Hey! M4M from your queue.
I can only mod Easy, Normal and Hard.
Well, here's my mod:
Overall, this mapset is not too bad.
But the Easy and Hard require a bit more improving.
Hope my mod was helpful.
Good Luck!
I can only mod Easy, Normal and Hard.
Well, here's my mod:
Easy:
Check AiMod~ Make sure the letterbox doesn’t conflict with any diffs
00:08:222 (3) – Maybe place this hitcircle here: X:396 Y:192. To make it allign with 00:06:732 (1,2) – 00:14:185 (1,2) – I think blanketing here will look better.
00:21:638 (3,1) – This blanket can be improved. In the pic below you will notice that I used the approach circle of 00:23:874 (1) –
00:25:365 (2) – I think it will be better if you do something like this:
I rotated the slider by 70 degrees. By doing this the flow will be better00:24:992 – Maybe you should also add a note there. It seems very empty otherwise00:33:191 (3) – This looks ugly. Maybe copy and paste 00:32:073 (1) - Like this:
00:44:371 (1) – Rather start the spinner here: 00:44:558 – 00:51:825 (4,2) – Try to blanket this better
01:03:750 (1) – Wow, I think this spinner is really too short. Maybe place a slider there instead or just leave it open
Check AiMod~ Make sure the letterbox doesn’t conflict with any diffs
00:08:222 (3) – Maybe place this hitcircle here: X:396 Y:192. To make it allign with 00:06:732 (1,2) – 00:14:185 (1,2) – I think blanketing here will look better.
00:21:638 (3,1) – This blanket can be improved. In the pic below you will notice that I used the approach circle of 00:23:874 (1) –
00:25:365 (2) – I think it will be better if you do something like this:
I rotated the slider by 70 degrees. By doing this the flow will be better00:24:992 – Maybe you should also add a note there. It seems very empty otherwise00:33:191 (3) – This looks ugly. Maybe copy and paste 00:32:073 (1) - Like this:
00:44:371 (1) – Rather start the spinner here: 00:44:558 – 00:51:825 (4,2) – Try to blanket this better
01:03:750 (1) – Wow, I think this spinner is really too short. Maybe place a slider there instead or just leave it open
deejaydray's Normal:
Check AiMod (Ctrl+A)~ The kiai must be snapped (placed on a red or blue point) and the letterbox may not conflict.00:18:657 (4,5) – I don’t think it’s a good idea to stack the hitcircle on the end of the slider here. Rather unstack.00:23:502 (3,4) – Make the shape of these sliders the same as this one: 00:22:197 (4) - . So curve them less.01:19:775 (5,1) – Blanket here?01:33:750 (5) – Rather do this?
I just don’t think two straight sliders so close to each other looks nice01:39:154 (1) – Improve the stack. Place it here: X:392 Y:156. Then just make sure that the other circles are distance snapped.01:51:079 (1) – Remove NC here and then add NC here: 01:51:452 (2) – This is a really nice diff
Check AiMod (Ctrl+A)~ The kiai must be snapped (placed on a red or blue point) and the letterbox may not conflict.00:18:657 (4,5) – I don’t think it’s a good idea to stack the hitcircle on the end of the slider here. Rather unstack.00:23:502 (3,4) – Make the shape of these sliders the same as this one: 00:22:197 (4) - . So curve them less.01:19:775 (5,1) – Blanket here?01:33:750 (5) – Rather do this?
I just don’t think two straight sliders so close to each other looks nice01:39:154 (1) – Improve the stack. Place it here: X:392 Y:156. Then just make sure that the other circles are distance snapped.01:51:079 (1) – Remove NC here and then add NC here: 01:51:452 (2) – This is a really nice diff
Hard:
Fix the letterbox that conflicts00:07:291 (2) – Curve this slider a bit less, otherwise it looks a bit ugly00:08:781 (3) - ^00:16:048 (5,6,2,4) – Make sure these are stacked properly00:27:601 (5) – Rather Ctrl+G to support the flow00:31:701 (5,1) – Blanket this00:32:260 (1,2) – Maybe blanket this as well. It will look neater00:34:496 (8) – NC here, because the combo is getting way too long00:40:272 (1) – A spinner doesn’t really make sense here. Just map there instead00:48:843 (1) – Same here. I suggest not filling that entire section with a spinner. Map most of the section01:34:775 (8,9) – Maybe just stack these on this slider’s: 01:34:496 (7) – tail01:31:701 (1) – Wow, I don’t think it’s such a good idea to speed up the sliders like that from here: 01:31:701 (1) - to 01:46:607 (1) - . Just keep the SV the same throughout the diff01:37:850 (6) – Rather do this:
Something like that01:45:117 (8) – Just straighten this slider? Or curve both these sliders: 01:45:117 (8,9) – 01:50:893 (2,1) – Just stack these circles on this slider’s: 01:49:961 (1) – tail01:52:384 (1,2) – Stack02:09:713 (4) – Put in another repeat here02:14:744 (4,8,9) – Stack02:20:520 (6,1) – Try to blanket this
Fix the letterbox that conflicts00:07:291 (2) – Curve this slider a bit less, otherwise it looks a bit ugly00:08:781 (3) - ^00:16:048 (5,6,2,4) – Make sure these are stacked properly00:27:601 (5) – Rather Ctrl+G to support the flow00:31:701 (5,1) – Blanket this00:32:260 (1,2) – Maybe blanket this as well. It will look neater00:34:496 (8) – NC here, because the combo is getting way too long00:40:272 (1) – A spinner doesn’t really make sense here. Just map there instead00:48:843 (1) – Same here. I suggest not filling that entire section with a spinner. Map most of the section01:34:775 (8,9) – Maybe just stack these on this slider’s: 01:34:496 (7) – tail01:31:701 (1) – Wow, I don’t think it’s such a good idea to speed up the sliders like that from here: 01:31:701 (1) - to 01:46:607 (1) - . Just keep the SV the same throughout the diff01:37:850 (6) – Rather do this:
Something like that01:45:117 (8) – Just straighten this slider? Or curve both these sliders: 01:45:117 (8,9) – 01:50:893 (2,1) – Just stack these circles on this slider’s: 01:49:961 (1) – tail01:52:384 (1,2) – Stack02:09:713 (4) – Put in another repeat here02:14:744 (4,8,9) – Stack02:20:520 (6,1) – Try to blanket this
Overall, this mapset is not too bad.
But the Easy and Hard require a bit more improving.
Hope my mod was helpful.
Good Luck!