1. Eternal Night (6,3 stars, 1629 notes)
2. Gezo's Oni (4,78 stars, 1927 notes)

Meramipop<3<3

Eternal Night - Me
Oni - Unmei Muma

Hime Zoldyck wrote:

A good map to train jumps and streams

SpajdeR wrote:

Great map, Tochi! Cannot wait to see it ranked! <3

Presidente Miau wrote:

Hi.

Wouldn't you like making more diffs?

yugijedi wrote:

Good job man!! <3

yugijedi wrote:

Imperishable

00:32:431 (1,1,1) - should have the same shape They are same rhythm, but both place fine. So i don't need to change the shape.

change 00:57:694 (4) - into an 2/1 lying S-Slider because the repeater feels weird The repeat is a blanket slider.

move 01:11:588 (8) - to (332/356) Fixed!

01:16:799 (1) - uaargh! avoid the start and end touch of a slider which shouldn't underline somerthing very crazy or individual.. Fixed!

01:28:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - jumps feel weird because of full overlap of (3,5) lol, it's not overlap it's called stacking. But i only changed a bit.

02:34:641 (3,4) - rotate by 10 degrees for readable purposes Fixed!

add a circle at 03:00:299 (184/224) Sounds overmapped.

03:26:431 (4,5,6) - ^^ and move them up a bit but you know why ?

try to have a constant spacestack distance, people will notice that, this is a sign of a pro mapper. for example here 03:37:325 (2,4) - and 03:09:852 (3,5) - I do that for easier reading.

04:16:167 (1,2) - Ctrl+J for better flow The flow is fine here imo

04:26:036 (9) - should be the first one who has an increased distance (not (8) ) becuase increasing the distance during streams at a blue tick is bad. ??? The spaced streams starts on a white tick xD

04:28:799 (1,2) - ^^ ?

04:35:746 (1) - just beautiful from here, nothing to say !

05:13:641 (4,5,6) - little distance fail. Fixed!

sorry for short mod...... that was it ~ Thanks for the mod!

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ M4M request in-game.

- General :

1. Your bg is not 1366*768 so be happy I offer you a good one http://puu.sh/gxi1y/a3e0555dfb.jpg. Thanks!
2. According to this, title should be 永夜, and artist めらみぽっぷ.Fixed!
3. Add to tag 奉 Sasage . Fixed!

- Imperishable :

