Hey this mod was long before because of some missing notes and overmapping in the guitar solo.
But damn mr. Harby is op.
So I'm just going to point out a few issues I have with the patterning of this.
Sorta safe chart disregarding some of the bursts in SHD so there is not that much to say.
man i suck so much at 4k
Have fun ranking this o/
But damn mr. Harby is op.
So I'm just going to point out a few issues I have with the patterning of this.
Sorta safe chart disregarding some of the bursts in SHD so there is not that much to say.
man i suck so much at 4k
puxtu's Super Hard Ducks
As a general comment some of the bursts during the "easy parts" are VERY easy to mash and don't contribute much to the difficulty balance of this chart. You could go a bit harsher on the patterning of these. (ex: 01:13:899 - you could jumptrill this entire thing and still get mostly rainbow 300s easily)
00:48:865 - During this section I noticed that you put most of the pressure in the second and the third column. Try to sort things out a bit here. Also try to alternate which hand the minijack (00:48:968 (48968|1,49072|1) - this one for example) happens for every triplet you make. The problem with this section is that besides not being a full-fledged 290 js like the section at the end of the guitar solo it's still dense, slightly rough patterned, and lasts for too long, so it ends up being way harder than every other section. That whole suggestion also counts for the second triplet section.
00:53:830 - Alternatively you could also make those 2 note chords to ease this section a bit, but I guess you really don't want to do that.
00:56:830 - That 4 note jack at the first column is no joke, mainly in the middle of what i like to call the hardest section of the song, try to break it. I did this.
00:59:624 - A bit too right hand biased. I think the problem could be solved by ctrl+h'ing this section: 01:00:658 - to 01:01:899 - .
02:00:865 - jumptrillable pattern
02:04:589 - also very jumptrillable, try to avoid patterns that are too stair-y (1234/4321 or 1243 4312, anything that resembles these kind of things, you might want to playtest a bit for these)
02:09:658 - ^
02:49:899 - ^
02:16:899 - All the three note jacks (02:16:899 (136899|1,137003|1,137106|1,137210|0,137313|0,137417|0,137520|1,137624|1,137727|1) - ) are on the left hand, things are a bit biased here, move those around.
02:21:761 - Same here but for the right hand. The problem with this hand bias is not that it's "unbalanced" between the hands and tires one more than another, but that these kind of patterns are sorta awkward and uncomfortable to play.
00:48:865 - During this section I noticed that you put most of the pressure in the second and the third column. Try to sort things out a bit here. Also try to alternate which hand the minijack (00:48:968 (48968|1,49072|1) - this one for example) happens for every triplet you make. The problem with this section is that besides not being a full-fledged 290 js like the section at the end of the guitar solo it's still dense, slightly rough patterned, and lasts for too long, so it ends up being way harder than every other section. That whole suggestion also counts for the second triplet section.
00:53:830 - Alternatively you could also make those 2 note chords to ease this section a bit, but I guess you really don't want to do that.
00:56:830 - That 4 note jack at the first column is no joke, mainly in the middle of what i like to call the hardest section of the song, try to break it. I did this.
00:59:624 - A bit too right hand biased. I think the problem could be solved by ctrl+h'ing this section: 01:00:658 - to 01:01:899 - .
02:00:865 - jumptrillable pattern
02:04:589 - also very jumptrillable, try to avoid patterns that are too stair-y (1234/4321 or 1243 4312, anything that resembles these kind of things, you might want to playtest a bit for these)
02:09:658 - ^
02:49:899 - ^
02:16:899 - All the three note jacks (02:16:899 (136899|1,137003|1,137106|1,137210|0,137313|0,137417|0,137520|1,137624|1,137727|1) - ) are on the left hand, things are a bit biased here, move those around.
02:21:761 - Same here but for the right hand. The problem with this hand bias is not that it's "unbalanced" between the hands and tires one more than another, but that these kind of patterns are sorta awkward and uncomfortable to play.
puxtu's Shooting Cunts
I think the same thing can be said about the bursts here. Though I wouldn't recommend you to change them that much, just following something that's not the usual 1234/1243 based patterns should be already pretty nice.
01:55:899 (115899|2,116003|2,116106|2) - Oof, break this up, it makes this part of the solo harder to combo than the dense section at the end of the stream.
02:21:865 - to 02:22:382 - To give the end of this section a bit more attention, I'd toughen the patterns a bit, it's as easy as most of the bursts in this map.
01:55:899 (115899|2,116003|2,116106|2) - Oof, break this up, it makes this part of the solo harder to combo than the dense section at the end of the stream.
02:21:865 - to 02:22:382 - To give the end of this section a bit more attention, I'd toughen the patterns a bit, it's as easy as most of the bursts in this map.
general comments you can completely ignore
I think in terms of "technical correctness", it's already pretty solid. But this map overall feels so... welp.
In another words I only felt like you went "boom shaka laka here's my weiner" in the solo and that other triplet section. The rest feels pretty bland like it's there just so there aren't any sections with no notes.
The song doesn't help you that much in this situation, and I'd probably need to make huge paragraphs to fully explain to you an option on how to make this less stale. You'd also need to remap most of the patterns and have to go through the proccess of modding all again, so I'm not going to do that.
Just keep these things in mind next time you map a song of the sort. Instead of going through the repetitive proccess of mapping the drums in the most mechanical way possible try to express the song in some different ways. If you want a hint, in this chart you could've made it so you're technically following the drums but give the player the impression he's also playing the guitars through a bit of pattern manipulation. I'll let you have your ideas on how you'd do things like that.
In the end it's just taking more risks for your map's quality and making the modding proccess evidently longer, but believe me, having your chart expressing things in a new or at least more expressive/non-mechanical way leaves a good taste in your mouth.
Then again that's just my opinion, feel free to ignore all that's written here if you disagree. You don't need to leave a reply for this in your next post either.
In another words I only felt like you went "boom shaka laka here's my weiner" in the solo and that other triplet section. The rest feels pretty bland like it's there just so there aren't any sections with no notes.
The song doesn't help you that much in this situation, and I'd probably need to make huge paragraphs to fully explain to you an option on how to make this less stale. You'd also need to remap most of the patterns and have to go through the proccess of modding all again, so I'm not going to do that.
Just keep these things in mind next time you map a song of the sort. Instead of going through the repetitive proccess of mapping the drums in the most mechanical way possible try to express the song in some different ways. If you want a hint, in this chart you could've made it so you're technically following the drums but give the player the impression he's also playing the guitars through a bit of pattern manipulation. I'll let you have your ideas on how you'd do things like that.
In the end it's just taking more risks for your map's quality and making the modding proccess evidently longer, but believe me, having your chart expressing things in a new or at least more expressive/non-mechanical way leaves a good taste in your mouth.
Then again that's just my opinion, feel free to ignore all that's written here if you disagree. You don't need to leave a reply for this in your next post either.
Have fun ranking this o/