[General]
There are alot of timing sections at the start, do you really need those? check that with someone who is good at timing.
and please use distance snap next time you map.
The kiai-time should be the same on every difficulty.
01:41:949 Remove this inheriting section because it's for no use.
I skipped easy and normal because my mod is so long anyway.
[Hard]
00:08:222 (2) - Make this slider more curvy so that the blanket looks nicer.
00:28:533 (7) - CTRL+G this.. this is very hard to read for hardplayers.
00:37:850 (1) - Space this out, use distance snap..
00:42:881 (1) - Remove NC
00:43:253 (1) - ^
00:43:440 make this section with a note here, and the slider on the white tick after like this
01:08:968 (1) - Use distance snap and space this out, and don't use NC
01:09:713 (5) - Remove NC
01:11:576 (1) - DS and space it out..
01:23:315 (2) - ^
01:24:247 (5) - ^
01:33:937 (4) - NC
01:35:241 (6) - ^
01:44:371 (1,2) - why use NC here?
01:47:166 (2) - If your gonna make this slider slower, then you need new combo on it.
01:49:402 (2) - you make this a jump for some reason.. shorten it in, use distance snap!
02:10:458 (1) - DS...
02:21:825 (4) - use finish hitsound at the end of this slider
[WhiteAries' Insane]
Did you forget to write the "'s" thing on this diffname? should be "WhiteAries's Insane"
00:36:732 (2) - Avoid overlaps like this.
00:51:452 (1) - Stack this at beginning of 00:50:334 (2) - and remember to DS this 00:51:638 (2) - after
01:17:166 (2) - Please use Distance Snap.....
01:33:750 (7) - Make the new combo here instead
01:46:048 (4) - Don't overlap this
02:05:055 (5) - stack on 02:03:937 (4) -
02:07:477 (13) - NC
[Insane]
00:04:123 (1) - Stack this on top of the end of 00:03:378 (5) - and then make sure this 00:04:309 (2) - is distance snapped.
00:05:427 (2) - Stack this on top of 00:05:055 (5) -
00:11:017 (6) - This is too far away from (5)
00:13:067 (1) - Remove NC
00:15:676 (1) - I recommend you to make this slider with the same slidervelocity like the rest og the sliders.
00:19:216 (4) - Stack this on top of 00:18:471 (6) -
00:20:148 (1) - Try to avoid overlaps like this
00:20:707 (1) - ^
00:22:943 (2) - ^
00:24:247 (1) - ^
00:30:210 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:955 (1) - ^
00:31:328 (3) - Dont overlap with this 00:30:955 (2) -
00:33:564 (1) - NC
00:35:055 (7) - NC
00:35:427 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:527 (10) - Please dont overlap..
00:42:135 (1) - Remove NC
00:42:508 (1) - ^
00:48:284 (1) - ^
00:48:471 (1) - NC
00:48:657 (2) - This slider looks shitty, remake it.
01:06:918 (2) - Stack this on the beginning of 01:05:986 (10) -
01:06:732 (1) - Remove this NC
01:04:868 (7) - NC
01:07:850 (1) - ^
01:12:881 (1) - Remove NC
01:17:725 (4) - If your gonna have this as antijump, please drag it 3 grids to the right, and one grid up(gridlvl4)
01:18:098 (1) - NC
01:18:657 (1) - Remove NC
01:19:775 (5) - Make this slider look better if you can. Maybe like this
01:22:756 (1) - Try to avoid this overlapping with 01:22:384 (4) -
01:27:042 (6) - Remove NC
01:27:228 (1) - NC
01:27:787 (3) - Remove NC
01:30:583 (1) - If you stack this on 01:30:210 (5) - you will get a pretty good flow.
01:35:241 (4) - NC (very important here!!!!) because it's much slower than the rest.
01:39:154 (5) - NC
01:55:551 (5) - ^
02:00:023 (1) - ^
02:00:769 (3) - Remove NC
02:01:514 (5) - NC
02:02:260 (1) - Remove NC
02:08:222 (3) - Atleast stack this to something...
02:15:676 (3) - Stack this to the beginning of 02:14:558 (6) -
02:16:421 (2,3) - If this is supposed to be a blanket, make it better.
02:22:011 (4,5) - I'd rather space these two notes out, you'll get a better flow if you do.
