hi Hinsvar & Xinely
thank you for the request from Xinely
here my mod~
[General]
[Xinely's Easy]
As far as I look, This map needs much improvement in hitsound >.< so I listed it separately.
Hitounsd:
Mapping:
Hinsvar:
I love this song ~
Good luck~
thank you for the request from Xinely
here my mod~
[General]
- Song Setup - Tags - These are all really necessary? It seems to have many things which are unnecessary than current rankedmap >.< http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39108
for ex: 「- m i k u -」 「-_m_i_k_u-」 「-miku-」 「miku」 This is the name before her. When you use these by a search, it is enough only in 「miku」. However, it is enough only in 「-_m_i_k_u-」 or 「-miku-」 when you do not use it for it.
[Xinely's Easy]
As far as I look, This map needs much improvement in hitsound >.< so I listed it separately.
Hitounsd:
SPOILER
- There is no sense of unity to the sound. At first, please try that you put a sound in the same timing. It will improve the sound even more than now.
I mean http://puu.sh/1xLtA long white line in a standard, this is 1. If it is clap, it is common to put at the position of 2,4. If is whistle,finish a position of 1,3. There are exceptions to these, but you can have a sense of unity to do this. At first, please test it by yourself.
Other proposals that are exceptions↓
- 00:10:017~00:28:078 - Here is a quiet part. Place the fewer the whistle and clap. ↓for ex:
00:10:323 (2) - add whistle
00:10:935 (3) - add clap to start of the slider ( yep. already put :3 )
00:11:854 (4) - add whistle instead to clap to end of the slider.
00:12:772 (5) - add whistle to end of the slider. ( already put )
After that, please put them at the position of the same timing. They can be used in much the same rhythm. - 00:19:201 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider. It follow the piano
- 00:28:997 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider and add whistle instead to clap to end of the slider. It matches the sound of the piano very much than clap.
- 01:31:752 (6) - This idea is very good. but This map has too few finish, people may not hear it naturally. so I do suggestion to increase some finish. for example, a beginning of kiaitime. 01:09:711. 01:29:303. etc This is common It is not necessary to use it if you think that do not fit.
- 03:34:201 (5) - remove finish to end of the slider. I thought that did not have the sound to emphasize like 03:30:221
- 04:47:058 (1) - remove finish. do not fit for me ><; If put it; 04:47:670 (2) - start of the slider is better.
- 04:56:242 (6) - remove finish. same reason as 03:34:201 (5)
- 05:00:527 (5) - ^ end of the slider
Mapping:
- 00:14:915 (1,2) - Replace the rhythm of 1 and 2. ( Rhythm it like here 00:10:017 (1,2) - ) Because here is the point to emphasize 00:15:221. and Circle after the slider is a little difficult to play for Easy diff. but i think it is possible to use this map it is so slow. haha xD
- 00:26:548 (3) - nazi. It is slightly far for next note. x360,y100 is better.
- 00:34:507 (1,2) - Overlapping arrangement is not suitable for Easy. I recommend that you put it simple and easy to understand it~
- 00:35:425 (2,3) - DS is too far. This sudden change unsuitable for beginners. I suggest it in conjunction with the above here: http://puu.sh/1xJnoSPOILER
72,164,35425,2,0,P|108:120|172:160,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,224,36650,1,0,0:0:0
344,300,37262,2,0,P|403:325|439:281,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,120,39099,1,2,0:0:0 - 01:04:507 (1) - This does not match a vocal a little. Because the vocal of that opening is finished immediately. so i suggest add one slider and spinner start 01:05:425. like this : http://puu.sh/1xJuZ
- 01:12:160 (1) - remove NC. ( same as 01:17:670 (5) -
- 01:18:588 (1,2) - DS a little close. so use DS 0.90x is better~
- 01:25:017 (3) - Over the little screen. plz do not make this as much as possible. Especially Easy,Normal
- 01:26:242 (4) - When it uses slider art, it will make it look beautiful to put in the center. I suggest it in conjunction with the above here: http://puu.sh/1xJET This is not best. You can try it in various ways and Please follow to after note by yourself SPOILER
4,96,83793,5,0,0:0:0
120,108,84405,1,2,0:0:0
212,36,85017,2,0,P|267:19|303:99,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,164,86242,2,0,P|204:128|172:168|172:216|204:264|256:280|256:280|296:260|344:224|336:160|300:132|276:168,1,390,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 02:09:405 (3,4) - same reason as 00:34:507 (1,2). It is necessary to separate these, and to put it.
- 02:14:303 (3) - 02:14:609 - I want to put the sound here. It matches a vocal very well. so 02:14:303 - add circle. and 02:14:609~02:15:221 - add slider is better imo.
