Imperishable
- 00:29:431 (3) - I don't believe with the blanket of this slider suits it in any ways. How about adjust it to something like this so it gives off a rotation instead of laying flat http://puu.sh/gYhuu/e5d9c8af32.jpg
- 00:53:746 (7) - Move the 7 down a little more so it doesn't look like an imbalance going through that stream
- 01:03:378 (4,5) - Might as well stack these since where the (5) is placed makes it awkward to play the stream, maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/gYhIU/1af90e535b.jpg
- 01:18:694 (3) - I can't hear the hitsound well here? The clap doesn't bring off the loudless of the drum or it's just in there where I can't hear it
- 01:23:746 (4) - Move this not a little more to the left so it has a more angular transition than just moving downwards, since most of the jumps here are angled, might as well do it to all of them http://puu.sh/gYhWU/f95e3dadfa.jpg
- 01:24:694 (2) - Drum beat on head? might need to add a clap or something here since the beats resemble of this note 01:24:378 (1)
- 01:37:325 (2) - This note destroyed the circular rotation you had going on and that would've been pretty awesome to continue rather than cutting it part way, looks something like this to continue with the movement you had but adjust it to your own accord since this was just an example http://puu.sh/gYi3B/8a8e677295.jpg
- 01:41:431 (4) - Space this out so the even numbers are same spacing as odd, example (2) and (4), (3) and (5) and how about this pattern so it flows nicer into into the next NC? http://puu.sh/gYie0/1f55a7f34c.jpg
- 03:07:483 (7,8,9,1) - A cool pattern would to make a star here since it rotates along with 03:06:536 (5) and because it didn't seem to intuitive to play a pattern that is diagonal and then a slider that didn't seem fitting to me, something to this extent http://puu.sh/gYire/1abf23258d.jpg
- 03:20:167 (2,3) - NC for each of them so the player knows there are changes in these notes and that the song changed it that way.
- 04:00:536 (2) - Same as ^
- 04:25:641 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - How about this? http://puu.sh/gYiHv/a560d3e0c3.jpg
That's probably it, it was nice an very very challenging to play. I hope this mod can help you and I look forward to the mod