SakuraKaminari wrote:
From my Q! Remember to close Q next time or count down number of slots on your post.
I really can't find anything wrong, so I'm gonna talk about what you did right and why it's so successful with a couple things I did spot. Don't wanna come off as lazy!
Insane
This one has some problems.
00:05:542 (5,6) - all the notes are the same light piano, so why does this one have both distance and slider emphasis? Just because it's last doesn't seem like a good justification. it has vocal on it as well, thats why
00:19:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps are forced. None of these beats are accentuated enough to justify the difference between 2,3 and 3,4 1 has a heavy sound (with what every the heck that instrument is xd), the sound repeats on 2, and 3 follows with a light one as well; the drum kicks in on 4, you can hear the triplet sound lightly playing on 5 6 and 7, done in a triangle to transition and for visuals
00:24:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is done perfectly. Love how you highlight the spiral upwards in the music by a spinning triangle jump that scales with the pitch increase.
00:49:483 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm change is so smooth it could get me into bed LOL
00:58:307 (1,1,1,1) - Love the slider stream and combo bringing out the start of kiai.
01:28:307 (1,1,1) - this structure is just so cool having it dilate down to end the song
Great map! Imo basically ready for rank! thank you
Hey lululu wrote:
遲來的M4M
NormalHard
- NM不要太多SV變速,最好是一兩個就好,看要不要重做一些段落 我考虑一下
- 00:13:130 (2) - 這滑條太彎了在NM不易讀 稍改了
- 00:16:660 (3) - 00:18:777 (1) - 00:21:601 (1) - 00:24:424 (1) - 這幾個是同樣的音但是你擺放的卻不一樣 不同更好玩
- 00:27:248 (1) - 這邊都是彎起來的滑條再繞圈圈,要不要試著改變路徑或是把一些滑條改成直的,這樣玩起來比較有新鮮感 最后俩改了
- 00:37:130 (2) - 這邊換成轉盤? 我喜欢现在的
- 01:18:072 (1) - 太彎了 稍改了
- 01:26:542 (2) - ^
- 01:28:130 (1) - 要不要跟01:29:013 (3) - 一樣直 01:26:542 (2) - 的尾巴和DS D:
Insane
- 00:26:013 (4,5,6) - 這邊有些地方改成1/2小跳吧,這樣能對音,又有Hard的感覺 想要和00:24:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - 都一样
- 00:48:954 (2,3) - 放成連打? 呃
- 00:58:307 (1,2,3,4,1) - 也是多放一點1/2小跳 我不太喜欢小跳,感觉跟这个hard不条和 x.x
- 01:11:366 (3,4) - 放個連打 symmetry
- 01:12:072 (6) - 改成1/4 kick slider? 会跟01:11:366 (3,1) -不对称,我想一想吧
- 01:14:895 (4,5,1) - follow 怪怪的,而且DS不同 稍改了
谢谢!!
- 00:15:601 (3,1) - 這只有1/4間距而已太遠了 mentioned in previous mod
- 00:24:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 擺得太亂了,而且每個三角形的DS差太多 大多数的人都将了,我再看看
- 00:26:895 (2) - 改成兩個短滑條比較合音 小提琴;-;
- 00:44:189 (1) - 這邊吉他音不太適合這種1/1滑條,音樂聽起來很急促,但物件卻慢慢來的感覺 这一段比较慢嘛(the rhythm & sliders, not music)
- 00:45:601 (1) - ^
i wish i can find one D:osuskrub wrote:
get a bn