- 02:25:629 (1) - remove NC and 02:26:548 (2) - add NC.
- 02:56:548 (1,2) - same reason as 00:34:507 (1,2) and This is a pattern to cause confusion in particular. If did not notice that this is a kick slider, this pattern leads to a mistake in the timing. so This is the pattern that you should change by all means for Easy diff.
- 03:01:446 (1) - It was a pattern unlike 01:04:507 (1), but thought that I did not fit >< try like this? http://puu.sh/1xK0D ( it is follow the drum )
- 03:09:099 (5,6) - same reson as 00:34:507 (1,2)
- 03:20:119 (5) - It is hidden in 03:18:282 (3) hitburst. http://puu.sh/1xK4X yea. It is not all and may be to be the tolerance level. but this is easy, it is better to not overlapping.
- 04:01:752 (3,1) - This spinner start does not match a little, too >.> try like this: http://puu.sh/1xKcF
- 04:03:282 (1) - I think the end of a vocal and the sound to be 04:05:884. so i suggest spinner end 04:05:884.
- 04:06:191~ break time - break time start move to 04:08:486. ( same Normal,Hard diff. The breaktime opening is very good )
- 04:27:160 (1) - Why you do not put in the center o.o? and I recommend symmetry form to make look beautiful. http://puu.sh/1xKl7SPOILER
236,108,267160,6,0,P|200:24|132:72|112:132|128:204|180:244|256:288|256:288|332:244|384:204|400:132|380:72|312:24|276:108,1,715,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
- 04:32:058 (1,2,3) - Since you use the slider in the previous note, so It is not strange to use it in the same way here. http://puu.sh/1xKom ( Reverse ver. Ctrl+G ) I prefer this
- 04:36:956 (1) - same reason as 01:18:588 (1)
- 04:52:874 (3) - 04:51:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 1/2 of these rhythms is too long. so I suggest that reduce rhythm here, http://puu.sh/1xKtw
- 05:17:364 (2,3) - DS too close. it is better to use DS0.9x here
- 05:27:160 (2,3) - ^
- 05:32:670 (3,4,5) - does not match rhythm >< do not have a vocal here、so It is better to match with a white line. for ex: http://puu.sh/1xKDg
- 05:41:854 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/1xKF7
- 05:44:915 (1) - It is better to match this with a vocal. so start 05:45:221 is better.
very long mod ;v; sorry, again...orz
But you can make it very neatly than before
- first, There are many stack of this map. I think that these be a little should reduce it for normal. >_< In particular, note after the slider.
for ex;
・00:10:323 (2,3) - 00:13:078 (5,6) - 00:17:670 (3,4) - 00:21:344 (2,3) -
・00:16:752 (2,3) - 00:20:119 (1,2) -
The timing of these stacks are different. I think that you should not use the stack varying in a timing in a short period.
In particular, 00:16:752 (2,3,4) - 00:20:119 (1,2,3) - I cannot recommend the usage of such a stack for normal. - 00:27:772 (3) - remove note. instead 00:28:997(x) add note and add whistle. This can follow with pianos well than now
- 00:46:446 (3) - i think the slider of this position seems to worsen a flow >< so i suggest: http://puu.sh/1ylON and with 00:47:976 (4) - I thought that this did not need to put it. because 00:47:670 - the vocalrhythm temporarily stopped here. ( this can also follow DS )SPOILER
160,68,45221,5,2,0:0:0
352,68,45833,1,8,0:0:0
332,260,46446,2,0,P|256:284|256:284|180:260,2,160,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 01:04:813 (1) - remove whistle. The sound here is not outstanding in comparison with 01:04:507 (6) - . so I thoght it is not match a little when you put it with a double whistle.
- 01:32:670 (2) - add whistle. You can follow the treble vocal here. and 01:32:976 (3) - If you change it, remove whistle to start of the slider.
- 01:46:484 (1) - spinner is too short for normal. The beginning of spinner is only to increase the difficulty, I think it is difficult in the corresponding in normal. and 01:48:282 (1,2) - It gives difficulty more to put note after a short spinner.
so i suggest : 01:48:282 (1,2) - remove two note. and 01:46:484 (1) - spinner start 01:46:599~end 01:48:895. or If you do not want to do this, http://puu.sh/1ymp0 You should try to at least this - 01:48:282 (1,2) - it is covered in hitburst of the spinner, so Ctrl+G is better.
- 02:24:405 (3,4) - why use 1.4x DS o.o? try like this? http://puu.sh/1ymxk
112,132,144405,2,0,P|185:128|247:190,2,160,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
- 03:02:058 (6) - same reason as 01:04:813 (1)
- 03:21:956 (1) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/1ymHY curve slider seems to fit this flow o.o?
