Hi, m4m for your queue~
[Easy]
[Easy]
- tbh the entire map is pretty confusing for new players. The spacing should also be slightly higher, because the notes touch, as you can see here:
You might want to adjust all the notes slightly so this doesn't happen. - 00:18:657 (4) - Seems a bit boring how this is just left horizontally. Rotate it 45 degrees clockwise from selection centre to spice it up a bit~
- 01:23:315 (2) - This slider starts on a red tick, and it will definitely confuse some players, considering this is an easy. You might want to start this some place else.
- 01:30:210 (4,2) - Another confusing pattern. Although it may look nice to our eyes, the typical easy player will have a hard time reading this, so I think you should change it.
- 01:35:241 (4) - Another rhythmically confusing slider, like 01:23:315 (2) -
- 01:54:620 (1,2) - This pattern really isn't good. First, it starts on a red tick, so it'll confuse new player, and secondly, the slidertrails overlap, which honestly looks really bad and will confuse new players even more. I suggest you change this.
- You really should add a spinner somewhere. There's loads of places! This is important because it's good to have variety, and when this gets ranked, the scores will be stagnant due to a lack of spinner.
- 01:10:831 (1,2) - These two sliders aren't parallel. Move the middle sliderpoint of (1) to x:150 y:218 to improve this and make it look nicer.
- 01:13:812 (3) - You should make this a curved slider so it can blanket the head of 01:12:322 (2) - properly, it will look nicer tbh. You may have to change the shape of 01:15:303 (4) - as well to keep the pattern looking nice.
- 01:42:135 (1,2,1,2) - Hnnnnnnnng. Way too many finishes on these sliders, seriously it gets pretty jarring. You should replace these finishes with something more appropriate.
- 02:22:197 (3) - This note looks like it's 1/1 away, as opposed to 1/2 away. This means that people could easily miss this note due to waiting too long. You should move it a bit so that it isn't stacked.
- 00:11:763 (2,3) - Bows don't look very good one one of the sliderheads is being overlapped. You should fix this for visual purposes.
- 00:14:744 (3,4) - This really isn't a good blanket >.> Please fix this.
- 00:24:247 (1) - Unnecessary spinner. The rhythm doesn't really change enough, especially to warrant a spinner. I highly suggest mapping it out.
- 00:37:850 (1) - This note is a bit too close, seems like it's 1/2 away, when it's actually 1/1 away, making it seem really easy to hit it too early. I suggest moving it further away.
- 01:31:701 (1,2,3) - These sv changes are very sudden, you may want to get rid of them, or at least make them a bit more predictable by increasing the slider tick rate.
- 01:45:862 (4) - Again, this genuinely looks like it's 1/2 away. You should move this a bit further.
- 01:51:452 (4,5,6) - Not too much of a fan of this pattern, mainly because of (5/6)'s placement. You should make it more like this:
- 02:05:055 (5,7,1,2) - These overlaps aren't appealing to look at, and makes the play-field seem cramped. I suggest fixing them.
- 02:07:384 (12,13) - Why's there a stack here? It's inconsistent and I think it would be better if the stream ended normally.
- 02:07:477 (13) - Add an NC here, the combo drags our for too long, it's inconsistent, and it would just make more sense to add one.
Nice difficulty, to be honest though, the kiai kinda felt rushed.
- 00:26:110 (5,2) - This overlap isn't very appealing, I suggest fixing it.
- 00:49:961 (6) - Unrankable, the repeat is being covered by the slider end of 00:49:589 (4) - which means that a player with the default skin won't be able to read it due to the slider or the hitburst covering it.
- 01:22:384 (4,1) - Another unappealing overlap here, I suggest you fix.
- 01:37:104 (4,5) - Blanket isn't ideal you should move (5) to x:149 y:258 it fix it. Fixing the blanket is recommended to make it look nicer.
- 01:42:135 (3,4) - You could turn this into a blanket? It'll look nicer imo.