m4m time! I don't want to get too nazi on details, I will just point out the major mistakes. Then, if you need another mod, you can call me back and I will mod this map again
General
00:00:730 - I suggest to start the map here, there is a part of the song that would look nice if mapped! In Insane diffs you can also start here 00:00:000 - You can map these five notes with a repeat slider or something
00:06:732 - to 00:14:185 - I don't like the way you put claps here... They sound a bit random, I suggest you to pus claps on 2nd and 4th white ticks, like 00:07:104 - and 00:07:850 - and 00:08:595 - and so on
Also, I'm not really sure about the gap between Normal and Hard... Hard is too difficult, I think
Insane
00:06:732 (1) - Finish in the beginning, and not in the end (If you follow my clap suggestion it should sound way better)
00:15:676 (7) - This is a bit misleading and hard to read because it looks like a 1/2 slider, I think you should remove the slowdown because it's confusing, and also for consistency with the other patterns
00:24:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uhm, I don't like this pattern, it's a bit messy, I suggest to edit it and create a geometrical figure (an hexagon can me a good choice)
00:31:887 (1,2) - Ok here you have to rimove the NC from 00:31:887 (1) ad put it on 00:32:073 (2) - Instead because you are starting a kiai, and kiais always need a NC in the beginning
00:37:850 (2) - This is weird because it ends on the big, white tick. Replacing this with a triplet would be a good choice
00:41:576 (9) - It would sound better if you replaced this with a note and a 1/2 slider. Starting sliders on red ticks often sounds weird for some reason
00:43:067 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream is partially covered by the slider, this can be confusing, so I suggest to mmove the stream somewhere else
00:43:999 (8) - I suggest to start the NC here, on the big white tick
00:54:433 (4) - Move the NC here for the same reason
00:55:924 (7) - NC here!
00:57:415 (3) - NC here too. With these 2 last NCs it will be easier to distinguish the change of SV
I don't want to become too nazi with the NCs but I think you definitely need to go through the map and fix them all, you have to move them to the big, white ticks. If you need help with that, you can ask me in-game!
01:03:378 (5,6,7) - A bit hard to read, I think you should reduce the spacing between these objects, it should do
01:12:322 (5,6) - A bit ugly to see, change these two slider's shape
01:22:384 (1,2) - They are overlapped, I think you need to fix this
01:33:191 (9,1) - Another weird overlap...
01:37:663 (6) - Why this slowdown? It's a bit random in my opinion
01:41:204 (4) - Same here
01:48:098 (5) - Finish here
02:02:632 (2) - This note is weird, it overlaps the following stream
WhiteAries' Insane
00:31:514 (6) - Please use ctrl+g on this slider, at the moment it leads out of the path of the stream, so it's hard for a player to reach the stream in time
00:37:943 - Add a note here
01:46:048 (4) - This is covered by the path of the previous slider, I don't know if it's rankable... Give it a check
01:48:098 (9) - Finish here
02:07:384 - I feel like you should really add a note here, so I think you will have to edit the previous stream in order to fit it
02:13:440 (11,1) - Swap NCs
02:14:092 - A note here should sound good but maybe you don't want to destroy your pattern
02:13:812 (3,5) - Weird overlap...
02:17:073 - Same as 02:14:092
02:20:893 (9,1) - Swap NCs
Hard
Well, the main problem in this diff is the spacing... It's irregular, and that's not really good for an hard diff. So, I highly suggest to go through the map and equalize the spacing
00:07:291 (2) - Not a big fan of shapes like this, it's a bit too curved... The same applies on 00:08:781 (3)
00:16:421 (7,1) - Hard jump... Too hard for an Hard diff
00:19:589 (1,2,3) - The rhythm you used here sounds strange because you started some sliders on red ticks, I think you should replace 00:19:589 (1,2) with circles
01:15:489 (6,7,8,9) - Weird spacing between these sliders, make it the same
01:23:315 (2) - Sliders with 2 repeats are not really appreciated by players because they are unexpected and break the flow, this applies on all this kind of sliders in this diff
02:14:930 (5,6,7) - Well, a pattern like this is really hard to read for an Hard diff!
deejaydray's Normal
00:36:545 (5) - Clap in the end, and remove the clap from here 00:37:477 -
01:22:756 (1,2) - These are a bit too close, I think you should move the second slider a bit up. Don't worry too much about the spacing because if you use 1.05x instead 1.00x is not a problem and it's acceptable
01:35:800 - Unsnapped green line, this is really important and you must fix it!
01:38:781 - Clap here
01:41:763 - ^
01:44:744 - ^
01:52:943 - ^
01:58:160 - ^
Easy
01:03:750 (1) - Too short for an easy diff, replace it with a slider, also add a finish on the end of it
01:10:831 (1) - Finish here
01:45:117 (2) - This is covered by the previous slider, it may be unreadable for beginners so I highly suggest to move it
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Okay that's all, there's something more but I think that you should fix the big problems first!
I will be honest: In my opinion Hard should be remapped for two reasons:
1) You should make it a bit easier to fit the gap Between Normal and Insane
2) Most of the patterns are messy, the sliders are ugly to see and the spacing is really irregular
The other diffs need work but I'm ok with them!
