01:04:226 (1,2,3) - spacing for these feel a bit small here coupled with the slider leniency. Its feels the same as 00:53:847 (1,2,3) - found in the repeat in a less intense section.
Would suggest spacing it similarly to 01:01:631 (1,2,3).
01:47:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - spacing for these could be buffed a bit, similarly to how you did it in the former repeat at 00:47:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1). At give them a bit more spacing compared to your section at 01:39:900.
02:25:954 (3) - drums kinda pop of so it would be nice to make this active with 2 circles instead rather than use the same rhythm as 02:25:306 (1,2) - that are following vocals.
03:26:603 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - why are all these practically distance spaced LMAO. You're already stacking a lot of these notes and decreasing the intensity of these so try not to be scared of adding a bit spacing to these.
Same thing with 03:31:468 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - where spacing could be a teeny bit bigger to reflect the intensity here
03:49:630 - don't really get the SV changes here in this section. You've done patterning in groupings of 4 with 03:49:630 (1,2,3,4) - 03:50:927 (1,2,3,4) - etc but you do SV changes after groupings of 2 and 4 respectively at 03:50:279 - 03:51:576 - which seems really incoherent with your idea.
So instead, I think it would be better alongside your increasing spacing idea to have SV changes every groupings of 4 at 03:50:927 - 03:52:225 - 03:53:522.
04:49:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - surely you can buff the spacing for the peak of the guitars here? At least do similar spacing to the previous jumps you did at 04:48:333 (1,2,1,2,3). The patterning is enough to differentiate these both and the extra spacing will be cool to emphasise the peak.