pls no more drama.
General
- Turn off Widescreen Storyboard on Easy.
- Your combo colours are slightly inconsistent (Colour 2 in Hard and Colour 3 in Magical):
Easy
- 00:42:391 (5,2) - Slightly messy here with the overlap. Make the gaps between 1-2-5 even if you can.
- 03:37:248 (1) - I wouldn't recommend using such a compact slider shape for an Easy since it can confuse newer players.
- 01:39:819 (3) - 01:02:105 (3) - Minor: The blankets could be very slightly improved if you care about that.
Normal
- 00:41:533 (4,5,6) - You could use some red tick rhythms here to highlight the tom drums that get introduced here. The rhythm density doesn't need to be lower at this point yet.
- 00:55:891 - 02:21:605 - Personally I wouldn't miss this vocal beat over the slider.
- 04:15:819 (1,2) - Maybe slightly change the angle of slider 1 so that the visual flow is a little better, since it's currently not pointing straight into circle 2.
Hard
- 00:54:712 - 02:20:426 - The current rhythm doesn't really emphasise this blue tick beat well enough in my opinion, since it's a passive beat surrounded by active ones. I would aim to make this active if possible.
- 01:30:605 - There is a triplet (1/6) melody starting on this beat, so it seems inappropriate to place a triple before this.
- 01:37:462 - 03:25:462 - 04:06:605 - 04:08:319 - 04:10:033 - 04:13:462 - 04:15:176 - Triplet sounds here too. Looks like it might be intentional? But I guess it just feels weird to me having the fast rhythm before it gets fast in the main melody.
- 03:34:141 - There's a blue tick beat here that's missed over the slider.
- 03:49:248 (3,4) - Not sure if it's intentional, but if you slow this part down, you'll hear that this rhythm doesn't follow the vocal rhythm accurately.
Magical Book of Illustrations
- 00:08:319 (3) - 00:10:033 (3) etc - Would making these a 1/6 reverse not work?
- 00:55:891 (2) - I feel like a Ctrl+G would work so the angle would add more emphasis on the slider body, which seems appropriate for this sound. Might want to consider Ctrl+G on slider 3 too if you do this.
- 03:03:176 (3) - I would consider making this two circles to emphasise the drums better with active beats.
- 03:25:462 (6) - I expected more 1/6 streams for this solo section personally. They would follow the rhythm better too.
- 03:37:248 (1,1) - I don't feel that this large spacing is appropraite for when the music gets quieter.
- 03:51:176 (2,3,4) - I'd space these a little closer so that it reads as 1/6 better, since it's still a quiet part of the song.
Good luck.
General
- Turn off Widescreen Storyboard on Easy.
- Your combo colours are slightly inconsistent (Colour 2 in Hard and Colour 3 in Magical):
Easy
- 00:42:391 (5,2) - Slightly messy here with the overlap. Make the gaps between 1-2-5 even if you can.
- 03:37:248 (1) - I wouldn't recommend using such a compact slider shape for an Easy since it can confuse newer players.
- 01:39:819 (3) - 01:02:105 (3) - Minor: The blankets could be very slightly improved if you care about that.
Normal
- 00:41:533 (4,5,6) - You could use some red tick rhythms here to highlight the tom drums that get introduced here. The rhythm density doesn't need to be lower at this point yet.
- 00:55:891 - 02:21:605 - Personally I wouldn't miss this vocal beat over the slider.
- 04:15:819 (1,2) - Maybe slightly change the angle of slider 1 so that the visual flow is a little better, since it's currently not pointing straight into circle 2.
Hard
- 00:54:712 - 02:20:426 - The current rhythm doesn't really emphasise this blue tick beat well enough in my opinion, since it's a passive beat surrounded by active ones. I would aim to make this active if possible.
- 01:37:462 - 03:25:462 - 04:06:605 - 04:08:319 - 04:10:033 - 04:13:462 - 04:15:176 - Triplet sounds here too.
- 03:34:141 - There's a blue tick beat here that's missed over the slider.
- 03:49:248 (3,4) - Not sure if it's intentional, but if you slow this part down, you'll hear that this rhythm doesn't follow the vocal rhythm accurately.
Magical Book of Illustrations
- 00:08:319 (3) - 00:10:033 (3) etc - Would making these a 1/6 reverse not work?
- 00:55:891 (2) - I feel like a Ctrl+G would work so the angle would add more emphasis on the slider body, which seems appropriate for this sound. Might want to consider Ctrl+G on slider 3 too if you do this.
- 03:03:176 (3) - I would consider making this two circles to emphasise the drums better with active beats.
- 03:25:462 (6) - I expected more 1/6 streams for this solo section personally. They would follow the rhythm better too.
- 03:37:248 (1,1) - I don't feel that this large spacing is appropraite for when the music gets quieter.
- 03:51:176 (2,3,4) - I'd space these a little closer so that it reads as 1/6 better, since it's still a quiet part of the song.
Good luck.