00:10:704 (1) - spinners must have a nc as aimod said, and you can also start the spinner at 00:10:093 or closer up as spinner heads don't have any sound
01:05:819 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - there is no emphasis on the louder and more intense vocals at all here, its just mapped like the rest and it shouldn't be. Spacing them more would represent the song a lot better and would actually have emphasis if ya know what I'm saying
01:02:157 (2,3) - these ignore a vocal that make the rhythm feel off, you can remove them both and make a 1/1 slider at 01:02:157 - to make it feel much more smooth like it should be
00:00:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - no sound here warrants this much spacing especially since its literally the first pattern and is kinda a jump scare lmao + is literally equal to the hardest part of the map in the kiai 01:10:703 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
giving same spacing as 00:06:692 (1,2,3,4) - would be so much better
01:07:028 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this rhythm is off and doesn't follow anything so I would remap this and follow the vocals
you could 01:07:028 (3) - remove this and move the rest up and add maybe a circle here 01:08:924 but its whatever you find best
there isn't much contrast between the sections regarding spacing either, an example would be 00:58:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - feels the same as 01:13:924 (1,2,3,4) - or even 01:16:683 (1,2,3,4) -
see what I'm saying? Its a good idea to keep track of your spacing and making sure its mapped well to each section and ofc this will improve over time the more maps you make
The feel of the map is very straining since its just 1/2 rhythm the entire map with one exception at the very start 00:05:648 (1) -
See if you can add 1/1 breaks like at 00:13:924 (10) - 00:24:959 (4) - 00:35:993 (5) - and so on
or even making calmer sections like 01:09:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - less dense since the contrast between sections aren't great either. What I mean by this is that this section is just 1/2 rhythm like the rest of the map and you could switch things up, especially since I have no idea what 01:10:131 (3,4,5,6) - these sliders are even mapped to.
00:40:747 (2) - same deal for here and on onwards + i also noticed this in other diffs so make sure to go check