Ohaaaai M4M
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- 00:24:857 (4,5) - You will need some more space between these to indicate the pause, use spacing like 00:26:278 (1,2) -
- 00:41:120 (5,6) - Same direction maybe, I know they are ctrl + j'd but idk it doesn't look too good to me
- 00:43:488 (8) - Try stacking it on 00:43:646 (9) -
- 00:46:015 (5) - ^ 00:46:172 (6) -
- 00:50:593 (6,7) - Okay nvm you really love to do this, won't mention more of these
- 01:02:751 (3) - Try ending it at 01:03:225 - and putting a note at 01:03:383 -
- 01:10:804 (6,1) - Misleading spacing again!
- 01:18:541 (3) - Try x184y30, maybe adjust 01:19:015 (4) - accordingly
- 02:03:699 (2,3,4) - I highly recommend making the kickslider (02:03:857 (4) - ) more visible under 02:03:699 (2,3) -
- 02:13:646 (1,2,1,2) - Uhh? Please explain why you did this, spacing is way too misleading, but that's sooo obvious that you NEED to have a reason for it, so I won't mention more of these
- 02:40:488 - to 02:50:278 - Is pretty confusing at first since you can't really hear the actual rythm that you are following over the hitsounds, making it seem unpredictable to players, but the only way to fix this is to follow the melody instead so idk :/
- 03:06:541 (3,4,5) - Fix the misleading spacing
- 03:14:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just saying, this stream isn't completely straight
- 03:19:567 (5) - Maybe you can somehow make it clearer that this note is here? Since the stacking makes is pretty confusing and hard to see that there is a note between 03:19:172 (4,6) -
- 03:32:120 (2) - How am I supposed to know that I have to press this note 1/4 when you have constantly been stacking them in the same way when it was 1/2? (Example in the beginning of the map: 00:28:015 (7,8) - Example right after this part: 03:45:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) Consider doing the same as
- 03:28:488 (2,3) - for all of these
- 03:49:330 (1) - Idk if this NC is fully necessary
- 04:46:488 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - Too difficult to figure out what you are following here, incredibly confusing and unnecessary
- 04:51:857 (1,1,1,1) - Unnecessary nc's imo
- 05:41:909 (8,9,1) - I suggest decreasing the spacing of these as it will flow better, however how much you decrease it is up to you
- 05:58:804 (2,3,1,2) - How am I able to differentiate this from these 03:59:751 (1,2,1,2) - ?
- 06:07:330 (1,2) - Put these closer or something please