Hi there~
General
Good luck~
General
- Uncheck the 'Display storyboard in front of combo fire' since there are no storyboard in this map.
- HP Drain + 1 to make things more harder?
- 00:16:337 (1) - Hmm, since i hear a cymbal sound here, it's good to add a finish sound.
- 00:17:353 (2) - add a whistle to feel the gap between the whistle rythim?
- 00:21:420 (2) - ^
- 00:22:944 (1) - Add a finish sound too at this spinner since i hear a cymbal sound at the back.
- 00:46:324 (2,3) - The circle number 2 will be hidden by the combo hitburst. So it's not good if you place it there. Also, the slider number 3 is not stacked properly with 00:44:800 (5) - . Please improve the pattern of this note and the note after it.
- 00:54:457 (5) - Sorry if it's nazi, but i think you place this circle too close with slider 00:53:440 (4) - . It's better to move it by 2-3 grid to right. It will be more good to see imo.
- 01:00:048 (3) - Same here, it's too close too with slider 00:59:031 (2) - and not good to see. Please move it by 2 grid up.
- 01:03:097 (2,3) - Switch the whistle at slider number 2 to the slider number 3 start. It's breaking the consistencies of your whistle rythim. Also, the slider number 3 is also too close with slider number 2. You can move it away like the note before.
- 01:23:936 (4,5) - Move the whistle at 4 to slider 5 start. It's not consisant with your whistle rythim.
- 01:29:527 (2,3) - I think this pattern can be improved and it's indeed not symetrical. Maybe it can be like this? > http://puu.sh/tV7F . It's more good and have a better flow. Also, i think you miss a whistle at slider 3 end.
- 01:39:692 (3) - I think you need a clap at the 2nd repeat and the end to close your clap rythim.
- 01:45:791 (3) - This soft finish sound is not fit with the music and the finish sound before it. Change it into normal please.
- 01:53:924 (1) - Please make this slider symetrical with 01:51:890 (2) - to improve map aesthetic. Also, i think you need a finish sound at it start. Since i hear a cymbal sound there.
- 01:57:481 (4,5) - Move the clap at 4 to 5 start please. It's not consistant with the previous clap rythim.
- 02:00:023 (1) - Again, please use normal finish sound at the end. It's more suitable imo.
- 02:08:155 (1) - I hear a cymbal sound it's end. Better to add finish to cover that cymbal sound.
- OD -1 to balance with your normal diff?
- Found some unsnapped timing. Maybe you forgot resnap this when you change the offset. Look here > http://puu.sh/tVb4
- Like wmf said, the gap between normal and hard is not good. The normal is too easy to compare to hard.
- 00:14:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Improve this star shape please. It's not even symetrical.
- 00:30:568 (1) - Remove the finish sound at the start? I don't hear any heavy sound or cymbal sound at this spot.
- 00:32:093 (5) - I think you miss a whislte overhere.
- 00:33:364 (2,3,4,5) - Not symetrical with 00:32:601 (1) - . Are you sure?
- 00:36:667 (1) - Change this whistle into finish at the start. This spot has the same rythim with the spot that you place finish.
- 00:58:015 (3) - This slider is not straight. Are you sure?
- 01:02:081 (2) - You miss a whistle again here at the start.
- 01:08:180 (1) - ^
- 01:10:213 (6) - ^ at the start.
- 01:23:936 (4) - An awkward clap sound here. You don't have any clap rythim in this spot. So better to remove it.
- 01:37:659 (1,2) - Please center this with 01:39:692 (3) - . Not good to see.
- 01:45:791 (3) - Same as previous diff. Change this soft finish into normal one.
- 02:07:647 (5,6,7) - Not symetrical with 02:06:630 (1,2,3,4) - . Are you sure?
- Found some unsnapped timing point. Look here > http://puu.sh/tVG6
- 00:06:553 (2) - Add a whistle here? It will synchronize better with the next whistle rythim.
- 00:13:287 (2) - ^
- 00:33:364 (2) - Im sure you can stack this note with 00:32:347 (8) - to make things more good.
- 01:02:843 (4) - I thought this one is a slider. The note placement is really confuse me.
- 01:28:129 (4,5,6) - Why this stream has different spacing with the the rest of the stream? It's no good for the flow.
- 00:44:800 (6) - I think you miss a whistle here at the start. I feel it's empty.
- 01:05:130 (8) - Change the clap at the start into finish please. I hear a cymbal sound at that spot, and it's not consistant with your previous finish rythim.
- 01:13:262 (7) - Add finish at the start. Same reason as above.
- Also, change this soft finish here at 3rd and 4th kiai into finish like previous diff.
Good luck~