Hi Hinsvar
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- 00:25:007 (2) This blanket really flows very bad. You used a circle and then a very round slider, is
a bit awkward to see, especially in a diff. easy. Maybe you could drop a little more this slider and make it less curved - 00:26:844 (4) You're using the red ticks in a diff. easy D: . Could be a bit tricky for beginners about spacing , Try to free up some more this spacing . In conclusion move this slider to x:360 y:160 to make the player feel more comfortable with better spacing and flow
- 00:28:068 (5) If you do the above . Move this circle to x:256 y:344 to create a better blanket over (4)
- 00:43:987 (4) You did a straight slider, but most of your sliders are curved hmm ... . It looks much better if you make a curved slider and position yourself well, if you want to leave a picture
- 01:01:742 (3) This is a clear example of poor flow. Try to create better and make better blankets to flow more fun to diff. Maybe you could do the same slider that down here and change your position. If you do not understand me here I leave a picture
- 01:04:191 (5) This slider has a bad flow. It would be better if you just do a simple curved slider
- 01:28:681 (1) Hey! . You did a slider right here above a beautiful heart. In my curved should do to bring a better flow with the previous slider
- 01:31:742 (6) Really this slider looks bad . Why not do it this way? , is really better
Here the code if you wish :SPOILER224,304,91742,2,0,P|276:228|300:324|300:324|384:296,1,195,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
- 01:44:599 (3) Move this circle to x:308 y:184 and move 01:45:211 (4) to x:216 y:256 if you wish make a better square
- 02:09:395 (3,4) Maybe you could move 02:10:313 (4) to x:124 y:240 flows better imo
- 00:10:925 (3) You used a clap at the beginning of the slider, not bad but I have a better idea. Why
not put a Finish? . Highlight either that part because there is an increased voice more strongly - 00:29:905 (3) The music requires you to put a Finish at the end of the slider because the vowel begins with a force of voice of singer
- 00:31:436 (1) This sounds really bad in my opinion . Why do not you put a whistle instead of a clap at the end of the slider?
In my opinion sounds better >< - 00:37:252 (4) For consistency with the whistles your changes the whistle at the beginning of the slider and removes of the tail
- 00:41:538 (2) Remove the clap of the beginning of the slider, in my opinion sounds really bad . Put a whistle in the beginning of the slider , sounds better
- 00:45:211 (1) Like I said ... Is better put Finish when increased voice, for example here . In conclusion put a Finish in the beginning of the slider because there is an increased magnification power of the voice
- 01:30:211 (3) Remove the clap of this circle , really is unnecesary because no follow the music or the voice
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- 00:22:864 (4,5,1) Flowing wrong, how you positioned the little stream with the slider . In my opinion it would be better if you do it right, like this one in the picture
- 00:34:191 (2) Move this circle to x:408 y:300 because I think they wanted to make a triangle with (1) and (3).
- 00:49:191 (8) This slider actually flows poorly, putting it below (6) . In my opinion it would be better if the slider will do a CTRL + G and move it to x:180 y:184 . I'll leave a image
- 01:18:272 (6) Move this circle to x:40 y:204 To make straight the stream Because that's your idea , i guess
- 01:27:762 (4) Hmm .. Move the secong sliderpoint to x:240 y:280 if you wish make a better blanket
- 03:26:232 (2) Move this circle to x:284 y:204 to stack it properly with 03:24:395 (5)
- 04:34:803 (1,2) Hey ! This blanket looks a little ugly , In my opinion you could focus more on slider and circle to the grid
- 04:43:374 (5) Forgot to put a Clap, in the beginning of the slider, for consistency with your patterns claps
- 05:43:221 (3) Consider eliminate this circle, because it is the music or the voice
- 05:45:211 (1) This spinner is too short . In my opinion you should extend it to 05:46:742 and delete the circle that is there