1. AR9.2 and HP6 (really subjective for AR). Fixed!
2. 00:21:220 (1) - Maybe curve it a little more to get the movement with 00:21:694 (2) - more smoother. That would break the DS. And a little more doesn't do not make any difference, since it isn't a blanket.
3. 00:28:325 (4) - Align it with 00:27:852 (2,3) - on x:344 to get a clean pattern. I think u mean y:344
4. 00:29:904 (1,2,3) - Honestly this pattern look a little bad. I suggest this http://puu.sh/gxpmy/5fad72f570.jpg , but if you want to keep your pattern try to spread 00:29:904 (1,2) - like this to make it better to play http://puu.sh/gxpw3/72e6bd339c.jpg. Ok.
5. 00:51:220 (5) - You should replace this slider by 2 circles because there is a strong drum hit on 00:51:220 - and this have much more emphasis with a circle. Changed it to 1 circle.
6. 00:53:115 (2) - To improve a little flow, more slider's end to 428:312. Fixed!
7. 00:54:378 (2,3,4,5) - I think jump should be between 00:54:694 (3,4) - because voice is stronger and not 00:54:378 (2,3) - .Fixed!
8. 01:11:746 (1) - Move it to 332:252 to make 01:11:273 (6,7,8,1) - like a square. Changed the pattern before
9. 01:16:483 (8,1) - Pattern suggestion, do 01:16:483 (8) - like 01:16:010 (6) - and do 01:16:799 (1) - similar to 01:02:746 (3) - -> http://puu.sh/gxsFp/8dd4b913d4.jpg. Fixed it, in another way.
10. 01:33:852 (6,7,1) - Try to form a triangle to do a similar pattern like 01:25:957 (2,3,4,5,6) - . Naah, i'll keep this as it is.
11. 01:43:878 (4,5) - Add clap on it ? Sounds good imo. And maybe on 01:44:351 (8,9,10) - too ? Sounds noisy.
12. 01:48:062 (1) - I would align it with 01:48:220 (2) - to make it clean and have 01:47:746 (3,1) - not so close.Fixed!
13. 02:19:325 - to 02:30:062 - I don't really get it why you use whistle on stream. Sounds horrible D: normalhit or clap are much better. Fixed! xD
14. 02:35:194 (1) - Why not extend spinner to 02:37:641 - ? Sounds more logic for me but maybe I miss someting. Fixed!
15. 02:37:641 - Maybe insert a break here (MAYBE!!!). Too short.
16. 03:01:957 (4,5) - This slider shape is really tricky with this stack. I would rather go for a different shape, but if you want to keep it just try to improve flow between 03:02:431 (5,6) - . Fixed!
17. 03:08:746 (3,4) - Don't stack them. You just use a 1/2 stack with 03:07:957 (1,2) - and you do a 1/1 stack just after. This make it so weird. Fixed!
18. 03:20:167 (1,1) - I'm not sure these NC are useful. Hm, it's a new rhythm soo...
19. 03:55:641 (7,8,9,10,1) - I would use a symetric stream and curve it a little more like this http://puu.sh/gxEOx/b3146a21f3.jpg (just a suggestion). Flow plays more weird than before
20. 04:05:431 (4) - Use the same shape than 04:05:746 (5,6,7,8) - (corver stream with slider to reproduce his direction).
21. 04:09:852 (1,2,1,2) - You use whistle here but you didn't use it at 02:13:641 (1,2,1,2) - . They are both similar part of song so decide if you use whistle for both or not for consistancy. It's only one i forgot, so i should add them >.<
22. 04:14:273 (3,5) - Bad blanket here. Fixed!
23. 04:18:062 - to 04:28:799 - Like previous kiai Huh?
24. 04:17:115 (5,1) - Stack them correctly. Fixed!
25. 04:31:404 (1) - Like previous kiai maybe extend it to 04:33:220 - to catch reverb of the voice (and maybe add a break after ?). It is the same as the previous kiai time.
26. 04:39:852 (1) - Unnecessary NC here. Changed the SV so yeah. It is necessary
27. 05:28:167 (1,2,1,2) - Same as 04:09:852 (1,2,1,2) - .??
28. Same as previous kiai for whistle on stream. Fixed!

That's all I think. Good luck o/ Thanks! Was helpful!
Mukyu~

Nitrousdragon wrote:

from m4m (I guess)

[Inperishable]

00:53:115 (2,3) - These sliders just seem weird whenever I go across them. I feel like there should be another repeating slider from 00:52:799 (1) over here, but then that would lessen the difficulty. (p.s. if you do ever change this, move slider 2 to x:372 y:316 Fixed!

01:38:588 (3) - I kind of want you to move this to x:200 y:264. (for better flow) It's better like this

03:20:167 (1,1) - I think these are unnecessary new combos. I'd suggest removing these (or are these here for a purpose?) Fixed!

besides that, i can't think of anything other wrong with this map (unfortunately, due to my rank :3) and I hope to see this ranked in the near future, of course, if you ever do plan on getting this map ranked.

Imperishable

1. 00:28:010 (3) - Imo this slider points to wrong way, and it really doesn't fit there. Try something like this, it looks better: http://puu.sh/gQycc/a99d8f049f.jpg
2. 01:05:273 (4) - improve blanket
3. 01:04:799 (3,5) - stack
4. 01:08:273 (5) - replace to x256 y100, so distant is 1,40x each way
5. 01:12:852 (3) - minor: blanket would be improved
6. 01:21:378 (4) - minor: move to x173 y94
7. 01:22:957 (4) - move curve point 1 grip down, so it look more symmetrical
8. 01:43:010 (5) - I suggest to move circle to x188 y352 for better flow
9. 02:27:062 (5,1) - make blanket here?
10. 02:48:852 (1) - slider overlaps itself, fix overlap
11. 03:41:904 (1) - blanket would be improved a little
12. 04:19:325 (4) - is this meant to be blanket, if yes, it would be improved
13. 05:14:273 (6) - add NC
14. 05:15:536 (1) - remove NC
15. 06:13:010 (4,1) - imo these slider doesn't look nice when they overlap and they aren't same forms. Make 06:13:010 (4) - slider like 06:13:483 (1) - this slider but smaller (hope you understood xD)

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!
Came from my queue.

