hello o/ m4m from my queue
[Ekoro]
oh my
00:19:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - agree with what cxu said about this, also i think you could keep this just 1 combo without any added NCS
00:21:968 (5) - would NC this personally
00:41:106 (4) - could try to blanket this with 1 if you wanted to
00:42:037 (3,4) - playability wise i'd add a slider here, it's pretty overkill to singletap 290 after doing a bunch of the bursts/triples you did before
00:42:451 (3,4,5) - 00:44:106 (3,4,5) - 00:45:761 (3,4,5) - could do this to be consistent with the previous guitar sections you mapped
http://puu.sh/pBDMn/695107decd.jpg00:53:830 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd do something similar to what you did here 02:16:589 (1) - , it's pretty painful to do 290 triples for so long
01:02:520 (3,4,5,6) - would increase the spacing of these jumps (and all the other ones in this kiai) to fit 01:04:175 (3,4,5,6) - , again as cxu mentioned this is a bit underwhelming
01:31:072 (1) - pretty sure i hear a triple that can be mapped here
01:42:037 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i'd gradually decrease spacing here as the guitar notes are going down the scale
01:43:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - same here
01:54:658 (1,2,3,4) - isn't this a 1/3rd?
01:57:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would decrease spacing here because notes are going down the scale again, also this would have a greater impact when you increased spacing here 01:57:555 (1) -
01:58:382 (1) - doesn't this slider end at 01:59:003 - ?
02:26:934 (3,4,5,6) - if you denied my suggestion about 01:02:520 (3,4,5,6) - then i would make this set of jumps more spaced to be consistent with 01:04:175 (3,4,5,6) -
02:30:244 (3,4,5,6) - same here^
02:33:555 (3,4,5,6) - seems like you did increase the spacing for this one

EDIT:
[woof]
00:44:210 (4,6,2) - 00:44:210 (4,6,2) - these could look better imo, i'd personally move the red anchor a little bit towards the sliderend
00:53:934 (2,2,2,2) - i think you should replace these with repeat sliders as you didn't seem the ignore the drum rhythm on this pattern 00:48:865 (1) - (also to be consistent with the second time where you did use repeats)
01:00:761 (2) - why not start the stream at 01:00:658 - instead?
01:15:348 (1) - i'd reduce the SVs here down to 0.8 to accommodate for the spacing decrease you do here 01:15:658 (2) -
01:18:658 (1) - i think ctrlg would be cool on this one since the guitar notes are going down the scale (also has a better lead to 01:18:969 (2) - )
01:23:624 (1) - personal thing but i'd ctrlj this since 01:23:417 (5) - is leading for the slider to be concaving down, not up
01:31:899 (1,2,3,4) - i know you rejected it but i kinda have to second what mazzerin said about this

perhaps remaking that part of the stream to make it more spaced?
01:32:175 (1) - i'd nc this because major spacing change
01:33:555 (1,2) - not a fan of this overlap especially for a map this intense, i'd kinda move this up and curve to the left (kind of a rough draft, excuse if its not perfect)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/545087901:54:726 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - unsnapped 1/3?
01:58:382 (1) - i'd move the bottommost red anchor a bit more down to emphasize the guitar sound better
02:14:934 (1) - i dont think 2 anchors are necessary

02:23:210 (1) - maybe shortening this to the red tick and adding a note at 02:24:390 - ? would be better emphasis
[Extra]
00:21:969 (1) - would NC this personally
00:24:244 (1) - same here to differentiate between the 2 squares
01:44:313 (1,2,3,4) - don't think the guitar notes call for such a drastic spacing change
01:48:865 (3) - this is kinda random, maybe add a similar slider to 01:48:451 (1,2) - ?
01:51:762 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - mazz wtf this type of flow at 290 bpm isn't very playable LOL pls change back to straight line stream, line singletaps aren't that diffiicult and really i dont think many people are going to singletap this section anyways
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/545097602:25:693 (1,2) - i dont think curving these is very necessary, could always make them straight to fit with the others
02:29:831 (1,2) - also following the logic of your last 2 sets of sliders, i'd curve these to be consistent
02:45:348 (3,4) - 02:46:175 (3,4) - i dont see a reason to make these not spaced like 02:45:123 (1,2) -
02:46:796 (1,2) - why not make the same spacing as the ones before?
here you go, gl c: