:193 - 01:11:343 - Sounds like the stuff at 02:41:118 (161118|1,161193|2,161268|1,161343|2,161418|1) - here, so I might suggest adding notes on the 1/4 for it
01:11:793 - 01:11:943 - ^, though there's plenty of other places like this so it's more just a comment than anything
01:32:118 (92118|2,92118|1,92418|1,92418|2,92718|1,92718|2) - I would try to vary the [23] somehow so that it doesnt feel so repetitive
01:37:068 (97068|2,97368|1) - I'd switch these so that they stack after the hand and not before it as I believe that's easier to hit because reasons. poke me later i guess
01:46:518 (106518|1,106668|1,106818|0,106818|1,106968|0,107118|0) - three note stacks
01:58:218 (118218|0,118368|0,118518|0,118518|1,118668|1,118818|1) - 01:59:118 (119118|2,119268|2,119418|1,119418|2,119568|1,119718|1) - only pointed out the ones that were chained together or didnt really give enough recovery time to the player
01:53:418 (113418|2,113493|3,113568|2,113643|1,113718|2) - bit of a weird direction turn tbh. Most of the streams in this diff change directions through a disconnect rather than a stair like pattern
02:06:018 (126018|3,126168|3) - dont quite like the fact that this 1/2 mini stack is directly after a roll leading into the right hand. I'd put it into col 1 instead so that 02:05:868 (125868|1,125943|2,126018|3) - rolls away from it
02:08:418 (128418|2) - move to 4 so that the 2-3 trill has the same number in both columns (5 each)
02:19:068 - to 02:19:968 - a lot of the movement is put onto the left hand with very little on the right
02:54:918 (174918|1,175068|1,175218|1,176418|1,176568|1,176718|1) - 03:00:243 (180243|1,180393|1,180543|1,180618|0,180768|0,180918|0) - stacks
03:15:618 (195618|1,195768|1,195918|1,196068|1,196218|1) - ^
03:21:918 (201918|1,202068|1,202218|1,202368|2,202518|2,202668|2,202818|0,202968|0,203118|0) - 03:24:768 (204768|3,204918|3,205068|3,205218|3) -
03:19:818 (199818|0,199968|0,200118|0,200418|0,200568|0,200718|0) - kind of putting a lot of weight in col 1 tbh
03:33:618 (213618|2,213768|2,213918|3,213918|2,214068|3,214218|3,214218|0,214368|0,214518|0) - no real break between them
03:35:718 (215718|1,215718|2,216018|1,216018|2,216318|2,216318|1) - three of the same repeated jumps which puts far more weight on col 2 and 3 and barely any in 1 and 4
04:05:418 (245418|0,245568|0,245868|0,246018|0) - i'd make it so that the second mini stack in col 1 is on the right hand instead for a slightly more even weighting
[Extra]
00:42:468 (42468|0) - move this to col 3 so that you have a ministack in all four columns like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8668571
00:43:743 (43743|2,43818|3,43893|2,43968|1,44043|0,44118|2,44193|1,44268|0,44343|1,44418|2) - feels like trying to play spacetime stairs
01:48:843 (108843|2,108918|1,108993|2) - put the minitrill on the other hand so that the strain is pretty much even with 01:48:468 (108468|2,108543|3,108618|2) -
02:10:368 (130368|1,130518|1,130668|1) - stack. feels like there's no variation within these last two beats to show that the music has changed slightly and lost intensity
02:19:068 (139068|3,139143|2,139368|2,139443|3,139668|3,139743|2) - way too much movement on the right hand and very little anything on the left 02:19:218 (139218|0,139218|1,139518|1,139518|0,139818|0,139818|1) -
02:30:618 (150618|2,150768|3,150918|2,151068|3,151218|2,151368|3,151518|2) - trill
03:01:668 - to 03:03:093 - you've rarely held a single direction for this long
03:15:618 - to 03:17:793 - col 1 does very little
- The normal-hitclap sounds too similar to the music and is cut very short, seeming as if it was taken straight from the music.
00:26:418 (26418|1) - Move to 1. I notice that you never include the jump as part of your trill as evidenced by 00:01:218 (1218|1,1218|0) - 00:02:418 (2418|3,2418|0) - 00:03:618 (3618|3,3618|2) - 00:04:818 (4818|2,4818|0) - 00:06:018 (6018|0,6018|1) - and so on.