- 03:44:035 (1) - same reason as 01:46:484 (1). I thought that it was not necessary to use the spinner here ==
- 03:46:446 (2) - remove finish. The same as the first kiaitime, part quiet here too. I thought that finish did not match a little
- 04:04:851 (1) - same reason as 01:46:484 (1). and same reason spinner end with Easydiff 04:03:282 (1). i suggest: http://puu.sh/1ymWP
- 05:04:851 (1) - same reason as 01:46:484 (1).
- 05:45:833 (2) - add whitle to repeat of the slider. and remove whistle to end of the slider. I think this is more able to follow the vocal~
Hinsvar:
- 00:54:711 (4,5,1) - The form that collapsed. try like this: http://puu.sh/1ynGWSPOILER
412,212,54711,1,2,0:0:0
408,236,54864,1,0,0:0:0
400,260,55017,6,0,P|324:304|292:216,2,200,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 01:03:742 (4) - i think slightly excessive rhythm. 01:03:895 - I feel that only a sound here is enough. or http://puu.sh/1ynOL I thought that such a rhythm matched it here.
- 01:04:507 (2) - add whistle. sam as Normaldiff. and 01:04:813 (1) - remove whistle. reson same as Normal diff.
- 02:58:691 (3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1yooq It matches a vocal well imo
- 03:26:242 (2,3) - Suggestion of form and the flow: http://puu.sh/1yoyk
- 00:32:517 (6) - do not match clap here, 00:32:364 (5) - Here you put. ( Clap does not match the blue line basically) and When you put note in succession, http://puu.sh/1ynmb is much better than now imo.
- 00:38:486 (1) - add clap to start of the slider
- 00:38:486 (1,2,1) - During this time, the rhythm of a little empty. It is recommended that you increase the rhythm. so for ex: http://puu.sh/1ynsw (This rhythm follow the drum) 00:39:099 (x) - Should be placed here to follow the piano at least.
- 00:43:078 (6) - add whistle instead to clap to end of the slider. and 00:44:609 (7) - add clap here
- 00:47:058 (3) - add clap instead to whistle. and 00:47:517 (5) - remove clap
- 00:47:670 (6) - add whistle to end of the slider. this follow the piano
- 01:10:935 (5) - add whistle instead to clap.
- 01:18:588 (1) - add clap to 2nd repeat of the slider. and remove clap to end of the slider
- 01:19:813 (3,4) - DS is too close. 01:19:201 (2,3,4) - here use the same DS is better.
- 01:21:956 (5) - remove whistle to repeat of the slider. Because do not have a sound there, it is not fit a little ==
- 01:54:099 (2) - add NC. It looks good pattern
- 01:54:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Will look better by aligning the DS these. http://puu.sh/1yobHSPOILER
56,292,114099,5,0,0:0:0
92,292,114252,1,0,0:0:0
128,292,114405,1,8,0:0:0
224,200,114711,1,0,0:0:0
188,200,114864,1,0,0:0:0
152,200,115017,1,8,0:0:0
56,108,115323,1,0,0:0:0
92,108,115476,1,0,0:0:0
128,108,115629,1,8,0:0:0 - 02:29:303 (5) - add whistle instead to clap. and 02:29:609 (6) - add clap instead to whistle.
- 02:34:201 (5) - ^
- 02:39:405 (5,6,7) - looks a little bad use the same DS here.
- 03:07:874 (2,3) - Sudden anti-jump. I think this is a little does not match. I recommend that you use normal distance here. and 03:07:874 (2) - add clap and 03:08:180 (3) - remove clap here.
- 03:08:486 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider.
- 03:13:691 (7) - remove clap to 1st repeat of the slider, and add clap to 2nd repeat of the slider.
- 03:15:680 (2) - remove clap
- 03:59:609 (6,1) - During this time, a little empty. Because a vocal still follows there, so i suggest 03:59:609 (6) - change to slider, start 03:59:609~end03:59:915.
- 04:03:588 (1) - spinner end 04:05:884. same reason as Easy diff.
- 04:30:833 (x) - add note here. same as rhythm here 04:28:078 (1,2) - 04:32:976 (4) - .
- 04:35:731(x) - ^
- 04:43:384 (5) - I think that 1/4 rhythm does not match this quiet part. so 04:43:384~04:43:691 This slider is enough.
- 05:06:037 (3,1) - DS too close here. may mistake this distance for 1/4 rhythm.
Xinely> It is necessary for you to use DS well a little more. It will also improve the looks and flow and Use a jump only where it is really necessary :>
I love this song ~
Good luck~