Ah, I still remembered my 1st rank was this song
[General]
[General]
- 02:07:558 - 02:37:864 - ...This part sounds weird, seems the voice changed lol
- I feel your offset is late, try 1130(-10)
- 01:26:232 (4) - Ctrl+G played better imo
- 04:08:476 - Extend break to here?
rhythm are fine, but I think you can improve the arrange of notes to make it looked clear and neat more
- 00:38:476 (1,2,3) - Why increase spacing between 1 and 2?
- 01:16:130 (5) - Slider end, this clap is so wrong, clap should at 01:16:436, so leave here empty is more better than add a clap
- 01:17:660 (2,3,4,5,6) - This stream seems puts randomly, maybe you can make them in a line or a curve?
- 01:52:558 (1) - Slider head, no clap
- 01:55:007 (6) - Hmm, clap...why add it here
- 01:56:691 (3,5) - ^
- 01:57:456 (8) - ^, slider head
- 02:16:436 (4) - Well, there's no clap in background at this point, so maybe you can remove this clap
- 02:30:823 (8) - The curve after the red node looked bad, and the clap on the end, you know..well, I would not point the clap things any more, I can't say it's wrong, just sounds weird, anyway how to use hitsound is all depend on yourself
- 04:56:538 (6) - A sudden overlap might be confusing, I'd suggest put it out of 04:56:385 (5), just use the same spacing you used in this combo