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00:00:347 objects are moved should be starting here - 00:00:696

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what

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00:03:312 (5,6,7) - kick sliders here dont really fit, its a clam section + top diff uses simplified rhythm here (slider -> circle instead of kick slider -> circle -> kick slider)

would just either similar rhythm as top diff here

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00:04:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same idea here, you have an object on every red/white tick while top diff uses sliders to simplify rhythm

you also use kick sliders here which ruins the difficulty progression from insane to top diff

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00:07:673 (8) - probably wouldn't use kick slider here either

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removed all kick sliders

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00:05:234 - there's an extra green line

00:11:858 - unsnapped green line

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fixed

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00:18:313 (1,2,3) - i would do circle -> circle -> slider instead of slider -> circle -> circle for consistency with rhythm before:
00:12:731 (2,3,4) - 00:13:778 (1,2,3,4) -

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00:21:103 (1,2,3) - would break these two sliders up into 4 circles -> slider for consistency since you mapped this higher pitch sound out earlier: 00:15:522 (1,2,3,4,5) -
earlier one is also less intense as 00:21:103 (1,2,3) - so this definitely should be more dense

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00:22:150 (1,2,3,4) - same thing here, the synth sound is so prominent that it feels wrong to ignore, would just do 4 circles -> slider here as well

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fixed this and I will also fixed this part on the top diff

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00:23:545 (8,1) - seems like you're prioritizing vocals in this section so this feels awkward to have the vocal on slider tail
would recommend doing circle -> slider instead of slider -> circle for the vocal, and also emphasizing 00:23:544

00:24:940 - awkward gap here since it's on the beginning of a measure, perhaps have a circle where 00:24:592 (4) - is then put a slider on 00:24:765
you can map this passively to make it less awkward while prioritizing vocals

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00:26:162 (5) - same thing, make this a slider

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fixed

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00:27:383 (4,5) - would recommend switching the order from circle -> slider to slider -> circle

00:27:382 and 00:27:556 sound like they're together and 00:27:730 is also on a new measure so it deserves more emphasis than being on a slider end imo

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00:27:383 (4,5) - would do slider -> circle instead of circle -> slide since vocal on 00:27:730 should be emphasized more than 00:27:556 as it is on a new measure (long white tick)

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01:00:172 (3,4) - similar, 01:00:521 sounds like it's grouped with 01:00:695 (5,6) -

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fixed

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00:34:685 (3,4,5,6) - I'd increase the spacing to the triplet at (4) for consistency, nothing in the music suggests a change here.

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increased spacing at 00:34:533

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00:35:928 - slider end deserves some sort of clickable object imo, it's on a held vocal, perhaps making 00:35:755 (4) - a circle and putting a 1/2 slider here would work

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00:37:324 (6) - could make this a slider as well cause held vocal here

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00:12:383 (1) -
00:15:173 (6) -
00:17:963 (7) -

these are all on strong held sounds so they deserve to be a slider imo

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00:43:057 (1,2) - You should remove the pause here, possibly by making (2) a slider or another way of applying movement.

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changed (2) to slider to cover up the pause

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00:51:451 - really strong sound here, would recommend shortening 00:50:755 (7) - by 1/2 and putting either a circle or slider here for the strong finish sound

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00:54:046 (1) - Add another repeat to this slider here, like you did with 00:54:482 (2,3,4) -

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added repeat

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00:54:156 (2) - seems like you're following vocals here so this should start 1/4 earlier, which is 00:54:068

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fixed

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01:01:895 (2) - This slider looks very out of place, since the curve is all scuffed.

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fixed the curve slider

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01:02:157 (2,3) - these ignore a vocal that make the rhythm feel off, you can remove them both and make a 1/1 slider at 01:02:157 - to make it feel much more smooth like it should be

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01:05:819 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - there is no emphasis on the louder and more intense vocals at all here, its just mapped like the rest and it shouldn't be. Spacing them more would represent the song a lot better and would actually have emphasis if ya know what I'm saying

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fixed spacing. Now there should be more spacing on the intense vocals

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01:17:265 (4,5,6) - i would just use 2 sliders instead of circle -> slider -> circle

01:16:742 (2,3) - is fine to do because you were following vocals before, and vocals end here, but 01:17:265 (4,5,6) - is just drums so having a slider on each snare is enough imo, rhythm rn doesn't make much sense

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fixed

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01:18:290 (7) - this slider is literally one pixel off from being offscreen lol. i'd maybe move it up a bit to be safe.

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moved up the slider

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01:21:277 (5) - off screen

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fixed

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01:25:986 (3) - doesn't sound like there's enough sound in the music to use a 1/4 reverse here

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01:26:334 (4,5,6) - same, doesn't sound like there's much 1/4 sounds here

sounds like 1/4 sound start on 01:26:684 (7) -

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can probably use 1/2 slider for 01:25:986 (3) - and 2 circles here 01:26:335 for the high pitched sound

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replaced

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