Good luck on ranking and stuff
There are alot of timing sections at the start, do you really need those? check that with someone who is good at timing.
and please use distance snap next time you map.
The kiai-time should be the same on every difficulty.
01:41:949 Remove this inheriting section because it's for no use.
I skipped easy and normal because my mod is so long anyway.
[Hard]
00:08:222 (2) - Make this slider more curvy so that the blanket looks nicer.
00:28:533 (7) - CTRL+G this.. this is very hard to read for hardplayers.
00:37:850 (1) - Space this out, use distance snap..
00:42:881 (1) - Remove NC
00:43:253 (1) - ^
00:43:440 make this section with a note here, and the slider on the white tick after like this
01:08:968 (1) - Use distance snap and space this out, and don't use NC
01:09:713 (5) - Remove NC
01:11:576 (1) - DS and space it out..
01:23:315 (2) - ^
01:24:247 (5) - ^
01:33:937 (4) - NC
01:35:241 (6) - ^
01:44:371 (1,2) - why use NC here?
01:47:166 (2) - If your gonna make this slider slower, then you need new combo on it.
01:49:402 (2) - you make this a jump for some reason.. shorten it in, use distance snap!
02:10:458 (1) - DS...
02:21:825 (4) - use finish hitsound at the end of this slider
[WhiteAries' Insane]
Did you forget to write the "'s" thing on this diffname? should be "WhiteAries's Insane"
00:36:732 (2) - Avoid overlaps like this.
00:51:452 (1) - Stack this at beginning of 00:50:334 (2) - and remember to DS this 00:51:638 (2) - after
01:17:166 (2) - Please use Distance Snap.....
01:33:750 (7) - Make the new combo here instead
01:46:048 (4) - Don't overlap this
02:05:055 (5) - stack on 02:03:937 (4) -
02:07:477 (13) - NC
[Insane]
00:04:123 (1) - Stack this on top of the end of 00:03:378 (5) - and then make sure this 00:04:309 (2) - is distance snapped.
00:05:427 (2) - Stack this on top of 00:05:055 (5) -
00:11:017 (6) - This is too far away from (5)
00:13:067 (1) - Remove NC
00:15:676 (1) - I recommend you to make this slider with the same slidervelocity like the rest og the sliders.
00:19:216 (4) - Stack this on top of 00:18:471 (6) -
00:20:148 (1) - Try to avoid overlaps like this
00:20:707 (1) - ^
00:22:943 (2) - ^
00:24:247 (1) - ^
00:30:210 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:955 (1) - ^
00:31:328 (3) - Dont overlap with this 00:30:955 (2) -
00:33:564 (1) - NC
00:35:055 (7) - NC
00:35:427 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:527 (10) - Please dont overlap..
00:42:135 (1) - Remove NC
00:42:508 (1) - ^
00:48:284 (1) - ^
00:48:471 (1) - NC
00:48:657 (2) - This slider looks shitty, remake it.
01:06:918 (2) - Stack this on the beginning of 01:05:986 (10) -
01:06:732 (1) - Remove this NC
01:04:868 (7) - NC
01:07:850 (1) - ^
01:12:881 (1) - Remove NC
01:17:725 (4) - If your gonna have this as antijump, please drag it 3 grids to the right, and one grid up(gridlvl4)
01:18:098 (1) - NC
01:18:657 (1) - Remove NC
01:19:775 (5) - Make this slider look better if you can. Maybe like this
01:22:756 (1) - Try to avoid this overlapping with 01:22:384 (4) -
01:27:042 (6) - Remove NC
01:27:228 (1) - NC
01:27:787 (3) - Remove NC
01:30:583 (1) - If you stack this on 01:30:210 (5) - you will get a pretty good flow.
01:35:241 (4) - NC (very important here!!!!) because it's much slower than the rest.
01:39:154 (5) - NC
01:55:551 (5) - ^
02:00:023 (1) - ^
02:00:769 (3) - Remove NC
02:01:514 (5) - NC
02:02:260 (1) - Remove NC
02:08:222 (3) - Atleast stack this to something...
02:15:676 (3) - Stack this to the beginning of 02:14:558 (6) -
02:16:421 (2,3) - If this is supposed to be a blanket, make it better.
02:22:011 (4,5) - I'd rather space these two notes out, you'll get a better flow if you do.
Good luck on ranking and stuff