00:51:253 (3,4) - wouldn't direct stack make more sense here since that's what you do elsewhere in this section?
I think it's currently fine as it is would completely mess up the visual spacing concept + I do the same thing on other parts of the song like 01:51:252 (2) - 01:53:846 (2) - so I don't think it is that inconsistent.
01:11:036 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the spacing here honestly feels really overdone, there's not really a build-up to these jumps and they're more spaced than anything in the kiai which doesn't make much sense
would recommend nerfing these
02:01:144 (2) - shouldn't this note be removed to keep the rhythm consistent here? not a huge deal, but idk why this is actively mapped when this wasn't in the first verse section + afterwards
I did the same thing for 02:02:441 (7) - 02:05:036 (7) - to add a little bit of variation, so I think it should be fine.
02:29:198 (1) - isn't this section up to 02:34:387 (8) - here kind of underwhelming in terms of density and spacing? this is meant to be a build-up to the kiai and it sorta just feels like it continues with more of the same prior :s
feel like you could add some jumps here to make things more interesting
03:34:063 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - same here, spacing could be slightly increased compared to what it is right now to help with the build-up
04:50:441 (9,1) - could honestly reduce how spaced this is, maybe smth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18501810/7451 this would work better?