Ao to Natsu

00:29:037 - can u make the spacing of the intro a bit bigger to where u dont just have randomly big jumps such as 00:31:144 (4,5,6) - ? like if u had ur average spacing similar to 00:32:117 (2,3) - it wld feel less cramped and more like an insane diff

00:29:847 (1,2) - ctrl+g so u have some kind of movement into 00:30:171 - ? vs 00:30:496 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the first 3 note pattern u have here is kinda too simple

00:31:469 (6,7,1) - what if hypothetically u didnt have a perfectly stacked triple in an insane

00:37:955 (5) - NC here for the SV, maybe?

00:54:658 (2) - could just map this actively and have a small jump for 00:54:820 (3,4) - this if you wanted to, kickslider here feels kinda awkward to play to

01:07:307 - could add a circle stack to 01:07:469 (2) - the sliderhead of this, and NC the slider for the SV change; would fit a bit better than the rhythm you have currently imo

01:09:415 - feel like this doesnt need to be as spaced out. this section is still building up yet u have such a big jump here, wld nerf it

01:11:036 (1,2,1,1,2) - shouldn't rhythm of this be https://i.imgur.com/Kho62r6.png this for the kick/snares?

01:11:361 - wld move this upwards cuz it doesnt rlly make much sense that 01:11:036 (1,2,1) - is bigger than 01:11:361 (1,1,2) - when 01:11:361 (1,1,2) - is further into the build up n more intense

01:12:009 - for the peak of the build up to have such low spacing compared to 01:10:712 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - just feels rlly.. backwards? i feel like u prob need to adjust this a bit

01:12:171 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g on the rhythm for this makes more sense, keeps the vocal/drum emphasis you had prior and flows a lot more naturally as well

01:12:496 (3,4) - should have snares for sure

01:13:307 (1) - could also map this actively since this follows guitar instead of drum, would give some differentiation here which would be nice though not entirely necessary

01:14:603 (3) - vocal intensity increases here and kicks play, so map this as active like how you did here 01:17:198 (3,4) -

01:20:117 (4,1) - imo spacing rly low for downbeat, increase it somehow or make flow change more emphasized/noticeable.

01:24:009 (6) - there really should be a better way to differentiate this as a 3/4 slider, right now this looks virtually identical to the 1/2 slider prior to it which can trip players up

NC is one way to go about it, but honestly you could just keep the SV the same here and it'd work just as well

01:25:630 (1) - offscreen

01:28:225 (1,2,3) - while not inherently bad, just seems a little out of place to have a line pattern like this when the whole chorus and basically the map itself (aside from the calm parts) are based around jumps and larger spacing. so to have a small n rather direct pattern like this during the kiai just felt quite weird.

01:28:549 (3) - rhythm gap here feels hella forced considering there's a kick on the red tick, 1/2 slider works better for this

01:28:873 (3) - 02:50:603 (3) - 04:14:927 (3) - I think making these into active rhythm (two 1/2 circles) would make this part act as more of a transition to the intense jumps. Right now, rhythm is rather calm up until the big jump sections so feels REALLY abrupt for players, so increasing rhythm intensity shortly before it would transition nicely.

01:34:063 (4,5) - space this out more, smth like x:256 y:95 would work fine for 01:34:387 (5) - this note

the spacing of this is kinda underwhelming considering the parts before it, especially for a 1/1 jump

01:44:279 (2,3,4,5) - feel like these shldnt all be spaced roughly the same, maybe lower 01:44:441 - so 01:44:765 - has more impact to it?

01:49:630 (3) - ehh, not really a big fan of this rhythm, it feels a lot more like filler than anything else -- something like https://i.imgur.com/YtUcPQl.png this would work better to emphasize the piano trill in the background imo

01:56:117 (2) - missing hitwhistle for vocal here

02:04:549 (1,2,3,4) - out of all the 3 slider patterns u made this one rlly big for some reason but then when u have the louder vocals at 02:05:846 (1,2,3) - , the spacing is just rlly small.. i feel like it shld b the other way around.

02:10:387 (4,5) - maybe 1/1 slider into circle on red tick here for vocal emphasis? feels a bit more natural than your current rhythm choice imo

02:18:009 - cld add a circle for the instrumental

02:20:117 (1,2) - just a thought but u cld ctrl+g these so u wind up moving downwards instead of upwards to match how the melody is going down in pitch

02:22:387 - and 02:24:982 - feel like u clda just had 2 circles for these since unlike the other sliders here, these instances have 2 vocals on them so having them all as the same rhythm is kinda eh

02:22:711 (1) - ctrl + g this so flow isn't monotone throughout 02:22:063 (3,4,1) - to emphasize the downbeat

02:26:117 (3,4) - maybe small jump here to emphasize the hi-hat on 3?

02:28:387 (2,3) - feel like this cld b nerfed to have a more gradual increase to the spacing here cuz u kinda use rlly small spacing unless its during the chorus

02:30:171 (1,2) - and 02:30:495 (1,2) - u cld ctrl+g these individually so u move directly into 02:30:171 - from 02:29:846 - which wld match how u usually do jumps like these cuz rn it just seems a lil awkward that u move down n to the right instead of right into it

02:48:009 (3) - could do a 1/2 stack or minor jump here or smth to break up the monotony of this section a bit, this is a lot of 1/2 sliders back-to-back

02:52:225 (5,1) - nah this is huge for an insane diff jump. can u nerf it

03:25:630 (3) - 03:59:684 (6) - NC for SV change? not really necessary but would help readability a bit

03:27:252 (4,5) - 03:29:846 (4,5) - tone down the spacing of these jumps, these are quite spaced for a relatively calm part in the song

03:27:414 (1,2) - ctrl+g? bc the vocals r at 03:27:576 - n the instrumental has a clearly different hit at 03:27:414 - so it seems like the rhythm is backwards atm

03:30:819 (4,5) - could space this out more, smth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18501818/84d1 this would be neat (maybe less spaced since it's kinda overkill though lol)

03:32:441 - ctrl+g? the build up has alrdy starts so i dont think u need to use such small spacing here

03:37:954 (1,2,3) - flow doesn't feel unique enough for how much the drums change in the song here. Make flow much different like this for example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17649186/21ce

03:38:279 (3) - wouldn't this make more sense if you did a 3/2 slider here and had the circle clickable? idk, not really a big fan of leaving this vocal unclickable

03:54:495 - kinda excessive spacing here to use outside of the chorus, might wanna tone it down a bit

03:59:360 (3) - nearing the end of the song so I think making this into active 1/4 triple + kick slider would be beneficial to show some sort of difficulty progression.

03:59:603 (7,8) - should be spaced out more so the burst is the same spacing here -- right now the spacing of this is drastically lower due to the SV change

04:11:036 (1) - remove nc here to be consistent :P

04:16:225 (3,4,5) - increase spacing here, feels really low compared to 04:16:873 (1,2,3,4,5) -

04:25:306 (2) - could add NC here for new vocal chain

04:43:468 (1,2,3,4) - ngl this pattern feels really forced spacing wise, especially since 04:48:009 (1,2,3,4) - this isn't nearly as spaced despite being in a more intense section of the song

would nerf this to be more in-line with what is seen after, atm this kind of just comes out of nowhere and isn't replicated

04:49:306 (1,2,3) - isn't this a bit too giga spaced given the pacing of the section?

04:50:603 (1) - space out this slider (i.e. ctrl+shift+s) a bit more like how it is on the top difficulty? smth like 1.19 would do -- the lack of a visible gap makes this kinda hard to read in some aspects imo