Ao to Natsu

00:01:328 - 00:11:453 - this entire section seems way too spaced especially when compared to sections like 03:18:495 this which have stronger instruments + vocals (even if 03:18:495 if 1/1 slider with 1/2 gap and 00:01:328 - 00:11:453 is 1/1 slider with 1/1 gap, still pretty high spacing)

00:17:828 (1,2) - shouldn't these be spaced similarly to the rest of the 1/4 gaps in this section :s

00:29:847 - 00:32:442 - 00:34:712 - all the jumps listed here have high spacing for the level of intensity, it makes no sense to make 01:29:522 which is obviously more intense to have similar/lower spacing than the ones listed.

00:29:847 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - some more spacing buildup on these would be nice, when playing they didn't really feel as noticeable as they were in the song, so lower spacing here perhaps 00:29:847 (5,6,7,8) -

same for rest 00:32:442 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 00:34:712 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

the spacing between these two 00:30:334 (8,1) is incredibly large for no reason

00:33:901 (1,2) - hmm. questionable nc here. don't have to nc here cause the do-do really is nothing to be highlighted here

00:38:928 (8) - this one feels rather jank because you'll have to suddenly move your cursor in some odd way after the stream. you could make it into something like this-> https://i.imgur.com/9qFuX9T.png where the cursor still moves but slows down.

00:38:928 (8) - #2971819 same general idea applies to this, two 1/2 sliders would work way better considering the emphasis of the bass is noticeably less on the last two ticks

00:39:253 (9,1) - imo some spacing increase would be nice here, doesn't really feel emphasized enough for a downbeat into an intense section

00:43:469 (1,2) - parts like these could be simplified to a 1/1 slider. reasoning being that there's nothing impressive here to be made a 3/4. Or instead, make it similar to this 00:40:874 (1,2), but replace the 2nd slider with 2 circles instead. Even if you'd argue that you want to focus on the drums, still, you're missing the one in the red tick.

00:47:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6) though more intense these notes have spacing which is similar to the section before

00:57:334 maybe add a hitcircle here for consistency?

01:01:469 (6,1) - imo feels weird to change flow rotation direction so sharply here when song is quite smooth sounding. Compare to 01:04:063 (6,1) - where it's relatively smooth. Up to you to change, but imo it felt kinda janky to play

could ctrl + g 01:01:307 (5,6) - these notes (and fix hs accordingly)

01:04:226 (1,2,3) - spacing for these feel a bit small here coupled with the slider leniency. Its feels the same as 00:53:847 (1,2,3) - found in the repeat in a less intense section.

Would suggest spacing it similarly to 01:01:631 (1,2,3).

01:07:144 (2,3) - increase distance or NC because rhythmically there's a 1/1 gap and the player won't have an idea which is which if it's the same distance away

01:07:307 - same thing #2971775 from insane diff applies here, circle stack would keep the flow continuous here instead of abruptly stopping before the song pauses

01:18:333 (2,3,4,5) - 02:40:063 (2,3,4,5) - 04:04:387 (2,3,4,5) - increase spacing, it really feels underwhelming considering the guitar peaks there

01:24:657 (2,3) - buff spacing here, spacing feels pretty awkward coming right after big spacing here 01:24:333 (1,2) - with no indication of calming down in the song, compare to spacing here 01:27:252 (2,3) -

01:32:117 (1,2,3,4) - imo these 1/2 sliders here just being at the end of snare spam section feels a bit lackluster. I think you could make a connection with the vocals here and do 1/2 sliders on 01:30:819 (1,2,1,2) - these two 1/2 spots because vocals pause here, then do jumps for the rest

(01:33:414 (5,6) - keep these as 1/2 sliders btw cuz similar vocal pause)

01:33:414 (3) - missing NC here?
04:46:711 (8) - same for downbeat

01:33:982 (7,8) - got a little too excited with the spacing, yes? All of these (probably the ones I could catch anyway) have spacing that is way too similar with the rest of the section which is too far. Just uh, make it less.

01:44:117 (2,3,4,5) - I don't recall you using this particular stack-jump pattern anywhere on the map. Replace it with something else so that it doesn't look so off.

01:47:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - flow here is continuously circular in one direcetion, so if you wanted it to be consistent should change flow here 01:48:333 (5) - on the emphasized guitar riff like how you did here 00:48:009 (5) -

01:47:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - spacing for these could be buffed a bit, similarly to how you did it in the former repeat at 00:47:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1). At give them a bit more spacing compared to your section at 01:39:900.

01:58:063 (1,2,3) - there's a drum on big white tick. Maybe do a 1/2-1/2-1/1 slider here.