So yeah, good luck with your mapset and call me in-game if you have some questions
General
00:00:730 - I suggest to start the map here, there is a part of the song that would look nice if mapped! In Insane diffs you can also start here 00:00:000 - You can map these five notes with a repeat slider or something
00:06:732 - to 00:14:185 - I don't like the way you put claps here... They sound a bit random, I suggest you to pus claps on 2nd and 4th white ticks, like 00:07:104 - and 00:07:850 - and 00:08:595 - and so on
Also, I'm not really sure about the gap between Normal and Hard... Hard is too difficult, I think
Insane
00:06:732 (1) - Finish in the beginning, and not in the end (If you follow my clap suggestion it should sound way better)
00:15:676 (7) - This is a bit misleading and hard to read because it looks like a 1/2 slider, I think you should remove the slowdown because it's confusing, and also for consistency with the other patterns
00:24:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uhm, I don't like this pattern, it's a bit messy, I suggest to edit it and create a geometrical figure (an hexagon can me a good choice)
00:31:887 (1,2) - Ok here you have to rimove the NC from 00:31:887 (1) ad put it on 00:32:073 (2) - Instead because you are starting a kiai, and kiais always need a NC in the beginning
00:37:850 (2) - This is weird because it ends on the big, white tick. Replacing this with a triplet would be a good choice
00:41:576 (9) - It would sound better if you replaced this with a note and a 1/2 slider. Starting sliders on red ticks often sounds weird for some reason
00:43:067 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream is partially covered by the slider, this can be confusing, so I suggest to mmove the stream somewhere else
00:43:999 (8) - I suggest to start the NC here, on the big white tick
00:54:433 (4) - Move the NC here for the same reason
00:55:924 (7) - NC here!
00:57:415 (3) - NC here too. With these 2 last NCs it will be easier to distinguish the change of SV
I don't want to become too nazi with the NCs but I think you definitely need to go through the map and fix them all, you have to move them to the big, white ticks. If you need help with that, you can ask me in-game!
01:03:378 (5,6,7) - A bit hard to read, I think you should reduce the spacing between these objects, it should do
01:12:322 (5,6) - A bit ugly to see, change these two slider's shape
01:22:384 (1,2) - They are overlapped, I think you need to fix this
01:33:191 (9,1) - Another weird overlap...
01:37:663 (6) - Why this slowdown? It's a bit random in my opinion
01:41:204 (4) - Same here
01:48:098 (5) - Finish here
02:02:632 (2) - This note is weird, it overlaps the following stream
WhiteAries' Insane
00:31:514 (6) - Please use ctrl+g on this slider, at the moment it leads out of the path of the stream, so it's hard for a player to reach the stream in time
00:37:943 - Add a note here
01:46:048 (4) - This is covered by the path of the previous slider, I don't know if it's rankable... Give it a check
01:48:098 (9) - Finish here
02:07:384 - I feel like you should really add a note here, so I think you will have to edit the previous stream in order to fit it
02:13:440 (11,1) - Swap NCs
02:14:092 - A note here should sound good but maybe you don't want to destroy your pattern
02:13:812 (3,5) - Weird overlap...
02:17:073 - Same as 02:14:092
02:20:893 (9,1) - Swap NCs
Hard
Well, the main problem in this diff is the spacing... It's irregular, and that's not really good for an hard diff. So, I highly suggest to go through the map and equalize the spacing
00:07:291 (2) - Not a big fan of shapes like this, it's a bit too curved... The same applies on 00:08:781 (3)
00:16:421 (7,1) - Hard jump... Too hard for an Hard diff
00:19:589 (1,2,3) - The rhythm you used here sounds strange because you started some sliders on red ticks, I think you should replace 00:19:589 (1,2) with circles
01:15:489 (6,7,8,9) - Weird spacing between these sliders, make it the same
01:23:315 (2) - Sliders with 2 repeats are not really appreciated by players because they are unexpected and break the flow, this applies on all this kind of sliders in this diff
02:14:930 (5,6,7) - Well, a pattern like this is really hard to read for an Hard diff!
deejaydray's Normal
00:36:545 (5) - Clap in the end, and remove the clap from here 00:37:477 -
01:22:756 (1,2) - These are a bit too close, I think you should move the second slider a bit up. Don't worry too much about the spacing because if you use 1.05x instead 1.00x is not a problem and it's acceptable
01:35:800 - Unsnapped green line, this is really important and you must fix it!
01:38:781 - Clap here
01:41:763 - ^
01:44:744 - ^
01:52:943 - ^
01:58:160 - ^
Easy
01:03:750 (1) - Too short for an easy diff, replace it with a slider, also add a finish on the end of it
01:10:831 (1) - Finish here
01:45:117 (2) - This is covered by the previous slider, it may be unreadable for beginners so I highly suggest to move it
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Okay that's all, there's something more but I think that you should fix the big problems first!
I will be honest: In my opinion Hard should be remapped for two reasons:
1) You should make it a bit easier to fit the gap Between Normal and Insane
2) Most of the patterns are messy, the sliders are ugly to see and the spacing is really irregular
The other diffs need work but I'm ok with them!
So yeah, good luck with your mapset and call me in-game if you have some questions