01:03:018 (63018|2,63018|1,63318|1,63318|2,63618|1,63618|2) - repetitive [14][23]
01:11:193 - 01:11:343 - Sounds like the stuff at 02:41:118 (161118|1,161193|2,161268|1,161343|2,161418|1) - here, so I might suggest adding notes on the 1/4 for it
01:11:793 - 01:11:943 - ^, though there's plenty of other places like this so it's more just a comment than anything
01:32:118 (92118|2,92118|1,92418|1,92418|2,92718|1,92718|2) - I would try to vary the [23] somehow so that it doesnt feel so repetitive
01:37:068 (97068|2,97368|1) - I'd switch these so that they stack after the hand and not before it as I believe that's easier to hit because reasons. poke me later i guess
01:46:518 (106518|1,106668|1,106818|0,106818|1,106968|0,107118|0) - three note stacks
01:58:218 (118218|0,118368|0,118518|0,118518|1,118668|1,118818|1) - 01:59:118 (119118|2,119268|2,119418|1,119418|2,119568|1,119718|1) - only pointed out the ones that were chained together or didnt really give enough recovery time to the player
01:53:418 (113418|2,113493|3,113568|2,113643|1,113718|2) - bit of a weird direction turn tbh. Most of the streams in this diff change directions through a disconnect rather than a stair like pattern
02:06:018 (126018|3,126168|3) - dont quite like the fact that this 1/2 mini stack is directly after a roll leading into the right hand. I'd put it into col 1 instead so that 02:05:868 (125868|1,125943|2,126018|3) - rolls away from it
02:08:418 (128418|2) - move to 4 so that the 2-3 trill has the same number in both columns (5 each)
02:19:068 - to 02:19:968 - a lot of the movement is put onto the left hand with very little on the right
02:54:918 (174918|1,175068|1,175218|1,176418|1,176568|1,176718|1) - 03:00:243 (180243|1,180393|1,180543|1,180618|0,180768|0,180918|0) - stacks
03:15:618 (195618|1,195768|1,195918|1,196068|1,196218|1) - ^
03:21:918 (201918|1,202068|1,202218|1,202368|2,202518|2,202668|2,202818|0,202968|0,203118|0) - 03:24:768 (204768|3,204918|3,205068|3,205218|3) -
03:19:818 (199818|0,199968|0,200118|0,200418|0,200568|0,200718|0) - kind of putting a lot of weight in col 1 tbh
03:33:618 (213618|2,213768|2,213918|3,213918|2,214068|3,214218|3,214218|0,214368|0,214518|0) - no real break between them
03:35:718 (215718|1,215718|2,216018|1,216018|2,216318|2,216318|1) - three of the same repeated jumps which puts far more weight on col 2 and 3 and barely any in 1 and 4
04:05:418 (245418|0,245568|0,245868|0,246018|0) - i'd make it so that the second mini stack in col 1 is on the right hand instead for a slightly more even weighting
[Extra]
00:42:468 (42468|0) - move this to col 3 so that you have a ministack in all four columns like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8668571
00:43:743 (43743|2,43818|3,43893|2,43968|1,44043|0,44118|2,44193|1,44268|0,44343|1,44418|2) - feels like trying to play spacetime stairs
01:48:843 (108843|2,108918|1,108993|2) - put the minitrill on the other hand so that the strain is pretty much even with 01:48:468 (108468|2,108543|3,108618|2) -
02:10:368 (130368|1,130518|1,130668|1) - stack. feels like there's no variation within these last two beats to show that the music has changed slightly and lost intensity
02:19:068 (139068|3,139143|2,139368|2,139443|3,139668|3,139743|2) - way too much movement on the right hand and very little anything on the left 02:19:218 (139218|0,139218|1,139518|1,139518|0,139818|0,139818|1) -
02:30:618 (150618|2,150768|3,150918|2,151068|3,151218|2,151368|3,151518|2) - trill
03:01:668 - to 03:03:093 - you've rarely held a single direction for this long
03:15:618 - to 03:17:793 - col 1 does very little
sorry, i cant do this, i need a break