i want to point out that there are alot of inconsistencies within this difficulty. for starters, there are barely any doubles within the vocal part, which makes it quite contrastless and tame imo. you can refer to 2328626#4852913 if you wanna add some doubles in here aswell, but when you do use doubles, they are pretty inconsistent without a clear reason.
generally alot of the ideas are pretty unclear when it comes to the long notes aswell like at 00:09:487 (9487|1) - not having a vocal but still being a long note or when you make these 00:14:921 (14921|0,15030|1,15139|2) - there are only drums to these tripples at 00:07:965 (7965|2,8073|1,8182|0) - so stuff like 00:15:030 (15030|1) - 00:28:943 (28943|2) - should be omitted
00:07:095 (7095|0,7313|1,7530|0) - might be a bit too awkward for some players at this level, would move 00:07:095 (7095|0) - to col 4 for hand balance
for long notes like 00:07:530 (7530|0) - 00:11:008 (11008|0) - 00:14:487 (14487|3) - 00:17:965 (17965|3) - 00:21:443 (21443|3) - 00:24:921 (24921|1) - 00:28:400 (28400|1) - 00:31:878 (31878|3) - im a bit confused as to why they are more elongated, as it stands the vocals should mostly end at the 1/1 scale, so it'd make sense to make them shorter imo