Hello, M4M from my queue
Tragedy
Amazing map, have a star
Good luck c:
Edit: had to make few changes in mod because apparently I wasn't using updated version XD
- You're kinda missing oportuninty to name the diff like one of their other songs/album
- 00:24:809 (1) - the shape is kinda confusing imo; if you put last point to the other side it'll be clear how the slider goes
- 00:26:151 (6) - not sure why do you change the direction here if the change in music is here 00:26:230 (1) - )
- 00:45:414 (2) - I'd move the stream to make this stack with 00:44:309 (2)
- 00:45:572 (4,1) - I know you wanted to emphasize this, but the spacing is rather too big and unexpected; if you move the stream like I said above, it'll be just fine without removing the emphasis
- 00:45:651 - I don't think kiai is necessary here; if you want that "flash" effect, use SB instead
- 01:35:546 (3,4) - the blanket could be improved here
- 01:53:546 (1) - remove NC
- 01:54:809 (6) - this part is slow so I'd put NC on this to match other combos
- 02:07:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - you should use those shapes more in this part (instead of few curvy ones)
- 02:29:862 (1,2) - try to avoid overlaping like this (1 - over, 2 - under; it's fine the other way) as it looks rather bad
- 02:56:230 (5,2) - not perfectly stacked
- 03:21:020 (1) - this is the only time when you use slider instead of 2 circles to express this sound
- 03:32:072 (10,1) - I'm sure you can get better blanket than this
- 03:33:178 (3,4) - because of the stacking those 2 objects go off-screen; move 03:33:178 (3,4,5) - down by at least 4 pixels (ctrl+arrow down)
- 03:56:704 (3) - if you move this to x:400 y:219 to "stack" with 03:56:072 (1) - it'll look better imo
- 04:42:493 (1) - I highly recommend changing this into 1/2 slider or spacing following circles
- 05:04:124 - there's no sound here; instead move it back by 1/4 for 2 doubles to match the rhythm here
- 05:19:440 (7) - again goes out of the screen; move the stack down by 2px
- 05:29:466 (2,3) - rotate the slider for those two to create a straight line (currently the circles goes down a bit)
- 05:37:440 - right now it's hard to tell what's the gap between two objects here; adding a circle at this point would make the transition between instruments you're mapping to smoother (possible circle placement)
- 06:04:598 (1,2,3,4,1) - it's hard to tell it's 1/3; maybe make the reverse slider with red dot in the middle + space circles a bit
- 07:11:387 (1,2,3) - again, it's hard to spot the rhythm change here (you use the same spacing for 1/2 rhythm); make the spacing for those three stand out by spacing them significantly or noticeable lower spacing)
- 07:15:650 (6,7,8) - stack this on top of 07:16:913 (4) -
- 07:48:177 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the rhythm change clear the same way as I've said earlier
- 10:08:704 - , 10:11:230 - , 10:16:283 - make those notes clickable since you use different rhythm later on (10:14:072 (1,2) - )
Amazing map, have a star
Good luck c:
Edit: had to make few changes in mod because apparently I wasn't using updated version XD