Hello! m4m~ (I started modding this yesterday and there was a mod post after it, so sorry if there are things that aren't there anymore)
[General]
gahh hitsounds ;_; the default ones REALLY don't fit this song. here are some that I think would fit well http://puu.sh/1HLsK. you could also look for some others on the ranked version of this, they used some really good ones.
[Xinely's Easy]
00:10:925 (3,4) - this pattern is kinda meh :< use more curves! example
00:26:844 (4,5) - I'd remove (5) and add a repeat to (4). sounds better imo
00:31:436 (1) - unnecessary new combo
00:37:252 (4) - make it symmetrical to 00:35:415 (2)
00:38:476 (5) - add a note here?
00:52:558 (3) - I'd replace this for a 1/1 slider. the blank part after the note is a little odd
01:01:742 (3) - add new combo
01:05:415 (1) - extend this spinner to 01:07:864?
01:17:660 (5) - extend it to 01:18:272?
01:31:742 (6) - gahh looks a little odd ;_; place the first anchor a bit lower. make this in the same shape of this 01:04:191 (6) instead! looks way better
01:38:170 (1) - this would look better placed here
02:09:395 (3) - add new combo
02:14:293 (3) - ^
02:26:538 (1) - place this new combo at 02:27:150 (2) instead
02:34:803 (5) - this is really just a suggestion, but use this spacing?
02:59:293 (5) - add new combo
03:12:150 (4) - remove finish in slider's head D: sounds weird
03:29:293 (7) - add a third anchor to it?
03:34:191 (5) - ctrl + j this? flows better imo
03:58:681 (5) - add new combo
04:01:742 (1) - ^
04:40:925 (4) - ugly overlap with 04:39:701 (3) :<
04:43:987 (3) - remove clap
05:41:844 (3) - ^
[Normal]
hitsounds are soo low! increase the volume, please
00:14:905 (7) - place new combo here and remove the one from 00:15:823 (1)
00:25:619 (1) - move new combo to 00:24:701 (5)
00:34:191 (5) - make the first line straight and place the anchor a bit lower (like this)
00:37:864 (1) - the way this slider overlaps with 00:36:640 (3) is pretty awful ): make it like this instead
00:42:762 (3,4) - this sounds a little weird.. I'd remove (4) and extend (3), making it finish at 00:43:987
00:44:599 - it's okay not to place anything here, but if you prefer, add a note :>
00:46:436 (3) - make it symmetrical?
00:50:721 (1) - move this new combo to 00:49:191 (6)
00:59:293 (1,2,3) - place them like this instead?
01:08:476 (1) - make the first line straight?
01:31:742 (1,3) - make them symmetrical?
01:34:191 (1,2,3) - make it like this?
02:09:395 (3,4) - make them like this?
02:15:517 (4) - place it at x:192 y:160?
02:19:497 (3) - imo this would look better like this
03:12:456 (2) - add a note here?
03:21:027 (4) - add new combo here and remove it at 03:21:946 (1) -
03:58:374 (4) - place it at x:372 y:140
04:41:844 (1) - add new combo here and remove it at 04:42:762 (1) -
05:24:395 (5) - add new combo?
[Together]
The settings for this diff match more a normal+ than a Hard/Insane, which is what this diff is supposed to be? I'd say +1 OD and +1 HP Drain?
00:32:354 (5,6,7) - random jump :<
01:04:803 (1) - I thiink this note is unnecessary. try removing it and see if you think it sounds better?
01:27:762 (4,5) - make them symmetrical?
01:37:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - gahh random jumps ;_;
01:54:395 (3) - *nazi* align this with the two previous notes
02:11:844 (4) - extend this slider to 02:12:150? sounds way better imo
02:30:211 (7) - I'm not a big fan of the overlap here. :< make it like this or something like that
02:30:823 (8) - looks a little.. weird? maybe it's just me, but I think this would look better if you made the "waves" smaller (make the anchors closer)
03:25:007 (6) - make this slider straight to keep the pattern
04:43:374 (5) - not really sure, but Ctrl+G it?
04:46:742 (1,2) - this slowdown seems a little unnecessary imo. but it's totally up to you if you wanna keep it ^^
05:03:578 (3,4,1) - place them at x:376 y:212 to align it with 05:02:966 (1)
That's all from me :> Good luck with this!
