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Xinely

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-01-12T16:11:36+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• Preview Point: 01:08:630

Xinely's Easy (this diff seems a Normal but whatever)

• HP Drain Rate: 3 okay
• 00:19:191 (1) - As far as I can see you tried to map this diff following the voice, so it's better to delete this and the similar sliders. (keep in mind that this is an Easy and following both vocal/music is not always a good thing) changed
• 01:04:497 (5,1) - Delete (5) and start the spinner where the circle was. okay
• 03:06:334 (1) - Even if this is (1) there's no "New Combo" mark on this circle so add it. k
• 01:08:783 (1) - To emphasize the chorus why don't you delete this slider and add a circle at 01:08:476, one at 01:09:089 and one at 01:09:701? changed one note one slider
• 01:13:681 (1) - ^ but this is nope >_<
• 01:18:272 (x) - Add a circle. still keep this
• 01:31:742 (6) - End this slider at 01:32:966. vocal imo
• 01:36:640 (4) - End this slider at 01:37:864. ^
• 01:38:170 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 01:38:476. done
• 03:44:599 (x) - Add a circle. become slider
• 03:45:211 (x) - ^ ^
• 03:45:823 (1,2) - Delete these circles and add a slider. done
• 04:27:150 (1) - Start this slider at 04:28:068. i think i will give little break for newbie so keep this now
• 05:46:436 (x) - Add a green timing section here and set the volume at 10%. Add another green timing section at 05:46:742 and set the volume at 55%. fix

Together

• HP Drain Rate: 7 will be responded by hinsvar
• 00:32:966 (8) - Add a "New Combo" here and remove it from the next circle. okay
• 00:39:701 (x) - Add a circle. but i want make a little break since this is hard diff
• 00:39:854 (x) - ^ ^
• 00:42:762 (5) - Add a "New Combo". fix
• 00:47:660 (7) - ^ ^

Thanks 4 modding ~ (:
Easy
and
together

Last edited by Xinely 2013-01-13T05:38:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-01-13T01:17:06+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Normal

• 00:37:864 (1) - Remove the "New Combo". Done.
• 01:46:436 (1,1,2) - Delete the circles and end the spinner at 01:48:885. ^
• 03:43:987 (1,1) - Delete the circle and end the spinner at 03:46:436. (if you don't want to fix this: even if the circle is (1) there's no "New Combo" mark on it so add it) Did this and NC'd the new (1).
• 05:04:803 (1,1,2) - Delete the slider and the circle, then end the spinner at 05:07:252. (or end it at 05:06:640 and add a circle at 05:07:252) Did the first choice.
• 05:45:823 (2) - Remove the repetition. Done.

Together

• HP Drain Rate: 7 Nope, this is too high for a Hard diff, IMO...

Thanks for the mod; will mod your maps ASAP (:

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2013-01-16T11:43:38+00:00

Found this map in a modding Q
The collab is quite smooth already
Wish you happiness
Just wanna drop a ☆ and good luck with this

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2013-01-16T14:26:58+00:00

From my queue

SPOILER

General
in kiai time, how about add finish on long white tick?

Xinely's Easy
01:16:436 (4) - delte whistle on slider body
01:26:232 (4) - lol lovely slider <3
01:38:476 (1) - clap
02:32:660 (3) - delete here?
03:27:762 (4) - ^
04:27:150 (1) - lol

Normal
01:28:681 - add clap here?
04:50:109 (5) - clap on repeat
04:56:844 - clap here

Together
00:19:803 (3) - add whistle on end ( fit with piano )
00:32:507 (6) - delete this instead,00:32:813 (7) - add here ( fitter with rhythm :p )
00:35:109 (6) - delete clap?
00:38:017 (2) - move to 00:37:711 (6) - here
00:40:007 (1) - clap on start? hears nice imo
00:42:150 - add clap
01:18:272 (6) - move 1 grid right ( make perfect straight ) -nazi
01:51:027 (4,5,6) - breaking DS? fix this plz
01:55:007 (6) - 1 grid left
01:57:456 (8) - use 0.8x ds please
01:58:681 (1) - how about using Normal finish here? ( Not custom finish )
02:34:803 (7) - add clap on start and delete end
02:40:313 (8) - delete clap on end
02:44:599 (2,3,4) - wow.. suddnely so big DS how about ruduce little?
03:04:191 (4) - missed clap
05:37:252 (2) - clap on start
05:39:089 (3) - clap on end

Xinely's Easy
01:16:436 (4) - delte whistle on slider body
01:26:232 (4) - lol lovely slider <3
01:38:476 (1) - clap
02:32:660 (3) - delete here?
03:27:762 (4) - ^
04:27:150 (1) - lol

Normal
01:28:681 - add clap here?
04:50:109 (5) - clap on repeat
04:56:844 - clap here

Together
00:19:803 (3) - add whistle on end ( fit with piano )
00:32:507 (6) - delete this instead,00:32:813 (7) - add here ( fitter with rhythm :p )
00:35:109 (6) - delete clap?
00:38:017 (2) - move to 00:37:711 (6) - here
00:40:007 (1) - clap on start? hears nice imo
00:42:150 - add clap
01:18:272 (6) - move 1 grid right ( make perfect straight ) -nazi
01:51:027 (4,5,6) - breaking DS? fix this plz
01:55:007 (6) - 1 grid left
01:57:456 (8) - use 0.8x ds please
01:58:681 (1) - how about using Normal finish here? ( Not custom finish )
02:34:803 (7) - add clap on start and delete end
02:40:313 (8) - delete clap on end
02:44:599 (2,3,4) - wow.. suddnely so big DS how about ruduce little?
03:04:191 (4) - missed clap
05:37:252 (2) - clap on start
05:39:089 (3) - clap on end

such a Soooooooooo lovely song ;D i want make GD but i think i'm so late orz
why can't i find this song earlier... Should be ranked! good luck for rank with my starxD

Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-01-16T20:48:32+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
From my queue

SPOILER
General
in kiai time, how about add finish on long white tick?

Xinely's Easy
01:16:436 (4) - delte whistle on slider body okay
01:26:232 (4) - lol lovely slider <3 since this is lovely song, i want to make lovely slider <3
01:38:476 (1) - clap okay
02:32:660 (3) - delete here? ^
03:27:762 (4) - ^ ^
04:27:150 (1) - lol love love love <3

Together
00:32:507 (6) - delete this instead,00:32:813 (7) - add here ( fitter with rhythm :p )
00:35:109 (6) - delete clap?
00:38:017 (2) - move to 00:37:711 (6) - here
00:40:007 (1) - clap on start? hears nice imo
00:42:150 - add clap
01:18:272 (6) - move 1 grid right ( make perfect straight ) -nazi
01:51:027 (4,5,6) - breaking DS? fix this plz
01:55:007 (6) - 1 grid left
01:57:456 (8) - use 0.8x ds please
01:58:681 (1) - how about using Normal finish here? ( Not custom finish )
02:34:803 (7) - add clap on start and delete end
02:40:313 (8) - delete clap on end
02:44:599 (2,3,4) - wow.. suddnely so big DS how about ruduce little?
05:37:252 (2) - clap on start
05:39:089 (3) - clap on end
fix all >w<

such a Soooooooooo lovely song ;D i want make GD but i think i'm so late orz sorry SCV, maybe next time XD
why can't i find this song earlier... Should be ranked! good luck for rank with my starxD

thanks 4 modding and star ~ <3
also Zero_wind thanks 4 ur star >w<

easy
and
together with my baka ~

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-01-17T06:12:01+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Found this map in a modding Q
The collab is quite smooth already
Wish you happiness
Just wanna drop a ☆ and good luck with this

Good to hear that. Wish you happiness too, and thanks for the star and everything else \o

HelloSCV wrote:
From my queue

SPOILER
General
in kiai time, how about add finish on long white tick? I'm sure enough I did it on my part... I guess I'll add them on Xinely's parts/diff too.

Normal
01:28:681 - add clap here? Done.
04:50:109 (5) - clap on repeat ^
04:56:844 - clap here ^

Together
00:19:803 (3) - add whistle on end ( fit with piano ) Done.
03:04:191 (4) - missed clap ^

such a Soooooooooo lovely song ;D i want make GD but i think i'm so late orz ...Good to hear that, but even if this is still WIP, I won't accept your offer anyway, because this is supposed to be a couple mapset... Sorry, I guess ):
why can't i find this song earlier... Should be ranked! good luck for rank with my starxD

Thanks for the mod and star

terametis

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Joined April 2009

terametis 2013-01-19T17:13:12+00:00

from my queue

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you will be able to reject them without reason.

[Together]

00:47:048 (4) - 2 grid left?
00:47:660 (1) - You didn't put custom tick sound to 00:48:272, I think put it is more good :3
01:16:130 (5) - same, try use custom tick sound.
01:46:436 (1) - You set whistle on the slider's slide, is it intentional?
01:48:578 (2) - Ctrl+G. This is a matter of taste to be honest. If I played this 1/4 slider, I treat it as a one-shot. so Ctrl+G is good flow for me.
01:56:844 (4) - add clap
02:58:374 (2) - Ctrl + G. same as reason for 01:48:572.
03:04:191 (4) - add clap
03:11:844 (2) - add whistle on the slider's end? You put whistle on 01:14:599, and you put it to downbeat on this KIAI except KIAI start.
03:26:538 (3) - Ctrl + G. same as reason for 01:48:572.

04:00:211 (1,2,3,4) - Just a suggestion. How about this?　If you use this, you need change (5) and (6).

SPOILER

232,68,240211,6,0,P|280:88|304:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
387,87,240823,2,0,P|385:139|352:177,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,244,241436,2,0,P|370:259|323:241,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
284,328,242048,2,0,P|252:286|253:236,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

04:19:191 (3) - remove whistle on the slider's slide if you don't have a reason.
04:24:395 (1) - try use custom tick sound to 04:25:007.

04:38:476 (1,2,3,4,5) - Small adjustment. feel free to ignore.

SPOILER

456,132,278476,6,0,P|480:176|468:252,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
428,312,279089,2,0,P|384:344|304:356,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,360,279701,2,0,P|176:356|112:312,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,264,280313,2,0,P|64:212|84:148,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,72,280925,2,0,P|136:32|212:24,2,100,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

05:05:721 (2) - move to x204,y60.
05:17:354 (4) - try use custom tick sound to 05:17:666.

[Normal]
Very careful and good work :3
I used a lot of time to check histsound, they are almost perfectly for regularity.

02:17:660 (1) - You use whistle+clap to the slider's end, is it intentional? This pattern has not been used much in this diff.
04:41:538 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - You use DSx1.3, is it intentional?
05:07:864 (1) - Add New combo(NC bugs). 　
05:46:742 (1) - why don't stack to 05:44:599 (4) - ?

[Easy]

01:09:089 (2) - add whistle to the slider's end?　You put it on 03:06:946 (2) - .
01:45:823 (5) - (nazi)Ctrl+J and put to x324,y296. and 1 grid down 01:47:048 (1) - .
02:07:864 (2) - You use drum sampleset to slider's end, is it intentional?
02:59:905 (2) - add clap to the slider's end.
03:01:130 (3) - remove clap on the slider's head.
03:06:334 (1) - Add New combo (NC bugs)
03:13:987 (5) - add clap to the slider's start and add whistle on the slider's end.
03:20:109 (5) - change to clap to the slider's start and change to whistle to the slider's end.
03:29:293 (6) - add finish to the slider's start.
03:42:762 (4) - remove finish
03:44:599 (6) - add clap to the slider's start.
05:06:027 (4) - remove whistle on the slider's slide if you don't have a reason.
05:41:844 (3) - ^

that's all.

my mod start is 4 hour ago....
good luck<3

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-01-20T00:27:36+00:00

terametis wrote:
[Together]
01:46:436 (1) - You set whistle on the slider's slide, is it intentional? Yes, this is supposed to follow the vocal.
01:48:578 (2) - Ctrl+G. This is a matter of taste to be honest. If I played this 1/4 slider, I treat it as a one-shot. so Ctrl+G is good flow for me. Nope, I'm fine with it this way.
02:58:374 (2) - Ctrl + G. same as reason for 01:48:572. ^
03:04:191 (4) - add clap Done.
04:19:191 (3) - remove whistle on the slider's slide if you don't have a reason. Removed.
04:24:395 (1) - try use custom tick sound to 04:25:007. I'm sure enough I've placed one there... nvm, done.
05:05:721 (2) - move to x204,y60. Did stuff around here.
[Normal]
Very careful and good work :3
I used a lot of time to check histsound, they are almost perfectly for regularity. That sounds good~

02:17:660 (1) - You use whistle+clap to the slider's end, is it intentional? This pattern has not been used much in this diff. Whoops. Removed whistle.
04:41:538 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - You use DSx1.3, is it intentional? Eh wait. Fixed.
05:07:864 (1) - Add New combo(NC bugs). 　Umm, it's already there.
05:46:742 (1) - why don't stack to 05:44:599 (4) - ? Done.

Thanks for modding~

Last edited by Hinsvar 2013-01-20T01:14:57+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-01-20T00:34:37+00:00

terametis wrote:
from my queue

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you will be able to reject them without reason.

[Together]
00:47:048 (4) - 2 grid left? okay
00:47:660 (1) - You didn't put custom tick sound to 00:48:272, I think put it is more good :3 okay :3
01:16:130 (5) - same, try use custom tick sound. ^
01:48:578 (2) - Ctrl+G. This is a matter of taste to be honest. If I played this 1/4 slider, I treat it as a one-shot. so Ctrl+G is good flow for me. that's okay now
01:56:844 (4) - add clap k
03:11:844 (2) - add whistle on the slider's end? You put whistle on 01:14:599, and you put it to downbeat on this KIAI except KIAI start. k
03:26:538 (3) - Ctrl + G. same as reason for 01:48:572. nope
04:00:211 (1,2,3,4) - Just a suggestion. How about this?　If you use this, you need change (5) and (6) Nice ~ <3.
SPOILER
232,68,240211,6,0,P|280:88|304:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
387,87,240823,2,0,P|385:139|352:177,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,244,241436,2,0,P|370:259|323:241,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
284,328,242048,2,0,P|252:286|253:236,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
04:38:476 (1,2,3,4,5) - Small adjustment. feel free to ignore. Not bad ~ <3
SPOILER
456,132,278476,6,0,P|480:176|468:252,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
428,312,279089,2,0,P|384:344|304:356,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,360,279701,2,0,P|176:356|112:312,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,264,280313,2,0,P|64:212|84:148,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,72,280925,2,0,P|136:32|212:24,2,100,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
05:17:354 (4) - try use custom tick sound to 05:17:666. k
[Easy]
01:09:089 (2) - add whistle to the slider's end?　You put it on 03:06:946 (2) - . okay
01:45:823 (5) - (nazi)Ctrl+J and put to x324,y296. and 1 grid down 01:47:048 (1) - . okay
02:07:864 (2) - You use drum sampleset to slider's end, is it intentional? nope
02:59:905 (2) - add clap to the slider's end. nope
03:01:130 (3) - remove clap on the slider's head. okay
03:06:334 (1) - Add New combo (NC bugs) okay
03:13:987 (5) - add clap to the slider's start and add whistle on the slider's end.okay
03:20:109 (5) - change to clap to the slider's start and change to whistle to the slider's end. okay
03:29:293 (6) - add finish to the slider's start. okay
03:42:762 (4) - remove finish nope
03:44:599 (6) - add clap to the slider's start. done
05:06:027 (4) - remove whistle on the slider's slide if you don't have a reason. nope
05:41:844 (3) - ^ okay
that's all.

my mod start is 4 hour ago.... 3 hours for modding? O___O
good luck<3

Thanks 4 modding

Cygnus

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Joined December 2011

Cygnus 2013-01-20T08:50:03+00:00

General

You have two "Giorgo" in your tags right now. One is enough so better remove the other one.
Why not add a short kiai fountain on 05:46:742 to emphasize the last syllable of the vocal of this map? XD

Easy

Bump your Approach Rate +1 to make this overall performance look great! (:
01:04:497 (1) - This spinner sounds really off in my opinion. I know you're following the vocals but I don't see a good reason why the spinner should follow too. One thing I can suggest here is you add a circle on 01:04:191 and move the spinner on 01:04:803 instead. Try it for yourself and you'll that it makes much more sense compared to the current one right now.
01:10:313 (3) - Add a new combo here since it's the start of the kiai and I believe it'll make much more sense too (:
01:21:946 (5) - There seems to be a weird new combo problem here in my opinion. Try this suggestion if it pleases you:
- [list:9abc7]
1. Mark a new combo here: 01:21:946.
2. Remove new combo for this one: 01:23:783
3. Add new combo for this circle: 01:24:395

01:26:232 (4) - This heart slider is poorly done in my opinion. I think it would be much better if the slider's head and tail is at the bottom rather in the top. They will look better. Try surfing around this thread to know more about making delicious sliders: Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide!!

01:45:823 (5) - I don't see the point why you should make this slider crumpled. One simple curve slider would do the problem.

02:22:252 - Why not add a circle here instead and a 1/1-long slider on 02:22:558? This will help you emphasize the vocals a lot more since the current one is quite off the song and not making a little sense.

03:51:946 (3) - This slider is already off the grid!! Please move it farther from the edge for better gameplay.

04:27:150 (1) - Here is a list of the problems I see with this slider:

[list:9abc7]

The slider is not symmetrical and is not in the center.
The slider is badly created and needs more improvement.
This slider is too long and could be replaced by some more circles that will make much sense in this map.
This slider makes much more sense if it starts on 04:27:456.

Well of course, only thing I can suggest is that you visit the Slider thread i linked to you so that you'll get a lot more concepts that will enhance this difficulty's mapping style.

04:42:150 (2) - Why is this slider so long? :O I think 1/1 is enough for this part. Also, if you ever happen to follow this one (which I highly suggest that you should), add a circle on 04:43:374 to fill up the empty part after you reduced the slider length.

04:44:599 - I believe there should be a circle here instead of a spinner. It will make much more sense if you'll do it since the singer is still singing on this part. So, I prefer you just make the spinner start on 04:45:211 instead. Try it for yourself! XD

05:43:374 (1) - Just like the other issues with this diff, this slider should just be 1/1 long in my opinion. Also, if you followed this suggestion (which I again highly suggest that you should ^^), add a circle on 05:44:599 OR make the slider a reverse slider XD

Normal

Bump your Approach Rate +1 for better gameplay performance! XD
00:33:885 (4) - What about a whistle on this slider's tail? It sounds better since I believe you're missing one.
00:43:374 (3) - Same thing as above. I think there should be a whistle here too :3
01:38:170 (6) - I think using a 1/1 slider on this part is not suitable for this time since you are following the rhythm of the vocal. I suggest you use a 1/2 reverse slider instead because it flows better with the vocal in my opinion.
02:19:497 (3) - This slider could have been better if you fixed the blanket in it. How bout the picture below?:
SPOILER
03:47:048 (1) - Since this is a normal diff and the spinner ended so early on this part. I suggest you move this circle a bit closer to the center so that players can easily hit it even right after they finished spinning.
05:10:925 (1) - I think a new combo mark should be on 05:12:456 instead of this slider. Please fix it.

Together

00:37:864 (1,2) - Is there anything special on this part that you didn't follow the spacing? :O This somehow broke the flow of the map when I first played it. Consider using a proper spacing since this circles look misplaced in my opinion.
00:38:476 (1) - Please remove the new combo here since it is not needed and necessary. There is no change in the rhythm so I guess you don't need it anymore so better remove it XD
00:47:048 (4) - You shouldn't ignore spacing inconsistencies like this. I know it's a small problem but this will kind of break the visuals of this difficulty since they don't kind of look good.
01:08:323 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - This is too much in my opinion. This is surely fine for a mapset that has a good spread but I'm not really sure about this circles right now. It's creating a huge gap between this diff and Normal. So my suggestion for this one is you reduce the number of notes for this part OR replace some circles with sliders.
01:16:130 (1) - This slider seems off cause I can't seem to understand what rhythm it is following. What I can only suggest for this one is you replace it with a 1/2 reverse slider instead.
01:48:272 (1,2,1) - I'll leave this as a warning since I don't know if it is reasonable enough to add a little mini slider jump here. Just leave this as is, I'll get back to this one if i think it's bad. lol
01:52:558 (1) - This slider is really off and is not following the rhythm at all. Please change this one into 1/1 sliders instead. It's up to you though whether you want it 1/1 or anything as long as you replace this long slider because it doesn't really make any sense. :O
01:55:313 (7,8,9) - Move three grids up to maintain consistency with the spacing like on 01:54:395 (3,4).
01:57:456 (8) - I will say it again. :O This slider is off too Why do you keep making these? :O It's not making any sense at all D: Try doing a 1/1 slider instead.
02:18:272 (1) - The new combo here is not necessary. You should remove it.
02:30:823 (8) - Hi Xinely, why do you love making sliders that are off? Sure they look good and stuff, but you should ask yourself if it's making any sense. Because in my opinion, it's not :O I'm sorry if i'm being too harsh (although I'm not XD) But you shouldn't be doing these sliders. It's not following any rhythm at all. So again, replace this one with 1/1 or anything that would please you, but not this long slider, just no. :O
02:44:599 (2) - Oh hi inconsistenst spacing! You should be fixed! XD I'll be watching you til you move
02:51:027 (1,2,3) - Okay this jump is kind of too much for a hard diff. Please move them closer instead if you want to keep it this way.
02:58:068 (1,2,3) - Same thing as above. Please reduce the spacing.
03:19:191 (6) - Oh look, another Inconsistent Spacing! Go tell Xinely to fix you XD
04:03:272 - This part should have a circle instead rather than a spinner. This is to emphasize the vocals a bit more. So basically, you're gonna have to make the spinner start on 04:03:578 instead so it will make much more sense XD
04:32:048 (1,2,3,4) - Oh God, did you even use Distance Snapping for this circles? D: They're all inconsistent. Please fix it >.> It feels like you just placed these circles randomly for the sake of filling up this part of the vocal.
04:46:742 (1,2) - These sliders are too slow to be recognized as 1/1. I suggest you use x.75 instead of x.50.
05:00:517 (1) - Remove new combo because I believe it is not necessary.

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-01-20T10:23:59+00:00

Philippines wrote:
General
You have two "Giorgo" in your tags right now. One is enough so better remove the other one. Nah, the two "Giorgio"s are part of a phrase, and it would be impossible to find one if I remove one of them.

Why not add a short kiai fountain on 05:46:742 to emphasize the last syllable of the vocal of this map? XD Okay, added.
Normal
Bump your Approach Rate +1 for better gameplay performance! XD Okay then

00:33:885 (4) - What about a whistle on this slider's tail? It sounds better since I believe you're missing one. Done.

00:43:374 (3) - Same thing as above. I think there should be a whistle here too :3 ^

01:38:170 (6) - I think using a 1/1 slider on this part is not suitable for this time since you are following the rhythm of the vocal. I suggest you use a 1/2 reverse slider instead because it flows better with the vocal in my opinion. ^

02:19:497 (3) - This slider could have been better if you fixed the blanket in it. How bout the picture below?: Un-blanketed this part, instead.

03:47:048 (1) - Since this is a normal diff and the spinner ended so early on this part. I suggest you move this circle a bit closer to the center so that players can easily hit it even right after they finished spinning. Done.

05:10:925 (1) - I think a new combo mark should be on 05:12:456 instead of this slider. Please fix it. Nope; I think this is correct already.
Together
01:08:323 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - This is too much in my opinion. This is surely fine for a mapset that has a good spread but I'm not really sure about this circles right now. It's creating a huge gap between this diff and Normal. So my suggestion for this one is you reduce the number of notes for this part OR replace some circles with sliders. Umm, nope. This is already okay for a Hard diff and won't make a big gap of difficulty between those two diffs.

01:48:272 (1,2,1) - I'll leave this as a warning since I don't know if it is reasonable enough to add a little mini slider jump here. Just leave this as is, I'll get back to this one if i think it's bad. lol I think it's okay though lol

02:18:272 (1) - The new combo here is not necessary. You should remove it. Done.

02:51:027 (1,2,3) - Okay this jump is kind of too much for a hard diff. Please move them closer instead if you want to keep it this way. Umm, I don't really think it's that hard orz

02:58:068 (1,2,3) - Same thing as above. Please reduce the spacing. ^

05:00:517 (1) - Remove new combo because I believe it is not necessary. Necessary to denote the beginning of a new pattern.

Thanks for the mod~

Last edited by Hinsvar 2013-01-20T11:10:47+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinely

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Xinely 2013-01-20T11:05:11+00:00

okay thx 4 modding
because a long mod, i forget which i fixed or not
but almost of that i fixed
~

Snowy Dream

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Snowy Dream 2013-01-28T03:24:46+00:00

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

Red - Important or Issue
Blue - You'd better fix them
Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
Fine!
[Easy]

00:14:905 (1) - Consider removing this whistle? It is needless in my view.
00:24:701 (1) - ^^^ (not mention again)
00:35:415 (2,4) - Make these two slider symmetrical with itself, then it looks better :3
01:04:497 (5) - It is hard for beginner to click it and get 300, so you had better use a slider from 01:04:191 to 01:04:497 instead, it would not only sound good but also easy enough for beginners.
01:12:150 (4) - Two alternative choices : use whistle or use finish, use them both sounds a bit noise exactly :< My suggestion is to use whistle
01:17:048 - ^^^ (not mention again)

[Normal]

01:29:293 (1,2,3) - Stack on the previous slider is not so good, to get a better look, what about this?

[Together]

01:58:681 (1) - Normal finish sounds really a bit noisy, I guess soft whistle is the best sound effect here, ppl may feel more comfortable :3
02:11:997 - Also, this soft whistle is not suitable here, use finish instead can make a better sense.
03:21:027 (1) - Three returns are not fit the music in my view, what about leaving only 1 return and add an another note on 03:21:640? It would sound better and fit the vocal better.
04:30:823 (5) - Since 04:28:068 (1,2) these two notes are overlapping, this note should also overlap on the end of 04:30:211 (4) to keep the symmetrical.

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Wonderful!!

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-01-28T10:14:51+00:00

Snowy Dream wrote:
[Normal]
01:29:293 (1,2,3) - Stack on the previous slider is not so good, to get a better look, what about this? I'm fine with what I have now.
[Together]
02:11:997 - Also, this soft whistle is not suitable here, use finish instead can make a better sense. Done.

Thanks for modding \o\

Last edited by Hinsvar 2013-01-28T10:57:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinely

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Xinely 2013-01-28T10:55:53+00:00

Snowy Dream wrote:
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

[Easy]
00:14:905 (1) - Consider removing this whistle? It is needless in my view. okay
00:24:701 (1) - ^^^ (not mention again) ^
00:35:415 (2,4) - Make these two slider symmetrical with itself, then it looks better :3 k :3
01:04:497 (5) - It is hard for beginner to click it and get 300, so you had better use a slider from 01:04:191 to 01:04:497 instead, it would not only sound good but also easy enough for beginners. done
01:12:150 (4) - Two alternative choices : use whistle or use finish, use them both sounds a bit noise exactly :< My suggestion is to use whistle
01:17:048 - ^^^ (not mention again) i keep this now
[Together]

Thanks 4 Mod >w<
01:58:681 (1) - Normal finish sounds really a bit noisy, I guess soft whistle is the best sound effect here, ppl may feel more comfortable :3
done
03:21:027 (1) - Three returns are not fit the music in my view, what about leaving only 1 return and add an another note on 03:21:640? It would sound better and fit the vocal better. not bad, fixed
04:30:823 (5) - Since 04:28:068 (1,2) these two notes are overlapping, this note should also overlap on the end of 04:30:211 (4) to keep the symmetrical. i think it's okay for now
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Wonderful!!

indyinyou

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indyinyou 2013-01-29T10:12:23+00:00

[Easy]
00:33:578 : add note and clap ?
00:38:476 : ^
00:39:089 : remove this
00:45:823 : use sildertick SC2
00:48:272 : clap
00:50:721 : use sildertick SC2
00:53:170 : add note and clap
01:27:456 : use sildertick SC2
01:32:354 : ^
01:37:252 : ^
[Normal]

00:22:864 : add clap / but i m not sure for it
01:42:762 : add only note here and silder 01:43:374 to 01:43:987
01:44:599 : this silder end at 01:45:211 and add only note at 01:45:823
02:52:252 : add note ?
02:58:681 : add clap / but i m not sure for it

they're just suggestions

so sry i won t full mod your map so long

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-01-30T09:52:43+00:00

indyinyou wrote:
[Normal]

00:22:864 : add clap / but i m not sure for it There is nothing for the clap to follow.
01:42:762 : add only note here and silder 01:43:374 to 01:43:987 Done.
01:44:599 : this silder end at 01:45:211 and add only note at 01:45:823 ^
02:52:252 : add note ? ^
02:58:681 : add clap / but i m not sure for it ^

Hoped you could've modded Together too, though; your mod was pretty useful

Thanks for modding~

indyinyou

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indyinyou 2013-01-31T02:04:42+00:00

ok i m back xD

[Together]

01:20:874 : i think drum sound here not 01:21:181
01:21:946 : this slider end at 01:22:252 and add note 01:22:405 / 01:22:558
01:23:323 : add note ?
01:47:813 : remove this ?
01:49:191 : slider end 01:50:109 then add note 01:50:262 01:50:415
01:50:874 : remove note
02:29:140 : ^ and add note 02:29:446 better
02:31:742 : move back to 02:31:589
02:31:895 : try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/591237
02:34:038 : remove this add note 02:34:344
02:51:334 : remove and add only note at 02:51:487
03:10:925 : move back to 03:10:772 and add note here 03:11:078
03:13:527 : add note
03:15:364 : ^
03:15:976 : ^
03:17:507 : remove this add note 03:18:425 better
03:23:170 : make slider return 03:23:323 end at 03:23:476
03:30:364 : i think add only note and then add note at 03:30:670

they're just suggestions

no kd for this and here Star

Xinely

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Xinely 2013-01-31T10:01:46+00:00

thx 4 mod
i forget which i fixed and not fixed orz
and thanks 4 star ~

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-01-31T10:27:05+00:00

indyinyou wrote:
[Together]

01:47:813 : remove this ? Umm, why would I?
02:51:334 : remove and add only note at 02:51:487 ^
03:30:364 : i think add only note and then add note at 03:30:670^

No changes from my part now, but thanks for modding and also for the star

Flask

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Flask 2013-02-01T14:57:42+00:00

owo/

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

no kiai fountain at the end of "Together" diff? lol
Remove Miku from tags? That's unnecessary since his/her name is already in tag
If you need, take the skin from the rank version (don't forget to ask before you take it lol

[

Xinely's Easy]

00:10:007 (1,2,3) - well.. "kimi no" is a sentence, if you break them that would be weird o.q so I'd prefer slider first then note second, just like what you did on 00:15:211 (2,3) -
00:58:987 (1) - Well the beginners will be confused by this since it has 2 reserves, that's not same with previous part. So try something like remove one reserve from this slider, then add an 1/2 slider after that. Don't worry, it won't be so hard since low BPM is low x3
01:18:578 (1) - Try to remove a reserve and use a note instead, current rhythm kinda odd to me
01:26:232 (3) - The slider begin/end shouldn't use finish, it's too loud, and inconsistent with other same parts (you've add finish at the downbeat). Remove finish could make the hitsound pattern as well as it should be.
01:09:089 (2) - / 01:13:681 (1) - / 01:28:681 (1) - Actually these things are great patterns, but it would be better if you can do something like 01:34:191 (2) - . I mean Sliderhead/note at the downbeat. Listen the music carefully, the downbeat always start another lyric, not same as previous. They shouldn't be connect if there's special vocal/music or something else. It still pretty well construct, but could better if you do like what I've said.
01:36:640 (4) - This should 1/2 longer end at white tick (01:37:864 - ) since you're using 1/1 in the previous/next pattern. Keep 1/1 rhythm would be great to the beginners while playing.
02:08:476 - Nothing here? It would be so quiet here. Add a soft-whistle perhaps
02:09:395 (3) - This slider should be rotated by 180° to make this pattern won't be that bored. Current has no flow/boring part since 2 sliders are not same length but towards the same direction.
02:33:578 - Not really need, but do you forget to use custom hitsound for this slidertick? It makes me feel "wow there's a slider tick but there's no sound, and there's a clap sound in the music." That's not really need, but if you can do it, it'll be 100% cooler.
Do this for 02:38:476 - / 02:40:925 - / 02:55:619 - / 02:56:844 - too
02:39:089 - I don't see any reason for adding a clap, the music has no clap sound here. Please remove the clap to be consistent with that clap rhythm!
03:47:048 - Seems you forget to add clap here (:
04:36:946 (1) - As I said before, 2 reserves are so boring. Try to remove one reserve, then move the next slider to the downbeat, add a reserve on the next slider. It would be cooler than 2 reserves.
04:42:762 - You shouldn't put nothing here. As you heard, you will know that the downbeat has a strong vocal/music. If you want to prove that clap at the red line, you should make this slider shorter (ends at the downbeat), then add a note at the red line.
05:02:966 (2,3) - nazi, but improve blanket here.

This diff needs some improve for rhythm/hitsounding/placement. Easier diffs are not only follow the vocal with spacing. It should be followed the rhythm more than vocals, so the beginners would play this easier as they can be. Some of vocals on the red line in this map aren't really need to put something to fit it, you can ignore it when it fits by using consistent 1/1 / 1/2 rhythm. And the placement, easier diffs should be clean and flow, not messy or crowded.

[

Normal]

00:28:068 (3,5) - nazi a bit, but try to make a circle for these sliders. Like example here. If you like it, try to
copy the shape of (3) to instead the shape of (1), too :3
00:39:701 (7) - I can heard a sound in the background music here, consider to add a whistle to prove there's a sound in the music.
00:47:966 (4) - I feel like you should use 1/2 slider instead of a note here. Honestly a note suppose nothing here, for the music/vocals/rhythm..etc, a note won't fit with them. An 1/2 slider will fit with 1/2 rhythm, and it follows the clap sound :3!
00:57:150 - Is that a mistake for adding a clap? Since I don't see any reason for adding a clap (music,vocals,rhythm,consistency..etc), better to remove it.
01:13:068 - Better to add something here, it'll break the hit-rhythm while playing, even it's fit with music. You can combine 01:12:762 (2,3) - these two notes to solve this problem.
01:22:558 (4) - Try to stack this under (2)'s slider end, or move it out of (2)'s slider end. Current (4) has been overlapped by (2)'s slider end a bit, but not all. That's ugly since it'll be covered by hit300.png, but not covered all the slider head.
03:53:783 (4) - ^ It's not hard to fix it, right (:
01:45:823 (4) - Just suggestion, but I feel this should be "higher" than current, it would be flow, too. If you agree, move this to x:248, y:32 would be a good way to change this.
03:05:721 (4) - Better to add a NC on this because the rhythm changes here, and there's a little break before this. New Combos will attention the players that "The rhythm isn't same as previous part" while playing :3.
Nice Normal diff actually. <3

[

Together]

Hinsvar's Part

00:12:150 (4) - Not really like this shape, the curve is not really beautiful imo. Move the curve straighter than current would be better. Here's an example!
00:15:823 (1) - This too ^
02:59:446 (4) - I don't get why you use 1/4 slider here, to fit with vocals? If yes, it should be start at white tick; If not, change to a note that place at red line would be better since it's a random 1/2 rhythm.
04:24:395 (1,2) - Well a bit nazi... but use more node on the curve of the slider, it'll be more curve actually.

Xinely's Part
00:31:742 (4,5) - I don't see any reason for jumping, no individual vocal/music here, no downbeat here too. Use 1.0 spacing to place this note would be better.
00:48:885 (2) - Use the same spacing to place the jump here, the jump here are really fit, but ugly placement without same spacing.
01:23:170 (7,1) - Same here too, it should jump between (1,2), not (7,1). Ctrl+G (1) would be a way to change this.
02:45:823 (7,8,9) - That big jump might be a scare for the player, reduce the spacing would be great since this kind of song is too soft ;w;!
03:21:334 - Add a clap here, seems you forget to do that
05:11:538 (2) - Move to x:492, y:296, more flow imo
05:17:048 (3) - x:68, y:93

Good luck for this lonnnnnnnng song >w<!

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-02T06:49:09+00:00

Flask wrote:
[ Normal]
00:28:068 (3,5) - nazi a bit, but try to make a circle for these sliders. Like example here. If you like it, try to
copy the shape of (3) to instead the shape of (1), too :3 Uhm, this is intentional, so no change, I guess...
00:39:701 (7) - I can heard a sound in the background music here, consider to add a whistle to prove there's a sound in the music. I'll place it on 00:40:007 (8) instead; the music on (7) is not strong enough to be emphasized.
00:47:966 (4) - I feel like you should use 1/2 slider instead of a note here. Honestly a note suppose nothing here, for the music/vocals/rhythm..etc, a note won't fit with them. An 1/2 slider will fit with 1/2 rhythm, and it follows the clap sound :3! Umm, I don't think so, actually... I think it's fine like what it is now...
00:57:150 - Is that a mistake for adding a clap? Since I don't see any reason for adding a clap (music,vocals,rhythm,consistency..etc), better to remove it. The music supports it, actually...
01:13:068 - Better to add something here, it'll break the hit-rhythm while playing, even it's fit with music. You can combine 01:12:762 (2,3) - these two notes to solve this problem. Did it the other way.
01:22:558 (4) - Try to stack this under (2)'s slider end, or move it out of (2)'s slider end. Current (4) has been overlapped by (2)'s slider end a bit, but not all. That's ugly since it'll be covered by hit300.png, but not covered all the slider head. Moved it out.
03:53:783 (4) - ^ It's not hard to fix it, right (: ^ (:
01:45:823 (4) - Just suggestion, but I feel this should be "higher" than current, it would be flow, too. If you agree, move this to x:248, y:32 would be a good way to change this. Done.
03:05:721 (4) - Better to add a NC on this because the rhythm changes here, and there's a little break before this. New Combos will attention the players that "The rhythm isn't same as previous part" while playing :3. ^
Nice Normal diff actually. <3 <3
[ Together]
Hinsvar's Part
00:12:150 (4) - Not really like this shape, the curve is not really beautiful imo. Move the curve straighter than current would be better. Here's an example! Okay...
00:15:823 (1) - This too ^ ^
02:59:446 (4) - I don't get why you use 1/4 slider here, to fit with vocals? If yes, it should be start at white tick; If not, change to a note that place at red line would be better since it's a random 1/2 rhythm. Uhm, I'm sure enough the vocal begins from the red tick, and it's still there on the blue tick until the white one, so yeah.
04:24:395 (1,2) - Well a bit nazi... but use more node on the curve of the slider, it'll be more curve actually. Nope, I'm fine with what I have now.
Good luck for this lonnnnnnnng song >w<!

Thanks for modding \owo/

Xinely

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Xinely 2013-02-02T07:29:25+00:00

fix all
thanks flask~

Lehon

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Lehon 2013-02-10T11:22:07+00:00

Hi ~

General:
Nice song, nice map! There aren't real mistakes, so my mod is mainly a bit of suggestions

Xinely's Easy:
00:16:436 (3) - move this 2 grids left, 3 grids down to fit perfectly with the slider
00:41:538 (2) - I'm not totally convinced of this slider, maybe make it horizontal? like this: http://puu.sh/1Zr0t
00:43:374 (3) - then move this because of the distance snap
00:56:232 (3) - x:368 y:76 seems better imo
01:02:966 (5) - 3 grids left
01:43:374 (1,2,3,4) - you can make a square, I think the correct position of the 4 is x:196 y:288
02:14:599 (4) - move the second white point 2 grids right for a better curve
03:32:966 (4) - move this in x:36 y:152 for a fit with the circle
03:40:925 (1,2,3,4) - you can make this more symmetrical, like this: http://puu.sh/20i36
04:53:170 (3,5) - overlap!

Normal:
02:17:660 (1) - move the third white point 3 grids right
02:17:660 (1) - you can make them fit better

04:29:293 (4) - I don't like this slider xD you can try to stretch it
04:33:885 (2) - move this at x:256 y:92, seems better

Together:
00:32:354 (5,6) - maybe move 5 at x:136 y:60 and 6 at x:72 y:144 to make the distance more regular?
00:48:885 (2) - move this 3 grids up
01:18:272 (6) - this isn't in line with the other circles, move it 1 grid right, 1 grid down
01:56:538 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm not totally convinced of this xD maybe try to make a line like this: http://puu.sh/20iml because the curve isn't so much effective
02:37:252 (6) - move this at x:303 y:124
02:43:987 (1) - move this at x:100 y:312 because in the next three circles you used a different distance

This is all! Good luck, I hope to see this ranked soon

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-10T14:06:37+00:00

Lehon wrote:
Hi ~

General:
Nice song, nice map! There aren't real mistakes, so my mod is mainly a bit of suggestions Good to hear that (:

Normal:
02:17:660 (1) - move the third white point 3 grids right Done.
02:17:660 (1) - you can make them fit better Not seeing any problems here, still...
04:29:293 (4) - I don't like this slider xD you can try to stretch it ^
04:33:885 (2) - move this at x:256 y:92, seems better Looks better, yes, but it'll break the spacing here.

This is all! Good luck, I hope to see this ranked soon

Thanks for modding

yoyo1005221

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yoyo1005221 2013-02-11T08:54:35+00:00

your best friend~~~

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-11T09:22:47+00:00

yoyo1005221 wrote:
your best friend~~~

It's actually about long distance relationship though

Loneight

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Loneight 2013-02-13T08:14:03+00:00

Hi~ Hinsvar
M4M.

"re" is means "remove"
Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[Xinely's Easy]

00:28:987 (1,2) - swap NC, let there like 00:24:089 (3,1) - enactment, because I think there vocal same as 00:24:089 (3,1) -
01:09:701 (3) - how about NC for kiai time start?
01:09:701 (3) - why not add clap at end?
01:13:374 (1,2) - swap NC, I listen a stress vocal in 01:14:599 (2) - , so NC 01:14:599 (2) - will more suitable for vocal
01:18:578 (1,2) - same as ^
01:18:578 (1) - I think you forget add a clap at exhumation
01:26:232 (3) - remove finish at end, it isn't suitable for there
01:33:272 (1,2) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
01:38:476 (1,2) - same as ^
01:39:701 (3) - I think re whistle and change to add clap will more suitable for music
01:43:374 (1,2) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
02:59:905 (2,3) - why not same as 01:00:517 (3,4,5,6) - sound enactment add a clap at end?
03:11:232 (1,3) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) - , also can get 03:11:232 (1,2) - like 03:06:334 (1,2) -
03:16:130 (1,2) - same as ^
03:25:925 (1,3) - same as ^
03:30:823 (1,2) - same as ^
03:35:721 (1,2) - same as ^, but if you do this, please don't stack there
03:50:415 (1) - set a S:C2 green line on 03:50:721 - , I think you know why I suggest this ~
03:51:946 (3) - I just think this slider is strange in shape,
03:54:395 (5) - set a S:C2 green line on 03:54:701 -
04:27:150 (1) - it isn't symmetrical Heart-shaped, try to get more symmetrical
04:47:048 (1,2) - same as 01:09:701 (3) -
04:51:640 (1,3) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
05:36:027 (2) - add a whistle at end like 05:30:517 (1) -
05:32:966 (3) - strange for me in shape ~ try to get it much pretty
05:40:925 (2) - same as 05:36:027 (2) -

some place's flow need more attention, and some slider can much pretty, but anyway, good diff >w<

[Normal]

00:48:578 (5) - don't stack there, it is hard for newbie, if you want stack, try to NC
00:56:844 (2) - re clap at exhumation, there clap sound strange for me, I think dosen't need add anything sound for there is suitable for music
02:48:272 (2) - re clap and add whistle, there clap sound is strange for me, also let 02:47:048 (1,2,3) - have new rhythm
02:57:762 (2) - same as 00:56:844 (2) -
03:53:783 (4) - NC is more suitable for vocal, also is an innovative for NC law, and easy to read for newbie
04:04:191 (4) - NC, because interval of time is too long
05:44:599 (4) - same as 02:48:272 (2) -
05:32:966 (4) - same as 00:48:578 (5) -

good diff, just think 1/4 should avoid using for Normal diff

[Together]

00:34:497 (4) - add clap at start to follow the music
00:40:007 (1) - re clap and add whistle at start, whistle will be more suitable than clap for there
01:23:170 (7) - don't stack there, it isn't suitable, I feel there should have movement for vocal, and also, don't stack will easy to read
01:58:681 (1) - re finish, i think it isn't suitable for there, because there give a feeling is need more clam
02:11:844 (4) - remove finish at end, I think people will hear the loud sound and chaos for play
03:11:232 (1,3) - swap NC, let there like 03:16:742 (6,1) -
03:21:027 (1) - add clap at 03:21:334 - , I think you forget xD
03:34:191 (1) - 2th point on x:320 y:200 will much pretty for me
03:51:334 (4,1) - swap NC, I think stress vocal is in 03:51:334 - , so 03:51:334 (4) - NC will more suitable for vocal
03:55:619 (1,2) - same as ^
04:00:211 (1) - I think finish isn't suitable at end for there, because I can't hear anything it follows, try to re it
04:01:436 (3,4) - same as ^
04:24:395 (1) - add a S:C2 green line on 04:25:007 to follow music
04:29:905 (3) - NC, because interval of time is too long
05:00:517 (1) - I can't find reason why you NC there, re NC
05:07:558 (4) - NC this to reduce combo number, also add clap at end, i think you forget again xD?
05:20:721 (1,2,3) - I am shocked by there, because the normal-hitnormal sound is too loud, try to use 45% volume

good diff, just some NC law and sliders shape I can't understand>~<!

this song is nice >w<! my best friend(run
That's all ~!
good luck! :3

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,787 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Hinsvar 2013-02-13T11:17:06+00:00

Loneight wrote:
[Normal]
00:48:578 (5) - don't stack there, it is hard for newbie, if you want stack, try to NC NC'd.
00:56:844 (2) - re clap at exhumation, there clap sound strange for me, I think dosen't need add anything sound for there is suitable for music There IS something on the music that made me placed a clap there.
02:48:272 (2) - re clap and add whistle, there clap sound is strange for me, also let 02:47:048 (1,2,3) - have new rhythm Used whistle, but I think there's no need to remake (1,2,3).
02:57:762 (2) - same as 00:56:844 (2) - Nope, this is suitable.
03:53:783 (4) - NC is more suitable for vocal, also is an innovative for NC law, and easy to read for newbie Nope, I think this is fine already.
04:04:191 (4) - NC, because interval of time is too long ...Dang it, (3) didn't have a repeat? Fixed another way.
05:44:599 (4) - same as 02:48:272 (2) - Done.
05:32:966 (4) - same as 00:48:578 (5) - Done.
good diff, just think 1/4 should avoid using for Normal diff

[Together]
02:11:844 (4) - remove finish at end, I think people will hear the loud sound and chaos for play It fits with the background music, so why not?
03:34:191 (1) - 2th point on x:320 y:200 will much pretty for me Done.
04:24:395 (1) - add a S:C2 green line on 04:25:007 to follow music ...Wait, why it isn't there? Added again.
05:00:517 (1) - I can't find reason why you NC there, re NC Done.
good diff, just some NC law and sliders shape I can't understand>~<![/notice]

this song is nice >w<! my best friend(run
That's all ~!
good luck! :3

Thanks for your mod! \o/

Last edited by Hinsvar 2013-02-15T09:45:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-02-13T11:39:42+00:00

Loneight wrote:
Hi~ Hinsvar
M4M.

"re" is means "remove"
Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue
[Xinely's Easy]
00:28:987 (1,2) - swap NC, let there like 00:24:089 (3,1) - enactment, because I think there vocal same as 00:24:089 (3,1) - done
01:09:701 (3) - how about NC for kiai time start? ^
01:09:701 (3) - why not add clap at end? forget lol , fixed
01:13:374 (1,2) - swap NC, I listen a stress vocal in 01:14:599 (2) - , so NC 01:14:599 (2) - will more suitable for vocal
01:18:578 (1,2) - same as ^
01:18:578 (1) - I think you forget add a clap at exhumation
01:26:232 (3) - remove finish at end, it isn't suitable for there
01:33:272 (1,2) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
01:38:476 (1,2) - same as ^
01:39:701 (3) - I think re whistle and change to add clap will more suitable for music
01:43:374 (1,2) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
02:59:905 (2,3) - why not same as 01:00:517 (3,4,5,6) - sound enactment add a clap at end?
03:11:232 (1,3) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) - , also can get 03:11:232 (1,2) - like 03:06:334 (1,2) -
03:16:130 (1,2) - same as ^
03:25:925 (1,3) - same as ^
03:30:823 (1,2) - same as ^
03:35:721 (1,2) - same as ^, but if you do this, please don't stack there
03:50:415 (1) - set a S:C2 green line on 03:50:721 - , I think you know why I suggest this ~
03:51:946 (3) - I just think this slider is strange in shape,
03:54:395 (5) - set a S:C2 green line on 03:54:701 -
04:27:150 (1) - it isn't symmetrical Heart-shaped, try to get more symmetrical
04:47:048 (1,2) - same as 01:09:701 (3) -
04:51:640 (1,3) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
05:36:027 (2) - add a whistle at end like 05:30:517 (1) -
05:32:966 (3) - strange for me in shape ~ try to get it much pretty
05:40:925 (2) - same as 05:36:027 (2) -
Fix all~
some place's flow need more attention, and some slider can much pretty, but anyway, good diff >w<

[Together]
00:34:497 (4) - add clap at start to follow the music
00:40:007 (1) - re clap and add whistle at start, whistle will be more suitable than clap for there
01:23:170 (7) - don't stack there, it isn't suitable, I feel there should have movement for vocal, and also, don't stack will easy to read
01:58:681 (1) - re finish, i think it isn't suitable for there, because there give a feeling is need more clam
02:11:844 (4) - remove finish at end, I think people will hear the loud sound and chaos for play
03:11:232 (1,3) - swap NC, let there like 03:16:742 (6,1) -
03:21:027 (1) - add clap at 03:21:334 - , I think you forget xD
03:34:191 (1) - 2th point on x:320 y:200 will much pretty for me
03:51:334 (4,1) - swap NC, I think stress vocal is in 03:51:334 - , so 03:51:334 (4) - NC will more suitable for vocal
03:55:619 (1,2) - same as ^
04:00:211 (1) - I think finish isn't suitable at end for there, because I can't hear anything it follows, try to re it
04:01:436 (3,4) - same as ^
04:24:395 (1) - add a S:C2 green line on 04:25:007 to follow music
04:29:905 (3) - NC, because interval of time is too long
05:00:517 (1) - I can't find reason why you NC there, re NC
05:07:558 (4) - NC this to reduce combo number, also add clap at end, i think you forget again xD?
05:20:721 (1,2,3) - I am shocked by there, because the normal-hitnormal sound is too loud, try to use 45% volume
Fix all in my part
good diff, just some NC law and sliders shape I can't understand>~<!

this song is nice >w<! my best friend(run
That's all ~!
good luck! :3

thanks 4 mod (:

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2013-02-14T07:29:55+00:00

From my queue

[General/All diffs]
Artist:倉木麻衣
remove .osb maybe
maybe make 2 diffs for such songs next time..I feel sick after I modded 3 diffs for a song which lasts nearly 6 min

[Xinely]
00:10:925 (3,5) - copy 3 to 5?that will be better
00:41:538 (2) - try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611678
00:52:252 start a 1/2 slider and del 00:52:558 (3) - ?
02:13:987 ^ del 02:14:293 (3) -
02:19:191 (2,3) - try something like this for better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611683
03:42:762 (4) - this isn't symmetrical with 03:40:925 (1) - ,and remove finish bucause there is no drum sound in music here
04:47:048 (1) - why not move to center directly?
05:17:354 (2) - I would change this to a 1/2 slider instead.cuz 05:15:823 (1,2,3) - have a diffrent distance and I don't think new players can read them
05:43:374 (4) - try this?...yours is really ugly..http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611692 and I suggest removing one repeat for better sound

[Normal]
00:45:211 (1,2,3) - make them symmetrical?
03:05:721 (1,2) - if you play this part,you'll see http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611695 .stack looks not so good
03:11:538 (1,3) - make them symmetrical?
03:26:844 (1) - I don't think you give an easy part here suddenly is good.maybe change to some normal partterns
03:47:048 (1,2,3,4) - so disorderly
04:02:048 (2) - 1 grid left

[Together]
why not name this Collab directly?
00:22:864 (4,5,1) - stack them is better imo
00:41:232 (4,2) - sounds odd
01:20:415 (4) - why use a red node here?..
01:48:578 (2) - 1 grid left
01:45:211 (1) - remove finish
03:40:925 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - whistles sound not good
04:46:742 (1,2) - this makes nothing and really hard to read,remove this slow down plz
maybe try not to put so many sliders with only one red node.They don't fit such songsa

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,787 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Hinsvar 2013-02-14T08:00:06+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
[General/All diffs]
Artist:倉木麻衣 ...My computer can't read inputted kanji (not really sure if I used the correct term lol), although it can still read kanji texts on websites ._. I'll do it if this map is going to be ranked someday on a computer/laptop in my house that can do it.
remove .osb maybe It's still there? I'm sure enough I've removed it.
maybe make 2 diffs for such songs next time..I feel sick after I modded 3 diffs for a song which lasts nearly 6 min ...I actually thought about this too, a few days ago. Well, I'll make sure to keep my sanity in check next time.

[Normal]
00:45:211 (1,2,3) - make them symmetrical? This is intentional.
03:05:721 (1,2) - if you play this part,you'll see http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611695 .stack looks not so good Unstacked.
03:11:538 (1,3) - make them symmetrical? It's already symmetrical, just not on a straight line.
03:26:844 (1) - I don't think you give an easy part here suddenly is good.maybe change to some normal partterns I'm doing this for variety to avoid boredom on players for having to play those usual patterns continuously.
03:47:048 (1,2,3,4) - so disorderly Made a square out of this.
04:02:048 (2) - 1 grid left Done.

[Together]
why not name this Collab directly? I'm the type of person that avoids using generic diff names for the hardest diff of a mapset, so yeah.
00:22:864 (4,5,1) - stack them is better imo Done.
01:48:578 (2) - 1 grid left ^
01:45:211 (1) - remove finish The music supports the finish, so I'll leave it there.
03:40:925 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - whistles sound not good Reduced the amount of whistles.
maybe try not to put so many sliders with only one red node.They don't fit such songsa Significantly reduced the amount of those kind of sliders.

Thanks for the mod! \:D/

EDIT: Stuff:

230,97,267150,6,0,P|208:20|132:72|112:136|128:208|164:248|256:288|256:288|352:248|384:200|400:136|380:72|304:20|284:99,1,715,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Last edited by Hinsvar 2013-02-15T09:18:00+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2013-02-14T13:36:12+00:00

Hi, M4M!

General

倉木麻衣 as Artist
Kuraki Mai as Romanised Artist
Overall, make the volume louder, 30% is way too quiet, also here 00:30:517 - starts a more louder part so this just fits
- 02:07:558 - From here, starting, the volume is too quiet
Add two more combo colours, the song is already so long, so the combo colours gives it a little more attraction and its better to play and not so boring combo colour wise. Try these or find more fitable yourself!

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,183,183
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 255,255,130
Combo4 : 192,192,192

Dont forget to adjust them on all diffs

Easy

00:26:538 (3,4) - Unstack this, not good for new players
00:37:252 (4,5) - Delete this, i think this rythm would fit better
- make a single circle at 00:37:252, from here 00:37:864 - to 00:39:089 - a slider would fit much better than this!

Example

http://puu.sh/22ojZ

00:47:660 (3) - Sliderend, heres no clap?
03:34:191 (4,1) - Spacing, this should happen in an easy, the antijump is not welcome here, change this so the player can easily follow the normal spacing
03:55:619 (1,2) - Reverse NC, it starts at 2
04:44:599 (1,1) - Between spinner and new element has to be at least 1 white tick space, the player needs time to prepare for new elements, i advise you to just delete 04:47:048 (1) - this circle since it doesnt fit much as well, and the problem would be solved easily
04:51:027 (5) - Unstack, otherwise players might get confused
05:29:293 (4,1) - ^
05:46:742 - Combo spam, it is too much so delete NC

Normal

05:20:721 (1) - Either you remove combo here, to follow your own pattern or you make NC at 05:15:823 (5) - to adjust the combo
05:32:354 (3) - Delete this circle, the circle feels to much and here is no vocal anymore
05:46:742 (1) - Combo spam, it is too much so delete NC

Hard

00:11:232 (1) - Remove NC for consistence
00:42:762 (1,2) - The slider should start where the 1 is, vocal wise, otherwise it feels so wrong, also dont add a circle at 00:44:293 - , it fits better
01:04:191 (1) - Combo spam, remove NC also it doesnt fit, even for the jump
01:17:660 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing isnt consistent, the last circle 6 is not well placed
01:56:538 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ make the spacing consistent, also the shape isnt well, its a little curvy and then not curvy
04:26:844 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - The jump from 3 to 1 doesnt fit in this low part, it is soft sung and not much jump vocal here, so make normal spacing to fit the song
05:46:742 - Combo spam, it is too much so delete NC

Thats it, song is nice and sung with heart. Wish you good luck with this.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-02-14T14:41:54+00:00

fix some~
Thanks BB~

errr lelet == , code ya

easy

osu file format v11

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68323
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1130,10925
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Your Best Friend
TitleUnicode:Your Best Friend
Artist:Kuraki Mai
ArtistUnicode:Kuraki Mai
Creator:Hinsvar
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:Detective Conan
Tags:40th ending ed40 Xinely collab collaboration 37th single Northern Music J-pop Jpop Case Closed Giorgio Cancemi Giorgio 13
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Together

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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Your Best Friend
TitleUnicode:Your Best Friend
Artist:Kuraki Mai
ArtistUnicode:Kuraki Mai
Creator:Hinsvar
Version:Together
Source:Detective Conan
Tags:40th ending ed40 Xinely collab collaboration 37th single Northern Music J-pop Jpop Case Closed Giorgio Cancemi Giorgio 13
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Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-02-15T02:13:20+00:00

General:

Remove 13 from tags won't be searched because it has only 2 characters

Together:

01:09:701 (1) - move it to x:268 y:320 nazi xd look better
03:40:925 this circle is so confuse since is stacked after a triplet 03:40:313 (4,5,6) - imo better move it to other place
04:47:354 (2,3) - stack they perfectly

Normal:

00:17:660 this rhythm is bad why no try this: (since you did it in together)

03:05:415 add circle

Xinely easy:

00:10:313 move it to x:108 y:100 since fix a little de distance error and look better
05:20:721 (1) - here thats bad add 1 more repeat or add circle here 05:21:946 to fix rhythm

Sorry about short mod but map is almost perfect don kd if you dont do nothing bye bye

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,787 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Hinsvar 2013-02-15T06:14:19+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Hi, M4M!

General

倉木麻衣 as Artist
Kuraki Mai as Romanised Artist
Overall, make the volume louder, 30% is way too quiet, also here 00:30:517 - starts a more louder part so this just fits
- 02:07:558 - From here, starting, the volume is too quiet
Add two more combo colours, the song is already so long, so the combo colours gives it a little more attraction and its better to play and not so boring combo colour wise. Try these or find more fitable yourself!
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,183,183
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 255,255,130
Combo4 : 192,192,192
Dont forget to adjust them on all diffs

About the artist... See my reply to No_Gu's mod. For the volume... I don't think so. The quietness really fits with the song itself. And for the combo colours... Not sure; will discuss with Xinely later.

Normal

05:20:721 (1) - Either you remove combo here, to follow your own pattern or you make NC at 05:15:823 (5) - to adjust the combo Done stuff.
05:32:354 (3) - Delete this circle, the circle feels to much and here is no vocal anymore Done.
05:46:742 (1) - Combo spam, it is too much so delete NC I don't think so; this is to denote the end of the song.

Hard

00:11:232 (1) - Remove NC for consistence Nope; I'm following the stanza.
01:04:191 (1) - Combo spam, remove NC also it doesnt fit, even for the jump Done.

04:26:844 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - The jump from 3 to 1 doesnt fit in this low part, it is soft sung and not much jump vocal here, so make normal spacing to fit the song Okay, okay, made a square and stuff here.
05:46:742 - Combo spam, it is too much so delete NC Same as Normal.

Thats it, song is nice and sung with heart. Wish you good luck with this.

Natsu wrote:
General:

Remove 13 from tags won't be searched because it has only 2 characters Nope; it's searchable in-game and is the part of "Giorgio 13" phrase.

Together:

03:40:925 this circle is so confuse since is stacked after a triplet 03:40:313 (4,5,6) - imo better move it to other place Nope; it's perfectly readable and won't be confusing.
04:47:354 (2,3) - stack they perfectly Did other stuff to this.

Normal:

00:17:660 this rhythm is bad why no try this: (since you did it in together)
Nope; I think the current rhythm is better than yours. It feels calmer and is more fitting with the song.
03:05:415 add circle There's nothing to follow there, so no.

Sorry about short mod but map is almost perfect don kd if you dont do nothing bye bye

Thanks for modding, guys \:D/

...And I forgot to work on No_Gu's mod for my parts on Together.

Oh well; will do it later. Done it.

SHIT, FORGOT TO DO THE ONE ON LONEIGHT'S MOD.

...Later, I guess. Done that too lol

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-02-18T18:19:42+00:00

Hi, m4m request

[General]
You should change artist 倉木麻衣 and Romanised Artist Kuraki Mai. because, this is changed rules

[Xinely's Easy]
00:37:864 (5) - Add clap on slider's tick
02:10:313 (4) - How about change repeat slider? like this. http://puu.sh/24zcD
02:56:538 (1) - Add whistle on slider's end?
03:01:742 (6) - Move to x:340, y:144
05:15:823 (1) - Add clap on slider's end
05:20:721 (1) - ^
05:30:517 (1) - Add whistle on slider's first & end
05:32:048 (2) - Add whistle

[Normal]
00:11:844 (3) - This circle is not perfect stacked. move to x:242, y:274
00:19:191 (4) - same. Move to x:158, y:36
00:48:272 - Add circle. because this have clap sound.
02:57:762 (2) - Clear clap at slider's end.
03:31:742 (1,3) - More bending?
03:54:395 (5) - Move x:128, y:228. looks more better.

[Together]
00:23:170 (1) - How about this? because, this have vocal's vibration http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/618729
This is code.

464,84,23170,2,0,P|452:136|452:136|452:152|452:152|444:148|444:148|448:164|448:164|440:160|440:160|445:176|445:176|436:172|436:172|437:187|437:187|420:248,1,200

00:24:089 (7) - Move x:348, y:308
00:36:946 (5) - Move x:96, y:176? looks more better.
01:05:874 (3) - Move x:336, y:204 this is not standard stream's distance.
01:16:436 (6) - Add clap on slider's first
01:46:436 (1) - Clear slider's main whistle?
01:57:303 (7) - Move to x:184, y:248. looks more better.
01:57:456 (8) - same as opinion. move to x:148, y:232
02:29:140 (4) - Move to x:61, y:99
02:39:089 (4) - Move to x:184, y:316
02:58:681 (3) - Clear clap at slider's end. because, this haven't any sound.
03:04:191 (4) - Add clap
03:05:415 (2) - Clear clap
03:25:925 (1,2,3) - Move x:284, y:204?
04:19:191 (3) - Clear slider's main whistle
04:55:619 (3) - Move x:188, y:252. looks more better.
05:21:334 (4) - Add clap

Awesome map and best quality!

good luck for rank >.<

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-19T07:56:13+00:00

scanter wrote:
Hi, m4m request

[General]
You should change artist 倉木麻衣 and Romanised Artist Kuraki Mai. because, this is changed rules Waiting when this is about to get ranked. See my reply to No_Gu's mod for details.

[Normal]
00:11:844 (3) - This circle is not perfect stacked. move to x:242, y:274 Done.
00:19:191 (4) - same. Move to x:158, y:36 ^
00:48:272 - Add circle. because this have clap sound. ^
02:57:762 (2) - Clear clap at slider's end. Nope; it clearly needs one, according to the song.
03:31:742 (1,3) - More bending? The shape itself should be fine.
03:54:395 (5) - Move x:128, y:228. looks more better. Done.

[Together]
00:23:170 (1) - How about this? because, this have vocal's vibration http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/618729
This is code.
464,84,23170,2,0,P|452:136|452:136|452:152|452:152|444:148|444:148|448:164|448:164|440:160|440:160|445:176|445:176|436:172|436:172|437:187|437:187|420:248,1,200
Uh, not I guess; I prefer a straight slider here, but good job right there~
00:24:089 (7) - Move x:348, y:308 Nope. Just no.
01:05:874 (3) - Move x:336, y:204 this is not standard stream's distance. Uh, it IS though...
01:46:436 (1) - Clear slider's main whistle? It's actually needed, so no...
02:58:681 (3) - Clear clap at slider's end. because, this haven't any sound. ...Yes. Removed.
03:04:191 (4) - Add clap lol missing clap. Done.
03:05:415 (2) - Clear clap ^
04:19:191 (3) - Clear slider's main whistle Intentional to follow the vocal.
04:55:619 (3) - Move x:188, y:252. looks more better. Done.

Awesome map and best quality! good luck for rank >.<

Thanks for modding \owo/

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-02-22T11:45:52+00:00

buset dah lagu panjang

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00:10:007 (1,2) - ng, I think be more easier if not 1/2 notes in first time altough that follow the vocal. maybe, change this into one slider?
00:12:762 (5) - move this into x:220 y:312 so that make symmetry with (3,4)
00:18:272 (5,1) - I think begin note in red tick is a bit hard to catch for easy and after that 1/2. move circle (5) into 00:19:497 and move slider (1) into 00:18:272 like this the patterns are up to you~
00:32:354 (4) - use code below to make this slider blanket (3)?

316,220,32354,2,0,P|252:200|236:136,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:47:660 (3) - I guess clap sound should in the tail, not in the head
00:55:619 (2) - move this 1 grid down so that align with (3)?
00:57:456 (5,1,2) - this rhythm good, but the patterns made little confuse.
01:15:517 (3) - since you made (1) straight into (2), why not make this straight too with (1) and (2)?
01:26:232 (3) - I'm worried about slider tail too close with slider head (almost overlap orz). consider change into another shape..
01:39:089 (1) - this is overlap with 01:36:640 (3) - try to move into another place so that more visible
02:10:313 (4) - this, I guess just make this straight like (3) more look better.. also, add clap in the head?
02:18:272 (2) - move this to in front of (1)'s tail? just make easier to click
02:19:956 - no add a green line for clap sound in white tick?
02:22:558 (2) - add clap in the head
02:56:538 (1) - make soft curve for this slider so the tail can align with (2)? like this
03:00:517 (5) - move this 2 grid left
03:12:150 (1) - remove nc in here and add in 03:13:987 (3) - ? just make the 03:11:232 (1,2) - is not too short..
03:27:762 (2,3,4,5) - this patterns was a bit confusing, because (5) will overlaped with (2,3,4) hitburst. consider to change another patterns in here
04:27:150 (1) - same with 01:26:232 (3)
04:56:538 (1) - too many repeats in here, will make newbie player break the combo for the first time ><
05:02:966 (2) - I think finish sound in the tail too suddenly and loud.. maybe remove it?
05:25:619 (1) - same as 04:56:538 (1) -
05:30:517 (1) - ^
05:32:966 (3) - honestly, this slider has weird shape in my eyes .-.
05:41:844 (3) - move last point 2 grid up?

Normal
00:42:762 (3) - change the shape like this? the current is weird because have straight direction..
01:38:170 (6) - move this 1 grid down lol..
02:22:252 (5) - same with 00:42:762 (3) - just make better looking =3=/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/624360
02:24:089 (2) - remove whistle? I think weird to hear because (3)'s head has whistle again..

naisu =3=

will mod collab diff and sure will edit this post later biling krisis orz

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-22T12:13:58+00:00

Yasora wrote:
buset dah lagu panjang Cuma enam menit lol

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00:42:762 (3) - change the shape like this? the current is weird because have straight direction.. Just made it curved up there.
01:38:170 (6) - move this 1 grid down lol.. lol done
02:22:252 (5) - same with 00:42:762 (3) - just make better looking =3=/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/624360 ^
02:24:089 (2) - remove whistle? I think weird to hear because (3)'s head has whistle again.. Removed the one on 02:24:395 instead.

naisu =3= Thanks .3.

will mod collab diff and sure will edit this post later biling krisis orz Santai, ditunggu kok~

Thanks lol

Still waiting for the mod on Together~

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