From my queue
[General/All diffs]
Artist:倉木麻衣
remove .osb maybe
maybe make 2 diffs for such songs next time..I feel sick after I modded 3 diffs for a song which lasts nearly 6 min
[Xinely]
00:10:925 (3,5) - copy 3 to 5?that will be better
00:41:538 (2) - try something like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/61167800:52:252 start a 1/2 slider and del 00:52:558 (3) - ?
02:13:987 ^ del 02:14:293 (3) -
02:19:191 (2,3) - try something like this for better flow?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/61168303:42:762 (4) - this isn't symmetrical with 03:40:925 (1) - ,and remove finish bucause there is no drum sound in music here
04:47:048 (1) - why not move to center directly?
05:17:354 (2) - I would change this to a 1/2 slider instead.cuz 05:15:823 (1,2,3) - have a diffrent distance and I don't think new players can read them
05:43:374 (4) - try this?...yours is really
ugly..http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611692 and I suggest removing one repeat for better sound
[Normal]
00:45:211 (1,2,3) - make them symmetrical?
03:05:721 (1,2) - if you play this part,you'll see
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611695 .stack looks not so good
03:11:538 (1,3) - make them symmetrical?
03:26:844 (1) - I don't think you give an easy part here suddenly is good.maybe change to some normal partterns
03:47:048 (1,2,3,4) - so disorderly
04:02:048 (2) - 1 grid left
[Together]
why not name this Collab directly?
00:22:864 (4,5,1) - stack them is better imo
00:41:232 (4,2) - sounds odd
01:20:415 (4) - why use a red node here?..
01:48:578 (2) - 1 grid left
01:45:211 (1) - remove finish
03:40:925 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - whistles sound not good
04:46:742 (1,2) - this makes nothing and really hard to read,remove this slow down plz
maybe try not to put so many sliders with only one red node.They don't fit such songsa