Hey there, M4M as promised ( a bit late tho ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ )
I gotta say, that’s a very solid map. Consider calling a BN in the near future.
Good luck with pushing this map !
Bummer
00:24:507 (2) - I’d replace that guy by 2 circles, since by doing a red tick slider like this you’re missing out on the emphasis of your snare hitsound
00:41:757 (2,3) - normal flow here while all sliders snapped to that sound ( eg 00:38:757 (3) ) don’t flow visually ( their slider shapes don’t imply circular flow as shown here )
01:02:757 (4,5) - I think a rhythm like this would reflect that weird sound at 01:03:078 (5) better
01:30:614 (4) - I’m pretty sure this is 1/8 ? Especially since next time that sound appears at 01:33:185 (2,3) you chose a 1/8 rhythm
01:37:900 - maybe silence that sliderend since there’s no sound here ?
02:52:900 (4,5,4) - why are those different ? I hear the same sound
03:30:828 (8,1,2) - almost linear flow here, why not keep that back and forth structure from before since 03:31:042 (1) is just a carry-on of the buildup so not really enough difference to change flow
03:39:614 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - slider stream ? You’re missing out on a lot of sounds there and I don’t think it would be overdone to catch those since you’re at the climax of your buildup in terms of rhythm density ( to the player at least )
03:49:257 (1,2,3) - might wanna do 4 sliders here cause that weird sound repeats 4 times
04:31:042 (1) - idk this slidershape really feels out of place compared to the others
04:48:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - still missing out on those 1/8 sounds huh
05:08:614 (6) - I don’t get why you skip the downbeat there as well as the weird sound after while 04:55:042 (7) does the opposite for the same sound
00:41:757 (2,3) - normal flow here while all sliders snapped to that sound ( eg 00:38:757 (3) ) don’t flow visually ( their slider shapes don’t imply circular flow as shown here )
01:02:757 (4,5) - I think a rhythm like this would reflect that weird sound at 01:03:078 (5) better
01:30:614 (4) - I’m pretty sure this is 1/8 ? Especially since next time that sound appears at 01:33:185 (2,3) you chose a 1/8 rhythm
01:37:900 - maybe silence that sliderend since there’s no sound here ?
02:52:900 (4,5,4) - why are those different ? I hear the same sound
03:30:828 (8,1,2) - almost linear flow here, why not keep that back and forth structure from before since 03:31:042 (1) is just a carry-on of the buildup so not really enough difference to change flow
03:39:614 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - slider stream ? You’re missing out on a lot of sounds there and I don’t think it would be overdone to catch those since you’re at the climax of your buildup in terms of rhythm density ( to the player at least )
03:49:257 (1,2,3) - might wanna do 4 sliders here cause that weird sound repeats 4 times
04:31:042 (1) - idk this slidershape really feels out of place compared to the others
04:48:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - still missing out on those 1/8 sounds huh
05:08:614 (6) - I don’t get why you skip the downbeat there as well as the weird sound after while 04:55:042 (7) does the opposite for the same sound
I gotta say, that’s a very solid map. Consider calling a BN in the near future.
Good luck with pushing this map !