sorry for asdkal;skdl;asdk so late mod
ah since the bubble is popped i might take this small chance to give my suggestions
sorry for extreme late mod
PS: poke me if you want some code on some slider suggestions i listed below
[Grimore]
00:25:707 (2) - maybe you can move this around x:132 y:360 feels nicer with your flow imo
00:36:493 (2) - i think better not to blanket this since its a 3/4 slider and circle , i think moving it near sliderhead would feel nicer like you did in 00:51:662 (3,4) -
00:55:875 (5,1) - maybe adjust this a little so it looked like a proper blanket http://puu.sh/jYlIm.jpg
01:01:437 (7,8,9) - try this ? http://puu.sh/jYlKx.jpg
01:58:404 (1,2) - maybe this 2 slider shapes can be improved : http://puu.sh/jYlRB.jpg
02:05:651 (3) - move this a little away maybe , felt like the blanket is a bit too close
03:09:359 (8) - why not follow the shape of slider body of 03:09:864 (1) - ?
04:00:089 (2,4) - maybe distance this a little from slider as similar to look like 04:02:280 (4,1) - is neater
04:29:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just saying this streams look a little untidy but i have no idea on how to give a suggestion ;w;
the rest feels much fun !
hope this short mod helps
ah since the bubble is popped i might take this small chance to give my suggestions
PS: poke me if you want some code on some slider suggestions i listed below
[Grimore]
00:25:707 (2) - maybe you can move this around x:132 y:360 feels nicer with your flow imo
00:36:493 (2) - i think better not to blanket this since its a 3/4 slider and circle , i think moving it near sliderhead would feel nicer like you did in 00:51:662 (3,4) -
00:55:875 (5,1) - maybe adjust this a little so it looked like a proper blanket http://puu.sh/jYlIm.jpg
01:01:437 (7,8,9) - try this ? http://puu.sh/jYlKx.jpg
01:58:404 (1,2) - maybe this 2 slider shapes can be improved : http://puu.sh/jYlRB.jpg
02:05:651 (3) - move this a little away maybe , felt like the blanket is a bit too close
03:09:359 (8) - why not follow the shape of slider body of 03:09:864 (1) - ?
04:00:089 (2,4) - maybe distance this a little from slider as similar to look like 04:02:280 (4,1) - is neater
04:29:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just saying this streams look a little untidy but i have no idea on how to give a suggestion ;w;
the rest feels much fun !
hope this short mod helps
some old logs
2015-08-12 01:32 Slick: hi
2015-08-12 01:33 Rumia-: hi
2015-08-12 01:33 Slick: could you play a map of mine?
2015-08-12 01:33 Slick: if possible
2015-08-12 01:34 Slick: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/731905 Rita - Bookmark Memories]
2015-08-12 01:34 Rumia-: ok
2015-08-12 01:35 Rumia-: downloading atm
2015-08-12 01:35 Slick: thank you <3
2015-08-12 01:37 Rumia-: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/731905 Rita - Bookmark Memories]
2015-08-12 01:37 Rumia-: ok
2015-08-12 01:39 Rumia-: wait
2015-08-12 01:40 Rumia-: orz my fps drops randomly omg lol
2015-08-12 01:40 Slick: ;w;
2015-08-12 01:45 Rumia-: lol sorry bad play lol
2015-08-12 01:45 Slick: no was good
2015-08-12 01:46 Slick: really hard map >_<
2015-08-12 01:46 Slick: hmm how was it?
2015-08-12 01:47 Rumia-: lol osu crash
2015-08-12 01:47 Slick: D:
2015-08-12 01:48 Rumia-: hmm overall this diff is pretty inconsistent but cool mapping
2015-08-12 01:48 Slick: inconsisten? ;w;
2015-08-12 01:48 Rumia-: some parts are too exagerated jumps and some part is feel 4 star-ish
2015-08-12 01:48 Slick: oh
2015-08-12 01:48 Slick: yeah dynamic difficulty
2015-08-12 01:48 Slick: shouldn't be a problem though
2015-08-12 01:49 Slick: you mean jumps like
2015-08-12 01:49 Slick: 02:23:348 (4,5,6,7) -
2015-08-12 01:49 Slick: 02:24:527 (2,3,4,5,6) -
2015-08-12 01:49 Slick: 03:50:988 (3,4,5,6,1) -
2015-08-12 01:49 Slick: 03:52:505 (1,2,3,1) -
2015-08-12 01:50 Rumia-: yea
2015-08-12 01:50 Rumia-: includes wriggle slider is hard to react or reach lol
2015-08-12 01:50 Slick: yeah many sliders hard to catch
2015-08-12 01:50 Slick: 02:25:370 (1) - crazy slider !
2015-08-12 01:51 Rumia-: and many sliders felt off or extended lol
2015-08-12 01:51 Slick: :?
2015-08-12 01:51 Slick: hmm
2015-08-12 01:51 Slick: like 01:58:066 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2) -
2015-08-12 01:51 Slick: ?
2015-08-12 01:52 Rumia-: as example 01:47:617 (1) -
2015-08-12 01:52 Rumia-: and also yea
2015-08-12 01:52 Slick: hmm that should be fine
2015-08-12 01:52 Rumia-: 01:58:404 (1,2) - u know these are 1/4
2015-08-12 01:53 Rumia-: and those spacings arent really make sense
2015-08-12 01:53 Slick: slider like that
2015-08-12 01:53 Slick: it's called 3/4?
2015-08-12 01:53 Slick: or 1/4 :?
2015-08-12 01:54 Slick: 01:58:404 (1) - should not be extended
2015-08-12 01:54 Slick: should end on white tick
2015-08-12 01:54 Slick: sounds better
2015-08-12 01:54 Rumia-: yea
2015-08-12 01:54 Rumia-: 02:02:786 (3) - this one too
2015-08-12 01:55 Slick: end on red tick?
2015-08-12 01:55 Rumia-: yea
2015-08-12 01:55 Slick: hmm
2015-08-12 01:55 Slick: i think that one is fine
2015-08-12 01:55 Rumia-: 02:03:460 (3) - this one is good
2015-08-12 01:55 Rumia-: but need closer spacing with next slider
2015-08-12 01:55 Slick: i don't know
2015-08-12 01:55 Slick: slider leniency can be abused easy for this map
2015-08-12 01:55 Rumia-: you think is fine , but as a player i felt its not
2015-08-12 01:55 Slick: like 01:14:583 (1,2,1) -
2015-08-12 01:56 Rumia-: tho its feedbacks you should ask for more testplay etc
2015-08-12 01:56 Slick: it is very different mapping
2015-08-12 01:56 Rumia-: 02:10:875 (3) - like this one , its better end it at red tick and add a note on blue
2015-08-12 01:56 Slick: wow
2015-08-12 01:56 Slick: nice catch