[General]
gahh hitsounds ;_; the default ones REALLY don't fit this song. here are some that I think would fit well http://puu.sh/1HLsK. you could also look for some others on the ranked version of this, they used some really good ones.
[Xinely's Easy]
00:10:925 (3,4) - this pattern is kinda meh :< use more curves! example
00:26:844 (4,5) - I'd remove (5) and add a repeat to (4). sounds better imo
00:31:436 (1) - unnecessary new combo
00:37:252 (4) - make it symmetrical to 00:35:415 (2)
00:38:476 (5) - add a note here?
00:52:558 (3) - I'd replace this for a 1/1 slider. the blank part after the note is a little odd
01:01:742 (3) - add new combo
01:05:415 (1) - extend this spinner to 01:07:864?
01:17:660 (5) - extend it to 01:18:272?
01:31:742 (6) - gahh looks a little odd ;_; place the first anchor a bit lower. make this in the same shape of this 01:04:191 (6) instead! looks way better
01:38:170 (1) - this would look better placed here
02:09:395 (3) - add new combo
02:14:293 (3) - ^
02:26:538 (1) - place this new combo at 02:27:150 (2) instead
02:34:803 (5) - this is really just a suggestion, but use this spacing?
02:59:293 (5) - add new combo
03:12:150 (4) - remove finish in slider's head D: sounds weird
03:29:293 (7) - add a third anchor to it?
03:34:191 (5) - ctrl + j this? flows better imo
03:58:681 (5) - add new combo
04:01:742 (1) - ^
04:40:925 (4) - ugly overlap with 04:39:701 (3) :<
04:43:987 (3) - remove clap
05:41:844 (3) - ^
[Normal]
hitsounds are soo low! increase the volume, please
00:14:905 (7) - place new combo here and remove the one from 00:15:823 (1)
00:25:619 (1) - move new combo to 00:24:701 (5)
00:34:191 (5) - make the first line straight and place the anchor a bit lower (like this)
00:37:864 (1) - the way this slider overlaps with 00:36:640 (3) is pretty awful ): make it like this instead
00:42:762 (3,4) - this sounds a little weird.. I'd remove (4) and extend (3), making it finish at 00:43:987
00:44:599 - it's okay not to place anything here, but if you prefer, add a note :>
00:46:436 (3) - make it symmetrical?
00:50:721 (1) - move this new combo to 00:49:191 (6)
00:59:293 (1,2,3) - place them like this instead?
01:08:476 (1) - make the first line straight?
01:31:742 (1,3) - make them symmetrical?
01:34:191 (1,2,3) - make it like this?
02:09:395 (3,4) - make them like this?
02:15:517 (4) - place it at x:192 y:160?
02:19:497 (3) - imo this would look better like this
03:12:456 (2) - add a note here?
03:21:027 (4) - add new combo here and remove it at 03:21:946 (1) -
03:58:374 (4) - place it at x:372 y:140
04:41:844 (1) - add new combo here and remove it at 04:42:762 (1) -
05:24:395 (5) - add new combo?
[Together]
The settings for this diff match more a normal+ than a Hard/Insane, which is what this diff is supposed to be? I'd say +1 OD and +1 HP Drain?
00:32:354 (5,6,7) - random jump :<
01:04:803 (1) - I thiink this note is unnecessary. try removing it and see if you think it sounds better?
01:27:762 (4,5) - make them symmetrical?
01:37:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - gahh random jumps ;_;
01:54:395 (3) - *nazi* align this with the two previous notes
02:11:844 (4) - extend this slider to 02:12:150? sounds way better imo
02:30:211 (7) - I'm not a big fan of the overlap here. :< make it like this or something like that
02:30:823 (8) - looks a little.. weird? maybe it's just me, but I think this would look better if you made the "waves" smaller (make the anchors closer)
03:25:007 (6) - make this slider straight to keep the pattern
04:43:374 (5) - not really sure, but Ctrl+G it?
04:46:742 (1,2) - this slowdown seems a little unnecessary imo. but it's totally up to you if you wanna keep it ^^
05:03:578 (3,4,1) - place them at x:376 y:212 to align it with 05:02:966 (1)
That's all from me :> Good luck with this!