Wishkey
Wishkey wrote:
Yow!
- 00:03:651 (3) - 2 circles here? goes well with the next 2 similar parts since its the only rythm that isnt identical to the next sections ye i guess i changed my mind after the first one
- 00:13:441 (1) - would shorten this by 1/4 or 1/2, having that next section play as 3-3-3 plays a lot better imo changed
- 00:14:862 (1,2,3) - can increase the spacing a bit if you want since the music is stilll building up like getting louder or nerf 00:14:388 (1,2,3) - to like 0.75ish nerfed
- 00:21:651 (3) - would be cool if this would cut in the blanket of the upcoming stream i tried something
- 00:24:493 (9,10,11,12,1) - try rotating this by 10° makes it flow smoother from rotated
- 00:44:704 (1) - not really anyway you can expect this to be a double return coming from the prev ones, plays a bit frustrating it could be by the direction where the next object is.
also 00:43:756 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - here the return placement is a bit weird unlike your prev ones, those drums are basicly paired in groups of 2 so the prev ones having the first 2 clickable made sense but here its the 1st and 4th which doesnt really fit with the music imo im emphasizing the first beat so idk uhhh keeping that rn- 00:46:756 (2,3) - these are extremely weak without that guitar still yet they kinda play the same atm, maybe nerf the ds for these pre-guitar ones to show the difference in music a bit more? you can even delete them if you want since its not really audible as it is atm aa but what about the sick ride cymbal in the background
- 01:00:493 (1) - would remove the finish here, the double finish doesnt sound that good and the clap sound takes priority here removed finish but i replaced it with whistle. this is the hitsound theme i went for, following the drums a lot
- 01:42:020 (4,5,1) - pretty linear here makes it lose a bit of impact from 01:42:493 (1) - if you could move that one lower or something for a bit more movement that'd be nice tried something
- 01:08:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - the rythm sounds a bit off here compared to the music, 01:09:493 (2,3) - 01:10:441 (2,3) - etc ,thoughts about control + g the rythm for these? follows the guitar and you have the slider starting on a stronger beat na,
i followed the drum beat, emphasizing the bass and snare- 03:05:546 (7) - delete finish happens a bit more in this diff sometimes you got finishes for those pre downbeat beat and sometimes don't like at 03:09:335 (7) - so I'd go over the diff a bit to look for these lesser finishes that also have a clap and just place the clap there, it fits near the 7 min part tho replaced with whistle like before, went over the map as well
- 04:14:072 (1,2,3) - loses a lot of momentum here, maybe stack 04:13:756 (7) - on 04:12:651 (2) - so everyhing moves a bit up and you can blanket 04:14:546 (2) - under 1 oh yes this is exactly what that place needed
- 04:35:862 (1) - move the tail a bit up for some better leadin to (2) i moved it a tiny bit
- 05:37:124 (2,1) - the 3/4 break felt a bit weird here, maybe extend the muted end of 05:37:124 (2) - to the downbeat? or shorten that one by 1/4 is also an option it kinda follows the rhythm guitar's deep riff, also it gives the feel like the song skips a beat, which it basically does there
- 05:53:388 (4) - 1/2 sldier + circle isntead? the middle has the same tick sound like at 05:50:861 (4,5) changed
- 07:56:861 (11,12,1) - would move this a bit more to the left for a bit smoother flow since 07:57:019 (1,2) - plays really hard atm due to the prev straight flow moved
- 08:18:492 (1,2) - if possible I'd make these overlap in some way so its more noticable that these are 1/4 since it kinda looks like 1/2 atm since I think up until this point you always used a form of overlap for 1/4 slider into slider or a return or just 3 circles could also work i don't really want to change the pattern placement here, but i used nc, shuld make it noticable that something's diffrent
- 08:27:019 (1) - delete sliderslide whisle thank you, it's really hard to find these mistakes when you have sliderslide whistle disabled
- 09:37:441 (2) - sounds abit overmapped since you ignored these in prev parts like 09:34:914 - (I think you can go full piano here and just ignore the vocals too if you want since this parts is so weak so the less dense rythm the better imo but up to you) na i didn't ignore that part before,
i actually did follow the vocals here. he says the final part of "all" there, soo i put circle- 10:02:072 (4) - would go for a stream here since theyre so strong and to avoid having reverse sliders with different number of returns in the same combo sure
- 10:09:493 (2,3,1) - flow transistion can be improved here, maybe stack 10:09:493 (2) - at the tail of 10:10:598 (3) - and rotate (3) a bit something like this perhaps i stacked the 2, though changed the slider a bit differently. idk maybe this works
- 10:37:125 (1) - sliderslide whisle thanks again
good stuff dude gl! thank you x)
Shishou
Shishou wrote:
hi from my mod q
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mod this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/610738 :ok_hand:
[Tragedy]
01:40:599 (1,4) - overlap this two put this at x 110 y91 to make the flow good flows fine imo
01:43:441 (1,2,3) - bad flow try doing this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8224781 sure
01:48:178 (1,4) - put this at x12 y144 to fix the reading issue it's hard to read it beacause of this slider 01:48:178 (1) putting it there makes it overlap very awkwardly, it's not that hard to read it either because half of the circle is clearly visible
01:51:493 (2) - make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8224809 so this part 01:51:335 (2) - can be hit i put the reverse slider there but not the way like it's on the picture
02:04:125 (3,4,5) - to close from the previous note. move this to x291 y368 ok
02:29:546 (10,1) - blanket? done
04:30:809 (6,1) - blanket this two? na keeping the overlap
04:44:072 (1) - put this at x396 y 88 aight
05:02:072 (1,1) - stack this two? i want to keep some distance between these 05:03:335 (2,1)
05:37:598 (1) - move this ? it's confusing 05:36:809 (1) - stack it there maybe? no, here's where reading comes in
05:47:703 (1,3) - i think this notes is too far? i'm emphasizingt that section a lot yes, but idk, keeping that for now
05:51:335 (6) - nc unnecessary
06:07:124 (1,2,3,4) - increase distance here? i don't think that's needed either, at that point the song is fading into the calm part already
07:24:177 (3,5) - overlap to increase distance . you increse your distance here 07:24:019 (2,3) i think that's probably big enough distance?
these have blanket as well 07:23:545 (1,3)
07:37:756 (4) - give this slider a shape? it's identical to the previous one, quite unnecessary imo
08:27:019 (1) - remove slider hitwhistle done from previous mod
09:31:125 (1,2) - blanket yep
10:37:125 (1) - remove slider hitwhistle? ^^
that's all
good luck
nc map and hitsounds btw " - drummer -" xD thanks x)
thanks for modding!