Einja wrote:
dang frostings modded your map so hard that i couldn't find much to point out xd xd
[general]
i think it would be alright if you would have "bakemonogatari" in the tags, since this is related to that anime. sure
don't forget about combo colours! c:
[insane]
00:13:130 (1,2,5) - ugly overlap ;w; its unnoticeable when playing, but i will change it if it gets mentioned again
00:15:601 (3) - won't it be better for this to be a 1/4 stream to increase emphasis on the violin? i think this is fine
00:22:130 (4) - ^ (but you're emphasizing drums here, so it would be much more important for this to be a 1/4 stream) the map will only have one stream if i added one
00:24:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - try not to let your jumps overlap too much (unless the overlap is perfect), a cluster like this 00:24:601 (2,2,1,1) - would be easily fixed by just spacing them away from each other. the jumps play fine for me
00:26:542 (1,2) - it's okay to use 1/4 sliders here though, the violin is going down in scale as it adds emphasis onto 00:27:248 (1) - upon being clicked. theres a repeated sound D:
00:58:307 (1,1,1,1) - why are there NC's? nothing has changed, and you could use use 1/2 circle jumps instead since it adds buildup for the kiai part. theres no need for these jumps
01:28:307 (1,1,1) - ^ (it would greatly emphasize the ending since the ending is a strong beat itself.)
[normal]
you never change SV (slider velocity) in normal, it just isn't right. usually, yeah. but i'll remap if its necessary
your ds has to be consistent, just because it doesn't show up in aimod doesn't mean all ds is perfect. this for example 00:08:189 (2,1) - has 0.88 ds between it while the rest of the notes have 1.0 here are a few ds issues i pointed out (either too far or too close) fixing them
00:20:366 (2,3) - 0.94 ds
00:27:248 (1,2) - 1.15 ds
00:28:130 (2,1) - 0.91 ds
00:38:366 (1,2) - not sure about this one, because stacks aren't recommended in lower diffs. also the fact it's tapping 1/2 doesn't feel right, but i see a lot of other normal diffs do this, so it's up to you if you want to change it. its okay if not abused
00:38:542 (2,3) - 0.87
00:42:777 (1,2) - 0.89
00:43:307 (2,1) - ^
00:48:248 (3,1) - 1.08
00:57:601 (2) - ds issue between prev and next note
and a ton of other ds issues.
that's all from me now, good luck thank you for the mod
osuskrub wrote:
monogatari <3
[General]
add a few more tags like "light novel" and "ed" so that your map could be more accessible for searching. yee
combo colors !
[Normal]
00:11:366 (2,1) - visually it would be nicer if 2 is tilted a bit more downwards to have a better looking entry into 1 done
00:27:248 (1) - this slider alone looks fairly empty in rhythm, personally it would be better to make it 1/1 with a note on 00:27:777 - i think its fine
00:37:130 (2) - this note doesn't seem to be mapped to any sound. care to explain? removing the note would make it feel very awkward, it plays more naturally with a note
00:39:248 (3) - ctrl + j would make the patterning look nicer sure
00:43:307 (2) - don't see the need for a sharper slider while the song is in a fairly calm state, making it a smooth curve would fit better yeah
00:59:719 (1) - a drum sampleset fits a lot better on the head of this slider, normal sampleset sounds very off yes, also added a finish
01:05:366 (1,2,3,4) - usually for a normal diff you shouldn't have this many consecutive circles. i understand that you are emphasizing the vocals, though the max circles i would put for these gaps is 3. for the vocals, yeah
01:06:777 (1,2,3) - this could be cleaned up a bit, the angle from 2,3 looks a bit eh distance snap
01:21:601 (4) - moving this a bit upwards would make the exit from the slider a bit cleaner up by a bit
[Hard]
00:04:660 (1,2,3) - how come 1 is tilted to the left while 2,3 are to the right? should they all be the same? for visual, it looks better
00:18:777 (1,2) - align these 2 more like this, https://puu.sh/wlpXf/de3dd5807c.jpg having them like this emphasize the "dun" sound better
01:08:719 (2,3) - the distance between these objects is unecessarily high, also i think ctrl + g the rhythm would be better i did smth with it
there's not much for me to say on this diff! good job! thank you owo
[Insane]
00:39:866 - missing a note here adding one here means adding some in other places as well, i like the way it is now
00:49:836 (3) - instead of making this just a circle make it a 1/2 slider having a little pause here plays nicely, making it into a 1/2 would also mean destroying the triangle ;w;
00:58:307 (1,1,1,1) - why is the last 1 different than the others? wouldn't it be cool to have them the same direction? sure why not
01:05:366 (1,2,3,4) - emphasize the vocals in 2,3,4 by not making them the same as 1 its fine
01:11:366 (2,3,4) - switch the arrangement of these sliders im not sure what you mean, but i removed the 1/4s and did some change
that's all I have to say! good job and good luck on this mapset! thank you so much !!