dang frostings modded your map so hard that i couldn't find much to point out xd
[general]
i think it would be alright if you would have "bakemonogatari" in the tags, since this is related to that anime.
don't forget about combo colours!
[insane]
00:13:130 (1,2,5) - ugly overlap ;w;
00:15:601 (3) - won't it be better for this to be a 1/4 stream to increase emphasis on the violin?
00:22:130 (4) - ^ (but you're emphasizing drums here, so it would be much more important for this to be a 1/4 stream)
00:24:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - try not to let your jumps overlap too much (unless the overlap is perfect), a cluster like this 00:24:601 (2,2,1,1) - would be easily fixed by just spacing them away from each other.
00:26:542 (1,2) - it's okay to use 1/4 sliders here though, the violin is going down in scale as it adds emphasis onto 00:27:248 (1) - upon being clicked.
00:58:307 (1,1,1,1) - why are there NC's? nothing has changed, and you could use use 1/2 circle jumps instead since it adds buildup for the kiai part.
01:28:307 (1,1,1) - ^ (it would greatly emphasize the ending since the ending is a strong beat itself.)
[normal]
you never change SV (slider velocity) in normal, it just isn't right.
your ds has to be consistent, just because it doesn't show up in aimod doesn't mean all ds is perfect. this for example 00:08:189 (2,1) - has 0.88 ds between it while the rest of the notes have 1.0 here are a few ds issues i pointed out (either too far or too close)
00:20:366 (2,3) - 0.94 ds
00:27:248 (1,2) - 1.15 ds
00:28:130 (2,1) - 0.91 ds
00:38:366 (1,2) - not sure about this one, because stacks aren't recommended in lower diffs. also the fact it's tapping 1/2 doesn't feel right, but i see a lot of other normal diffs do this, so it's up to you if you want to change it.
00:38:542 (2,3) - 0.87
00:42:777 (1,2) - 0.89
00:43:307 (2,1) - ^
00:48:248 (3,1) - 1.08
00:57:601 (2) - ds issue between prev and next note
and a ton of other ds issues.
that's all from me now, good luck
[general]
i think it would be alright if you would have "bakemonogatari" in the tags, since this is related to that anime.
don't forget about combo colours!
[insane]
00:13:130 (1,2,5) - ugly overlap ;w;
00:15:601 (3) - won't it be better for this to be a 1/4 stream to increase emphasis on the violin?
00:22:130 (4) - ^ (but you're emphasizing drums here, so it would be much more important for this to be a 1/4 stream)
00:24:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - try not to let your jumps overlap too much (unless the overlap is perfect), a cluster like this 00:24:601 (2,2,1,1) - would be easily fixed by just spacing them away from each other.
00:26:542 (1,2) - it's okay to use 1/4 sliders here though, the violin is going down in scale as it adds emphasis onto 00:27:248 (1) - upon being clicked.
00:58:307 (1,1,1,1) - why are there NC's? nothing has changed, and you could use use 1/2 circle jumps instead since it adds buildup for the kiai part.
01:28:307 (1,1,1) - ^ (it would greatly emphasize the ending since the ending is a strong beat itself.)
[normal]
you never change SV (slider velocity) in normal, it just isn't right.
your ds has to be consistent, just because it doesn't show up in aimod doesn't mean all ds is perfect. this for example 00:08:189 (2,1) - has 0.88 ds between it while the rest of the notes have 1.0 here are a few ds issues i pointed out (either too far or too close)
00:20:366 (2,3) - 0.94 ds
00:27:248 (1,2) - 1.15 ds
00:28:130 (2,1) - 0.91 ds
00:38:366 (1,2) - not sure about this one, because stacks aren't recommended in lower diffs. also the fact it's tapping 1/2 doesn't feel right, but i see a lot of other normal diffs do this, so it's up to you if you want to change it.
00:38:542 (2,3) - 0.87
00:42:777 (1,2) - 0.89
00:43:307 (2,1) - ^
00:48:248 (3,1) - 1.08
00:57:601 (2) - ds issue between prev and next note
and a ton of other ds issues.
that's all from me now, good luck