Imperishable

1. 00:28:010 (3) - Imo this slider points to wrong way, and it really doesn't fit there. Try something like this, it looks better: http://puu.sh/gQycc/a99d8f049f.jpg Fixed some other way.
2. 01:05:273 (4) - improve blanket It is perfect already.
3. 01:04:799 (3,5) - stack Fixed
4. 01:08:273 (5) - replace to x256 y100, so distant is 1,40x each way Fixed some other way.
5. 01:12:852 (3) - minor: blanket would be improved It is fine already lel
6. 01:21:378 (4) - minor: move to x173 y94 It's fine like this, almost not even a difference of before and now.
7. 01:22:957 (4) - move curve point 1 grip down, so it look more symmetrical Um...ok
8. 01:43:010 (5) - I suggest to move circle to x188 y352 for better flow The flow is fine like this, and it's a triangle. You can see it if you select the slider and two circles.
9. 02:27:062 (5,1) - make blanket here? Naah, it would be too curvy.
10. 02:48:852 (1) - slider overlaps itself, fix overlap I don't really think this is an issue, i changed it. But i think it's fine for sliders like this to overlap on itself.
11. 03:41:904 (1) - blanket would be improved a little Fixed
12. 04:19:325 (4) - is this meant to be blanket, if yes, it would be improved Not really a blanket, it just fits there without overlapping something else.
13. 05:14:273 (6) - add NC Fixed
14. 05:15:536 (1) - remove NC Fixed
15. 06:13:010 (4,1) - imo these slider doesn't look nice when they overlap and they aren't same forms. Make 06:13:010 (4) - slider like 06:13:483 (1) - this slider but smaller (hope you understood xD) The smaller slider is for better flow, and the other is for better flow too. So if i change the small one, the flow will be a bit bad imo. But i fixed the overlap.

That's all what I can find. Hope this helps! :3 Töhö~

Kocari wrote:

Here for the M4M from my modding queue


Imperishable

1. 00:29:431 (3) - I don't believe with the blanket of this slider suits it in any ways. How about adjust it to something like this so it gives off a rotation instead of laying flat http://puu.sh/gYhuu/e5d9c8af32.jpg Well, it's almost the same, but ok.
2. 00:53:746 (7) - Move the 7 down a little more so it doesn't look like an imbalance going through that stream Fixed
3. 01:03:378 (4,5) - Might as well stack these since where the (5) is placed makes it awkward to play the stream, maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/gYhIU/1af90e535b.jpg Fixed
4. 01:18:694 (3) - I can't hear the hitsound well here? The clap doesn't bring off the loudless of the drum or it's just in there where I can't hear it I can hear it fine.
5. 01:23:746 (4) - Move this not a little more to the left so it has a more angular transition than just moving downwards, since most of the jumps here are angled, might as well do it to all of them http://puu.sh/gYhWU/f95e3dadfa.jpg Fixed
6. 01:24:694 (2) - Drum beat on head? might need to add a clap or something here since the beats resemble of this note 01:24:378 (1) That sounds random.
7. 01:37:325 (2) - This note destroyed the circular rotation you had going on and that would've been pretty awesome to continue rather than cutting it part way, looks something like this to continue with the movement you had but adjust it to your own accord since this was just an example http://puu.sh/gYi3B/8a8e677295.jpg The flow to the next note gets worse, but i fixed it
8. 01:41:431 (4) - Space this out so the even numbers are same spacing as odd, example (2) and (4), (3) and (5) and how about this pattern so it flows nicer into into the next NC? http://puu.sh/gYie0/1f55a7f34c.jpg Fixed in another way
9. 03:07:483 (7,8,9,1) - A cool pattern would to make a star here since it rotates along with 03:06:536 (5) and because it didn't seem to intuitive to play a pattern that is diagonal and then a slider that didn't seem fitting to me, something to this extent http://puu.sh/gYire/1abf23258d.jpg In another way.
10. 03:20:167 (2,3) - NC for each of them so the player knows there are changes in these notes and that the song changed it that way. Fixed
11. 04:00:536 (2) - Same as ^ Fixed
12. 04:25:641 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - How about this? http://puu.sh/gYiHv/a560d3e0c3.jpg Too spacy.
    That's probably it, it was nice an very very challenging to play. I hope this mod can help you and I look forward to the mod Thanks!