01:07:028 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this rhythm is off and doesn't follow anything so I would remap this and follow the vocals
you could 01:07:028 (3) - remove this and move the rest up and add maybe a circle here 01:08:924 but its whatever you find best
first and second kiai mostly just follow the melody instead of the vocals, i feel like it fits well but i see how it could be confusing