Hello! For M4M!
General:
This might be just me but why do your maps not have a bg?
Also, at 00:00:730 it makes a weird sound.... maybe change the mp3?
I will do hard later!
General:
This might be just me but why do your maps not have a bg?
Also, at 00:00:730 it makes a weird sound.... maybe change the mp3?
Easy
The shapes in this looked a bit strange at times
00:07:104 (2) - This could be made prettier (more curved)
00:09:713 (1) - Try and move this so 00:08:595 (1) - blankets it
00:14:185 (1) - This doesnt sound right.... I would end it at 00:16:048 and put a hitcircle at 00:16:421
00:14:185 (1) - This sliders end isnt blanketing the hitcircle properly, turn off grid snap and make sure it is perfectly in line with the hitcircle approach circle
00:23:874 (1,2) - These dont work together as 00:23:874 (1) - isnt blanketing properly and it looks strange when they are far apart
00:26:110 (3) - Maybe make this relate to the previous hitcircle more?
00:29:092 (1) - I dont think this fits the music, I only use spinners when a note is held
00:33:191 (1,2) - Again, try and make the circle blanketed using the 1.2x DS you use in this part
00:35:055 (1,2) - Try and make these have some kind of similarity or link
00:38:409 (2,3) - Again, try and blanket using 1.2x
00:41:763 The music doesn't stop here so try and have an object here (you might need a slider as the three hitcircles are already quite hard for an easy)
00:50:334 (2,3) - Blanketing again
00:56:297 (1,2) - Some kind of blanket? These dont look very pretty
00:56:669 (2,3,4) - These together look quite ugly, try and make them symmetrical or use similar shapes
00:59:651 (1) - I think this should be a wave, it doesnt look pretty at the moment
01:03:750 (2) - Try and change this, maybe a big blanket? It doesnt look very elegant
01:20:893 (1,1) - These overlap so try to shift them around so they dont
01:32:073 (1,2) - These try and compliment each other but there is no circle to blanket, try and change the angle of the first slider so there is a hitcircle to blanket by the second slider
01:41:390 (7) - This overlaps the next slider
01:42:135 (1) - This slider has corners in it, you want it to be niiiicccee and smooooth
01:48:098 (1) - The sudden sharp curve in this doesnt fit the music
01:49:961 (2) - You need to find a way to make this go with the other hitobjects better
00:07:104 (2) - This could be made prettier (more curved)
00:09:713 (1) - Try and move this so 00:08:595 (1) - blankets it
00:14:185 (1) - This doesnt sound right.... I would end it at 00:16:048 and put a hitcircle at 00:16:421
00:14:185 (1) - This sliders end isnt blanketing the hitcircle properly, turn off grid snap and make sure it is perfectly in line with the hitcircle approach circle
00:23:874 (1,2) - These dont work together as 00:23:874 (1) - isnt blanketing properly and it looks strange when they are far apart
00:26:110 (3) - Maybe make this relate to the previous hitcircle more?
00:29:092 (1) - I dont think this fits the music, I only use spinners when a note is held
00:33:191 (1,2) - Again, try and make the circle blanketed using the 1.2x DS you use in this part
00:35:055 (1,2) - Try and make these have some kind of similarity or link
00:38:409 (2,3) - Again, try and blanket using 1.2x
00:41:763 The music doesn't stop here so try and have an object here (you might need a slider as the three hitcircles are already quite hard for an easy)
00:50:334 (2,3) - Blanketing again
00:56:297 (1,2) - Some kind of blanket? These dont look very pretty
00:56:669 (2,3,4) - These together look quite ugly, try and make them symmetrical or use similar shapes
00:59:651 (1) - I think this should be a wave, it doesnt look pretty at the moment
01:03:750 (2) - Try and change this, maybe a big blanket? It doesnt look very elegant
01:20:893 (1,1) - These overlap so try to shift them around so they dont
01:32:073 (1,2) - These try and compliment each other but there is no circle to blanket, try and change the angle of the first slider so there is a hitcircle to blanket by the second slider
01:41:390 (7) - This overlaps the next slider
01:42:135 (1) - This slider has corners in it, you want it to be niiiicccee and smooooth
01:48:098 (1) - The sudden sharp curve in this doesnt fit the music
01:49:961 (2) - You need to find a way to make this go with the other hitobjects better
Normal
The normal is almost as easy as easy, it only has a 0.09 star difference, this means the difficulties dont have a good spread so you need normal to be harder, I also think the AR could be reduced as its only a normal
I like the hitsounds in this!
00:11:576 Hitcircle to make it harder, here too 00:13:067, and here 00:25:551
00:29:092 (3,4) - The relationship between these could be better
00:35:986 Maybe put a hitcircle here or a repeat slider
00:38:595 This space feels a bit empty
00:39:899 Hitcircle
00:43:440 Hitcircle?
00:49:030 (4) - No repeat, put a hitcircle before and after?
00:52:943 (1) - I think this would be better as a slider to the next white tick
01:30:769 (5) - Maybe move this forward and put a hitcircle on the previous white tick?
01:35:800 This is kiai time but it seems to have less hitobjects in it than the rest of the piece, even though it should have more imo
01:37:477 Hit circle or slider
01:40:458 Hitcircle or slider
01:40:645 (5) - I would change this to a normal slider ending on the white tick the arrow currently is on, then add two hitcircles on 01:41:576 and 01:41:763
01:43:812 hitcircle
02:07:477 (1,2,3) - I think for the section these are in you should use other note patterns to make it more exciting, just my opinion though
Lots of that was just my opinion, it felt like a well designed map!
I like the hitsounds in this!
00:11:576 Hitcircle to make it harder, here too 00:13:067, and here 00:25:551
00:29:092 (3,4) - The relationship between these could be better
00:35:986 Maybe put a hitcircle here or a repeat slider
00:38:595 This space feels a bit empty
00:39:899 Hitcircle
00:43:440 Hitcircle?
00:49:030 (4) - No repeat, put a hitcircle before and after?
00:52:943 (1) - I think this would be better as a slider to the next white tick
01:30:769 (5) - Maybe move this forward and put a hitcircle on the previous white tick?
01:35:800 This is kiai time but it seems to have less hitobjects in it than the rest of the piece, even though it should have more imo
01:37:477 Hit circle or slider
01:40:458 Hitcircle or slider
01:40:645 (5) - I would change this to a normal slider ending on the white tick the arrow currently is on, then add two hitcircles on 01:41:576 and 01:41:763
01:43:812 hitcircle
02:07:477 (1,2,3) - I think for the section these are in you should use other note patterns to make it more exciting, just my opinion though
Lots of that was just my opinion, it felt like a well designed map!
I will do hard later!