Forbiddenplayer
Forbiddenplayer wrote:
[General]
>Too high SV, but well that's how you mapped it.
>You overuse complex sliders, use it in case of emphasis.
>There are many sections with inappropriate SV.
>I'll mod about unnecessary bezier curves. It just looks awful when misused.[Grimoire]
00:11:887 (1) - Why use a bezier when you can create a better one than that? maybe i'll remake
00:16:774 (6) - Add more spacing here. It is inconsistent. idk
00:17:617 (2) - Unnecessary bezier. maybe
00:19:977 (1) - I know you are following the vocals here but end the slider a tick earlier (where the clap is heard) because it's awkward to hear the slider end. valid suggestion, but it would cause inconsitency so i'll pass
00:27:729 (1) - Change bezier. i think this is fine
00:31:269 (2) - ^ fixed
00:38:010 (3) - Inconsistent with the previous slider. Make it a three point curve then just make it a little bigger so it can end on the blue tick. maybe
00:41:550 (1) - Bezier looks awful here. I won't mind beziers when it looks fine. fixed
00:43:572 (2) - ^ i think this is fine
01:47:617 (1) - Improve curve. changed a little
01:53:010 (1) and 01:53:516 (3) - ^ agreed, but haven't apply it yet
01:55:707 (1) - This slider looks too complex even without emphasis. Try lessening the red points. fixed
02:16:269 (3,4,5,6) - Make it a curved stream for aesthetics and as a blanket for 02:16:100 (2). passed
02:22:673 (1) - Too fast and high SV starting from here until 02:28:066 (5). will see about this
02:34:471 (2) - Improve S-shape.
03:54:022 (5) - I suggest a slow curved slider.
04:14:583 (1) - Bad overlap.
04:41:550 (1) - Bad bezier.
04:59:331 (1) - I suggest you end this slider at 05:01:774 because the sound stops there.
Thank you, Forbiddenplayer!