00:24:536 (4) - Try not to begin sliders on a red tick, they'll end on a white tick which is supposed to be emphasized. So, in this scenario you may want to make it into two circles. Or, you could just move things around to make a slider begin on the white tick. Below is just a sample pattern, just to give you an idea of what I mean.
00:27:062 (4) - ^
00:33:062 (3) - ^, etc. Basically any slider that starts on a red tick and ends on a white tick.
00:40:641 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - As you reach the 7, you should spead out the stream a bit more. Right now it's too claustrophobic
00:43:641 (7) - Further away from 00:43:167 (5) - and more directed upward
01:16:799 (1) - 01:17:431 (3) - 01:17:904 (4) - excessive straight sliders remove the mood
01:54:378 (6) - You can stack this on top of 01:53:430 (1) -
03:01:483 (3) - I would feel this would be better as a squigly slider
03:01:957 (4) - The ending of this slider should be grouped together with 03:02:431 (5,6,7) -
03:04:799 (5) - Maybe try stacking this on the tail of 03:03:536 (3) -
03:06:062 (3) - Already done with, but perhaps you can try to stack the tail on 03:04:957 (6) -
03:06:536 (5) - The end of this slider is not emphasizing enough of the vocal, make into circle for the end of that slider or something to emphasize it
03:28:483 (2) - Move a bit closer to 03:28:167 (1) -
03:59:746 (1,2,3,1) - This needs to be fixed, I feel like it's confusing as hell
04:25:641 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - Beautify please
05:28:167 (1,2,3,1) - confusing D::: (at least for a noob like me)
This makes me sad. Because I can't map as good as it.
Good luck. This should be approved already, like for real ;w;
I couldn't even be picky.
Most of my mod were suggestions. Hope you thought it helped :3
Good job!~
00:27:062 (4) - ^
00:33:062 (3) - ^, etc. Basically any slider that starts on a red tick and ends on a white tick.
00:40:641 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - As you reach the 7, you should spead out the stream a bit more. Right now it's too claustrophobic
00:43:641 (7) - Further away from 00:43:167 (5) - and more directed upward
01:16:799 (1) - 01:17:431 (3) - 01:17:904 (4) - excessive straight sliders remove the mood
01:54:378 (6) - You can stack this on top of 01:53:430 (1) -
03:01:483 (3) - I would feel this would be better as a squigly slider
03:01:957 (4) - The ending of this slider should be grouped together with 03:02:431 (5,6,7) -
03:04:799 (5) - Maybe try stacking this on the tail of 03:03:536 (3) -
03:06:062 (3) - Already done with, but perhaps you can try to stack the tail on 03:04:957 (6) -
03:06:536 (5) - The end of this slider is not emphasizing enough of the vocal, make into circle for the end of that slider or something to emphasize it
03:28:483 (2) - Move a bit closer to 03:28:167 (1) -
03:59:746 (1,2,3,1) - This needs to be fixed, I feel like it's confusing as hell
04:25:641 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - Beautify please
05:28:167 (1,2,3,1) - confusing D::: (at least for a noob like me)
This makes me sad. Because I can't map as good as it.
Good luck. This should be approved already, like for real ;w;
I couldn't even be picky.
Most of my mod were suggestions. Hope you thought it helped :3
Good job!~