02:07:792 (3) - ok, this may be a minor nitpick but I believe this slider shape: https://i.imgur.com/9VzaFbK.png is slightly better for the player to follow. Also, similar to 01:07:144 (2,3) - increase distance or NC this slider so the player knows which is which rhythm.

02:09:738 (1,2,3) - distance from 1-2-3 is a bit too high looking from the same section. Also, 02:09:900 (2) - I don't think you'll need to kickslider this because you aren't following piano

02:20:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - theres a jump here for no reason, i'd suggest you use 2 1/2 sliders and then make a 4 note jump afterwards to mark drums like https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/828795162816938038/910787755800412190/unknown.png

02:20:765 (5) - NC

02:20:765 (1,2,3,4) - would be good to use a different flow/pattern here since you hitsounded it differently than 02:20:117 (1,2,3,4) -

Imo ctrl + g 02:20:441 (3,4) - to make square pattern that flows into sharp flow would be really cool way to distinguish these rhythms in the song

02:22:387 (4) - 02:24:982 (4) - vocals get pretty strong here so making this active would be nice, don't go too ham on the spacing tho

02:25:954 (3) - drums kinda pop of so it would be nice to make this active with 2 circles instead rather than use the same rhythm as 02:25:306 (1,2) - that are following vocals.

02:35:279 (2,3) - you should manually stack these since the 1/4 isnt really visible https://i.imgur.com/lgxtK8j.png

02:36:009 (2,3,4,5,1) - for how intense this all is, feels really cramped and doesn't reflect song very well IMO because of it.

Something like this would reflect the song better imo
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17817748/5cc3
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17817752/e8bd

02:36:982 (1) - very opinion based, but I think ctrl + j and keep in same place here would be POG flow

Then adjust 02:37:468 (2,3,4) - to be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17649125/e38f

right now, feels a bit lacking of emphasis to me, but that is just my opinion :P see how u feel about it

02:40:387 (4) - move down a bit for stronger emphasis on 02:40:549 (5) - for the snare

after 02:52:549 the jump spacing goes down which i feel is pretty awkward to hit for a part with no shift in intensity

02:59:684 (3,4) - visuals, please. This looks the exact same as 02:57:414 (4,5) - so distinguish both of them a bit.

03:13:225 missing vocal here, add hitcircle or change previous slider into 1/4

03:26:603 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - why are all these practically distance spaced LMAO. You're already stacking a lot of these notes and decreasing the intensity of these so try not to be scared of adding a bit spacing to these.

Same thing with 03:31:468 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - where spacing could be a teeny bit bigger to reflect the intensity here

03:30:982 (1) - remove nc, not rly needed here and kinda confusing to read maybe

03:38:279 (3,4) - I don't think you're following vocals in this map that much. just omit the circle and extend slider

03:49:630 - don't really get the SV changes here in this section. You've done patterning in groupings of 4 with 03:49:630 (1,2,3,4) - 03:50:927 (1,2,3,4) - etc but you do SV changes after groupings of 2 and 4 respectively at 03:50:279 - 03:51:576 - which seems really incoherent with your idea.

So instead, I think it would be better alongside your increasing spacing idea to have SV changes every groupings of 4 at 03:50:927 - 03:52:225 - 03:53:522.

03:59:036 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - bouncy flow

04:22:063 (1,1) - any reason why spacing here is so low compared to rest of this section?

04:24:009 - missing finish on both diffs

04:35:036 (1) - i'd make this a 1/1 slider to better mark the guitar

04:38:927 (1,2,3,4) - I don't recall you using these kinds of patterns too. Secondly, the music is quite intense, so putting a stack pattern here doesn't really give it justice. Make the second pair of sliders something like 04:42:819 (1,2) - ig

04:41:522 (1,2,3,4) - pog flow

04:47:036 (1,2) - drum is rather weak here, slider. 04:48:009 (1,2) - no drum here, slider.

04:48:009 (1,2) - I suspect this part is a 1/3 if you follow the guitar. Or maybe it's drift from post production.

04:49:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - surely you can buff the spacing for the peak of the guitars here? At least do similar spacing to the previous jumps you did at 04:48:333 (1,2,1,2,3). The patterning is enough to differentiate these both and the extra spacing will be cool to emphasise the peak.

04:50:441 (8,9,1) - x 68 y 256. The flow from 6-7-this is rather funny because you do a 90 degree turn from what is a flowy one.

04:50:603 (1) - imo sliderend and sliderhead should be made more clear like the insane since currently its basically unreadable in normal gameplay