Hi~ Hinsvar
m4m
[General]
i recommend you to use slidertick as clap.
i think that need more finish sounds.
[Xinely's Easy]
00:29:915 (3,4) - make to one long slider.
01:13:691 (1) - this is not symmetry.
01:38:180 (1) - don't overlap. really bad pattern
02:55:017 (5) - move to x244 y252
[Normal]
00:21:344 (2,3,4) - um...it's not good.
01:08:486 (1) - add finish on the slider's end.
01:29:303 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
01:29:303 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
02:50:119 (5) - move to x312 y352. and re-space next note.
03:26:854 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
04:47:670 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
05:06:650 (1) - add finish on the slider's end.
05:42:466 (2) - more than have a smooth moving. 05:41:548 (1) - x296 y88, 05:42:466 (2) - x496 y192, 05:42:772 (3) - x444 y272.
[Together]
00:15:833 (1) - up 2 grid right 1grid. x216 y112. and re-space next notes.
00:38:486 (1) - plz re-space. this pattern is unfit.
00:40:017 (1) - remove clap and add whistle. follow previous whistle sound patterns. this better fit.
00:47:670 (6) - remove note and 00:47:976 (7) - move to here 00:47:670 . it's really better fit.
01:47:364 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this pattern is hard to read.
00:48:895 - if follow above suggestion, add circle note.
01:09:711 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.this is relax and quiet song. but, this part need finish.
01:15:833 (4) - remove clap. follow the clap in song. 01:16:446.
01:29:303 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
02:34:507 (6) - reduce the slider's length. and move to 02:34:813 . like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/498820
03:07:262 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
03:08:027 (3) - remove note. i think this is unnecessary note.
03:17:670 (3) - move to x320 y272
03:26:854 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
04:47:364 (2) - add finish on the slider's end.
05:06:037 (3) - add finish on the slider's end.
good luck~
m4m
[General]
i recommend you to use slidertick as clap.
i think that need more finish sounds.
[Xinely's Easy]
00:29:915 (3,4) - make to one long slider.
01:13:691 (1) - this is not symmetry.
01:38:180 (1) - don't overlap. really bad pattern
02:55:017 (5) - move to x244 y252
[Normal]
00:21:344 (2,3,4) - um...it's not good.
01:08:486 (1) - add finish on the slider's end.
01:29:303 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
01:29:303 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
02:50:119 (5) - move to x312 y352. and re-space next note.
03:26:854 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
04:47:670 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
05:06:650 (1) - add finish on the slider's end.
05:42:466 (2) - more than have a smooth moving. 05:41:548 (1) - x296 y88, 05:42:466 (2) - x496 y192, 05:42:772 (3) - x444 y272.
[Together]
00:15:833 (1) - up 2 grid right 1grid. x216 y112. and re-space next notes.
00:38:486 (1) - plz re-space. this pattern is unfit.
00:40:017 (1) - remove clap and add whistle. follow previous whistle sound patterns. this better fit.
00:47:670 (6) - remove note and 00:47:976 (7) - move to here 00:47:670 . it's really better fit.
01:47:364 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this pattern is hard to read.
00:48:895 - if follow above suggestion, add circle note.
01:09:711 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.this is relax and quiet song. but, this part need finish.
01:15:833 (4) - remove clap. follow the clap in song. 01:16:446.
01:29:303 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
02:34:507 (6) - reduce the slider's length. and move to 02:34:813 . like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/498820
03:07:262 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
03:08:027 (3) - remove note. i think this is unnecessary note.
03:17:670 (3) - move to x320 y272
03:26:854 (1) - add finish on the slider's start.
04:47:364 (2) - add finish on the slider's end.
05:06:037 (3) - add finish on the slider's end.
good luck~